Stutley Constable’s Reviews > The Heretic > Status Update

Stutley Constable
Stutley Constable is on page 297 of 448
I am very disappointed with this book. The first third was fairly well written. There were several mistakes such as missing words and simple typos, as well as a couple of instances where 'horse' was used instead of the fictional animal 'dont'.

The middle was alright until Tony Daniel introduced a MarySue into the plot. After that his writing started running down hill.
Dec 20, 2014 09:31AM
The Heretic (The General, #9)

flag

No comments have been added yet.