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May 7, 2018
400 Years Ago - A Literary Lesson

In 1965, Dylan took on Shakespeare with "Desolation Row:" "And in comes Romeo, he's moaning 'You belong to me I believe.'/ Ophelia, she's 'neath the window, for her I feel so afraid." Although the specific narrative doesn’t necessarily follow Shake's (mixing it up a bit), a plethora of characters that paint Dylan’s urban landscape are plucked straight from Liam (you know, we're on a familiar basis). Similarly, The Band’s "Ophelia," despite its bouncy, syncopated rhythm, has lyrics nearly as dark as those of Hamlet, drawing directly from the madness that Ophelia suffers, to portray, if melodramatically, a disconnected, out of touch young woman. Sting borrows directly from Shakespeare's Sonnet 130: "My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun," he sings in a torchy ballad. The album as well was titled Nothing Like the Sun. Morrissey flirted with the Bard (Morrissey liked to flirt with British Gods, most notably in "Cemet'ry Gates") in "You've Got Everything Now," which opens with a slight variation on a line from Much Ado About Nothing: "As merry as the days were long."

But it's not only through the lyrics that we recall our fave Elizabethan rock star. The Beatles so memorably plucked out a BBC soundbite from King Lear for "I Am the Walrus." With their all-encompassing cultural reach, you might think the Fab Four would've had more Shakespeare in their canon, but there was only this one, and it was a happy accident. While making a sound collage for "Walrus's" fade-out, Neil Aspinall switched on a radio in the studio and caught a broadcast of Lear. "Oh untimely death..." is one of the lines that pokes out, from Oswald's death scene. The complete lines run (thanks to Wikipedia, I am including the song timings): Oswald: (3:52) Slave, thou hast slain me. Villain, take my purse./ If ever thou wilt thrive,(4:02) bury my body,/ And give the (4:05) letters which thou find'st about me/ To (4:08) Edmund, Earl of Gloucester; (4:10) seek him out/ Upon the British party. O, (4:14) untimely Death!/ Edgar: (4:23) I know thee well: a (4:25) serviceable villain;/ As duteous to the (4:27) vices of thy mistress/ As badness would desire. Gloucester: What, is he dead?/ Edgar: (4:31) Sit you down father, rest you."

"Pack and get dressed/ Before your father hears us/ Before all hell breaks loose/ Breathe, keep breathing/ Don’t lose your nerve/ Breathe, keep breathing/ I can't do this alone"

But everyone of course hates Shakespeare.
Published on May 07, 2018 05:48
Ode to Billie Joe - Bobby Gentry



What makes "Ode to Billie Joe" poetic is the spare but effective way in which the story is told. Nothing is stated, leaving much to be inferred. By the end, through only a few details, the listener (or reader) can see how the family might represent the decline of small-town farming America. With the father dead, Brother abandons the farm for his wife and their new store in town, and the mother and daughter are left with their grief for their respective losses. Gentry doesn't describe Choctaw Ridge or the Tallahatchie Bridge, but we don't need to know what they look like for them to serve as the song's emotional center. The rhythm of the names, combined with their repetition, sears them into our memories. Gentry once said the song was really about indifference, and was, as she described it "A study in unconscious cruelty." She went on to say, "Those questions are of secondary importance in my mind. The story of Billie Joe has two more interesting underlying themes. First, the illustration of a group of people's reactions to the life and death of Billie Joe, and its subsequent effect on their lives, is made. Second, the obvious gap between the girl and her mother is shown, when both women experience a common loss (first, Billie Joe and, later, Papa), and yet Mama and the girl are unable to recognize their mutual loss or share their grief."
"Ode to Billie Joe" was Gentry's debut single, recorded in 40 minutes on July 10 1967. Gentry accompanied herself on acoustic guitar and strings were added later. The original version of the song was 7 minutes, cut down to 4 and released it as a single. The song sold over 3 million copies and Gentry won 3 Grammy awards, including Best Artist, the first country artist to win the award. And for me, pretty good score for $2.99.
It was the third of June, another sleepy, dusty Delta day.
I was out choppin' cotton and my brother was balin' hay.
And at dinner time we stopped and we walked back to the house to eat.
And mama hollered at the back door, "Y'all remember to wipe your feet."
And then she said she got some news this mornin' from Choctaw Ridge
Today Billy Joe MacAllister jumped off the Tallahatchie Bridge.Papa said to mama as he passed around the black-eyed peas,
"Well, Billy Joe never had a lick of sense, pass the biscuits, please."
"There's five more acres in the lower forty I've got to plow."
Mama said it was shame about Billy Joe, anyhow.
Seems like nothin' ever comes to no good up on Choctaw Ridge,
And now Billy Joe MacAllister's jumped off the Tallahatchie BridgeAnd brother said he recollected when he and Tom and Billy Joe
Put a frog down my back at the Carroll County picture show.
And wasn't I talkin' to him after church last Sunday night?
"I'll have another piece of apple pie, you know it don't seem right.
I saw him at the sawmill yesterday on Choctaw Ridge,
And now you tell me Billy Joe's jumped off the Tallahatchie Bridge."Mama said to me "Child, what's happened to your appetite?
I've been cookin' all morning and you haven't touched a single bite.
That nice young preacher, Brother Taylor, dropped by today,
Said he'd be pleased to have dinner on Sunday. Oh, by the way,
He said he saw a girl that looked a lot like you up on Choctaw Ridge
And she and Billy Joe was throwing somethin' off the Tallahatchie Bridge."
A year has come 'n' gone since we heard the news 'bout Billy Joe.
Brother married Becky Thompson, they bought a store in Tupelo.
There was a virus going 'round, papa caught it and he died last spring,
And now mama doesn't seem to wanna do much of anything.
And me, I spend a lot of time pickin' flowers up on Choctaw Ridge,
And drop them into the muddy water off the Tallahatchie Bridge.
Published on May 07, 2018 04:09
May 6, 2018
Eleanor Rigby


