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Bex
is 47% done
The story is entertaining. Not enjoying these outdated expressions like "fat kid in a candy store" and "beaten by a girl". Shows a but of a lack in imagination imo.
— Jul 20, 2020 01:07AM
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Bex
is 47% done
The story is entertaining. Not enjoying these outdated expressions like "fat kid in a candy store" and "beaten by a girl". Shows a but of a lack in imagination imo. However it was written 8 years ago so I'll cut it a tiny bit of slack for time-of-writing context
— Jul 20, 2020 01:09AM
