R6: Items- Discussion and Help

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Dyllan, The Brazuca Ekaterina wrote: "Will rabbit hole work for rabbit?"

Yes.

[Katherine]

Dawn (Kat N Hat) wrote: "Is there something that talks about her being dressed up, not a description of what she's wearing. But the fact that she is dressed up. What you've qu..."

I think I give up, lol. I couldn't find any quote stating she's an adult.
I could put the next quote with her name on it, and the synopsis states her age.

Or if you would accept another quote stating her age, Yes, indeed; at eighteen, Sophie found herself far more cared-for than she was when she was two.

When Charlie came to her side of the car and unbuckled her, he surprised her by also unbuckling the straps of her coveralls. He tugged off her pants, then picked her up and put her down on the ground in front of the car. He plucked out her pacifier, put it on the seat, and then unlatched the Velcro closing of her diaper.

“I won’t do anything like what I did ever again. I promise,” she panted, and not because of the small hike she had to go on to find the proper sticks, but because she was suddenly short of breath in general. It didn’t seem like the world held enough air.
He put out his hand to silently demand the sticks from her. She slowly and hesitantly handed them to him, chewing her bottom lip. He began to strip the bark from them. “I know you won’t do that ever again, Sophie,” he said in a very firm, ominous way.

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Dyllan, The Brazuca Ekaterina wrote: "Dawn (Kat N Hat) wrote: "Is there something that talks about her being dressed up, not a description of what she's wearing. But the fact that she is dressed up. What you've qu..."

I think I give u..."

So I think your book scares me.

In your initial post you said she had to dress up as punishment. It seems like the part where the guy tells her what her punishment is would work. Yeah it is probably apparent that she usually doesn't dress like that, but to be a costume it needs to be implied that that is not how she normally dresses, not just our assumption.

[Katherine]

LMAO. I'm reading it for another challenge. And believe me I'm TRYING not to scare you.

Well, there are parts I can show you it's not how she usually dresses. She crashed a car and that was her punishment for stealing and crashing it.

(before crashing the car)
One more time and you will get a bad-baby weekend that you’ll never forget! Diapers, bottles, nap times, and long—hard—spankings.
&
(after crashing the car)
“Welcome to your first bad-baby weekend.”


I can't put the previous part of the quote or half of the people around here would run screaming for their mama's. Lol
I really wanted to fit this book in my challenge-reading schedule, but if it doesn't work, it's okay. I'm gonna do the sacrifice of reading another book.

[ShoSho]

Dyllan, The Brazuca Ekaterina wrote: "LMAO. I'm reading it for another challenge. And believe me I'm TRYING not to scare you.

Well, there are parts I can show you it's not how she usually dresses. She crashed a car and that was her p..."

This sounds scary , but I'm curios ! Can you tell me the name of this book please?

[Angie ~aka Reading Machine~]

Dawn (Kat N Hat) wrote: "Angie ~aka Reading Machine~ wrote: "Would either of these work for Bad Weather:What was Beck doing out in that lightning storm, anyway?
OR
What were you thinking running through a lightning storm?
..."

Thank you!

[Katherine]

ShoSho wrote: "This sounds scary , but I'm curios ! Can you tell me the name of this book please? ..."

Lol,
Being Their Baby by Korey Mae Johnson
It's age-play, so if you've never heard of it it's okay. It's not your standard romance, lol. Have fun!

[PepperP0t]

Dyllan, The Brazuca Ekaterina wrote: "ShoSho wrote: "This sounds scary , but I'm curios ! Can you tell me the name of this book please? ..."

Lol,
Being Their Baby by Korey Mae Johnson
It's age-play, so if you've never heard of it it..."

it's definitely different Dyllan, I can only hope you like it.

[ShoSho]

Dyllan, The Brazuca Ekaterina wrote: "ShoSho wrote: "This sounds scary , but I'm curios ! Can you tell me the name of this book please? ..."

Lol,
Being Their Baby by Korey Mae Johnson
It's age-play, so if you've never heard of it it..."

Thanks .
Never heard of age-play !

[ShoSho]

Dawn , anything in this paragraph acceptable for bad weather?

