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(What is happening, exactly, Alice?? I got lost somewhere along the line.....)

Nice!!!!!!!!!!!

This is really good! Nice depth, if you ask me, and an amazing idea! I can't wait to read more! :D :D :D

I opened my sleepy eyes again. After looking around placidly, I stood and walked over to Indigo, rubbing against her leg as if to say. Totally get your plan. Nice thinking.

Of course, the human didn't seem to understand panther thoughts, and so she just patted me reassuringly and with pretend relief. Ah, well.

I blinked my eyes.

I was in a small, stone room, with my human companions all around me. It seemed as if we were unlucky enough to be trapped.

I yawned, and stood, then stretched.

I looked lazily over to where the others stood, staring, mouths wide open. I must have missed something. Ah, well.

I settled back down for some more sleep. A panther's gotta sleep, ya know.

I shook my head and settled back down on the ground. I'd investigate this later.

Indigo and I snorted at the same time.

"Wow. Come on, spill!"

I look up in alarm. No. I had just imagined it. But maybe...

I stepped a little closer.

"Nothing! Really!" Insisted Salifia.

No. This couldn't be happening. Somehow, somewhere along the line, I had begun to be able to understand humans. How and when, I did not know. Only that I was changing, and flashes and bits of some other world - some other animal's memory - flashed through my mind.

What was happening? What was happening to me?

I look up.

"Salifia! What happened? Did he talk?" pestered Indigo, standing up.

( *shrug* )

"Well, I suppose it's a possiblility..." replied Mae, biting her lip.

I settled down beside Indigo, and put my head in my paws.

I trot at Indigo's heels, right behind her human friends.

What was that all about? I think, but no one paid me any mind.

"So, somebody sent him." Began Mae.

"Yeah, that much is obvious!" retorted Indigo. Then, "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to snap."

"It's all right - but do you think...do you think the cloned gods could have -"

I growl softly, and edge closer to Indigo.

Humans were odd.

They were all fighting and talking and freezing at the same time, as if it was completely normal. Odd humans.

I leaped into the tent, to see two humans fighting. I snarled and pulled the two apart, tail lashing threateningly, standing between the two.

"Salifia!" squealed Indigo, as she entered the tent. "What are you doing?"

I leaped up and followed her, Indigo on my tail. No pun intended.

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Mmkay!

AHHHHHHHH THANK YOUUUUUU

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+decides to just squint at Emmeline and Alice+

Huh? +totally lost+

Oh, ya, I meant unentusiasim, but the correcty thing - thx