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To Disobey a Command---Finished
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Aug 14, 2010 12:15PM
Siki nodded at Zen. A rock fell next to her, she jumped, knife trained of it.
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Siki felt like a moron, she just jumped at a rock. She continued on.((ugh my mom is making me cut the grass, ill be back in like 10 min))
Siki looked back at Zen and Fel. Normally Zen was the leader, Fel or Zen, not ever her. She continued on anyway, reminding herself things had changed.
Kia watched them move on and followed them silently, keeping hidden
They reached the wall where the scroll was hidden. Siki remebered her order. 'bring me back the scroll, hidden in the cave wall, map below, marked by the symbol of water.' She searched for the symbol. She hoped her sister was okay, she didnt know what would happen sinse her mission was late, but she couldnt think about that now.
"This is where it is?" Felway asked. "our second of the nine?" Siki nodded.
Felway looked at the mark on the wall. He had seen that symbol before, somewhere. Siki reached out to touch it.
Felway looked at the mark on the wall. He had seen that symbol before, somewhere. Siki reached out to touch it.
Siki touched the middle of the symbol, when a part of the rock opened up with a crack. She reached in and pulled out the scroll, in bad condition. she thumped it in Felways hand.
Felway held the scroll that would make everything peaceful for him again. "What are you doing?" Felway began. "You said that you needed these scrolls for your sister... And if it wasn't for you, we wouldn't have this scroll. If i get a scroll, it will be on my own." He said and forced it back into Siki's arms.
He was right when he was going to the Eillie Forest. "And i won't get my scrolls using enchantment." He added and walked towards the direction of the exit.
He was right when he was going to the Eillie Forest. "And i won't get my scrolls using enchantment." He added and walked towards the direction of the exit.
Siki grabbed his shoulder. "My sister will be just fine." she said. She gave the scroll back to him. "She has her ways."
"Yes, she has enchantment just like you! That is probably the only reason that she is living today." Felway looked at the scroll. "You take this for safe keeping. We decide who gets it later. We need to go to the forest. You may follow if you like." He started to walk again.
Siki scowled. "Thats not my fault!" she said angry. "Besides she way better because she wants its!" she angryly stomped after Felway.
Felway spun around. "That doesn't matter! You accepted it and you use it!" Felway looked at Zen, he was just watching. "You always have a choice!"
Siki glared at him. "I did have a choice. It wasnt supposed to be like that! I was just expereimenting! I wanted to see what i could do! I didnt mean to accept it!" She had her knife in grip.
Felway noticed Siki's hand head for her knife and grip it. "What are you going to do? Kill me?" Felway didn't want to fight her, but everything changed so much. "I already said that you could have the scrolls!" He also made his hand go for his knife.
Siki dropped her knife. "Im not going to ever kill you, Felway, you barly even know what your talking about." she said threw clentched teeth. "I dont want the scrolls, im done with blasted Tryrents and mission!"
"I didnt mean you moron! I ment my uncle!" She yelled back. "You-" she started to yell. She looked into Felways eyes. She saw what she used to see. She took a step back. She flshed back to him laughing one day. "You..." she said quieter.
Felway felt the anger drain. "Are you okay?" He asked Siki, no response. "Your uncle... He is holding your sister hostage?" Once she became quiet, he did the same.
Siki looked at him. "Yes." was all she said, she still saw the same boy she grew up with, she couldnt help it, she had to hold onto the memories while she could.
Felway looked into her eyes. The only remembrance of her was him leaving and her crying after him. "I can't undo what has been done, but if we can create new memories, then it could be like when we were young... And if your uncle is stopping those memories from coming. Then your uncle seems like our next target, if that's alright with you?" He never took eyes off her.
Siki held his gaze for a bite. "No. We cant get him till you get your memory back." she said picking up her knife. He knew about her magic, luckly she didnt know how to use it.
Zen watched curiously. "Then we know our mission don't we?" He said, laying on an Austraillian accent. A mischeviousl dangerous glint hovered in his eye as he smiled.
Siki looked at him. He had that look in her eyes. She looked back at Felway. "Accually, i think its the other way around. My sister has been proubly training too, but not as a warroir, she'll use her magic." she smiled at Zen. "Your gonna get yourself in trouble, i just know it."
Zen laughed. "Of course it is." He said. "But not with the help of Grenlins." He said. "They're horrid creatures, but travel at the speed of lightning." He said. "And they love music." He said. "Of course if you offend thenm they'll eat your liver but. Who cares? We're on the death list anyway." He said cheerfully.
Zen laughed maniaclly. "Of course dear, yes of course." He said and pulled out a bow. He shot the ceiling and it stuck. "I thought so..." He mused to himslef.
Siki glared at him. "Im not your dear." she said annoyed. She looked at his arrow. "Your still half crazy Zen." she said shaking her head.
"I never said you were." He said. He shot annother arrow and a rope dangled down from it. He tugged on it and began climbing it.
Siki sighed and looked at Felway. "Come on." she said and climbed up after him. "Zen, what about your horse?"
Siki dangled and looked down at him. "I have no clue, but Zen is only half crazy, goodness forbid hasent gone totally crazy yet."
Zen laughed. "This ain't no rock, sweets." He said. "Arrows don't sink into rock." He said as he poked it. Sunlight streamed through. He swung himself up and out. The vast mountains were glorious around him. "Attis. Urm look away." He said and flashed his ring. A blinding sunlight lept in front of them and Attis dissapeared into his ring.
"What!" Siki exclaimed as he used he enchanted ring. She grumbled as she climbed up. "I really dont like magic."
Zen shrugged. "It's powerful." He said a leapt down a rock. "Not like I use it for combat or anything." He said with a shrugg.
Zen shrugged. "And I don't like gremlins." he said. "But we're saving you sister." He said.((Who should make her sister's character?))
Felway grabbed the robe and climbed up. "You both are liars. At least i know i don't have magic."
"No i do not! At least i forgot how to do it if i did." Felway finished climbing out of the hole.
"What that supposed to mean!?" Felway started to yell again. "You think that you know everything about me!"
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