Maybe I've been spoiled by Gass, who has the ability to surgically implant an image in a reader's mind without her ever knowing she was under. Moseley's imagery itself is often effective, but the reader is not properly anesthetized. She is conscious during the procedure; sees the surgeon wipe his brow, request the scalpel, then make the incision. It looks all wrong and hurts like hell.
— Mar 10, 2015 06:30AM
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