I’m really struggling with this one. I don’t need every character to have their own forbidden love story. We’ve had enough in the first three books. Almost half of the book is jammed into the span of two days making for overly detailed, drawn out chapters. I’m all for setting the scene but telling me every other paragraph about how drawn the characters are to eachother when they shouldn’t be is overkill.
— Sep 11, 2022 11:36AM
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