When Paul McCartney first wrote "ER" he had the music worked out before the lyrics, as he often did ("Yesterday," remember, started out as "Scrambled Eggs"). Paul often used placeholder lyrics that he'd subsequently abandon. To be specific, the original version began, "Ola Na Tungee/ Blowing his mind in the dark/ With a pipe full of clay/ No one can say." In other words, a guy with a quasi-Hindu name getting high, a far cry from the English Village equivalent to Desolation Street. Paul later picked the name Rigby from a wine and spirits shop in Bristol, and the name Eleanor in reference to the British actress, Eleanor Bron, who appeared in Help! The priest was originally named Father McCartney, but John's friend Pete Shotton warned that people would think he was talking about his own father. George reportedly contributed the line "Ah look at all the lonely people," while Ringo contributed the idea of having Father McKenzie darning his socks in the night. There are of course many course one may take analyzing the iconic single, and a day's worth of interesting research is in store for those who try. Ultimately, despite the subjective nature of the lyrics, Eleanor Rigby exists, at least in name; indeed at the cruelly young age of 44, Eleanor Rigby died in the same house where she had been born, was interred in the graveyard of St Peter's Church in Liverpool, and had her name added prominently on an increasingly crowded headstone. The story, its evolution and its ties to history are fascinating.
In 1964, the Beatles held the top 5 positions on Billboard's Hot 100. On April 4th of that year, "Can't Buy Me Love" was No. 1, followed by "Twist and Shout," "She Loves You," "I Wanna Hold Your Hand" and "Please Please Me." It was an accomplishment which can never be equaled, but from August 1966 through the end of 1967, the Beatles were at the top of the chart in a myriad of categories. In August '66, Rubber Soul was the No. 1 album, and would remain so for eight weeks, with the double A sided "Yellow Submarine/Elenor Rigby" at the top of the singles charts for four weeks. Between January 1967 and the end of the year, the Beatles remained at the top of the charts with the release of three additional LPs, Revolver and Sgt. Pepper, followed by the EP release worldwide and the full length LP as released by Capitol in the U.S. of Magical Mystery Tour. The singles release during this period were: "Penny Lane/Strawberry Fields" (which made it only to No. 2, based on The Monkees' "I'm a Believer"); "All You Need is Love" and "Hello Goodbye." Imagine four unparalleled LPs with two solid No. 1 singles in a little over a year, all from the same band!
Published on May 06, 2018 05:14
Rock Music as Poetry - Part 3 - Eleanor Rigby


When Paul McCartney first wrote "ER" he had the music worked out before the lyrics, as he often did ("Yesterday," remember, started out as "Scrambled Eggs"). Paul often used placeholder lyrics that he'd subsequently abandon. To be specific, the original version began, "Ola Na Tungee/ Blowing his mind in the dark/ With a pipe full of clay/ No one can say." In other words, a guy with a quasi-Hindu name getting high, a far cry from the English Village equivalent to Desolation Street. Paul later picked the name Rigby from a wine and spirits shop in Bristol, and the name Eleanor in reference to the British actress, Eleanor Bron, who appeared in Help! The priest was originally named Father McCartney, but John's friend Pete Shotton warned that people would think he was talking about his own father. George reportedly contributed the line "Ah look at all the lonely people," while Ringo contributed the idea of having Father McKenzie darning his socks in the night. There are of course many course one may take analyzing the iconic single, and a day's worth of interesting research is in store for those who try. Ultimately, despite the subjective nature of the lyrics, Eleanor Rigby exists, at least in name; indeed at the cruelly young age of 44, Eleanor Rigby died in the same house where she had been born, was interred in the graveyard of St Peter's Church in Liverpool, and had her name added prominently on an increasingly crowded headstone. The story, its evolution and its ties to history are fascinating.
In 1964, the Beatles held the top 5 positions on Billboard's Hot 100. On April 4th of that year, "Can't Buy Me Love" was No. 1, followed by "Twist and Shout," "She Loves You," "I Wanna Hold Your Hand" and "Please Please Me." It was an accomplishment which can never be equaled, but from August 1966 through the end of 1967, the Beatles were at the top of the chart in a myriad of categories. In August '66, Rubber Soul was the No. 1 album, and would remain so for eight weeks, with the double A sided "Yellow Submarine/Elenor Rigby" at the top of the singles charts for four weeks. Between January 1967 and the end of the year, the Beatles remained at the top of the charts with the release of three additional LPs, Revolver and Sgt. Pepper, followed by the EP release worldwide and the full length LP as released by Capitol in the U.S. of Magical Mystery Tour. The singles release during this period were: "Penny Lane/Strawberry Fields" (which made it only to No. 2, based on The Monkees' "I'm a Believer"); "All You Need is Love" and "Hello Goodbye." Imagine four unparalleled LPs with two solid No. 1 singles in a little over a year, all from the same band!
Published on May 06, 2018 05:14
Music and Poetry

