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Stutley Constable
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I am very disappointed with this book. The first third was fairly well written. There were several mistakes such as missing words and simple typos, as well as a couple of instances where 'horse' was used instead of the fictional animal 'dont'.
The middle was alright until Tony Daniel introduced a MarySue into the plot. After that his writing started running down hill.
— Dec 20, 2014 09:31AM
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The middle was alright until Tony Daniel introduced a MarySue into the plot. After that his writing started running down hill.










