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message 4251: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean chuckled quietly, then sighed. He felt for Shadow and found her hand. "So... I guess we just wait now, hm? That sucks."


message 4252: by [deleted user] (new)

((Not here for long. Going to be watching a movie soon.))


message 4253: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki))

"We can't just let them do it Sean," she mumbled. "I can't stand not knowing when...- this isn't the punishment..I mean if I know Jack..."Shadow grimaced.


message 4254: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean nodded. "I don't know what to do, though! I'm sorry I got you into this... I mean, maybe it wouldn't be so bad if you'd just thrown things around instead of me kissing you. Not that I regret it, but... yeah."


message 4255: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow laughed, and set her mind to pushing out the other person's power.


message 4256: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean sat down and leaned against the wall. He sighed, then concentrated on trying to hear someone's thoughts. Anyone's. He felt a dark... nothing, when he tried, like
his power was being sucked away into a black hole.
He winced, and pushed at it, fighting against it. He felt some relief, like he was fighting to swim against a current in an ocean, and it was trying to push him down as he tried to swim up. Finally his head touched the surface for an instant, and he could hear one thought: I'm weakening... but he is, too. I have to keep up.
Then he was pushed under again. He gasped, feeling as if his brain was being pushed at from all sides.


message 4257: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow gasped when she heard the same thought, focussing but only managing silence after that.


message 4258: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean shut his eyes tight and didn't stop fighting. He pushed against the current, and felt it weaken. He pushed as hard as he could and felt the current stop altogether for a second, and he heard, No!, and then the current came back, harder than ever, and he was swept under.
He cursed and shook his head. "I can't fight it anymore."

((Gotta go now. Bye!))


message 4259: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((aw..bye!))

Shadow didn't hear him, concentrating hard. She pushed, sending thoughts to the person trying to steal their power. Not this time! His replying thought was angry, but he didn't fully stop the barrage of random memories of hers and others that she forced at him.


message 4260: by [deleted user] (new)

((Back! Only for a bit, though, and then I have to go to bed. :())


message 4261: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki..woah, what time is it there?))


message 4262: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean began to be able to listen, and he understood and tried to help. He pushed, too, and could feel it becoming easier. He could hear the person's thoughts a bit better now, and it sounded like the person was slipping away, losing strength. Finally, the person blacked out.

Jack had been watching, and he cursed. "No! Stupid girl!"


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow chuckled, happy with herself.

Gwen shook her head. "That was too fast."


message 4264: by [deleted user] (new)

((It's 7:43. I have to be off the internet when my parents go to bed. I can stay up, but no internet after they go to sleep.))


message 4265: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ah, we are in the same time zone..wow your parents go to bed early. that sucks. what time do you have to leave?))


message 4266: by [deleted user] (new)

((Eight. Or whenever they shut the internet off. They have to go to work at six and they meditate for half an hour in the mornings, so they get up really early.))


message 4267: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki))


message 4268: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean bit his lip, thinking. "I felt something. That person... seems familiar. Whoever it is... I used to know them."

Jack sighed. "Yes, well, I told you that the power hasn't been well developed yet. The girl is still young. She'll get better."

((Mwahahaha! So I've decided this is what they did with Sean's sister. She wouldn't even remember him, so she doesn't know she's related to him, and she doesn't want to do what they say but it's the only way they'll let her see her parents, so she does it.))


message 4269: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((wow. I hate missing posts. sorrries))

"Really? Any idea who?" Shadow asked carefully.

((omj, that's sad))

Gwen nodded. "But will she ever be strong enough to keep our daughter's powers at bay? She's stronger than everyone here."


message 4270: by [deleted user] (new)

(('S okay. Yeah... sad. In my story, Sean's dad works with the government who is after him, but you already did that, so... XD))

"My sister. Fiona. I think... I hope not." Sean closed his eyes, tears welling in them.