We settle into a seat on a train, at times forgetting the destination, enjoying the ride of its own accord. The train is its own world, even as it moves with purpose; if the train broke down, we'd be annoyed - the purpose of the train slips our minds only fleetingly - yet it allows us in its mesmerizing clickity-clack to forget the reason for the journey and to simply enjoy the experience. Expression is like this, too. We talk for a reason, and yet we also just enjoy talking. Poetry then is reticent expressiveness; it combines the enjoyable and the purposeful aspects of the train ride; at times rambling on, clickity-clackiting; at times direct and purposeful. As AM continues its little sabbatical on poetry, we've contemplated a myriad of songs, seeking out the journey, whether or not there is a destination. For this little aside (expect more over the next few days), we've constricted the poetry, with some exception, to 1968. The poetry of a song like Leslie Gore's "It’s My Party," therefore, pure Emily Brönte btw, doesn't make the cut, nor does The Stones' "Ruby Tuesday" or Rod Stewart's "Maggie Mae."
1968 features prominently in the music-as-poetry construct, a time which, artistically, happily, resembles the Romantic era: sensual and intellectual, though not overly so, and, because indulgence was miraculously tempered by a certain unstated restraint, popular. In the last post, we touched on the debate between poetry and lyrics: while music aids the lyric, condemning it to be not quite poetry, poetry is its own music, condemning it to be naked, without music, forever. I don't know which I feel sorrier for. Some will say the two can never be reconciled. Madness and torture! Why do they exist, never to meet! Poetry and music! Divided heart! Divided mind! Poor, divided mankind! (Dramatic, huh?)

Oh, poppycock, of course, they do; they meet and have an illicit affair, and if an especially beautiful melody accompanies the words of a particular lyric, making the words even more lovely, do we assume the words are responsible or has the music inspired the words?
For the research here, and because Leslie Gore didn't qualify, I found myself in realism-mode, the Brönte factor, and in its simplicity and constructive realism, adding in a dose of repetition to make Mark Twain proud, I chose McCartney's aforementioned "Why Don’t We Do It In the Road."
Love it or hate it, celebrate it or be embarrassed by it, "Why Don't We Do It In The Road?" showed that the Fab Four were more than peace, love and flowers (or is the song the essence of the hippie trinity?). Some might call it bold (particularly from McCartney), yet something like this had to be expected, especially on an album with a plain white cover, as if something subversive was inside. After the furor caused by John's "We're bigger than Jesus" statement, and the banned songs by the BBC due to drug references, not to mention John and Yoko's full frontal on the cover of Two Virgins, why not compose a song about the most absurdly taboo subject imaginable and see how many feathers could be ruffled?
"The idea behind 'Why Don't We Do It In The Road' came from something I'd seen in Rishikesh," Paul explained. "I was up on the flat roof meditating and I'd seen a troupe of monkeys walking along in the jungle and a male just hopped on to the back of this female and gave her one, as they say in the vernacular. Within two or three seconds he hopped off again, and looked around as if to say, 'It wasn't me,' and she looked around as if there had been some mild disturbance but thought, 'Huh, I must have imagined it,' and she wandered off.
"And I thought, 'Bloody hell, that puts it all into a cocked hat.' That's how simple the act of procreation is, this bloody monkey just hopping on and hopping off. There is an urge, they do it, and it's done with. And it's that simple. We have horrendous problems with it, and yet animals don't.” While Paul’s account makes it simply rudimentary, it also takes out the romance. Frankly, doesn't the song express our basic instincts, not just in a physical manner, indeed in this respect we’re like animals, but in an obliquely human way as well: "WDWDIITR" is all about the romance of lust. How Byronic is that?
So, back to the train. Monkeys just do it in the road. We take our time. We get on a train. We sit together and chat, forget about the ride, forget about the destination; it's all, at least for now, about the journey. And yet, in the nuance of the encounter, you contemplate her smile, the fullness of her breasts, his scruffy cool, and in your mind you just want to push him/her up against... Those thoughts wind through your mind, come and go, the question building, insistent, louder and louder. First, it's a question; then it's a plea:
Why don't we do it in the road?No one will be watching us
Why don't we do it in the road?
Published on May 06, 2018 04:18
May 5, 2018
When Mary Climbed In...
Bruce Springsteen's "Thunder Road" isn't just a song you listen to – it's one you watch in your mind — a sonic piece of cinema the budding songwriter produced, wrote and directed to show in the theater of your imagination. It even takes its name from a 1958 Arthur Ripley crime drama, Thunder Road – a drive-in vehicle for Robert Mitchum. Comparing Springsteen to pioneer filmmaker John Ford, Drive-By Truckers singer, "Tramp" Patterson Hood described the song as Springsteen's Stagecoach, in that it "announced his artistic arrival; that he's the 'real deal'."
As the needle falls onto the LP's A-side, the dreamy tickle of pianist Roy Bittan's ivories chime in contrast to the yearning howl of a harmonica that sounds like the creak of a screen door in slow motion.
As the tempo quickens to a bouncy lilt, the harmonica exits the scene and we meet our nameless narrator and Mary, who for the time being suffices as his Juliet. (She's not a beauty but, hey, she's all right.) This is how Springsteen lets us know that it's not about love but about the refuge of the road, about the romance of a two-lane highway to anywhere.
We can't help but feel like voyeurs as Bruce projects his vision of Mary dancing across a porch on the movie screen of our mind's eye, or as we watch the couple's automotive chariot – their burned out Chevrolet vanish into the sunset. The couple takes their destiny into their own hands because their town's full of losers, and they're pulling out to win. By the time they do, we're not watching, but riding along with them. It's rock's answer to the best American poets; it's Whitman for the common man and indeed the greatest example of American poetry in the 2nd half of the 20th Century. It's easy to read into it, but is it really that deep? "Thunder Road" is simply a song about getting the hell out - out of school, out of town, out of your parents' house; it's about freedom. Springsteen's masterpiece is a universal theme in a culturally specific setting. Could have been your hometown instead.
As the needle falls onto the LP's A-side, the dreamy tickle of pianist Roy Bittan's ivories chime in contrast to the yearning howl of a harmonica that sounds like the creak of a screen door in slow motion.

