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Sep 30, 2009 03:34PM
"Veetun. Its good to see you." Jake said.
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" Ah, Jake. Good to see you too.You don't look so good-very pale. Did that vampire catch up with you?"
Veetun felt a pain of sadness wash over him at the thought of good ol' Jake being a vampire.
Gwen stepped closer to Rife, frightened by the shifting shadows. "I don't know what to do," She whispered only loud enough for Rife to here, a tear rolling down her cheek.
"Ya I got sick and he caught me... S'not so bad.." he said sadly.
"Rife," She said, looking up into his eyes.
Gwen took his had. "Ok," She whispered, not able to do anything more. She felt helpless, like there was nothing to do, like all of her strentgh was draining.
She looked at her father and knew if she said one word it would stop, but maybe it wouldn't.
"Gwen," he said, "I really don't want to have to do this."
"Gwen," he said, "I really don't want to have to do this."
"You don't have to," Gwen said softly, her eyes pleading.
He was shaken for a moment then put his hard face back on, "Yes, I do." He turned his back and walked out the door, leaving Gwen and Rife with the shadows.
He was shaken for a moment then put his hard face back on, "Yes, I do." He turned his back and walked out the door, leaving Gwen and Rife with the shadows.
"He's just a great father," Gwen said sarcastically.
"I wish I could help more," She said, already knowing her persuasion was void against them.
"ok," She stepped behind him and concentrated, Live, Emmy, Patrik She called multiple times.
Yes, it's me, Rife's, we're in trouble. We're at my house, it's easy to find, big white house on 45th Ave. there's like 10 shadows over here.
Should have thought Gwen shook her head, "They're all over out side, Emmy and them are out there," She said.
((g2g, I"m like falling asleep on the keyboard))
"Ive been like this for about a year now.... I was very angry when it happend." He said solemly. ((Is veetum a vampire?))
She looked at the things surrounding them then back at Rife with a helpless expression. She wished she could help she really did.


(( no, but he has be friended some.))
Veetun sighed again, it seemed like alot of people around him seemed to fall prey to vampires. He had learned quickly that they were still the same people after.
" A year," Veetun repeated stunned. He knew it had been a while since he had seen Jake but had hardly thought that the vampire had gotten to him so soon.
" I see. Are you-" Veetun stopped mid-sentence has he saw a movement out of the corner of his eyes by the house. He turned and squinted. Shadows, he thought. He had heard and seen them before but had never actually fought one before.
" Jake? Do you see that?"

Gwen jumped. "How'd you get there?" She asked surprised.

"I don't know really," Gwen said, a little embarrassed that she didn't. "but I think they'll just die if you kill them." She realized after she said it hou stupid it sounded.

(( Gwen and Rife are in trouble with some shadows. Still waiting on info how to kill them. And Jake and Veetun are old friends. Jack's a vampire- Vettun isn't. Oh and Samantha- my character- is a witch.Okay, I'm gone.))

" Thanks for the help."
((ok, Gwen and Rife are at Gwen's dad's house (which is also her house) and he's trying to get her to help him take over the world and Rife came to help her rescue her grandma and sister and old boyfriend. Emmy and Liv and Patrik know Rife and they're stuck outside fighting shadows who want them dead. tI think that sums it up))


Jake stood up defensively looking at the shadow. "Ya I saw it..." He said.

" Right."
Samantha steady herself as the house shook then whipped her enchanted chain around and caught an unsuspecting shadow in the neck with it.
(( how many hits does it take to kill the shadows or is it like fighting a normal person after there 'stable'?))
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