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message 4301: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow turned to him. "Oh I'm sorry Sean..I didn't..I didn't mean to make her cry..I thought it was someone else.."




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He nodded. "So did I. It's not... it's not our fault." he held back tears of his own.


message 4303: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She refused to let him blame himself. "It was." she said feircely. "Do you know what I did to her?"

The man laughed.


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He closed his eyes and clenched his fists. "Yeah... I think so. But you didn't know. It's okay. It's not your fault," he said quietly to her. Then he stood, and he ran at the man, leaping at him and punching him with all he had. "It's yours!" he hissed. "You and all who run this!"


message 4305: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The man tossed him backwards with a flick of his wrist,laughing darkly. "If you wish for pain.."


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Sean winced as he landed on the hard ground, but he got up again. "What the hell is wrong with you people?" he shouted. "You like this! How can you?"


message 4307: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I find it odd that you would even try." he shrugged.


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Sean glared at him, tears of anger in his eyes. "Try what? Try to make you feel the pain that you cause others to feel? Yeah, I'm trying. Want me to try harder?"


message 4309: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "you will not succeed."


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"Whatever." Sean came at him again.


message 4311: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments A wall of energy blocked him.


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Sean bounced off of it and cursed. He stood again, panting, and looked at his sister. He sighed as he realized that this was not going to get him anywhere.


message 4313: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow stood, messing with the man's mind enough to give Sean an opening.


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Sean didn't move. "No..." he whispered. "It's no use."


message 4315: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Fine." she said unhappily. "But he'll get his way then."


message 4316: by [deleted user] (new)

((He's at the breaking point, you know? Gosh... he didn't go through this much in my novel.))

Sean shrugged and sat down. "What can I do? Nothing."


message 4317: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((poor Sean))

Shadow sighed and just then the man made his move, pinning her to the wall,not even moving.


message 4318: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yeah...))

"Hey! Let her down!" Sean cried, standing.


message 4319: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Tsk,tsk. No."


message 4320: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean looked at Shadow helplessly. "I'm sorry..."


message 4321: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It's not..your fault." she said. Shadow tried to play with the man's mind but the block was back up.

Gwen was back in the room with Jack and she laughed.


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Sean looked from Shadow to the man, then back, desperately. He closed his eyes and shook his head. "No..." He opened his eyes again and they were burning with rage. "Let her down, now," he said quietly.

Jack sat back to watch, smiling with satisfaction.


message 4323: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Not a chance." he pulled her higher up the wall,scraping her back against the rough stone.

"This will be a good show."


message 4324: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sorry 'bout disappearing... I thought maybe Dada had forgotten to shut the internet off, but apparently not. *sigh*))

Sean sank to his knees, tears welling in his eyes, as he watched helplessly. ((Wait for it... he's not giving up just yet...))

Jack grinned and nodded. "The boy is weak. He'll break soon."


message 4325: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((It's kay, you had already said bye *grins*))

Gwen waited with baited breath. "So it seems."

Shadow forced the glass to implode, but made sure Fiona was not harmed. She levitated one of the larger shards and had it held to the man's back. He laughed,sliding her sideways on the wall, her mind blocking with the pain and dropping the glass. It shattered into a million peices.


message 4326: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Yeah.))

Sean looked from Shadow to Fiona, then made a decision. He suddenly stood, grabbing one of the shards of glass, and ran at the man so fast that no one would have seen it coming. He knocked the man over and sat on his chest, trapping his arms beneath him and holding the glass to his throat.

((Hope that wasn't too fast...))

Jack cursed. "Send more men down there!" he said into a speaker.


message 4327: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Gwen hid a smile.

Shadow was released with the fall of the man and she landed on her toes, lithe as ever.

The man tried to throw Sean off but by the Shadow had outwardly blocked the man from being able to do anything with a 'mind' power.


message 4328: by [deleted user] (new)

((Hm... what to do now? XD))

Sean pressed the glass a bit harder, drawing blood, but hesitated, not sure if he could kill the man.

Jack watched the screen, and declared, "He won't do it. He's too weak." Inwardly he wasn't so sure, though.


message 4329: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((hehe))


"Don't Sean.. we'll only get in more trouble," Shadow said huskily, tears marring her words though they did not fall.

"did you get men sent down there?" Gwen asked.


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Sean nodded. He could hear footsteps now. "If you hurt her again, I swear I will kill you. Her or my sister." He got off of the man and ran to pick up Fiona. He cradled her in his arms and waited for the others to come.