It was nearing on September , unpredictable in the Colorado Mountains .It could mean we'd be up to our knees in snow tomorrow and stay that way until April.It could mean we could go out in swimsuits tomorrow and get sunburned.
But every man who had a bike who lived in unpredictable weather took it out as often as he could before that unpredictable weather hit.

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

ShoSho wrote: "Dawn , anything in this paragraph acceptable for bad weather?

It was nearing on September , unpredictable in the Colorado Mountains .It could mean we'd be up to our knees in snow tomorrow and stay..."

It seems like a stretch but that last "unpredictable weather" sounds like it's talking about that snow storm. So if that's the best you've got I'll take it.

[ShoSho]

Dawn (Kat N Hat) wrote: "ShoSho wrote: "Dawn , anything in this paragraph acceptable for bad weather?

It was nearing on September , unpredictable in the Colorado Mountains .It could mean we'd be up to our knees in snow t..."
yaay thanks!
well I kinda stuffed up. I searched my book and it had at least 4 storms in it.after I finished the book I realized 1 of them is not about weather and the other 3 are in the excerpt at the end of this one from another book. Can I read the excerpt and claim one of those?

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Sorry ShoSho it needs to be in the actual book not the excerpt.

[ShoSho]

Dawn (Kat N Hat) wrote: "Sorry ShoSho it needs to be in the actual book not the excerpt."

That's OK . I went with the "unpredictable weather".
I was trying not to read too much of the book to avoid spoilers so that's what happened :P

[Lizz (Beer, Books and Boos), Group Creator]

Would hot blood work for hot Hot Beverage

while her hot blood poured like liquid pleasure over his tongue

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

❥☪LIZZ NEILL☪❥ wrote: "Would hot blood work for hot Hot Beverage

while her hot blood poured like liquid pleasure over his tongue"

I've been waiting for someone to ask that question. If the blood is being drunk then yes it would be a hot beverage.

[Lizz (Beer, Books and Boos), Group Creator]

Dawn (Kat N Hat) wrote: "❥☪LIZZ NEILL☪❥ wrote: "Would hot blood work for hot Hot Beverage

while her hot blood poured like liquid pleasure over his tongue"

I've been waiting for someone to ask that question. If the blood ..."

Cool

[Mandy]

Will you take for gold:

“She wore golden beryl. This stone made your mother very powerful. Golden beryl is said to be able to ward off evil spirits.”

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

golden will work for gold.

[Lauren]

Does it have to be the metal gold or would gold eyes or a gold coat (as in wolf's coat) work as well?

[Sheila]

The fireworks during their tenure here burst from between them for fireworks?

[Melanie]

Does "He thought of the Salem witch trials" work for Witch?

[Mandy]

awesome!
Thank you

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Lauren wrote: "Does it have to be the metal gold or would gold eyes or a gold coat (as in wolf's coat) work as well?"

Any form of gold, the metal or color. Also if it is on the cover it has to be 50% of the cover not just on the cover.

[Sheila]

Theresa's courtroom costume, a straight black shirt, ivory blouse etc for costume?

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Melanie wrote: "Does "He thought of the Salem witch trials" work for Witch?"

Sheila wrote: "The fireworks during their tenure here burst from between them for fireworks?"


Yes and yes

[Melanie]

Dawn (Kat N Hat) wrote: "Melanie wrote: "Does "He thought of the Salem witch trials" work for Witch?"

Sheila wrote: "The fireworks during their tenure here burst from between them for fireworks?"


Yes and yes"

Thanks! I thought it would work, but just wanted to make sure. :)

[Ezi]

Mandy wrote: "awesome!
Thank you"

I miss you Mandy

[Jenne]

Is hearth ok for fireplace?

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Jenne wrote: "Is hearth ok for fireplace?"

yes.

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Sheila wrote: "Theresa's courtroom costume, a straight black shirt, ivory blouse etc for costume?"

yup, if it uses the word costume, ill take it.

[Sam]

Would black/dark magician work for mage/wizard?

[Sheila]

Thanks Dawn

[Lauren]

Thanks Dawn :0)

[Turtlecollector Dennis]

Would this work for soldier

"Being both a chaplain and a medic due to the need for double duty troops..." Or "Preacher's World Corps unit took a direct hit under enemy fire...."