As the tempo quickens to a bouncy lilt, the harmonica exits the scene and we meet our nameless narrator and Mary, who for the time being suffices as his Juliet. (She's not a beauty but, hey, she's all right.) This is how Springsteen lets us know that it's not about love but about the refuge of the road, about the romance of a two-lane highway to anywhere.

Published on May 05, 2018 04:25
May 4, 2018
1982 - Nebraska

Poignant as shit.

Springsteen sings in black and white on an LP that's far from accessible, yet there's a singer/songwriter feel to Nebraska that very few albums match. The stripped down quality of the music, combined with the darkness of the music, puts one in the same frame of mind as Neil Young's "Tonight's The Night" or The Velvet Underground, call it music noir. The characters, situations, and emotions displayed here are those that we don't like to encounter, but far more common than those that make us feel good. That's dangerous territory, for someone like Springsteen, whose live shows are everyone's favorite party, yelling "Bruce, Bruce, Bruce." Nobody doing that here. Nebraska is the catalyst for every singer-songwriter since, from Ben Gibbard to Iron and Wine to Sun Kil Moon, but it's no party.
Published on May 04, 2018 04:04
May 3, 2018
Greetings From Asbury Park


Greetings from Asbury Park, N.J., (AM8) announced a considerable new talent and though he wouldn't shake the "new Bob Dylan" till Born to Run, his lyrical detail certainly had a different feel from Dylan's 60s triumphs. Take the fab opener "Blinded by the Light," a wonderfully surreal tale brimming with unusual imagery and snappy rhyming schemes; this highly innovative rocker was a brave choice as the opening gambit, but showed Springsteen's unshakable confidence in his lyrics even at this early stage of his career. Perhaps a lesser man would have kicked off with the delightfully catchy "Does This Bus Stop at 82nd Street?" Vaguely reminiscent of The Band at their best, this irresistible two minute pop nugget sported some fine lyrics: "Queen of diamonds, ace of spades, newly discovered lovers of the everglades, they take out a full page ad in the trades to announce their arrival" – yet it was the jaunty tune that really caught the imagination.

"Lost in the Flood" was another street-based gem. This time the arrangement was more understated allowing the lyrics to take centre stage. What could have been a simple tale of cars and guns is elevated to epic status through its immaculate detail. The opening verse sees the ragamuffin gunner returning home to a religiously bankrupt town – "they’re breaking beams and crosses with a spastic's reeling perfection, nuns run bald through Vatican halls pregnant, pleading immaculate conception" from which Jimmy the Saint tries to escape through frequent drag racing. Unfortunately over-confidence leads to his dramatic demise in a hurricane – "and there’s nothing left but some blood where the body fell, that is nothing left that you could sell, just junk all across the horizon, a real highwayman's farewell." Finally the town's frustrations erupt into a gun-fight which results in death and injury – "and Bronx’s best apostle stands with his hand on his own hardware, everything stops, you hear five quick shots, the cops come up for air." One of Springsteen's most downbeat and violent songs of the period, "Lost in the Flood" was another track surprisingly compared with Dylan, though more for its fine construction than its graphic content.

