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((That made me smile.))Matt grinned and nodded.
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Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Dani's smile widened.""Anywho... Do you want to go somewhere cool? I think you'll like it." Decla saida pomise in his tone.
Dani smiled. "Sure." She shivered and pulled Declan's jacket tighter around her shoulders.
Matt grinned at her. "That's what I think of Justin Beiber. Who killed music and let that tone-deaf girl become famous?"
((Emmie that made me laugh))Decla smiled and took her hand and lead her through the streets.
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((Hannah, I'm glad.))Dani followed, happier than she'd been in a while.
((Ahhhh! This kills me, considering how Declan fits into my story. Oh! Hannah, can you give me more info on him?))
Drama Queen Lav (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Abby laughed. "And all those girls who think he's so hot?" She shook her head. "Not in a million years.""Matt laughed. "My thoughts exactly."
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Matt smiled at her. "Yeah, but no worries, I'll cover for you."
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((Yeah sure I kinda made him up so i'll make more stuff up...))Declan tugged her through the shadows and counted off houses in his head. When he reached the one he wanted he tapped the lock on the door and it sprung open. He turned back to her and smiled
"You'll love it." he promised again.
((Ok So! Declan is this Irish guy that's like 26 (or however old he needs to be). In my head he has some wicked sweet Supernatural power, I'm thinking he can manipulate metal and electricity. His life with his family has been a hard one, his parents owna farm n Ieland and they could never affod for their kids t ammount to anything. He ran away, got on a plane and came here. He's always had his powers, so he's learned to work with them. Is that enough?))
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Matt grabbed her wrist and pulled her in. "Hey Ms. H. Guess what? You have a newbie in your class," he said as he rushed to two seats at the back of the class, pulling Abby along with him.
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Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "((Yeah sure I kinda made him up so i'll make more stuff up...))Declan tugged her through the shadows and counted off houses in his head. When he reached the one he wanted he tapped the lock on ..."
Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "((Yeah sure I kinda made him up so i'll make more stuff up...))Declan tugged her through the shadows and counted off houses in his head. When he reached the one he wanted he tapped the lock on ..."
((Yep. Wanna hear how he fits into my story?))
"This better be good," she said, teasingly.
Drama Queen Lav (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Abby was caught by surprise as Matt yanked her to her seat. She sat down quietly and tried not to make eye contact. Make friends Ben's voice rang in her head, but she couldn't bring herself to look..."Matt looked at her before scribbling something into his notebook and passing it to her. 'You ok?'
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((Yeah Deff!))"Oh it is." Declan said nodding. "Trust me it' all worth it." he said quietly. He led her through the abandoned house and up the stairs.
Everything creaked here, there was no sneaking up on anyone in this house, not when it was in this condition anyway.
Dani felt...Thrilled. It was odd after feeling only pain for so long. ((Okay, first I gotta say that I'm awfully sorry for making you repeat. Gah, I know that's about the worst feeling in the world. Okay, so how my story starts is this girl has to take care of her mother, who's given up on life; older brother, who's always drunk; an little sibling. Why? Because her older sister was killed by a "drunk" driver. They sued him and won. Then, one night, he killed her dad. They moved. And that's where the story starts. Then, she falls in love with this kid who's been through a lot, but then he dumps, no actually he beats her up because he became friends with this kid who used to be their enemy. Zack, the boyfriend, is who sent the note. Also, Dani refused to see the guy who ruined her life at the start of the story, or even hear his name, because she knew she would have nightmares about it forever. Can you guess how Declan fits into all this?))
Matt smiled at her when he saw her answer.
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((gtg, see you tommorow))
((Bye!!))Matt watched her, concerned.
((It's ok Iknow I've made you do it a bunch of times :( Anyway I'm guessing Declan is the good guy that makes it all better :) ))"Seeing as I'm a broke bastard I don't own this yet,but it has the BEST view of the city and you can almost see the water from the roof. I'll show you the rest of the place when it gets light." Declan said the corners of his eyes crinkling he wa smilig so big.
They were almost up to the roof now, he just opened the master bedroom's french double doors into the night and climbed onto the rail and hoisted himself onto the roof from there. Laying on his stoach he peered upside down at Dani
"Come on Love." he said holding out his hand.
