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To Disobey a Command---Finished
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Aug 13, 2010 04:44PM
She felt her way along the cold wet cave wall, she stopped about 10 yards away, unseeable by Zen and Fel, but she could see them fine. He still looked like Fel, and sometimes acted like him, but he was so differnt, maybe it was just her.
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"Go." He took off running.
Siki looked at Felway. "Fel-!" she started. She looked at Zen. "He's gone crazy!" she exclaimed.
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Siki looked at the direction he was going, she'd travel that way before. "He's going the wrong direction." she said flatly. "He didnt turn right." she said with a sigh.
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He turned back around and examined the forest that he came out into. A rustling came from a bush to the left. Then when Felway turn to face it, another rustle came from the right side. Felway drew is sword.
Siki and Zen followed Felway, and were almost to the forest, the Scroll was on the other side of the cavern. Siki emerged and looked at the forest, the sun had almost set and it was getting dark fast.
Zen sgihed as he led Attis after him, jogging. "Felway. Oh god, he went into.." He winced.
Siki looked at Zen. "What? He went into what?" she demanded, she didnt like the sound of that.
Zen winced at a howl and gulped. "He went into ravenous cave." He said. "Let's hope he's good with animals." He said.
Siki nodded, looking a bit distrested, and followd went after, drawing her bow.
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Siki saw all the animals, she shot one arrow in the heart, and did three more.
Zen followed her, violin and sword out. He bagan playing a tune that usually calmed Attis.
Siki glance him annoyed. Playing his violin would help anything she thought, shooting two more beasts. Enless its enchanted...
Zen glanced at them. "You're just making them more angry." He said, playing soothingly. Attis sighed contently and some of the animals swayed a bit.
Siki sighed and stopped shooting. "I dont have a sword, and knifes arnt going to help, what do you want me to do." she said a bit irritated.
Zen thought. "I want you to sing." He said, watching the effect on the animals as their attacks became slightly drowsy.
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Siki looked at him, oddly. She hadent sung in years. She looked at Felway, he wouldnt last much longer, sher flashed back to him wiping her tears away. She closed her eyes and sung, her voice sounded as sweet as honey, and morning bells.
Zen smiled as he watched the effect on the animals. They grew drousy, their attacks weak. The smaller ones fell asleep. The bigger ones slowed down.
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Siki stopped singing, she looked to the beasts as they stopped attacking. She looked at Felway. She wouldnt sing again, she made that decition. She looked back at Zen, then the beasts.
Zen motioned furiously. "They'll wake up soon." He hissed, motioning them out.
Siki nodded and walked back into the cave. "Enchanted violin?" she asked.
Zen shook his head. "Enchanted song. I would never play enchanted violin. Did someone enchant your voice?" He replied.
Siki scowled. "No, i wouldnt let that happen." She pushed past him. She knew that was a bad idea, hopefully they'd forget it. She continued in the right direction.
Zen shrugged. "Then it must be that one." He pointed to the one that wasn't dead end and not the one the had entered.
Siki entered the tunnel. She drew her knife again.
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Siki hung back, she couldnt see a thing without Zens torch. She waited for them.
"I woulnt enchant myself." Siki said, when she heard Felway. "You of all people would have known that." she said.
Zen laughed. "I was kidding. It's just so beatiful I couldn't believe." He said, brushing some hair out of his face.
Siki scowled again. "I knew i shouldnt have done it." she muttered under her breath. She walked along side Zen.
Zen snorted. "Felway would be dead if you hadn't." He said.
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He pressed his hand on the wall and walked forward. He didn't need the light.
She didnt say anything, she wouldnt. She back at Felway for a second. he would be dead. she thought. she sighed and trudged on.
Zen sighed as he lightly punched him in the arm as a greeting. "Welcome back, Fel. Welcome back." He said.
Siki heard water dripping and gribbed her knife tighter.
Zen put away his violin and held out his sword.
"Erm, the unknown passage and the passage out." He said.
Siki nodded. "The scrolls on the passage out, just after the unknown passage."
((ok))Siki relaxed her grip on her sword and continued on.
When the others had reached the caves, Kia wrapped her horsed hooves so they wouldn't make a sound. Then she silently stalked them, waiting for them to retrieve the scroll
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"Welcome back?!" Felway's anger filling again. It's like Zen didn't hear a word he just said. "That wasn't me! I am not back someone stole my memories and I can't get them back unless we get the message how to get them back, from the scrolls. What part of that don't you understand? I only did that so i thought it would make you happy. At least try and make you think that it all had been mended, but all i did was make a fool out of myself and now we have to backtrack and find the right way out!" After the words left his mouth Felway knew that he should have left some parts out.
But he meant what he said and he said what he meant. It's too late to take them back anyway. You can never take words back.
Kia rolled her eyes. It was going to take them forever to get out of the caves on the right side. She backtracked and threw a rock down the tunnel that led to the exit. Then she hid herself and her horse.
Siki looked at Felway. She frowned, in disbelive and a bit of sorrow. "We understand it all." Siki said sharply. Felways anger came from confusion, and she couldnt do a thing about that. "And you keep letting them get the best of you." she said, looking off in the direction of the noise. It came from the right tunnel, she thought.
Zen glanced at Felway. "I said that because you were starting to act like Fel." He said, his hair was getting annoying flopping in front of his face. He pulled out a bandana and rolled in up. He tied in on his forehead so his bangs were flipped back.
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