Young Writers discussion

note: This topic has been closed to new comments.
729 views
Archives > Roleplay with characters from your story

Comments Showing 1,101-1,150 of 16,635 (16635 new)    post a comment »

message 1101: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Doctor Renessmee wrote: "Jake stood up defensively looking at the shadow. "Ya I saw it..." He said."

Veetun loosened his sword in his sheath. " Should we...attack the shadows? What'd you think Jake?"


message 1102: by [deleted user] (new)

"Some one is causing the shadows.... I think I can find out." He walked over to it. There was a small teenager trying to get around the house. He frowned. "Shoo." he told her. She ran as fast as she could in the street and home. Jake shook his head and walked back to veetun. "Dang kids." He said.


message 1103: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Veetun smirked, kids usually crawled around where they shouldn't. " Who's causing the shaodws? How would you find somehting like that out?"


message 1104: by [deleted user] (new)

"What? The kid was causing the shadows. I can tell because I have far better eyesight.-He pointed to himself- vampire remember?" he said.


message 1105: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) " Are you sure? I think I see a few more." Veetun gestured to the shadows closing in on the house. " Whoever's in there is going to need some help. Shall we?" Veetun gave Jake a smirk and unsheathed his sword.


message 1106: by [deleted user] (new)

Jake rolled his eyes and zapped the shadows with a bolt of lighting that came off of his hand. All the shadows dissapeared. He smirked and sat on the grass. "Pretty easy." He said.


message 1107: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Veetun stood there startled. " How'd you do that?" His eyes where wide. " You missed one," Veetun gestured towards a shifting shadow.


message 1108: by [deleted user] (new)

Jake zapped it quickly. "I have powers." He said.


message 1109: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Veetun sighed. " How'd you get those?"


message 1110: by [deleted user] (new)

"Just the luck of the draw I guess..." He said.


message 1111: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) " Wait Vampires don't get powers." Veetun was feeling a little quezzy. Remebering all the vampires he had irritated before.


message 1112: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ya they do. Only some though." Jake said.


message 1113: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) " Uh. That sucks," Veetun murmurred.


message 1114: by [deleted user] (new)

"Not for us but for the humans yes..." he said.


message 1115: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) " As if you couldn't get them easily enough already."


message 1116: by [deleted user] (new)

"Hey its not my fault. I dont hunt humans anyways. I hunt animals... I have to many friends of your species veetun." He said.


message 1117: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Veetun nodded, " Sounds good to me."


message 1118: by [deleted user] (new)

"I agree." Jake said. "So Ive lost count. How old are you now?" He asked trying to change the subject.


message 1119: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Veetun smirked. Jake never could keep track of his age."20"


message 1120: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen ducked and tried to look for a way out of the circle, seeing a small break she quickly ducked out and headed toward the back door.


message 1121: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife killed teh first Shadow and moved on to the next one.


message 1122: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen tried the door and finding it locked she sighed. Why did it always turn out like this, sometimes her life was so cliche. She searched the desk for anything of use.


message 1123: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha ducked as a shadow attacked her, dodging it easily. She whipped her chain at the shadow but it had started shifting and she swore.


message 1124: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife attacked the next shadow.


message 1125: by [deleted user] (new)

"20 wow your younger than I remember.... I was 20 the last time you saw me.... I got turned into a vampire at age 21. I havent aged since...." He sighed remembering what he had become.


message 1126: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Doctor Renessmee wrote: ""20 wow your younger than I remember.... I was 20 the last time you saw me.... I got turned into a vampire at age 21. I havent aged since...." He sighed remembering what he had become."

" Ha, I guess. I'll still miss those nights out on the town."




message 1127: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha whipped at the shadow again and this time it disappeared at contact with her chain.


message 1128: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It's comming back," Rife said


message 1129: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) " What!?"


message 1130: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yes I sure will too." Jake replied.


message 1131: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Veetun sighed. Life could be so unfair some times. Veetun leaned against a tree and closed his eyes.


message 1132: by [deleted user] (new)

"So what have you been doing for the past few years?" Jake asked.


message 1133: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) " Oh, the usual. Causing trouble, dating here and there, always breaking it off and leaving before they get attached. Beating my challengers with ease," Veetun added pulling out his sword and swinging it around a few times.


message 1134: by [deleted user] (new)

"Just as I remember." Jake said to his fellow friend.


message 1135: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen found a credit card and went to work on the door. It was harder than she had thought.


message 1136: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Doctor Renessmee wrote: ""Just as I remember." Jake said to his fellow friend."

Veetun chuckled then sighed. " Not really."


message 1137: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yes well you have matured a great deal." He joked.


message 1138: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Veetun laughed softly. " Yes, well, when the person who came up with all the stupid ideas that kept you immature leaves- you tend to grow up a bit." Veetun's face was strait as he gazed up at the stars.


message 1139: by [deleted user] (new)

"True. Vampirazation took all of the childness out of me though I still can have humor." He said looking at Jupiter. His eyes where strong enough to see that far.


message 1140: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) " I know. It was one of the first things I realized when I saw you." Veetun's let his eyes fall to the groudn to study the grass.


message 1141: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yes. So what are you doing out so late at night?" Jake asked veetun.


message 1142: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) " Well I-" Veetun hesitated. Not sure what to say.


message 1143: by [deleted user] (new)

"Well you?" Jake prompted.


message 1144: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) I...heard something outside my window last night. It freaked me out. So I...I've been out looking for the intruder." Veetun shrugged.


message 1145: by [deleted user] (new)

"It was either that teenager or those shadows. Or something else." He shuddered at the thought.


message 1146: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "Teenager?"


message 1147: by [deleted user] (new)

"The one I had to shoo away." He said.


message 1148: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "When?" Where?"


message 1149: by [deleted user] (new)

"A few minutes ago. Dont you remember?" He said. "And I said 'Dang Kids.' " He said.


message 1150: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) " Oh, yeah. That's right." Veetun paused. " It wasn't the kid. It was somethign else, something more..."


back to top
This topic has been frozen by the moderator. No new comments can be posted.