((Nope. He's the guy who killed her family. But somehow, it was all an accident, and he saves her from the trauma Zack caused, which really is the worst part in the entire 350-page novel (: ))Dani smiled. She took his hand and pulled herself up.
Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "[Just:] Kendall wrote: "She shook her head. "Nope. We have stuff to do. You can go do whatever you want with the french kid and the weird girl."Farrow and Damien exchanged a glance."
((So ..."
"Wanna help me set up this party-soon-to-be-a-disaster?" Salem grinned wickedly.
((Oh Lord! NO Way! Declan killed her family that's not the best thing.... But I'm glad h saves her!))Once she was up Declan rolled onto his back and looked at the starry sky. He sighed
"You know it's not the same sky, sappy romance movies and chick novels may say it is,but truely it isn't."
Riviera stayed in the washroom for a few minutes and when she came back out she seemed happier somehow, which would've been weird but it wasn't...because it was her. "Hey Zack."
((KENNY!!!! Did you have fun doing whatever yu were doing??))Emmy lauged
"Please, anything I toch will burst into chaos, youshould know that by now."
Patrik laughed
"You have our help"
((Yeah, man. It's insane.))Dani sighed. "Yeah. It's kind of a comforting thought sometimes, though. It kind of makes me feel like no one can find me. Especially here, in a bigger city."
((Yeah it is.))Declan looked over at her
"What do you have to hide from?"
Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "((KENNY!!!! Did you have fun doing whatever yu were doing??))Emmy lauged
"Please, anything I toch will burst into chaos, youshould know that by now."
Patrik laughed
"You have our help""
((Ah, not much. But it wasn't horrible.))
"Exacta," Salem sighed. "Should I have invited them? I mean, it felt right at the moment..."
[Just:] Kendall wrote: "Riviera stayed in the washroom for a few minutes and when she came back out she seemed happier somehow, which would've been weird but it wasn't...because it was her. "Hey Zack.""He turned at the sound of her voice. "Hey," Zack smiled at her.
Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "((Yeah it is.))Declan looked over at her
"What do you have to hide from?""
"My past. People I'd rather forget," she answered, not looking at him.
[Just:] Kendall wrote: ""Miss me?" she grinned mischievously."Zack chuckled, "Why yes, I did."
((Not horrible is better than Freakishly Horrible. What were you off doing?))Emmy shrugged
"I can only say so much, I just don't trust them. They have motives we don't know about. But 'Keep your friends close and your enemies closer."
Patrik rolled his eyes at Emmy
"heylook at it this way, the more people to boss around on your birthday the better."
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "[Just:] Kendall wrote: ""Miss me?" she grinned mischievously."Zack chuckled, "Why yes, I did.""
"Aw, how sweet," her smile changed a little, became softer. "Missed you too." Riviera sat back down and sipped her tea as she tried not to stare at Zack.
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "((Yeah it is.))Declan looked over at her
"What do you have to hide from?""
"My past. People I'd rather forget," she answered, not looking at him."
Dclan nodded
"I know that feeling." he looked up at the sky again
Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "((Not horrible is better than Freakishly Horrible. What were you off doing?))Emmy shrugged
"I can only say so much, I just don't trust them. They have motives we don't know about. But 'Keep yo..."
((I was at this place called Darien Lake and we stayed in rvs. The amusement park held no interest for me...I love rides but their selection is pretty slim and three days of multpile repeats is really suckish. But I lived. :P))
Salem grinned. "Patrik, I knew there was a reason we were friends. You know, besides everything that happened when we all met up forever ago."
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Zack smirked at her."She blushed. "Hey...no fair." Why does he have to be so good looking?
Zack smiled widely at her. ((BTW... KENNY!! I MISSED YOU!!))
((I missed you too, lass. *grin*))Riviera kept her face down and smiled softly. Goodness gracious, he is a little devil.
Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "((Yeah it is.))Declan looked over at her
"What do you have to hide from?""
"My past. People I'd rather forget," she answ..."
Dani looked at him. "What's something you wish you could forget?"
[Just:] Kendall wrote: "((I missed you too, lass. *grin*))Riviera kept her face down and smiled softly. Goodness gracious, he is a little devil."
Zack blushed slightly. Oh, brother...
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"That's cool," Abby said quietly. "I like most genres of music. Except Hannah Montana." Abby rolled her eyes.