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message 8251: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I know, me too. I mean, I wanted you to fight her," she grinned. "But it would've been nice to help." Salem winked.

((are the other shadows still there?))


message 8252: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((no they are killed))
Emmy grinned
"Hells yes, I would have loved that."


message 8253: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((good. I thought so))

Salem laughed, anger still mingling with the sound. "Too bad."


message 8254: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah. Too bad..." Emmy grinned


message 8255: by Ky (last edited Mar 19, 2010 09:03PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "So now what do we do? Sit around like there's no way out?" an edge came to her words again and she regretted letting the emotion through.


message 8256: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "No we talk to the Queen again. I'm not staying here, I need to get back to Patrik." Emmy said holding back her own emmotions, changing it into anger and using it that way.


message 8257: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Let's do this thing," she repeated what she'd said before the fight. "For Narnia," Salem whispered to herself, the old movie's saying coming to mind for no real reason.

Waverley covered her mouth, coughing.


message 8258: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Nerdy werid kid win! For narnia <3!))

"Your majesty!" Emmy yelled


message 8259: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo. *chuckles* I love that line))

Salem looked up, almost thinking Emmy heard her. But then she remembered their quest.


message 8260: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((love that movie.))

THe queen appeared behind Emmy
"Yes?"


message 8261: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((as do I))

Salem resisted the urge to run.


message 8262: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy turned around slowly and when she spoke tiredness and desperation creeping into her voice
"What are we doing here?! What do you want us for?"
"We require your assisstance." She said simply


message 8263: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Assitance for what exactly. I'm too lazy to even try to read you."


message 8264: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "The war," Emmy and the queen said in unison.


message 8265: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Count me out." she said simply.


message 8266: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "The second you came into this relm you are in the war" The Queen said simply


message 8267: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Doesn't mean I'm on your side." she retorted.


message 8268: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I know that, I also know that you are on Emmy's side." The Queen said
Emmy sighed and leaned on the wall.


message 8269: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Well no duh."


message 8270: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The queen nodded
"If Emmy were on our side would you be an ally?"
"There is a problem with that."
"Oh?"
"Yes, I would never be on your side."


message 8271: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem found herself smiling. "You've got your answer." she stopped speaking for a moment, zoning out as a vision came to her.


message 8272: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The Queens gaze shifted to Emmy who had slid down the wall.
"You won't have much of a choice."
"I won't leave Patrik." She said stubbornly.


message 8273: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem bit her lip, causing it to bleed. The satly, somewhat metallic taste brought her back to the present. That kid again.


message 8274: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "He is as good as dead," The Queen said coldly
Emmy's head snapped up
"What?! Don't you ever say that again." Emmy growled standing up and standing mere inches from the queen's face. Anger rising off of her in a wave.


message 8275: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "You wouldn't," she said, breaking her own silence.


message 8276: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I will do what I have to do for my people." The queen said calmly
"What about my people?! Huh?! What am I to do?" Emmy yelled finally loosing her calm mask.


message 8277: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Em," she frowned. "Do what you have to." alem couldn't tell Emmy what to do, she knew how important Patrik was to her.


message 8278: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy raked a hand through her hair
"How do I protect him?" She asked desperately
"You already know the answer." the queen said
Emmy's head dropped into her hands.


message 8279: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem sighed, seeing the little girl in her head again and was extremely confused by it. She shook her head, her curls catching in the light. "Emmy. Do what you have to for Patrik. It's okay."


message 8280: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "If I stay Salem leaves." Emmy stated.
"Fine." The Queen said with a nod.


message 8281: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Em-" she couldn't finish, it made sense.


message 8282: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Tell him, ok? Promise me you will tell him." Emmy said simply looking at her.


message 8283: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I will..I promise Emmy. I dont break my promises." Especially ones from my sister.


message 8284: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Thanks," Emmy smiled then turned to the queen "Send her back now."
The queen nodded and flicked her wrist.
Emmy smiled brightly at Salem
"I'll be seeing you. And tell Patrik I love him."


message 8285: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem nodded. "Be..careful Love ya girl. And I will, promise."


message 8286: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok i just had the coolest idea. How about there is a huge time difference between the two demensions? Like they think they have been there a week but to Patrik and Sean they have been gone almost three months?I'm loving that idea...))