Published on May 03, 2018 17:42
REM and Springsteen
AM isn't shy about rating rock music as poetry, as the past couple posts show. There are those, indeed, who associate themselves more with poets more than musicians; first and foremost, Dylan. Robbie Robertson said, "I learned early on with Bob that the people he hung around with were not musicians. They were poets, like Allen Ginsberg. When we were in Europe, there’d be poets coming out of the woodwork. His writing came directly out of a tremendous poetic influence, a license to write in images that weren't in the Tin Pan Alley tradition or typically rock 'n' roll, either." Last year, the Nobel Prize committee agreed, raising Dylan's literary status far above his music.
Over time, the Tin Pan Alley set has gained in reputation as well; how could they not with lyricists like Cole Porter wielding words like a magic wand: "Let me live 'neath your spell/ You do that voodoo that you do so well." Ira Gershwin, who, unlike Porter, only wrote lyrics, exemplified the five essential points of poetry: words; wide-ranging subject matter; imagery; symbolism; and sound effects (alliteration, meter and a myriad of elements that the average listener dismisses as secondary to rhyme. In this, we understand why rap's gangsta days seem so trivial, even comical, while hip-hop in 2018 wins the Pulitzer Prize). Here's an example from Gershwin: "There is somebody I'm longing to see,/ I hope that she/ turns out to be,/ Someone to watch over me" – incredible rhyme, wonderful interpolation of sounds, fabulous meter.
Despite the image of loud guitars, pounding drums and incomprehensible vocals, great rock music starts with lyrics. The other elements of rock music shape themselves around the words, extending and strengthening them. People sometimes argue that the words in rock songs can't be all that important, because they are often so hard to decipher or even to hear. Yet there is a holographic quality to great art, in that the message of a piece is embedded in the whole of the work. Take REM, for instance (or in the extreme, Cocteau Twins). The lyrics at times are incomprehensible. "Swan Swan H" contains remarkable lyrics that no one (not even the rain) can fully understand.
Swan, swan, hummingbird
Hurrah we are all free now
What noisy cats are we
Girl and dog he bore his cross
A long low time ago people talk to me
Johnny Reb what's the price of fans
Forty a piece or three for one dollar?
Hey captain don't you want to buy
Some bone chains and toothpicks?
Poignancy in the guise of gibberish. Oh, don't think that I’ll sit here and decipher its meaning as a whole; remember that it's words + meter + subject matter + symbolism +… The song represents confusion, particularly of a young man growing up in the South with grand stories of Johnny Reb's heroics, a conflict enmeshed in a young man's southern outlook. We grow up with our heroes and down, crashing, they come.
The tune's incredible rhetoric and pace make for glorious poetry. Thoughts negating thoughts, words cut short like great filmmaking in which dialogue, you know, like real life, overlaps, is filled with cutoffs and incomplete sentences – it can indeed be disconcerting. The song defies clarity, even though such confusion is commonplace in our real speech.
Dylan avoided such an avant-garde approach to concentrate on subject, initially writing protest songs about political and social issues, but then transitioning to very personal subjects. Once he demonstrated the possibilities, others followed. Crosby, Stills, Nash and Young's Déjà vu is the perfect example. On this one collection we find songs about passing wisdom from one generation to the next ("Teach Your Children"), the importance of nonconformity ("Almost Cut My Hair"), the inability to escape one's past ("Helpless"), the nature of the emerging counter-culture ("Woodstock"), an almost suicidal expression of despair ("4 + 20") and simple domesticity ("Our House"), elements that make the primary mode of appreciation for the art form more akin to poetry. Words are used to encapsulate, preserve and amplify a particular experience, sensation, thought or feeling. In the space of a few verses and a chorus, just enough is said to convey the intended meaning.
The perfect example of rock poetry as storytelling is found in Bruce Springsteen's earliest work and again, in a song that could be considered the ultimate in storytelling, "The River." Springsteen's sister Ginny became pregnant at age 18 and quickly married her child's father, Mickey Shave, who took a construction job to support his family. "They had to struggle very hard back in the late Seventies like so many people are doing today," Springsteen said. He turned their story into his most moving working-class lament, a slow, sparse ballad with a mournful harmonica that sounds a bit like a funeral dirge. "Every bit of it was true," Ginny told Springsteen biographer Peter Ames Carlin. "And here I am, completely exposed. I didn't like it at first – but now it's my favorite song." Those words may sum up rock lyrics as poetry: "completely exposed."
Then I got Mary pregnant
And man that was all she wrote
And for my nineteenth birthday
I got a union card and a wedding coat
We went down to the courthouse
And the judge put it all to rest
No wedding day smiles, no walk down the aisle
No flowers, no wedding dress
Funny, all the dreams of "Born to Run" are shattered in those lyrics. They're not, by any means, as beautiful as "Born to Run" – or maybe they are but they're stripped of their fancy. They are sad instead of hopeful, the end, rather than the beginning, there are no dreams, only memories of that short-lived time down by the river. Ho-hum.
Over the next few posts we will explore rock music as poetry, from Springsteen to Prefab Sprout, from Joni to Graham, from Paul Simon to T.S. Eliot.

