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Oct 14, 2009 02:27PM
"Ya it was a witch kid." Jake said.
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"It was a witch. Thats why you senced something more. I can see all of the features. And we can just sence it. I let that one go." He said glaring in its general direction.
" I don't think so." Veetun shifted uncomfortably.
((Kay))
"Belive me it was..." He said just as the witch kid came back and made a spell and threw it at Jake. He zapped it and the kid with lighting. He laughed evily.
"Belive me it was..." He said just as the witch kid came back and made a spell and threw it at Jake. He zapped it and the kid with lighting. He laughed evily.
Veetun sighed. " Do you have to torture every kid you see."
Jake rolled his eyes. "That was an evil witch not a nice one so i thought it should be taken care of." He said.
" You sure? I think your new vampire senses are getting the better of you. I've known some witches who were good but seemed bad."
"Does it matter? Dont question my abilitys. You mere humans sences are so dull you cant even tell anything about our sences." Why is he being this way? Its not MY fault i got turned into a monster. He thought to himself.
Veetun stood up strait and his eyes narrowed. " Yes, Jake, it does matter. You may be all powerful and supernatural but you still cannot tell me what to do! And my senses are just fine. It's yours that aren't normal."
Jake stood up and towerd over Veetun. "I think you have forgotten who you are talking to." He growled looking down on the powerless human. "Mine may not be normal but they are FAR better than YOURS." He said.
(( how tall is Jake?))" I believe you have also forgotten who you're talking to. I don't need supernatural senses to know things, Jake. You need to get over yourself- you don't know everything." Veetun folded his arms and allowed his full disapporval to show. He knew how much his apporval had always meant to Jake. He hoped it still did mean something.
((Like 7 or 8 feet. He's pretty tall lol))
"I didnt say you did. I just knew that witch wasnt a good one and it needed to be taken care of." He stalked off into the trees. He climbed up in a tree. He made a lightning bolt zap the tree in front of him. It fell with a crash.
"I didnt say you did. I just knew that witch wasnt a good one and it needed to be taken care of." He stalked off into the trees. He climbed up in a tree. He made a lightning bolt zap the tree in front of him. It fell with a crash.
Veetun sighed. " How exactly did you know that," he asked as Jake climbed the tree. One of Veetun's eyebrows rose as his watched the tree fall. " Why'd you do that?"
"Because we have this weird sence like goggles. If they are bad they flash red. If they are good they flash green. And for your second question my answer is 'I can do whatever I want.'" You could here the quotes in his answer.
Veetun sighed, and started to mumble," right" but decided that jake would hear him. " Sure you can, but someone could've been there and you could've just killed them. Or it could've landed on a house, you just never know."
"Actually I do know. I can see and sence things from miles away so 'You never know' doesnt applie to me." He said.
" That's what they all say. But you're going to slip up one of these times, Jake. You all do." Veetun added the last comment as a after thought.
Veetun rolled his eyes. " Don't act like a child, Jake."
Gwen finally got the door open and threw it open. It was empty and there was no other way out. She sighed and turned around to see a shadow, she screamed and jumped back. The shadow shut the door, plunging them into complete darkness.
Rife banged up against the door. "Gwen!"
"Rife," she called back as someone, or something grabbed her arms and pulled them behind her back. "Let go of me," She screamed at them.
She looked around franticly trying to make something out, but there was nothing, only the pitch black air.
Samantha cut the last shadow ou to fher way and ran to the door. She watched Rife's stuggle then put a hand on his shoulder. " Wait and watch." She flicked her fingers towards the door's doorknob and the doorknob melted. There was a hole in it where the doorknob once was and Samantha put her hand through it and jurked the door open.
Doctor Renesmee wrote: "Jake kept walking."Veetun rolled his eyes. " Fine. I'm going inside. Something's happening in there." He walked towards the house.
Jake made lightning strike the house and smiled as it all caught fire. He got in his car and drove off.
Gwen squinted her eyes at the sudden burst of light and finally made out Rife. "Rife," she called, but it was muffled as whatever had her put a hand over her mouth.
"Good luck finding her," The thing said, dissapearing with Gwen. Gwen screamed as she was pulled into darkness again.
"Good luck finding her," The thing said, dissapearing with Gwen. Gwen screamed as she was pulled into darkness again.
Doctor Renesmee wrote: "Jake made lightning strike the house and smiled as it all caught fire. He got in his car and drove off.""Jake!" Veetun yelled. " What's wrong with you!"
Rachel wrote: "Gwen squinted her eyes at the sudden burst of light and finally made out Rife. "Rife," she called, but it was muffled as whatever had her put a hand over her mouth. "Good luck finding her," The t..."
Samantha squinted. " What? Wait hey, yo, shadow, wait!"
Jake was to far away and even when he heard veetun he didnt listen and he watched the house burn.
Veetun stalked off towards the burning house grumbling about Jake's stipid temper and stupid vampire ways.
Jake went to his house and sat down watching tv
Veetun stared at what was left of the house and clenched his fists. He then started his way towards Jake's house.
Jake kept watching the news program. He locked his doors.
Veetun loaded himself into his mustang and drove towards Jake's.
Veetun parked outside of Jakes hosue, walked to the door, and bainned on it.
Jake opened the door and saw veetun. "Go the heck away." He growled his fangs emerging.
" What's wrong with you? You were never like this before."
"Well i wasnt a friggin vampire before. YOU THINK THIS IS EASY!!??!?! It freeking sucks. YOu humans have it easy. We are stuck like this and it is the worst thing you can imagine. Every time i get mad these fangs come out and it hurts worse than being shredded in a cheese grader!" He yelled.
" That gives you NO excuse for burnign someone's house down."
((OOooooo should jake bite him and turn him into a vamp so he knows what it is like?))
Jake growled and atacked Veetun drinking his blood. He left him on his porch limp and ran into his house and hid in his room. "What have I done?" He asked himself.
Veetun tried to dodge but Jake was too slow and he yelled in pain. He grunted as he fell to the porch's floor.
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