Jack shook his head. "I don't know. We'll see."


message 4271: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yeah..aw))

"Oh." Shadow said,blocking her mind so he couldn't read her thoughts. She knew it was Fiona.

Gwen pursed her lips and left.


message 4272: by [deleted user] (new)

((She's locked up in the story. Fiona is. She's sweet.))

Sean sighed and leaned back against the wall. "What are they going to do to us? If it is her... that would be torture enough!"


message 4273: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((aww..poor thing))

"I-I don't know Sean. But it's gonna suck."


message 4274: by [deleted user] (new)

((That was my first novel ever. It's called Two Sparrows. would you like to read it sometime? I'd love some constructive criticism... But I don't have it posted.))

"Yeah." Sean brushed the tears away quickly and shook his head angrily. "I... I need to know if it's her. Could you... you said you're really strong. Would you be able to get in there?"


message 4275: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((sure I will.))

"Um..Sean.." she wasn't so sure that was a great plan.


message 4276: by [deleted user] (new)

((Thanks! I'll send the first chapter to you tomorrow. can't right now, though.))

Sean groaned. "Yeah, I know. But wouldn't you be desperate to know, too? I mean... she's my little sister. I haven't seen her for four years." His voice broke.


message 4277: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((coolio))

She sighed, she might as well tell him. "Sean..it's her."


message 4278: by [deleted user] (new)

((*smiles*))

Sean let a few tears fall. "Dammit," he whispered.


message 4279: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "She's..okay..she doesn't want to Sean. So..forgive her.."


message 4280: by [deleted user] (new)

He nodded. "She's only ten years old! How could they?" He stood and began pacing.


message 4281: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I- they don't care about age Sean..my sister..she's eight. If they knew she was gifted..they'd do the same thing. Willah..she just got talented at hiding it."


message 4282: by [deleted user] (new)

He reached her and sat down again. "Now they'll know. They watch everywhere. You'd better hope they weren't paying attention... but don't count on it. I know that. They watch the people who are watching us. They're always watching."


message 4283: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "They didn't hear." she said quietly. "I didn't let them hear."


message 4284: by [deleted user] (new)

"What? How?"


message 4285: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Blocks. they work both ways."


message 4286: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean nodded. "Well... that's good." He closed his eyes and leaned back, taking deep breaths and trying to calm down. "What are we going to do now?" he asked, his voice flat.


message 4287: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Wait..I guess. Someone comes soon. The scene was dark, so I couldn't tell who. But..in about..thirty seconds. Someone comes." she fought to control the emotion in her voice.


message 4288: by [deleted user] (new)

He nodded and sighed. "Okay..." His voice was grim.

((Can you be whoever it is? I'm braindead right now.))


message 4289: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((sure,yeah))

Shadow nodded and leaned agaisnt the wall.

The door opened.


message 4290: by [deleted user] (new)

((Thanx))

Sean looked up with weary eyes. "Hello. Are you our executioner?"


message 4291: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The person laughed. "Executioner? No."

Shadow rolled her eyes. "No jokes please."


message 4292: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean shrugged. "I wasn't joking. I was honestly curious."


message 4293: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I was talking to him." she stated, gesturing in the general direction of the person.


message 4294: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean nodded. "So who are you?" he asked.


message 4295: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The person ((lol)) laughed. "It matters not."

Shadow whispered to Sean. "I don't know who it is.."


message 4296: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean sighed. He took Shadow's hand and squeezed it slightly. "So. Care to tell us what's going to happen to us?"


message 4297: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No." it sneered. "That would ruin all the fun."

Shadow couldn't read him: someone had put a block up.


message 4298: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean narrowed his eyes. "One of those people, huh? You enjoy others' pain? Sick."


message 4299: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Pain?" the man feigned innocence. "Who said anything about pain?"


message 4300: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 13, 2010 05:52PM) (new)

"Ugh." Sean rolled his eyes and looked away. He could see into the little glass room inside the room now. He saw his sister, curled up in a ball, tear stains on her cheeks.


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