Over time, the Tin Pan Alley set has gained in reputation as well; how could they not with lyricists like Cole Porter wielding words like a magic wand: "Let me live 'neath your spell/ You do that voodoo that you do so well." Ira Gershwin, who, unlike Porter, only wrote lyrics, exemplified the five essential points of poetry: words; wide-ranging subject matter; imagery; symbolism; and sound effects (alliteration, meter and a myriad of elements that the average listener dismisses as secondary to rhyme. In this, we understand why rap's gangsta days seem so trivial, even comical, while hip-hop in 2018 wins the Pulitzer Prize). Here's an example from Gershwin: "There is somebody I'm longing to see,/ I hope that she/ turns out to be,/ Someone to watch over me" – incredible rhyme, wonderful interpolation of sounds, fabulous meter.
Despite the image of loud guitars, pounding drums and incomprehensible vocals, great rock music starts with lyrics. The other elements of rock music shape themselves around the words, extending and strengthening them. People sometimes argue that the words in rock songs can't be all that important, because they are often so hard to decipher or even to hear. Yet there is a holographic quality to great art, in that the message of a piece is embedded in the whole of the work. Take REM, for instance (or in the extreme, Cocteau Twins). The lyrics at times are incomprehensible. "Swan Swan H" contains remarkable lyrics that no one (not even the rain) can fully understand.

