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message 4151: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean couldn't hold his temper anymore; he punched Ellis in the jaw.


message 4152: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Parker laughed, and sat back to watch. Ellis swept his hand across his face breifly before attacking in his own way. You could tell, if you knew him, when he used his power to decieve. Now was one of those times. "Dreadful sorry Sean. That wasn't nice of you though. Tsk tsk. We're not fighting are we?"


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Sean blinked, and stepped away, still glaring. "Not this time..." He said, teeth clenched.


message 4154: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Tres Bien." Ellis smiled.

Shadow moaned, unhappy at the turnout, and slid to a sitting position just as her father and mother came into the cell.

((do you want to play the dad?))


message 4155: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((are you still on?))


message 4156: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'm not sure I'd be any good at it... I don't know what her parents are like.))

Sean closed his eyes for a moment, concentrating on hearing Shadow's thoughts. He shook his head and turned to go out of the room, to go back to Shadow.


message 4157: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((me neither..olo. he's just...um..bad? ))

Parker grabbed his arm, "You can't go back there yet."


message 4158: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean yanked away and ran.



message 4159: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Paker shrugged. "He'll know why when he gets there."

Salem refused to look at her parents: she knew it was them.


message 4160: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Sorry, lame... I'm going to have to go in a minute. But sure, I'll play him. What's his name?))


message 4161: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki. Um..his name is..hm...Jack))


message 4162: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay. XD))

Jack scowled as he looked down at his daughter. "So, you've been talking to the guard and tricked him into falling in love with you. Hm. Well, I suppose I should thank you for that... maybe you'll listen a little better if it'll save him some pain..." He chuckled darkly.
Sean ran to Shadow's cell and froze, staring at the people there. He knew they must be her parents. Suddenly Jack spun around and grabbed Sean, holding his arms behind his back so he couldn't move. Sean gasped and struggled against him, but Jack was stronger than he.

((Good?))


message 4163: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem's impassive face contorted into anger when her father grabbed Sean. "I didn't trick him intp anything Jack. You of all people should know that's not me!"

Her mother, Gwen, smiled ruthlessly.


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Sean raised his leg and kicked Jack in the shin. Jack stumbled backwards a little and loosened his grip on Sean, who pulled away and ran into the cell with Shadow.
Jack growled and glared at him. "You brat!" He spat.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Gwen fingered the switches on the taser she held.

Salem tried to take it, using telekinesis, but her mother had planned for that and a strap held it to her. "Dammit."

Gwen smiled and aimed.


message 4166: by [deleted user] (new)

((Eek! Aimed at whom?))

Sean's eyes widened and he instinctively put himself in front of Salem, putting himself between her and her parents.


message 4167: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((hmm..Salem I guess))

Salem hissed at him to move. They don't affect me!

Gwen shot at him.



message 4168: by [deleted user] (new)

It was too late, and the taser hit him.

((Is it one that stuns or what?))


message 4169: by Ky (last edited Feb 12, 2010 12:57PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yup))

Shadow gasped and held him upright. "Mom, why?"

Gwen just shook her head.


message 4170: by [deleted user] (new)

((Gotta go. Dinner.))


message 4171: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki, have something yummy!))


message 4172: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Spaghetti.))

Sean, obviously, was unconscious.


message 4173: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Spaghetti.))

Sean, obviously, was unconscious.


message 4174: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Idiots!" she shouted at them. "I don't even know him! He works for you!" Shadow's rage was boiling over and she stood, gently letting Sean 'fall'. Her mother flinched and looked to Jack, seeing as she was not strong enough to take on her daughter.


message 4175: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'm back! I'll be slower now, though: I'm multitasking.))

