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"Boy, your family." NO. NO NO NO. Should be you're. WHY?? So many typos!

"Hope your right, Sheriff." NOOOOOO. Should be you're not your. PET PEEVE! ARGH!!!!

Sigh, this sentence is missing a crucial comma. Y NOBODY EDIT DIS BOOK?

This is actually readable now that the story is going somewhere. Too bad it took so long for that to happen.

OMG so many sentences that are flat out missing words! Driving me crazy.

I'm kind of over this already. It needs better editing. I'm tired of the characters having wild mood swings completely out of the blue.

OMG I am CRACKING UP right now. So funny!

So... this book is terrifying so far. But I actually think it should be even darker than it is, given the subject matter.

"I think... therefore I'm terminally confused." So true.

This book is so interesting! I was wondering why it was set in the '80s, but the nature of the crimes and the technology available fits in that decade perfectly.

"When we were first together, and probably still now, my food-induced hysterical pregnancies horrified Adam." This whole scene, OMG cannot stop laughing!

"Before you consider contacting Child Services, I should probably let you know that our kids are cats." Hahahaha!

God this book is SO FUNNY!

"You are not less important to me than Ben... Only more able to survive on your own." <3

Can't decide if I liked this or not. Need to go read something less depressing.

Oh Areau.

This book is like steampunk, sci-fi, gay BATMAN.

Sooo confusing. :(

The staff, at least those who lay within his remit, were a variety of charming psychological aberrations that the Administration in its boundless wisdom had carefully channelled into the Division.

""Enough." "Did I do something wrong?" "No. No. It's too right. Too good. I won't last." OMG it is like every deflowering scene EVER. LITERALLY EVERY SCENE EVER. CANNOT HANDLE.

"This is non-negotiable. Your duty to me as a boyfriend is to kill spiders and
roaches within my vicinity. I don’t care if they’re the size of a small pony, you will kill and
dispose of them.”" Yes! This should always be true!

Ahh! Another Josh Lanyon moment where I'm like "I totally go there for dinner after trail rides too!"

"You look tall but you apparently have legs like a platypus." Ha ha ha!

WTF this whole book is nothing but non sequiturs, I do not get it.

Less awkward phrasing = it's getting better!

Oh, great. Now we're just referring to him as "the teacher." NOT BETTER! SO AWKWARD!

And this chapter starts with "The science teacher." I looked it up, there are 33 instances of that and 3 of "the biology teacher." TOO MANY.

Ahhh twice on the same page! I almost can't handle this, not sure if I'm going to be able to finish this book.

OMG STOP referring to Brandon as "the science teacher." Use his name already, this is just horribly awkward writing.

Eeeeee they just quoted Strictly Ballroom! Favorite movie ever!