Emmy watched untill Salem was gone then turned to the Queen
"Now leave my people alone."
She nodded
"Of Course."


message 8287: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sorry I missed so much! Hey, that's a great idea! Like fairy land. So... we're skipping a bunch for Sean and Patrik and the rest?))

Elly sighed and began to pace worriedly. "I mean he's here. Inside. Downstairs. Chatting with Sean."

Sean chuckled and watched Ellis and Gibbs. Gibbs sat, wagging his tail in anticipation.

Connie frowned. "It- It's changed. One of them is gone. She went back."


message 8288: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I love this idea!))

Waverley's lips trembled, "Is-is that good Con? Is it?"

Salem opened her eyes and gasped in shock: she was back.


message 8289: by [deleted user] (new)

Connie concentrated for a moment, holding up one finger. She sighed and nodded. "Yes. I think so. It will be a little more difficult now... but we can still get the other girl back. And the one who went back- the silver-haired one- she is fine."

((Me too. So where did she appear? I need to know how and when Sean will see her. XD))


message 8290: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((outside the cabin thing I guess. :P))

"She is okay?" Wave smiled a little. "That's good!"

Salem looked at her hands, not able to smile, her heart pounding erratically.


message 8291: by [deleted user] (new)

Connie nodded, biting her lip. "Yes. Wave, are you tired? We won't be seeing the other girl for a while, so if you want you can take a nap."

Gibbs' ears perked up and he ran to the door, barking loudly and excitedly.


message 8292: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She didn't answer, didn't need to as she yawned and sat down, leaning her head in Connie's lap.

Startled by the sound of a dog, Salem looked up again. It seemed so...normal.


message 8293: by [deleted user] (new)

Connie smiled slightly and stroked Wave's hair. She bit her lip and tried to see what would work so that she could put it into action.

Gibbs pawed at the door, and Sean looked up from reading and went to the door. "What is it?" he asked. Gibbs barked again, and Sean nodded, opening the door.
Gibbs went straight to Salem and jumped on her excitedly, licking her face all over. Sean was stunned. He stared at her in surprise, then shook his head. It wasn't real. It couldn't be real. She'd been gone for so long, he had accepted that she wouldn't be coming back.
"Salem?" he whispered.


message 8294: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Wave's sleep came surely, and the dream with it.


Her face was frozen as she backed away from
Gibbs. Suddenly, as if just registering Sean's presence, her eyes widened and tears sprang forth.


message 8295: by [deleted user] (new)

Connie let the visions come, and soon saw that Wave was going to be upset again when she woke up. She stroked Wave's hair gently and murmured in her ear, "It's okay. You're alright, Wave."

Heart pounding, Sean looked at Salem and he whispered, "Are you really here?"


message 8296: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Her lips moved in silent words to Connie.

Salem felt her lips twist in a small smile. "Yah, are you?"


message 8297: by [deleted user] (new)

Connie smiled and stroked Wave's hair from her face.

Sean smiled slightly, too. "I've been here waiting for you for... eighty-three days, two hours, and thirty-five minutes."


message 8298: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Her dream wasn't as bad this time: Maxx was playing with her.


She looked at him oddly. "I've been gone a week. Give or take day..." Salem took a few tentative steps towards him, wondering if it was still a dream, if that was possible.


message 8299: by [deleted user] (new)

"Salem- I wish that were true. It's been so long. I was sure I'd lost you forever." He reached out his hand to her, hesitantly.

Connie sat back again and closed her eyes.


message 8300: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It- it was only a week Sean. Only a really, stupid long week."


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