[Ezi]

I need to know if Magician would be acceptable for mage as well!
Thank you

[~Melissa~]

Dawn ~ would you take a black baseball cap for HAT

OR

would you take 'At present, I'm wearing my Girl Friday Hat.' I wondered how many other hats she had hidden up her sleeve.

Thanks!

[Lauren]

Would Goldfinger be acceptable for gold and can the word be in the title of the book? Sorry if this has already be asked and answered.

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Sam wrote: "Would black/dark magician work for mage/wizard?"

Anyone who uses a form of "magic" would work... well real magic, not a magician who is using optical illusion kind of magic.

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Turtlecollector wrote: "Would this work for soldier

"Being both a chaplain and a medic due to the need for double duty troops..." Or "Preacher's World Corps unit took a direct hit under enemy fire....""

"Being both a chaplain and a medic due to the need for double duty troops.." will work.

I'm not sure what "Preacher's World Corps unit" is are they actual soldiers or a volunteer group? But if the first one works, does it matter?

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Ezinwanyi~For you, Agron wrote: "I need to know if Magician would be acceptable for mage as well!
Thank you"

If they are doing "real" magic (spells, conjuring, etc) then yes. Just the word magician would not work because most of those are "performers" who do illusion acts not like a mage

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

~Melissa~ wrote: "Dawn ~ would you take a black baseball cap for HAT

OR

would you take 'At present, I'm wearing my Girl Friday Hat.' I wondered how many other hats she had hidden up her sleeve.

Thanks!"

Yes, per the rules figures of speech are ok for hat. Just for that phrase, "wearing many hats". And a cap is a type of hat so it works too.

[Ezi]

Dawn (Kat N Hat) wrote: "Ezinwanyi~For you, Agron wrote: "I need to know if Magician would be acceptable for mage as well!
Thank you"

If they are doing "real" magic (spells, conjuring, etc) then yes. Just the word magici..."

Sentence: "It was as if the magician conjured up Elena and Isaiah out thin air"

[Turtlecollector Dennis]

Dawn (Kat N Hat) wrote: "Turtlecollector wrote: "Would this work for soldier

"Being both a chaplain and a medic due to the need for double duty troops..." Or "Preacher's World Corps unit took a direct hit under enemy fire..."

Thanks.

Preacher is the name of a person and the book is set in the future so I was assuming World Corps was the name of the army then. He is the same person referred to in the first option. It just didn't specifically say soldier so I wanted to make sure first.

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Lauren wrote: "Would Goldfinger be acceptable for gold and can the word be in the title of the book? Sorry if this has already be asked and answered."

Yes the item can be in the title, pictured on the cover, or in the text of the book (the text is just the most common option).

As for Goldfinger, I am going to go with no. It is either in reference to a movie or the character Auric Goldfinger. It is not in refrence to the color or metal. I wouldn't take Goldbart, Goldbaum, Goldberg, or Goldberger or any other "gold" last name.

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Ezinwanyi~For you, Agron wrote: "Sentence: "It was as if the magician conjured up Elena and Isaiah out thin air" "


Well, your sentence says "as if", like it is someones guess, who doesn't believe in magic. Did he really conjure them or was it an illusion?

[Dawn (Kat N Hat)]

Turtlecollector wrote: "Preacher is the name of a person and the book is set in the future so I was assuming World Corps was the name of the army then. He is the same person referred to in the first option. It just didn't specifically say soldier so I wanted to make sure first. ..."

Troops to me is just soldiers in plural form. So it works.

The second one seems like it is the Army took a hit so that doesn't mean exactly soldiers.

[Turtlecollector Dennis]

Ok, I'll use the first one which was my first choice anyway.

[Angie ~aka Reading Machine~]

Will this work for Witch:Fate, unbelievably unfair witch?

[~Melissa~]

Dawn (Kat N Hat) wrote: "~Melissa~ wrote: "Dawn ~ would you take a black baseball cap for HAT

OR

would you take 'At present, I'm wearing my Girl Friday Hat.' I wondered how many other hats she had hidden up her sleeve. ..."

Thanks ~ I have my book!!