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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I can help you. Holding my hand makes you stronger," he lied.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "It does?" She looked down at the soldier.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Yeh," he nodded, looking to the 13 year old.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She nodded, but she looked like she was waiting for something, staring at the tree line.

16 year old Natalia nodded and closed her eyes again, trying to raise him. His hand twitched, but then a loud whistle sounded. "Back away and put your hands up!" A group of soldiers appeared, guns raised. They spoke in Russian.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "No," he whispered. "No!" He yelled at them.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia shot up to her feet. She raised her bloody hands up in the air. "I-I'm a nurse." She gestured with her head down at the cross on her uniform.

"You're out of bounds." The head officer said. He then looked down at the dead soldier, slowing approaching. "You killed him." He spat.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian looked at her, "she's a nurse," he repeated. "She didn't kill him."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) They soldiers couldn't see or hear him.

"I was saving him." She cried. "Please." She begged in Russian.
The soldiers talked to one another, deciding what to do.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ""Leave her alone," he said, taking her hand again.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Please." Natalia whispered, visibly shaking.

The officer jetted out his jaw. "You were escaping with him. You know what happens to soldiers who escape. He's already dead so..." trailed off, shrugged, then shot straight at Natalia. The bullet went through her chest, forcing her back. Natalia jerked back, collapsing onto the snow.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "NO!" He yelled and immediately threw himself in the way of the bullet but it went right through him. He looked back at Natalia and ran over. "No, no, no," he whispered. "Get up, get up, get up."

((Tell me if I ruin any of your plans lol))


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) ((It's all good so far lol))

Natalia gasped for breath, her chest rising and falling quickly. The soldiers left.
"I-I-." She tried to speak. She gripped Elian's shirt.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((K lol))

Elian shook his head, looking back and forth. He lifted her shirt and looked at the wound, tears in his eyes all over again.

Emily held onto Elian's hand, "Ramsay." She said, her eyes already closed. "He's getting worse."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "She'll be okay." 13 Natalia said. "She heals herself." She assured.

Natalia closed her eyes and panted. "T-take it out," she breathed. "Take the bullet out." She groaned.

"This is the big one." Ramsay said. "He's so close."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian's eyes widened and he instantly shook his head. "No," he said and looked at the thirteen year old.

Emily lifted Elian's hands to her lips and used an incantation she usually used to get the kids to help.

Elian instantly felt better on the outside. He moved forward and started to remove the bullet the best he could.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "She did it herself." 13 said. "All by herself, she pulled that out."

16 Natalia gripped the red snow and cried out, but fought through the pain, groaning.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Tears slipped out of Elians eyes while he slept. Emily reached up to wipe them.
Elian ignored the 13 year old as he finally got the bullet out.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Then, Natalia was able to heal herself. "T-thank you." She reached up and touched his cheek, then everything went black.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian softened a notch.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) A new scene was before him. He was back at the stage but it looked old and run down. On it was a large cage and inside the cage was Natalia, curled up into a ball, whimpering. It was the real her.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian looked around for the 13 year old but he couldn't find her. Instead, he found this. "Nat, is that you?" He asked, again cautiously approaching.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She gasped. "Elian?" She couldn't sit up but she grabbed a bar. "I can't see." Her eyes were covered with Cloth and soaked with blood.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He went over, "it's me, baby. It's Elian," he whispered, kneeling down in front of her and placing his hand on hers. "Im getting you out of here," he said, looking for a way out somehow.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "I'm stuck." She cried. She was covered in black goo. "


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I don't know how to get you out," he admitted, starting to shake each of the bars.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "I-i don't know either." She sniffled. "I can't see and my eyes hurt they hurt so much."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm sorry... I'm so sorry," he whispered, reaching up to touch her face.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Take the blind fold off her." A voice whispered to him.

"Elian." She whimpered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian jerked and looked behind him. "Who are you?" He asked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "It's me." 13 Natalia said. "I just can't let her see me."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Oh," Elian said and turned back to Natalia. He carefully moved to remove her blind fold, which he hadn't even realized was there.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Her eyes were clouded over and dried blood surrounded them. She tried to look around. But couldn't see him. Only certain objects, lit up, she could see. "Where are you?" She sounded panic.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm right here," he said and touched her face again, "here," he said and kissed her head. "I'm getting you out of here." He said and then looked back and asked the 13 year old, "how?"


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She whimpered with happiness when he touched her. She grilled his wrists, sniffling,

"She needs to help. She can see only what needs to be seen." 13 whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I can tell she needs help, how do I help her?" He asked. "There's no lock on this thing or a door."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia was looking around frantically. She saw something wrapped around her ankle, leading out of the cage and disappearing behind the curtain. "There's something on my ankle!" She shouted. Only she could see it.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian frowned and followed her gaze, "there's nothing...." he whispered.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Feel for it." 13 said. "She can see what you can't."

When Natalia tried to pull it, she heard a growl and a screech from behind the curtain. "What the fuck is that?" She gasped.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian nodded and started to feel around for it. He felt her tug on it and jerked up again. "What was that?" He asked, looking at the curtain.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Whatever it is, I'm attached to it." Natalia breathed.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian tugged a little on whatever he held.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) A roar sounded. "Oh god." She whimpered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian looked down at her. "What?" He asked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "I'm attached to it." She realized. "You need to cut if somehow." She said


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Is it metal?" He asked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "It's... it looks like a vein," she shivered.

((Ooooomg I'm gonna make this so epic lol))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian dropped it immediately, falling back. "How the fuck am I supposed to cut it?" He asked.

((O.o))


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia opened her mouth to say something but was interrupted by the rustle of the curtains. The demon stepped out. He was large and black and honestly hideous. The vein was connected to his heart, then to her ankle. He growled. "Elian!" Natalia screamed in warning, but the demon pushed him back away with a force.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian's eyes widened and then carefully lifted up to the demon. He grunted, pain shooting everywhere as he fell back.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Don't hurt him!" Natalia whimpered. The demon approached, but was pushed himself by some white masses that only Natalia could see. Other white figures approached Natalia, slivering through the cage and touching her anywhere they could. Natalia gasped and the room was then lit up with a bright light coming from the cage. The demon screamed.


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