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Oct 24, 2009 05:39PM
((U mean veetun?))
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Jake went out side to see veetun laying on the floor his skin speedily paling. He could see the fangs emerging. He shook veetuns shoulder to see if he would wake up.
Jake went out side to see veetun laying on the floor his skin speedily paling. He could see the fangs emerging. He shook veetuns shoulder to see if he would wake up.
Veetun groaned and pealed his lids open. "Jake," he whipsered, " what have you done?"
Jake gasped at the site of Veetuns new red eyes. "I dont know I just got mad... And now........" He said on the break of sobbs
Veetun's tempered flared. " You just ruined my life! WHat's wrong with you!?" Veetun stood up grasping at his neck in pain and groaning.
"Your thirsty. There is dear over there why dont you hunt before we talk." He said.
Jake frowned. "Then what?" He said lightning prepared to be shot at veetun.
" Why'd you do it! You just got done telling me how awful this is then you turn me into a monster!?"
"Hey watch it with that monster talk! DONT U MAKE ME ELECTRICUTE U!!!!!" HE screamed.
" Don't forget Jake, I'm just the same as you," Veetun said in a threatening tone.
"You dont have the power of this you have a different one. All u can do is Shoot water from your hands at a five second rate. I did that on purpose so it would be easier to electricute u." He said even more threateningly.
Veetun snorted. " Right, what a dumb power. Thats' not what I have."
"What do you have?" Jake said thinking about all the possibilitys of thier magic.
Veetun's face screwed up. " I don't know."
"You will know in time. You have to be in a situation where you are in grave danger and it will come. and then you can use it 24-7." He said.
Veetun nodded. " I am getting kind of hungry."
"Lets hunt." Jake said walking toward the forest.
Jake nodded. "Deer are over there." He pointed.
"okay." Veetun darted off into the woods.
Jake caught ten elk and drained them.
Veetun ate his full then returned to Jake's hosue.
Veetun closed his eyes and leaned back in a chair in Jake's house.
Jake walked into his house and sat in another chair next to veetun. "Dude Im really sorry...." He spoke
Jake sighed too. "Im a bad person...." He said.
((Who is Jack? And you must make a charrie profile first.))
(( haha, I saw your comment first, Caroline, and I thought I had mispelt your name, haha))Veetun looked up at Jake. " Don't be so hard on yourself."
((lol))
"After a year of this you will see what I mean..." He said gesturing toward his fangs.
"After a year of this you will see what I mean..." He said gesturing toward his fangs.
Veetun shook his head. " You where always too hard on yourself."
Jake shook his head. "I think your power is being unnaturally calm...." He said sarcasticly.
"Haha- always been like this Jake. Always have."
"Yes but qualitys you have in your previous life increase in power in this life." He said.
'Really? Well....i doubt that's it."
(( ican't think of a cool power. help?))Veetun sighed. "this really sucks."
((He has the element of water for a power so he can shoot it at people and jake can zapp them with lightning so they electricute them.))
Jake nodded. "I know, I cant belive i did this to you>"
Jake nodded. "I know, I cant belive i did this to you>"
((he doesn't have too....))"Yeah well. I suppose we might as well make the most of it."
"Maybey what?" Jake asked tiredly.
"oh I don't know!" Veetun said exasperated.
"Im tired. Goodnight." He said laying down on the couch and falling asleep.
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