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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian stood for a moment shocked, "Nat," he whispered before he angrily attacked whoever it was


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) As soon as he touched them, they disappeared. Moans and groans came from the other side of the warehouse.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian fell down face first. "Fuck," he mumbled. He stood up and went to look for them, feeling his mind go a little bit more insane with ever event.

((This is so creepy lol))


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) ((I love it lol I'm doing a sort of ghost past thing of her life. Like these are all her inner demons kind of thing))

"You're not getting a shot until I'm finished." A gruff voice said. He was on top of Natalia, having sex with her. Natalia just laid there with her arms above her head, panting lightly. When Elian entered the room, she looked over at him and smiled breathlessly, then started to giggle evilly.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments (O.O)

Elian froze for maybe the fifteen time. "Get off her!" He yelled and tackled him off him. "GET OFF," he yelled again.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) The guy disappeared when he touched him, but Natalia stayed. She stared up at him, curious. "Is it your turn?" She asked. She was very high.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian looked down at her disgusted at the thought of using her like that. He panted and shook his head, "fuck no," he said, reaching down to grab her hand and pull her up. "You can't do this, Nat. You're high," he said, honestly starting to believe that this was reality.

Emily crossed her arms tightly around herself. "Ramsay, I'm not sure it was a good idea letting him go in there," she told him.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "No," she whined. "I need you." She whispered, then gasped, sitting up. She started to shake and twitch. "Go to where it started go to where it started GO TO WHERE IT STARTED!" She screamed, then disappeared.

Ramsay shook his head. "He's okay. He'll get it." Ramsay said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian fell back on his ass, tears falling down his face. "I don't know how!" He yelled back.

"Rams, he's not stable.. mentally," she said. "It's getting worse for him, quickly." She told him worriedly. "I can feel it."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Everything went dark again. "Elian!" The real Natalia's voice screamed, like in pain.

"You'll have to help him." Ramsay turned to her. "To guide him."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian was starting to give up, convinced he'd die in this reality. When he heard Natalia's voice this time, though. He was pretty sure it wouldn't be pleasant but he ran anyways.

Emily shook her head, starting to go panic. "I don't know how, Ramsay. I don't know how to use them."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "I have an idea." Ramsay clapped his hands and went over to Natalia. He touched her hand and whispered, "help him. Show him how his works."

The world lit up again. This time it he was in a graveyard.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Ramsay it feels like you're talking in puzzles!" She said, putting her hands on her hips annoyedly.

It was dark. So dark that Elian honestly felt like his eyes weren't even open. He felt around the coffin but he could barely move. He choke on a sob. "Someone help!" He yelled. "Get me out of here!" He cried, starting to hit at the room to open it. "Help me, please! I can't breathe!"


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "He'll have help. Just watch." He said.

Everything was lit, slowly. "Elian?" A younger female voice said softly. "Hold out your hand." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Emily huffed and sat down next to Elian, taking his hand.

"Nat? Is that you?" He asked loudly, holding his hand out to take hers.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) A hand wrapped around his and pulled. The scene changed to what looked like a boarding house. Standing before him was thirteen year old Natalia. Her hair was her natural shade of bright blonde and she wore 1930'd attire. She smiled a little.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Nat?" He asked, looking around as he frantically wiped his tears away


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "That would be me." She said. "But I'm not your Natalia."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He frowned, "what?" He asked, tilting his head to the side.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "I'm thirteen year old Natalia." She said with a thick Russian accent. "You were so close to finding me but I was told that I needed to find you."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He stared at her, his girlfriend who wasn't his girlfriend. "Why?" He asked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "I'm to guide you." She said simply. "I'm the only innocent part of her." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He frowned. "I don't know what I'm supposed to do," he said.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Well, what happened when you tried to touch Natalia?" She asked.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "She disappears... then I'm taken somewhere else."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "There isn't a different way to go." She said. "You'll end up where her dream wants you to go." She said. "If you havent noticed, we're in Natalia's mind." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian looked around, "how do I save her?" He asked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "We have to find her; the real her." She said. "I know where she is. I can help you."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Okay," he said. "How do we get to her?"


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "We walk and let the dream take us. We have to endure her inner demons though." She said


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian nodded, "why was I... in a coffin?" He asked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "You were suppose to be outside of it." She sighed. "You were just spawned in the wrong area; you moved around a lot." She shrugged.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm sorry my girlfriend was being drugged and then someone was having sex with her," he mumbled.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She nodded. "Inner demons. You saw and will see the most vulnerable moments of her life. Her nose fragile memories."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian wasn't sure he could do that and not completely fall apart. He started to nod.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "I'll help you." She took his hand. "I promise. We'll get her out."

"Elian!" The real Natalia screamed from the sky.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elians head shot up. He carefully nodded, wide syed even when she took his hand.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) The scene before them changed to an empty snowy field. A figure was crouched in the middle, crying.

"Go ahead. I'll be here." She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian looked at her and nodded before stepping over carefully. "Nat?" He asked, stepping over.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia in this sequence was about sixteen. She was crouched over a dead soldier, his head in her lap. The snow was soaked in blood. "I-i don't know what t-to do." She cried. She looked up at Elian.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian looked back at the 13 year old, unsure what to do. "I.... I don't know... do what you usually do...." he said, taking deep breaths.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "She told you about the soldier right?" 13 year old Natalia asked.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((Did she? Lol))


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) (She mentioned that a soldier was who she lost her virginity to while she was a nurse in the war))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Yeah... she lost her virginity to him..." Elian said, looking at the body.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) 16 year old Natalia sniffled and put her hands over his chest and closed her eyes. She started to shake and twitch while she tried to raise him


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian frowned and watched, carefully stepping over and then kneeling.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Ah!" She cried out and fell backwards. It didn't work. This was the first official time she tried to raise somebody from the dead. It took a lot of power she didn't have. She laid there and sobbed, covering her face with her bloody hands. "I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian took her hand gently, "try again." He said softly.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She looked at him. "I-I can't do it. It hurts." She cried.


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