Jack nodded. "Just wait..."


message 4331: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The door creaked open and the light displayed various guards and agents.

Shadow sighed.

Gwen nodded.

((we can both be some?))


message 4332: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sure.))

Sean looked down at his sister, and tears trickled down his cheeks. "Fiona..." he whispered, stroking hair away from her face. He looked up again, at the people who had come for them. He looked at Shadow, at the blood staining the back of her shirt.
"Here we go again," he sighed.


message 4333: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She smiled at him, so soft.

Two men seized Sean by the shoulders and another two took Fiona gently but firmly.

Gwen grinned in sadistic releif.


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Sean smiled just a little back at her, sadly, and didn't struggle against the men. He tried not to let them take his sister, but there was nothing he could do. He let the men pull him away from her.

Jack smiled and chuckled.

((I dunno what their punishment will be!))


message 4335: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((me neither..lol we'll think of something...eventually))

The men brought Fiona to the infirmary where a Medik was waiting.

Sean was taken to a blank white room with cameras and motion sensors.

Shadow knew that she needed medical attention, and she also knew they wouldn't let her anywhere near the infirmary. No one had grabbed her yet and she wondered why.

Gwen waited.


message 4336: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Yeah... eventually. Hm...))

Fiona moaned and stirred, and the first words she uttered were, "Need to see my parents..."

Sean watched the door close and sank to the floor. Waiting again... He groaned.

The men didn't let Shadow out of the room, and one told her to wait there and not do anything stupid; someone was coming to see her.


message 4337: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The men ignored her and the Medik laid his hands on her arms.

Guards stood outside Sean's door.

Salem shattered a shard of glass and then sat abruptly by the wall, leaning into it from the side and resting her cheek agaisnt the cold surface.




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Fiona sat up, and said, "Where is he? The boy... he knew my name..."

Sean closed his eyes. Shadow? Are you all right? What're they doing with you?

A man pushed through the men and entered the room that Salem was in. He was tall and a bit overweight, and his short brown hair was graying at the roots. He went over to Salem and offered a hand to her.
"Young lady - Salem, right? - I need to talk to you in private. Come with me."


message 4339: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "He was a Reader, he doesn't actually know you."

Shadow barely heard him through the pain clouding her mind. I-I don't know. She refused the man's hand and stood on her own, wavering a bit when she went too fast.


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Fiona shook her head. "No! He... I remember him."

Sean sighed.

The man caught her and held her arm. "Oh, my! Let me help you; I'll get someone to take care of your back." Trust me, he said in her thoughts. I want to help... just trust me.


message 4341: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The Medik shook his head,done healing her.

Shadow just wanted him to let go. Who the hell are you?


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"I need to see my parents. Where are they? He said if I did as he said I could see them!" Fiona was scared, and her voice rose.

I'll tell you when we're in private. I can't now; it's not safe. He smiled softly at her and let go of her arm, ready to catch her if she fell.


message 4343: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The man shook his head. "That's not my job and you need to rest first."

Salem sighed angrily and followed him.


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She slid off of the bed. "No! I don't; I need to see my family."

The man led her to a small room that was lined with full bookshelves. There were two overstuffed chairs and a stool in the room. He motioned for her to sit. "A Medik will be here in a minute," he said, "Go ahead and get comfortable."


message 4345: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "If you don't rest you'll get hurt again, worse."

Salem sat on the stool. "I don't want to get comfortable."


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Fiona sat down again with a sigh. "What happened to me?"

The man sighed and nodded. "All right." In her mind, he said, I'm Sean's father, Salem.


message 4347: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The Medik smiled, just a little. "You tried to hard and the girl fought you."

You are? What are you doing here? Salem looked at him solemnly, but she was incredulous.


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Fiona's eyes brightened with curiosity. "Who is she?"

I have to look out for my daughter. They took her and they're using her for their own purposes... and the best I can do for her is to be here. They never hurt her, at least. I try to look out for my son, too, but... they'll take Fiona away completely if I do so. A Medik entered the room and the man pointed to Salem. "Heal her... he went much too far."


message 4349: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "The boss' daughter." he replied,shrugging.

Salem heard everything he 'said' but that didn't change her mind on the Medik. "I don't need help." she insisted.


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Fiona nodded. "She was in my dream, too. With the boy. She looks nice. I hope she's okay."

The man looked at her sternly. "Yes, you do." Please... It's the least I can do.


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