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He shook his head. "Want to ask the others? They've been waiting as long as I. Oh... is Emmy with you? Patrik was worse than I was. I don't ever even see him. He hides from the world without her."


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((Can my post have come just before yours?))


message 8303: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((yeah totally i'll repost it..))


message 8304: by Ky (last edited Mar 20, 2010 02:29PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem shook her head. "It was only a week.." she insisted, tearful and questioning herself.


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((Thanks.))


message 8306: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik ran out of the house, at the sound of hearing Salem's voice, praying Emmy had come back to him. He skidded to a stop in the doorway, instantly needing it for support. She wassn't there, it was like loosing her all over again.
"Salem...?"


message 8307: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik stared at her.
"How did you-?"


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Sean took her hand, looking at Patrik and then back and Salem. "No... it wasn't."


message 8309: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The tears came again, full force. "No..."


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"Maybe- maybe it was for you. It wasn't for us."


message 8311: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I- Emmy. She talked to the Queen. We both did. It-it didn't, she threatened you Patrik.."


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Sean frowned. "They didn't... hurt you, did they? I swear, I'll kill them all if they even thought about-"


message 8313: by Hannah (last edited Mar 20, 2010 02:35PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik went rigid he was now only half hearing everything
"tell me she didn't.."
Liv ran out of the house
"Salem, oh my god..."


message 8314: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I-" she couldn't speak anymore, overcome with s\her body's need to cry.


message 8315: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv's hands went to cover her mouth looking back at the two boys.

Patrik sagged against the doorframe his eyes closing.


message 8316: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Sorry," she exclaimed, turning and running a few steps, stooping to throw up.


message 8317: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik put a hand on her shoulder sending her calm feelings. Trying to help in a small way.


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Sean went to her and pulled her hair out of her face. His face was sad. "Salem... come inside," he said when she was done. "I'll get you a drink."


message 8319: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Patrik helped. That and Sean's soothing words. "I'm sorry.." she whispered, ever apologizing.


message 8320: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik removed his hand
"Don't be." He was quiet, like a ghost of himself nowadays. It was a startling transformation.


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"Don't apologize. Please. Just- come on, love." Sean took her hand, then remembered something. "Oh- Ellis is with us."


message 8322: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem didn't like how this was affecting them, especially not Patrik. Nothing was the same and it was just damn annoying. "I noticed."


message 8323: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv walked up next to Salem smiling a little
"Hey, welcome back."

Patrik had left, going god knows where.

Emmy faced the Queen anger in her every move
"Now I'm done with the cryptic meanings. What do you need from me?"
"We need access to the Rune Room," The Queen said simply
"I don't know how I even got there let alone go back." Emmy told her.


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Sean sighed. "I... everyone will want to greet you. We've missed you so much. Come on in."


message 8325: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem looked at Liv, grateful for another girl there. Uncharacteristically, she held her hand out to Liv. Just a week..


message 8326: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv took it with a grin.
"Weird the time difference right?" She asked seriously but quietly.


message 8327: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "So I'm not just crazy?" she whispered back.


message 8328: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "No your not. Trust me. Its one of the bigger differences. YOu think you were there a week maybe two? To us you were gone three almost four months." Liv said looking at her.


message 8329: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ouch," her eyes filled again. "And they- Patrik and Sean- how'd they fare?"


message 8330: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Sean took it way better than Patrik. Sean does things, like talk and laugh on occasion. But Patrik, I don't even see him anymore. I've never seen him like this, its not going to end well Salem." Liv told her slowly trying to think her way through the words.


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((Sorry I was gone a bit. I'm back.))

Sean was hanging back a bit, unwilling to leave Salem's side. He listened to the girls talk, but he didn't speak.


message 8332: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The Queen looked at Emmy
"That is where we come in. Particularly myself, I know what you did to Salem when you originally went there and I can duplicate that."
Emmy's eyes widened then said
"That room, it has a mind of it's own, it will know."


message 8333: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((its ok))
Rife stood looking at Elly
"Is that Salem? I swore I just heard Patrik and Liv say her name."


message 8334: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((gtg guys. I'll be on later))

"I know Liv. I just still had to ask."


message 8335: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok see ya.))

Liv nodded
"Ok, maybe you can help..? I don't know what to do, neither does Rife, he's our leader, and when he's like this- Maybe you can talk to him? He listens to you, I know he does."


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((last post, most likely))

Salem nodded. "Of course I'll talk to him." Her thoughts went to the little girl from the dream and she knew, just knew, that if the girl was there, it would be brighter here.


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((Aw, bye! I'm getting a snack and some tea anyways... so it's okay. XD))

Elly jumped up. "I don't know." She bit her lip. "Let's go see!"

Sean smiled. "Elly and Rife are coming to see you, Salem."


message 8338: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv sighed
"Thank you."


message 8339: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife walked out
"Come on."


message 8340: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Oh gawd.


message 8341: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv tapped her shoulder
"Relax."


message 8342: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What? I am-" she stopped, noticing that Liv was right and she was tensed. "Can't help it."


message 8343: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv shrugged
"Understandable."


message 8344: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Maybe."


message 8345: by [deleted user] (new)

Nephilim (Shades of Grey) wrote: "Rife walked out
"Come on.""


Elly bounced along behind Rife and gasped when she saw Salem. She beamed. "So you are back!"


message 8346: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv looked at her
"Do you want to be alone for a while? We all kind of jumped on you..."


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Sean smiled and took a few steps away to leave room for the others who were coming.


message 8348: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Gawd. A bundle of happiness. Just what I needed. NOT. Salem pasted on a smile. "Hello Elly," but even a two year old could tell she was upset.


message 8349: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife stared
"Is Emmy-?"
"No, Rife." Liv said


message 8350: by [deleted user] (new)

Elly bit her lip and stayed behind. "Hi," she whispered, suddenly sad. "I- I should let you get inside."


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