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Jul 26, 2010 11:28AM

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Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "((Good night!))
Dani studied him for a few seconds."
Declan smiled softly
"What?"
[Just:] Kendall wrote: "(('night! And no worries....I must go as well. My apologies, Emmie. But I too will be on tomorrow. :P))
"Oh lookie! Emmy fell and I didn't! Mwahahaha!" Salem attempted an evil laugh but it came..."
Patrik started laughing at that point. Emmy was doubled over clutching at her stomach laughing so hard it hurt.
Liv bounced down the stairs smile already onher sunny feaatures
"What is ging on down here?"
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Matt smiled warmly at her. "No, it's good. Everyone else in the class is an idiot.""
Abby slid her chair over to Matt's desk, smiling. "I guess we need a plot for our story."
Abby slid her chair over to Matt's desk, smiling. "I guess we need a plot for our story."

Matt shrugged. "Okay, first things first. What does Third Person Omniscient Narration even mean?"
"It's writing in the third person and the writer knows everything about everyone at once. So if it was about us, we would know what was going through my head, your head, and even Mr. Blake's head. Whereas Third Person Limited we would only be able to see into one person's head," Abby explained in a rush.

"French Vanilla or Mint Chip," Riviera said. "Favourite car?"
((going t..."
"Depends on the person," she smiled. "But for me? This one."

Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "((Good night!))
Dani studied him for a few seconds."
Declan smiled softly
"What?"..."
((have fun at volleyball training! I'll talk to you later then!))
Salem grinned. "Not much. Want to help plan my disaster party?"

"French Vanilla or Mint Chip," R..."
Zack smiled.
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: ""...Right," he said. "So, basically, writing in third person?"
((Bye!))"
"Well, if you want to take the easy way of explaining it, yes," Abby nodded.
((Bye!))"
"Well, if you want to take the easy way of explaining it, yes," Abby nodded.

"Next question?" Zack asked."
"Are you sure you still want to play this game?" Riviera asked quietly.
"Because there's also Third Person Limited and Third Person Objective. They're all different types of third person writing," Abby explained. "And I bet I just sounded like a giant nerd."

"Next question?" Zack asked."
"Are you sure you still want to play this game?" Riviera asked quietly."
Zack shrugged. "If you want."
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Matt laughed. "No. Now, I just feel like an idiot.""
"You shouldn't," Abby said. "I think I'm probably the only 8th grader in the world who knows that. That's what I get for spending all my free time reading." Abby paused for a breath. "We should probably start working now."
"You shouldn't," Abby said. "I think I'm probably the only 8th grader in the world who knows that. That's what I get for spending all my free time reading." Abby paused for a breath. "We should probably start working now."
"Well that's great. We have," Abby glanced at the clock on the wall, "21 minutes to write a story, and neither of us has a plot."

((gtg for now. I'll be on later.))
((Oookay?))
"How about we write a story about, um, two kids who get... um," she looked over at Matt and saw his headphones. "Sucked into an iPod?"
"How about we write a story about, um, two kids who get... um," she looked over at Matt and saw his headphones. "Sucked into an iPod?"
"Can you at least help me, I don't know, think of a character or something?" Abby pressed her lips together.

((You owe me big time.))
((I wish you could see my face, because so many emotions are flashing across it right now.))
"That's a really good storyline," Abby said surprised, once she'd stopped snickering at his high pitched voice. "I guess we should get started.
"That's a really good storyline," Abby said surprised, once she'd stopped snickering at his high pitched voice. "I guess we should get started.

Matt leaned forward, took the pencil from her hand and his notebook. "So..."
"Kaylee slid her headphones into her burning ears, trying to block out Jason's taunting words," Abby said, softly. "Maybe, for the first sentence."

((That's all I'm saying...))

((I think it was TPBM or...Grrr, what other game did you fight in?))
((WYR?))
"Give me the paper," Abby said, annoyed and grabbed it from his hands. The familiar guitar riff of He Could Be the One almost made her forget what he had said to her. Almost.
"Give me the paper," Abby said, annoyed and grabbed it from his hands. The familiar guitar riff of He Could Be the One almost made her forget what he had said to her. Almost.
But she couldn't stop the voice in her head. 'You'll never matter to anyone. No one will ever love you.' The song ended and a tear slipped down her cheek. She pushed it off before anyone would notice. Abby wrote quickly.
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