Hurrah we are all free now
What noisy cats are we
Girl and dog he bore his cross
A long low time ago people talk to me
Johnny Reb what's the price of fans
Forty a piece or three for one dollar?
Hey captain don't you want to buy
Some bone chains and toothpicks?
Poignancy in the guise of gibberish. Oh, don't think that I’ll sit here and decipher its meaning as a whole; remember that it's words + meter + subject matter + symbolism +… The song represents confusion, particularly of a young man growing up in the South with grand stories of Johnny Reb's heroics, a conflict enmeshed in a young man's southern outlook. We grow up with our heroes and down, crashing, they come.
The tune's incredible rhetoric and pace make for glorious poetry. Thoughts negating thoughts, words cut short like great filmmaking in which dialogue, you know, like real life, overlaps, is filled with cutoffs and incomplete sentences – it can indeed be disconcerting. The song defies clarity, even though such confusion is commonplace in our real speech.
Dylan avoided such an avant-garde approach to concentrate on subject, initially writing protest songs about political and social issues, but then transitioning to very personal subjects. Once he demonstrated the possibilities, others followed. Crosby, Stills, Nash and Young's Déjà vu is the perfect example. On this one collection we find songs about passing wisdom from one generation to the next ("Teach Your Children"), the importance of nonconformity ("Almost Cut My Hair"), the inability to escape one's past ("Helpless"), the nature of the emerging counter-culture ("Woodstock"), an almost suicidal expression of despair ("4 + 20") and simple domesticity ("Our House"), elements that make the primary mode of appreciation for the art form more akin to poetry. Words are used to encapsulate, preserve and amplify a particular experience, sensation, thought or feeling. In the space of a few verses and a chorus, just enough is said to convey the intended meaning.
The perfect example of rock poetry as storytelling is found in Bruce Springsteen's earliest work and again, in a song that could be considered the ultimate in storytelling, "The River." Springsteen's sister Ginny became pregnant at age 18 and quickly married her child's father, Mickey Shave, who took a construction job to support his family. "They had to struggle very hard back in the late Seventies like so many people are doing today," Springsteen said. He turned their story into his most moving working-class lament, a slow, sparse ballad with a mournful harmonica that sounds a bit like a funeral dirge. "Every bit of it was true," Ginny told Springsteen biographer Peter Ames Carlin. "And here I am, completely exposed. I didn't like it at first – but now it's my favorite song." Those words may sum up rock lyrics as poetry: "completely exposed."
Then I got Mary pregnant
And man that was all she wrote
And for my nineteenth birthday
I got a union card and a wedding coat
We went down to the courthouse
And the judge put it all to rest
No wedding day smiles, no walk down the aisle
No flowers, no wedding dress
Funny, all the dreams of "Born to Run" are shattered in those lyrics. They're not, by any means, as beautiful as "Born to Run" – or maybe they are but they're stripped of their fancy. They are sad instead of hopeful, the end, rather than the beginning, there are no dreams, only memories of that short-lived time down by the river. Ho-hum.
Over the next few posts we will explore rock music as poetry, from Springsteen to Prefab Sprout, from Joni to Graham, from Paul Simon to T.S. Eliot.
Published on May 03, 2018 06:00
Rock Music as Poetry - Part 2 - REM and Springsteen
AM isn't shy about rating rock music as poetry, as the past couple posts show. There are those, indeed, who associate themselves more with poets more than musicians; first and foremost, Dylan. Robbie Robertson said, "I learned early on with Bob that the people he hung around with were not musicians. They were poets, like Allen Ginsberg. When we were in Europe, there’d be poets coming out of the woodwork. His writing came directly out of a tremendous poetic influence, a license to write in images that weren't in the Tin Pan Alley tradition or typically rock 'n' roll, either." Last year, the Nobel Prize committee agreed, raising Dylan's literary status far above his music.
Over time, the Tin Pan Alley set has gained in reputation as well; how could they not with lyricists like Cole Porter wielding words like a magic wand: "Let me live 'neath your spell/ You do that voodoo that you do so well." Ira Gershwin, who, unlike Porter, only wrote lyrics, exemplified the five essential points of poetry: words; wide-ranging subject matter; imagery; symbolism; and sound effects (alliteration, meter and a myriad of elements that the average listener dismisses as secondary to rhyme. In this, we understand why rap's gangsta days seem so trivial, even comical, while hip-hop in 2018 wins the Pulitzer Prize). Here's an example from Gershwin: "There is somebody I'm longing to see,/ I hope that she/ turns out to be,/ Someone to watch over me" – incredible rhyme, wonderful interpolation of sounds, fabulous meter.
Despite the image of loud guitars, pounding drums and incomprehensible vocals, great rock music starts with lyrics. The other elements of rock music shape themselves around the words, extending and strengthening them. People sometimes argue that the words in rock songs can't be all that important, because they are often so hard to decipher or even to hear. Yet there is a holographic quality to great art, in that the message of a piece is embedded in the whole of the work. Take REM, for instance (or in the extreme, Cocteau Twins). The lyrics at times are incomprehensible. "Swan Swan H" contains remarkable lyrics that no one (not even the rain) can fully understand.
Swan, swan, hummingbird
Hurrah we are all free now
What noisy cats are we
Girl and dog he bore his cross
A long low time ago people talk to me
Johnny Reb what's the price of fans
Forty a piece or three for one dollar?
Hey captain don't you want to buy
Some bone chains and toothpicks?
Poignancy in the guise of gibberish. Oh, don't think that I’ll sit here and decipher its meaning as a whole; remember that it's words + meter + subject matter + symbolism +… The song represents confusion, particularly of a young man growing up in the South with grand stories of Johnny Reb's heroics, a conflict enmeshed in a young man's southern outlook. We grow up with our heroes and down, crashing, they come.
The tune's incredible rhetoric and pace make for glorious poetry. Thoughts negating thoughts, words cut short like great filmmaking in which dialogue, you know, like real life, overlaps, is filled with cutoffs and incomplete sentences – it can indeed be disconcerting. The song defies clarity, even though such confusion is commonplace in our real speech.
Dylan avoided such an avant-garde approach to concentrate on subject, initially writing protest songs about political and social issues, but then transitioning to very personal subjects. Once he demonstrated the possibilities, others followed. Crosby, Stills, Nash and Young's Déjà vu is the perfect example. On this one collection we find songs about passing wisdom from one generation to the next ("Teach Your Children"), the importance of nonconformity ("Almost Cut My Hair"), the inability to escape one's past ("Helpless"), the nature of the emerging counter-culture ("Woodstock"), an almost suicidal expression of despair ("4 + 20") and simple domesticity ("Our House"), elements that make the primary mode of appreciation for the art form more akin to poetry. Words are used to encapsulate, preserve and amplify a particular experience, sensation, thought or feeling. In the space of a few verses and a chorus, just enough is said to convey the intended meaning.
The perfect example of rock poetry as storytelling is found in Bruce Springsteen's earliest work and again, in a song that could be considered the ultimate in storytelling, "The River." Springsteen's sister Ginny became pregnant at age 18 and quickly married her child's father, Mickey Shave, who took a construction job to support his family. "They had to struggle very hard back in the late Seventies like so many people are doing today," Springsteen said. He turned their story into his most moving working-class lament, a slow, sparse ballad with a mournful harmonica that sounds a bit like a funeral dirge. "Every bit of it was true," Ginny told Springsteen biographer Peter Ames Carlin. "And here I am, completely exposed. I didn't like it at first – but now it's my favorite song." Those words may sum up rock lyrics as poetry: "completely exposed."
Then I got Mary pregnant
And man that was all she wrote
And for my nineteenth birthday
I got a union card and a wedding coat
We went down to the courthouse
And the judge put it all to rest
No wedding day smiles, no walk down the aisle
No flowers, no wedding dress
Funny, all the dreams of "Born to Run" are shattered in those lyrics. They're not, by any means, as beautiful as "Born to Run" – or maybe they are but they're stripped of their fancy. They are sad instead of hopeful, the end, rather than the beginning, there are no dreams, only memories of that short-lived time down by the river. Ho-hum.
Over the next few posts we will explore rock music as poetry, from Springsteen to Prefab Sprout, from Joni to Graham, from Paul Simon to T.S. Eliot.

