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"Veetun. Its good to see you." Jake said.


message 1052: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Veetun had a slight moment of hesitaion before he spoke to Jake but had concluded that if Jake was going to attack him he would have.

" Ah, Jake. Good to see you too.You don't look so good-very pale. Did that vampire catch up with you?"

Veetun felt a pain of sadness wash over him at the thought of good ol' Jake being a vampire.


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Gwen stepped closer to Rife, frightened by the shifting shadows. "I don't know what to do," She whispered only loud enough for Rife to here, a tear rolling down her cheek.


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"Ya I got sick and he caught me... S'not so bad.." he said sadly.


message 1055: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Veetun's shoulders sagged at the news. " I see." He sighed sadly. " How long?"



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"Rife," She said, looking up into his eyes.


message 1057: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Stand next to me. Its ok," he reasured her "


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Gwen took his had. "Ok," She whispered, not able to do anything more. She felt helpless, like there was nothing to do, like all of her strentgh was draining.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife put a hand on her shoulder, waiting for something.


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She looked at her father and knew if she said one word it would stop, but maybe it wouldn't.
"Gwen," he said, "I really don't want to have to do this."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife stood firm beside her.


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"You don't have to," Gwen said softly, her eyes pleading.
He was shaken for a moment then put his hard face back on, "Yes, I do." He turned his back and walked out the door, leaving Gwen and Rife with the shadows.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Fantastic." Rife said dourly


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"He's just a great father," Gwen said sarcastically.


message 1065: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Oh yes. He puts mine to shame." Rife replied as teh first Shadows walked toward them


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"I wish I could help more," She said, already knowing her persuasion was void against them.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I know you do. But try and call Liv or Emmy." He said as tej hfirst shadow attacked him.


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"ok," She stepped behind him and concentrated, Live, Emmy, Patrik She called multiple times.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Gwen? Emmy said


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Yes, it's me, Rife's, we're in trouble. We're at my house, it's easy to find, big white house on 45th Ave. there's like 10 shadows over here.


message 1071: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments yeah we're outside and there are way more then 10 Shadows...


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Should have thought Gwen shook her head, "They're all over out side, Emmy and them are out there," She said.


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((g2g, I"m like falling asleep on the keyboard))


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"Ive been like this for about a year now.... I was very angry when it happend." He said solemly. ((Is veetum a vampire?))


message 1075: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Great" Rife said


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She looked at the things surrounding them then back at Rife with a helpless expression. She wished she could help she really did.


message 1077: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha stepped up behind Rife and rolled her eyes. How she hated shadows. " So, Rife is it? Is there some speacial way to kill these thing?" She said gesturing towards the shadows. Her enchanted chain was ready in her hands.


message 1078: by Stephanie (last edited Oct 04, 2009 05:23AM) (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Doctor Renessmee wrote: ""Ive been like this for about a year now.... I was very angry when it happend." He said solemly. ((Is veetum a vampire?))"

(( no, but he has be friended some.))

Veetun sighed again, it seemed like alot of people around him seemed to fall prey to vampires. He had learned quickly that they were still the same people after.

" A year," Veetun repeated stunned. He knew it had been a while since he had seen Jake but had hardly thought that the vampire had gotten to him so soon.

" I see. Are you-" Veetun stopped mid-sentence has he saw a movement out of the corner of his eyes by the house. He turned and squinted. Shadows, he thought. He had heard and seen them before but had never actually fought one before.

" Jake? Do you see that?"




message 1079: by Dana :D (new)

Dana :D | 23 comments lexi and johnathan walked together down the mostly abandond street


message 1080: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((um, just as a side note, Andromeda, I would read a little bit of the posts more if you want to interact with the other chracters.))


message 1081: by Dana :D (new)

Dana :D | 23 comments ((I will put that on my list of things that are important to do thanx XD!!))


message 1082: by Stephanie (last edited Oct 03, 2009 04:56PM) (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) (( haha, okay I'm gone though. I'm going to watch a movie, soon at least.))


message 1083: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen jumped. "How'd you get there?" She asked surprised.


message 1084: by Dana :D (new)

Dana :D | 23 comments ((wow im majorly confuzzled can some one explain whats going on?))


message 1085: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha smiled and tilted her head to the right. " Oh, well, a little magic here and a little magic there and presto! So, is there any paticular way to kill these things? Or do we just slash till they disappear?"


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"I don't know really," Gwen said, a little embarrassed that she didn't. "but I think they'll just die if you kill them." She realized after she said it hou stupid it sounded.


message 1087: by Dana :D (new)

Dana :D | 23 comments ((hello? im still confused and i read over about 1/4 of the posts! HELP!!))


message 1088: by Stephanie (last edited Oct 04, 2009 05:24AM) (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Andromeda (Dana) wrote: "((wow im majorly confuzzled can some one explain whats going on?))"

(( Gwen and Rife are in trouble with some shadows. Still waiting on info how to kill them. And Jake and Veetun are old friends. Jack's a vampire- Vettun isn't. Oh and Samantha- my character- is a witch.Okay, I'm gone.))




message 1089: by Dana :D (new)

Dana :D | 23 comments ((thanlksys!!))


message 1090: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Rachel wrote: ""I don't know really," Gwen said, a little embarrassed that she didn't. "but I think they'll just die if you kill them." She realized after she said it hou stupid it sounded."

" Thanks for the help."


message 1091: by Dana :D (new)

Dana :D | 23 comments "wow maojorly quite out here" lexi said to johnathan


message 1092: by [deleted user] (new)

((ok, Gwen and Rife are at Gwen's dad's house (which is also her house) and he's trying to get her to help him take over the world and Rife came to help her rescue her grandma and sister and old boyfriend. Emmy and Liv and Patrik know Rife and they're stuck outside fighting shadows who want them dead. tI think that sums it up))


message 1093: by Dana :D (new)

Dana :D | 23 comments ((i love world domination!! jk thanks!))



message 1094: by [deleted user] (new)

((uh-huh np))


message 1095: by Dana :D (new)

Dana :D | 23 comments "talk about it. its deserted out here" Johnathan moved his hair out of his eyes


message 1096: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You kill them after they've stopped shifting. Otherwise they just eat the magic you tried to kill them with." He told the new girl.


message 1097: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) " Ah, strait forward and easy to remeber."


message 1098: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah just don't.." Rife ducked an attack " believe anything they say." Rife smacked the ground and it shook the house again. He kicked the nearest shadow.


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Jake stood up defensively looking at the shadow. "Ya I saw it..." He said.


message 1100: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Shades of Grey wrote: ""Yeah just don't.." Rife ducked an attack " believe anything they say." Rife smacked the ground and it shook the house again. He kicked the nearest shadow."

" Right."
Samantha steady herself as the house shook then whipped her enchanted chain around and caught an unsuspecting shadow in the neck with it.

(( how many hits does it take to kill the shadows or is it like fighting a normal person after there 'stable'?))




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