Jack let Gwen get behind him, and he held up his hand. "Stop, Salem. Now!"


message 4176: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki, me too))

"No! You can't tell me what to do anymore! You lost that priveledge when you stopped being my dad!" she ecxlaimed, clenching her fists tightly by her side.


message 4177: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack's face softened just a bit. "I'll always be your father, whether you like it or not. And I'm doing what's best for you. You need to calm down, or we'll have to subdue you."


message 4178: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "You are not doing what's best for me!" Shadow could barely see through her furious tears. "You are being selfish!" a chair slammed into the wall by them.


message 4179: by [deleted user] (new)

He shook his head and smiled. "You don't understand. You're just angry, and you need to calm down so that we can talk to you. Sit down... and control yourself."


message 4180: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem paused, her hands falling unclenched as she sat abruptly. "Stop.Smiling.At.Me." she replied,seething.


message 4181: by [deleted user] (new)

"Very good," Jack nodded and smiled a bit more. "Thank you, Salem. Now... I think your dear friend Ellis would like to speak to you."

((Mwahahaha!))


message 4182: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "what? No. I'm not talking to him." Salem stood again. "No!"

Ellis came in, a grim smile on his face. "Hey Say."

"Don't you ever call me that! Never!!" she threw a chair at him.


message 4183: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack smiled darkly and stepped back, watching. "Be nice, Salem... Or I might end up hurting your friend over there." he pointed at Sean, and two men came in and dragged him out.


message 4184: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem stared at him. "He's not my friend. I barely know him."

Ellis chuckled. "right, that's why you let him kiss you, Say. Bad choice on your part."

"I won't play nice Ellis." she told im calmly, tossing another chair,this time with more force.


message 4185: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack told the men to put Sean in a different cell from Salem's, down the hall. They did so.


message 4186: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She looked puzzled,knowing what they'd done. "Why? Why put him in a cell and not just fire him?"


message 4187: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack laughed. "I'm doing both. He told Parker what he can do... and I'm not letting him go free."


message 4188: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I despise you." she sent a metal chair flying at him.


message 4189: by [deleted user] (new)

He ducked out of the way, chuckling.


message 4190: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "STOP! None of this is funny!" her eyes flamed a brighter shade of purple and the emotions swirled visibly. She ditched the telekinesis, tackling her dad to the floor.


message 4191: by [deleted user] (new)

The two men that had taken Sean to his cell now pulled Shadow off of Jack, and Jack scowled at her. "Leave her in the cell," he spat. "I'll deal with her later..." The men dumped her in the cell and closed the door on her, locking it.


message 4192: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow checked to see if Sean was conscious, knowing her parents most likely would've started searching for a Reader good enough to track both their minds. Sean?

Ellis was thoroughly upset. "Mr. Reis, what are you going to do?"


message 4193: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean groaned as Shadow's presence in his mind woke him. He gasped and sat up, confused. What? Where am I? Shadow?

Jack straightened his suit and shook his head. "That girl needs to learn a lesson... I don't know. But you should not be so attached to her. You could lose your job if you started to care too much."


message 4194: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow sighed in slight releif. You are in a cell. My stupid ex-parents did that, you can thank those jerks.

Ellis grinned sadistically. "Can I watch when you do?" he chuckled darkly. "I care less than you think Mr.Reis."


message 4195: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean sighed and leaned against the wall. Great... This sucks. I was kind of stupid to kiss you, wasn't I?

Jack glanced and him and raised an eyebrow. "Then why did you care that the boy had kissed her?"

((Let's say he had a camera in the video room 'cause he's paranoid that someone will do something wrong. XD))


message 4196: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((perfect))

Ellis shrugged. "The same way you'd care if she died."

Salem did the same but smiled lightly. Stupid? Yes. But I can't say I regret it as much as you might.


message 4197: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack nodded sharply. "Yes... you are correct," he said coldly.

Sean shook his head. No... I don't regret it. I didn't like my job anyway. They didn't hurt you, did they?


message 4198: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis smirked and ran off to do his job.

Shadow laughed bitterly. It's hard to hurt me physically.


message 4199: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack went to his office, where he could watch everyone that worked for him, and he smiled darkly.

Sean closed his eyes. What happened?


message 4200: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments My mom tased you. Jack brought Ellis in. Frig. I snapped a little...threw some chairs. Jack was mad, still is. He wants to teach me a lesson. I tackled him and now I'm in trouble. How does that sound?

Ellis got a coffee and someone laughed. ((long story))


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