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Julia ♥Duncan♥ is 49% done
Less awkward phrasing = it's getting better!
Jul 18, 2012 06:38PM
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Julia ♥Duncan♥
Julia ♥Duncan♥ is 24% done
Oh, great. Now we're just referring to him as "the teacher." NOT BETTER! SO AWKWARD!
Jul 18, 2012 11:53AM
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Julia ♥Duncan♥
Julia ♥Duncan♥ is 19% done
And this chapter starts with "The science teacher." I looked it up, there are 33 instances of that and 3 of "the biology teacher." TOO MANY.
Jul 18, 2012 10:56AM
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Julia ♥Duncan♥
Julia ♥Duncan♥ is 18% done
Ahhh twice on the same page! I almost can't handle this, not sure if I'm going to be able to finish this book.
Jul 18, 2012 10:46AM
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Julia ♥Duncan♥
Julia ♥Duncan♥ is 18% done
OMG STOP referring to Brandon as "the science teacher." Use his name already, this is just horribly awkward writing.
Jul 18, 2012 10:27AM
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