Over time, the Tin Pan Alley set has gained in reputation as well; how could they not with lyricists like Cole Porter wielding words like a magic wand: "Let me live 'neath your spell/ You do that voodoo that you do so well." Ira Gershwin, who, unlike Porter, only wrote lyrics, exemplified the five essential points of poetry: words; wide-ranging subject matter; imagery; symbolism; and sound effects (alliteration, meter and a myriad of elements that the average listener dismisses as secondary to rhyme. In this, we understand why rap's gangsta days seem so trivial, even comical, while hip-hop in 2018 wins the Pulitzer Prize). Here's an example from Gershwin: "There is somebody I'm longing to see,/ I hope that she/ turns out to be,/ Someone to watch over me" – incredible rhyme, wonderful interpolation of sounds, fabulous meter.
Despite the image of loud guitars, pounding drums and incomprehensible vocals, great rock music starts with lyrics. The other elements of rock music shape themselves around the words, extending and strengthening them. People sometimes argue that the words in rock songs can't be all that important, because they are often so hard to decipher or even to hear. Yet there is a holographic quality to great art, in that the message of a piece is embedded in the whole of the work. Take REM, for instance (or in the extreme, Cocteau Twins). The lyrics at times are incomprehensible. "Swan Swan H" contains remarkable lyrics that no one (not even the rain) can fully understand.

Hurrah we are all free now
What noisy cats are we
Girl and dog he bore his cross
A long low time ago people talk to me
Johnny Reb what's the price of fans
Forty a piece or three for one dollar?
Hey captain don't you want to buy
Some bone chains and toothpicks?
Poignancy in the guise of gibberish. Oh, don't think that I’ll sit here and decipher its meaning as a whole; remember that it's words + meter + subject matter + symbolism +… The song represents confusion, particularly of a young man growing up in the South with grand stories of Johnny Reb's heroics, a conflict enmeshed in a young man's southern outlook. We grow up with our heroes and down, crashing, they come.
The tune's incredible rhetoric and pace make for glorious poetry. Thoughts negating thoughts, words cut short like great filmmaking in which dialogue, you know, like real life, overlaps, is filled with cutoffs and incomplete sentences – it can indeed be disconcerting. The song defies clarity, even though such confusion is commonplace in our real speech.
Dylan avoided such an avant-garde approach to concentrate on subject, initially writing protest songs about political and social issues, but then transitioning to very personal subjects. Once he demonstrated the possibilities, others followed. Crosby, Stills, Nash and Young's Déjà vu is the perfect example. On this one collection we find songs about passing wisdom from one generation to the next ("Teach Your Children"), the importance of nonconformity ("Almost Cut My Hair"), the inability to escape one's past ("Helpless"), the nature of the emerging counter-culture ("Woodstock"), an almost suicidal expression of despair ("4 + 20") and simple domesticity ("Our House"), elements that make the primary mode of appreciation for the art form more akin to poetry. Words are used to encapsulate, preserve and amplify a particular experience, sensation, thought or feeling. In the space of a few verses and a chorus, just enough is said to convey the intended meaning.
The perfect example of rock poetry as storytelling is found in Bruce Springsteen's earliest work and again, in a song that could be considered the ultimate in storytelling, "The River." Springsteen's sister Ginny became pregnant at age 18 and quickly married her child's father, Mickey Shave, who took a construction job to support his family. "They had to struggle very hard back in the late Seventies like so many people are doing today," Springsteen said. He turned their story into his most moving working-class lament, a slow, sparse ballad with a mournful harmonica that sounds a bit like a funeral dirge. "Every bit of it was true," Ginny told Springsteen biographer Peter Ames Carlin. "And here I am, completely exposed. I didn't like it at first – but now it's my favorite song." Those words may sum up rock lyrics as poetry: "completely exposed."
Then I got Mary pregnant
And man that was all she wrote
And for my nineteenth birthday
I got a union card and a wedding coat
We went down to the courthouse
And the judge put it all to rest
No wedding day smiles, no walk down the aisle
No flowers, no wedding dress
Funny, all the dreams of "Born to Run" are shattered in those lyrics. They're not, by any means, as beautiful as "Born to Run" – or maybe they are but they're stripped of their fancy. They are sad instead of hopeful, the end, rather than the beginning, there are no dreams, only memories of that short-lived time down by the river. Ho-hum.
Over the next few posts we will explore rock music as poetry, from Springsteen to Prefab Sprout, from Joni to Graham, from Paul Simon to T.S. Eliot.
Published on May 03, 2018 06:00