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message 12401: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yes," He said cautiously.


message 12402: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack found his class, and walked in. Ugh, science, he thought.

Ben opened his eyes to look at her. "What do you need to do?"


message 12403: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Gwendalynn wrote: ""Yes," He said cautiously."

"He wants to speak to you."


message 12404: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Riviera was sitting in the back row this time, changing her seating MO every class.


message 12405: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack walked to the back of thr class, knowing there was no way he could stay awake through this one.


message 12406: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Oh...hey." Riviera saw Zack come in. "you look....exhausted." But really....you still look good.


message 12407: by [deleted user] (new)

"I need to shut down Mr. Matthews," Shannon said, although she still needed to figure out what exactly he was doing. She knew whatever it was, it was wrong. But that's where Shawn came in, her inside man.

"Just great," He said, what was he going to rub Shannon in his face again. How he had her and Jordan didn't. But why would this guy come for him and not Shawn. "Ok," Jordan decided and followed the guy.


message 12408: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Arkady brought him to the isolation room. "Make it quick."


message 12409: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack smiled tiredly at her. "Yeah."

Ben closed his eyes again, struggling to stay awake. "Okay. And how are you going to do that?"


message 12410: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "You should see if they'd let you sleep in the nurse's office."


message 12411: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack shook his head. "I'm fine."


message 12412: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "You sure?"


message 12413: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Mmhhmm," he muttered, closing his eyes.


message 12414: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Alright. I'll let it go," Riviera said as class started.


message 12415: by [deleted user] (new)

"I will," Jordan said walking in.
"Jordan," Shawn started.
"What do you want," Jordan interrupted
Shawn shook his head, and he thought he was the impatient one. "I need you do do something for me."
"Why would I do that," Jordan asked
"Because it has to do with," Shawn hesitated and looked at the door. "Someone we both care about," He finished.
Jordan looked at him, what was he talking about.
"They need to know that the "Dog" is in a cage." Shawn said, remembering that Jordan always refereed to him as a dog, of course when he was not around.
Jordan nodded, so he had to tell Shannon that Shawn was trapped. He didn't know what that would mean to Shannon, but he still wasn't even sure that he would help Shawn.
Jordan turned to leave and Shawn caught him by the shoulder. "Please," He said before Jordan knocked on the door to be let out.
Jordan went immediately to his room, he had a lot to think about. Even if he did want to give this message to Shannon, how would he find her.

Shawn sat down and leaned his back against the wall. He hoped Jordan would help him, not for his sake, but for Shannon.

Shannon shrugged, "I don't know."


message 12416: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Arkady locked the door again.

Chesney woke up with a start. "Um...Sh-shannon. I have to go....to the bathroom."


message 12417: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack fell asleep.


message 12418: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Riviera smiled and played the games the teacher had on the SmartBoard.


message 12419: by [deleted user] (new)

Jordan sighed and kicked the wall; he knew he would help Shawn, even before Shawn asked him. He grabbed his keys and went down to get in his car, but it was gone. He got into a different car and pulled up his cars tracking device on his GPS.

"Alright," Shannon said and pulled into a gas station.


message 12420: by Julian (last edited Jul 22, 2010 11:44AM) (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack woke up with a start.


message 12421: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Thanks, Shannon," Chesney got out and, after stretching and yawning, went inside.


--

"Welcome back, Sleeping Beauty," Riviera said.


message 12422: by [deleted user] (new)

The dot stopped and Jordan knew this was his chance to catch up to them. He stepped on the gas and flew down the road.

Shannon glanced at Ben, who looked like he was sleeping. She knew this would be their last stop for a while, so she gently shook his shoulder.


message 12423: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack groaned. "I hate science," he muttered.

Ben looked at Shannon. "So..."


message 12424: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments It took a few disoriented minutes for her to locate the restroom.


message 12425: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Zack groaned. "I hate science," he muttered.

Ben looked at Shannon. "So...""


"We only played games, so you didn't miss anything."


message 12426: by [deleted user] (new)

"This is gonna be our last stop for a while," She said and got out of the car. "Oh, is there any snacks you'd like, cuz I"m going on a shopping spree."

Jordan hoped they stayed stopped for a while. He still had to go through the town.


message 12427: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments He nodded. "That's nice."


message 12428: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben shook his head. "Anything edible."


message 12429: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "He nodded. "That's nice.""

"Not really," Riviera said. "Science games."


message 12430: by [deleted user] (new)

"Alright," Shannon said and looked through the small selection trying to get food that wasn't just junk.


message 12431: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Once she was done, she stayed in the bathroom for a few minutes. Chesney splashed her face with water and fixed her hair.


message 12432: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((OH MY FREAK!! I have an idea...))

Ben drifted off.

Zack made a face. "Gotta love 'em," he said, sarcastically.


message 12433: by Ky (last edited Jul 22, 2010 12:00PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((what's your idea, Emmie?))

Chesney came out and was startled to see Shannon. "Do you...need any help?"

Riviera smiled. "A-yeah."


message 12434: by [deleted user] (new)

Shannon walked into the bathroom to ask Chesney if there was anything she wanted.

Jordan pulled into the gas station, luckily he hadn't run into any police. He was able to fly through the town too. He saw his car and pulled into a space a couple spots away.


message 12435: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Hey..Shannon, do you need any help out there?"


message 12436: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Ben should flirt with Chesney to make Shannon jealous...))

Zack smiled at her.


Ben woke with a start, worrying about Abby.


message 12437: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ha))

"So you really don't like science?" Riviera asked.


message 12438: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yeah, you can help me carry the bags," Shannon said. "Is there anything you want to get?"

((after he sees her talking to Jordan!))

Jordan got out of the car he'd just driven and over at his. He saw a man in the passenger seat and scowled before sitting on the bench and waiting for Shannon.


message 12439: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Yess!!!!))

Ben saw a dude scowling at him.

Zack chuckled. "I hate it. What's your favourite subject?"


message 12440: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No. I'm not hungry right now," Chesney said, holding her hand out for a bag.

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"English. But I'm pretty good at science too."


message 12441: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack nodded.


message 12442: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I could help you out...if you want. Oh...what's your favourite subject!"


message 12443: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ok," Shannon said handing her a bag. She walked out and thought she saw Jordan sitting on a bench. She took a double take and realized it was Jordan. She didn't know whether to be happy or mad.
"Uh, Shannon," Jordan started, then saw her bags and took them for her to the car.
"Thanks," Shannon said surprised.


message 12444: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Chesney trailed behind, a little scared.


message 12445: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben glared at the dude.

((What grade are you guys going to be in next year?))


message 12446: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Ten, you?))


message 12447: by [deleted user] (new)

"Umm, Everyone, this is Jordan. Jordan this is Chesney and Ben," She said introducing people for the second time.
"Hi," Jordan said, still not happy about this Ben guy.


message 12448: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Grrr... I'm one of the younger ones in this group...))


message 12449: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments [Just:] Kendall wrote: ""I could help you out...if you want. Oh...what's your favourite subject!""

"Any linguistics class."


message 12450: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((what grade are you going into Emmie?))

"Um...hey." Chesney got into the backseat and slammed the door.


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