Andres’s Comments (group member since Jul 29, 2020)

Andres’s comments from the Gathering Of Dedicated Scribblers group.

@ Rufaida, where are you?

Rufaida wrote: "Suffering from a huge writing block this past week. I want to write about Rheana interacting with Shayan's family but ended up creating more and more Fluffy romance among the two. Any idea to help ..."

Let's say that this chapter your writing is chapter 4. You know what you want to write about, 'Christmas'. The only problem is you are kind of stuck. First write some bullet statements for this chapter, what did you want to happen? Why did you want to write about Christmas? Just a few brief notes.

Now what were you going to write about in the next chapter? Sometimes thinking about what is going to happen next helps you to go back and write how to get there.

Alright Arlu. I just finished up. I mainly moved your paragraphs around. then just tied them together with a little bit of tape.

When you get a chance to go over it, add your touch and then have someone with a fresh set of eyes to go over it and give you a review. Hopefully it reads smoother.

I'm going to try and help out Arlu today. Once that's sent to him, I'll try to finish 19.

Interesting. How does one Try to get back to something they Are avoiding?

Wouldn'st thou simply stop avoiding?
Or art thou simply searching for thee proper motivation to not avoid?

En serio, were here for you. If its simply a matter of trying to map out ideas i'm sure one of us can throw your mind so far off in left field that you catch a great idea all on you own. =D.

Man on fire! Hit that zip fizz =D.

Arlu wrote: "Andres wrote: "Just poking fun at ML and Livali.

Let me know if you want to email that chapter. I'll help you smoothen it out a bit, at least, the best I can."

Wow! Really? That's quite generous ..."


Np. ArodDaMonster@Gmail.com

I probably wont write today. I'm going to finish ML's story. Then try to review the shanghai pirate. After that I have a new book series I'm going to start, 'One Word Kill'. I'm a sucker for video game novels and a friend told me these are relatable to 'Ready Player One' though I highly doubt its anywhere as good.

Just poking fun at ML and Livali.

Let me know if you want to email that chapter. I'll help you smoothen it out a bit, at least, the best I can.

Okay, I left a review.

Ah, I scrolled up and clicked the latest one. It might have been the link left by Arlu. My apologies. I'll review it right now.

You're welcome Arlu. Glad someone values my opinion. Not like the other mods on here.

=D.

I submitted a review for your first chapter.

I left a review.

I don't like those kinds of parties. Still, it is nice to know you were invited.

Didn't make progress but I did 2 re-writes on chapter 18. I felt that it didn't have quite the PUNCH I wanted it to. So, I went well over 4k words on that chapter and then chipped away at it until I had just over 3100. I'm going to read it aloud and hope its much better.

1. World of Warcraft Vanilla or option to toggle between vanilla and post vanilla.
2. Skyrim or largest sandbox at the time without field guide.
3. Animal crossing with time controls locked.
4. League of Legends
5. Warcraft 3 expansion with world editor.


If this is unacceptable then please ONLY give me a life subscription to crunchyroll and Pizza hut.

When you pass away your consciousness is uploaded into a computer network called San Junipero. In this network, to save memory, you are only allocated to play 5 video games. Which five do you choose?

not depending on how sick I am, having a shit health day! Yuppiie, they happen without warning!"

Aw. Sounds like you've been suffering a bit lately. Are you getting sick?

I just finished chapter 18 and I think I'm going to be able to end this at a sweet spot in 5 chapters. So currently that's my goal. Chapter 23 I should be done with this novel. That should give me just around 60k words.

Welcome Ray. Be careful, there is a member on the team that will try to recruit you into his super secret justice league of New Mutants.
Just kidding. It's awesome having another well educated member of the GODS.