While this book has picked up, I would've liked tighter editing.
Rhine wanted to linger, but having no legitimate reason to do so, he instead inclined his head in good-bye. “Have a good evening, ladies.” And he departed.
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He gave her a nod and departed.
Vera broke the thick silence following his departure. “You know, Sylvia, you two aren’t getting any younger."
Very little internal, just actions.
— Jan 27, 2019 07:54AM
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