Marsh "Bad Sci Fi" Bloom > Recent Status Updates

Literally can’t put down. Reading in the middle of watching Mich-Mich State.

I’ve been reading this for six months. Trying hard to not abandon it.

Two things are really getting to me now on opening to chapter 39. One, the writing style is far better suited to a short story. It didn’t drag me down until chapter 12 or so. And I had to switch to reading a chapter at most at a time to tolerate it.

Picking it up again today I got jarred by a jumping ahead in time that doesn’t belong.

First observations: a lot of unneeded dialog, people saying things we already know they would say, which says more in a new world we’ve just been introduced to. 2) unneceasary details but mosty mechanical or spactial which is easier to take than the excess predictable dialog

Some of the best writing I’ve ever read. Have to seek out the others in the series.