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Bartholomew told hettie that he had a plan to close the portal and to force it to collapse on itself. He said that at the last second she would jump out of the portal back into this world but it did not work. Bartholomew told her to wait and wait and wait and right at the last second he screamed at her to jump, but hettie did not hear him of the evil laughter of the faeries. she stayed in the portal.

As the door grew larger more and more deep, red eyes began to appear inside the door, some small, some big all of them terrifying. Shrieks of pain, agony and joy could be heard from both sides of the portal. as they would soon find out, both worlds were being destroyed by the portal.

Hettie ran to bartholmew when she saw him, but as she cam closer the door became larger and destroyed anything in its path. Hetties was crying as her clothes began to burn from the heat of the portals opening. Bartholomew screamed at hettie as she came closer to him but she did not listen, she kept on running.

The old lady gives them coordinates to follow to find Mr. Lickerish and they then set off on their journey once again. They follow the coordinates to the thames river. They find a small loading yard that was used for dumping the dead peculiars into the thames. This is where they found hettie... She was being used as a door to enter the faerie world.

When they have bough their supplies they find a train station and set off to a small town in the middle of no where. They get a rickshaw to take them to the edge of a prarie and from their they walk. They find a secluded cabin and a thicket of trees and bushes. In this cabin is an old witch that brew potions and sends them to Mr. lIckerish.

They go to a new city in london called New Bath. It is filled with secret shops, tunnels and alleys. It has many different shops and auditoriums. They go to a BAZAR to find supplies for a journey they will be taking.

Barth goes with the man to find his sister but instead the lady in plum finds them. She then attacks that man who is later to be found out as Mr.Jelliby. she uses evil magic and pins Mr. Jelliby high above the ground to a wall. Barth runs away and gets police officers. The lady in plum is detained and an evil leech like fairy is extracted from her.

Barth is picked up and is nearly killed when a man with a bejeweled pistol saves him. He asks barth if he is child number ten. He doesnt speak out of confusion. then the man asks if he has seen the lady in plum and he says that she was here just a day ago to take his sister.

Later that day thomas found out that Ben had not been killed and was in the small, dull jail cell that was in the glade. Later he found out why he was there. He remembered a small part of his past and he then knew that he was meant to be a runner.

Hettie gets ubducted by the man and is child number ten, if she is not the perfect changeling she will be hollowed out and thrown into the thames river. She must be perfect or Bartholomew will be next.

A man comes into to see hettie and he begins to sing to her, she stays awake long enough to hear the full song but doses off as she sees the man going up the stairs to Bartholomew's room. He is already asleep and does not here the man coming up.

Mr. Arthur Jelliby has gone to the court house to sit in on an important hearing. The parliament must attend and he was nearly late. He got there just in time to see Mr. licorice get there late also. They sat down on opposite sides of the room because they were both in two different parties although neither were anti-faery.

The purple lady gives her money and she disappears into the door, next a boy comes out. they seem to agree on something. The boy walks out of the house and together they disappear into the sky.

Bartholamew sees a purple clad women in her fancy clothes and hat and scarf. She walks down the street just asking to be stolen from, she walks down the street 6 or 7 times looking for a certain house, she looks directly into bartholowmews house and turns, across the street she knocks on the door. It opens, it gets slammed shut. She knocks again and again for many minutes. A woman appears in the doorway.

Bath was a quiet town until the smiling war happened, faeries against humans. Bodies piling up and up into huge mounds. eventually the humans won and faeries became part of the human culture, servants or free people. It is a quiet place and many people like it there.

Thomas decided to go to the back of the forest when he saw a beetle blade just on the edge, he tried to catch it but couldn't. While he was walking along through the forest he heard a crash and Ben came out at him with a knife, He slashed at thomas but missed. Alby then came up with a bow and shot ben through the cheek, narrowly missing the brain.

When newt woke thomas up thomas told him that he wanted to be a runner. Newt told him that he couldn't just be whatever he wanted but had to work with everyone else and do what your good at. Newt said it was this way so that people wouldn't slack off and so that their community could thrive.

That night thomas goes to sleep in a large field, he thinks to himself that hey knows this place. He knew he was supposed to be a runner, he knew that he had a specific job here and he knew something important was going to happen

Thomas ran down the stairs trying to get the image of the sickly boy out of his mind. He couldn't do it and once he got down stairs Gally said "I told you, you shouldn't go up there." Minutes later Alby came down stairs and started to yell at thomas for coming upstairs even though people had told him not to. Thomas decided to stop trying to find answers to his questions and just decided to wait for night time.

A boy was laying on a bed covered in green skin and blood, Alby almost immediately stood up and shielded the boy from thomas or maybe thomas from the boy. Alby ran at Thomas and pushed him out of the room and yelled "GET OUT"

Thomas was curious and walked over to the shack to find out what was going on. He then met Gally who told him he should not go upstairs and if he did Newt and Alby would throw him off of the cliff. He went upstairs any way and right as he opened the door he saw the most gruesome sight of his life.

The crowd slowly disperses and then out of no where He hears a loud shriek of agony and pain. The two what seem like leaders run to the shack from where it had generated. Over the day their were more screams and wails. People kept saying things about 'the changing' and he was scared of what it was.

He is pulled out of the box via a long piece of rope . There are many people around him, staring as if he is a specimen from a lab. They call him things such as shank and other weird and hard to understand terms. He then starts asking questions: Where am i? Who are you? Where am i from? He is scared for his life.

Chapter 1: Thomas is in a dark black box that is steadily climbing the heights of the world. He is in there for what seems like an hour bu he is able to tell aver two hours have passed. He has no recollection of who he is, where he is from or what he is in. All he knows is his name, Thomas. He reaches the top and the box opens.

They meet Amar- Tobias' ded instructor and they drive to a compound in a large tarped over truck. They get to the compound and begin talking about what is really on the outside world. People were geneticaly modified and put into these large cities as a social expirement to see if the genetically modified genes would fix themselves- creating geneticaly perfect human beings.

Tris is put under the truth serum once more to see if she is a traitor and a theif. She is not convicted but she decides to leave the city to see who is out beyond the fence. They start towards the fence with a small group of people. The factionless begin to shoot at them and tori then dies. They get away from the factionless and leave the city on amity trucks

Tris released a tape about edith prior and jeanine Matthews was killed. tris is starting to think about leaving the city and is wondering how it is possible. The story ends here and pick =s up in the next book of the series.

Tobias appeared in front of tris' door and had blood satins on his shirt and blood on his face. he said "If you die I die to" he was then taken away. Tris went through a cat scan and it was determined that she had a very large prefrontal lobe and a very small orbitolobe. A syrup was used and she almost fell into its trance.

Tris told christina she was going to meet her brother at one of the faction less safe houses but really she was turning her self in. she commanded the desk man to get jeanine and was then taken to a holding sell. later that day she was tested on.

The erudite have put transmuters in most of the dauntless children and a message was sent late at night through their own children. If a divergent does not go to erudite headquarters a child would be force to jump to their deaths every night until no one was left.