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message 12651: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt smiled warmly at her. "No, it's good. Everyone else in the class is an idiot."


message 12652: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I'll be on for a few. I have volleyball training in 30 mins))

Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "((Good night!))

Dani studied him for a few seconds."


Declan smiled softly
"What?"

[Just:] Kendall wrote: "(('night! And no worries....I must go as well. My apologies, Emmie. But I too will be on tomorrow. :P))

"Oh lookie! Emmy fell and I didn't! Mwahahaha!" Salem attempted an evil laugh but it came..."



Patrik started laughing at that point. Emmy was doubled over clutching at her stomach laughing so hard it hurt.
Liv bounced down the stairs smile already onher sunny feaatures
"What is ging on down here?"


message 12653: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Matt smiled warmly at her. "No, it's good. Everyone else in the class is an idiot.""

Abby slid her chair over to Matt's desk, smiling. "I guess we need a plot for our story."


message 12654: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani shook her head. "Just...thinking," she answered softly.

Matt shrugged. "Okay, first things first. What does Third Person Omniscient Narration even mean?"


message 12655: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"It's writing in the third person and the writer knows everything about everyone at once. So if it was about us, we would know what was going through my head, your head, and even Mr. Blake's head. Whereas Third Person Limited we would only be able to see into one person's head," Abby explained in a rush.


message 12656: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((gtg, but I'll be back in a little over an hour))


message 12657: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "...Right," he said. "So, basically, writing in third person?"

((Bye!))


message 12658: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "[Just:] Kendall wrote: "Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: ""Slumdog Millionaire. Favourite kind of ice cream?""

"French Vanilla or Mint Chip," Riviera said. "Favourite car?"

((going t..."


"Depends on the person," she smiled. "But for me? This one."


message 12659: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "((I'll be on for a few. I have volleyball training in 30 mins))

Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "((Good night!))

Dani studied him for a few seconds."

Declan smiled softly
"What?"..."


((have fun at volleyball training! I'll talk to you later then!))

Salem grinned. "Not much. Want to help plan my disaster party?"


message 12660: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments [Just:] Kendall wrote: "Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "[Just:] Kendall wrote: "Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: ""Slumdog Millionaire. Favourite kind of ice cream?""

"French Vanilla or Mint Chip," R..."


Zack smiled.


message 12661: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She couldn't help but smile back.

((I have to go for now. I'm watching a movie with my sister.))


message 12662: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Fun!))

"Next question?" Zack asked.


message 12663: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: ""...Right," he said. "So, basically, writing in third person?"

((Bye!))"


"Well, if you want to take the easy way of explaining it, yes," Abby nodded.


message 12664: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "((Fun!))

"Next question?" Zack asked."


"Are you sure you still want to play this game?" Riviera asked quietly.


message 12665: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt nodded. "Then why not just say that?"


message 12666: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Because there's also Third Person Limited and Third Person Objective. They're all different types of third person writing," Abby explained. "And I bet I just sounded like a giant nerd."


message 12667: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt laughed. "No. Now, I just feel like an idiot."


message 12668: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments [Just:] Kendall wrote: "Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "((Fun!))

"Next question?" Zack asked."

"Are you sure you still want to play this game?" Riviera asked quietly."


Zack shrugged. "If you want."


message 12669: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I don't know what I want," she sighed. "Do you want to go for a walk?"


message 12670: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack smiled. "Sure."


message 12671: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Matt laughed. "No. Now, I just feel like an idiot.""

"You shouldn't," Abby said. "I think I'm probably the only 8th grader in the world who knows that. That's what I get for spending all my free time reading." Abby paused for a breath. "We should probably start working now."


message 12672: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Great, let's go then."


message 12673: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack got up and held out his hand to her.


Matt smiled at her. "Yeah, probably."


message 12674: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I'm terrible at thinking of ideas. Do you have any?" Abby asked.


message 12675: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Riviera smiled, eyes flashing with amused surprise, and she took his hand. "Thanks..."


message 12676: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt thought about it. "Nope."


message 12677: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack laughed. "Sure."


message 12678: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Well that's great. We have," Abby glanced at the clock on the wall, "21 minutes to write a story, and neither of us has a plot."


message 12679: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Once standing --and therefore leaving-- she didn't let go of his hand.


message 12680: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Yep," Matt said before leaning back in ihs chair and pulling out his earbuds.


message 12681: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack left his hand in hers.


message 12682: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Riviera held the rest of her tea in her other hand and walked along with Zack in what she took as a comfortable silence.

((gtg for now. I'll be on later.))


message 12683: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Okay. Bye!))

Zack turned to smile at her.


message 12684: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"We need to come up with something," Abby said, getting frustrated.


message 12685: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Laaavvvvvv! I LOVE YOU!))

Matt shrugged.


message 12686: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Oookay?))
"How about we write a story about, um, two kids who get... um," she looked over at Matt and saw his headphones. "Sucked into an iPod?"


message 12687: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Mat grinned amusedly.

((Yep.))


message 12688: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Can you at least help me, I don't know, think of a character or something?" Abby pressed her lips together.


message 12689: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Hmmm... How abuot this guy that's a total jerk to this girl because he secretly likes her and she's gushing about how this other guy is ...'OH, SO SENSIBLE, AND CUTE, AND SWEET...'" he said in a falsetto, before shrugging and saying in his normal voice, "I have a sister. I've seen so many chick-flicks, I could be the next Nicholas Sparks."

((You owe me big time.))


message 12690: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((I wish you could see my face, because so many emotions are flashing across it right now.))
"That's a really good storyline," Abby said surprised, once she'd stopped snickering at his high pitched voice. "I guess we should get started.


message 12691: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments (( Aw, crud. I just remembered he likes popping in and out of this topic.))

Matt leaned forward, took the pencil from her hand and his notebook. "So..."


message 12692: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Kaylee slid her headphones into her burning ears, trying to block out Jason's taunting words," Abby said, softly. "Maybe, for the first sentence."


message 12693: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt nodded, scribbled it down and looked up at her.


message 12694: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I can't think of insults," Abby admitted. "What should he say to her that's jerkish?"


message 12695: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "I don't know...Probably say something about her not mattering at all to anyone.."

((That's all I'm saying...))


message 12696: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"So he just randomly comes up to her and says, 'You don't matter at all to anyone?'"


message 12697: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Nope, I think they were in the middle of a conversation...Which you can come up with,' he said and smirked

((I think it was TPBM or...Grrr, what other game did you fight in?))


message 12698: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((WYR?))
"Give me the paper," Abby said, annoyed and grabbed it from his hands. The familiar guitar riff of He Could Be the One almost made her forget what he had said to her. Almost.


message 12699: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Yeah. I'm trying to find the post...))

Matt put both his earbuds in and turned up the volume.


message 12700: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
But she couldn't stop the voice in her head. 'You'll never matter to anyone. No one will ever love you.' The song ended and a tear slipped down her cheek. She pushed it off before anyone would notice. Abby wrote quickly.


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