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message 151: by [deleted user] (new)

Derrick cant remember what happened now that he tries to think, "Hey what exactly happened?"


message 152: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "You kind of passed out twice," she looks at him.


message 153: by [deleted user] (new)

"Twice??" Derrick looks at her confused


message 154: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Before we went into the sports place and after we were done swimming," she drinks more water.


message 155: by [deleted user] (new)

"Wow..." Derrick grows silent.... as he takes another drink, he lays his head down


message 156: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Yeah, I was really worried for you," she looks down.


message 157: by [deleted user] (new)

Derrick still has his head down, but you faintly hear him start to sniffle behind his arm.


message 158: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Is something wrong?" she asks him.


message 159: by [deleted user] (new)

He looks up now with tears in his eyes, "I just wish I had more control over my powers, instead of scaring people like im some sort of..... freak"
Derrick now begins to cry softly.


message 160: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Your not a freak," she sets her hand on his back for support, "your special."


message 161: by [deleted user] (new)

"My powers can only hurt people, how is that special?" Derrick replies


message 162: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Because you don't use your powers against anyone," she smiles at him, "you aren't tempted by the power."


message 163: by [deleted user] (new)

He wipes tears from his eyes, "thanks"


message 164: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "No problem," she nudges him smiling.


message 165: by [deleted user] (new)

Derrick looks back up and before he realized it, he hurls himself into her pressing his lips against hers.
((Dont ask, the first thing to pop in my mind lol))


message 166: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) ((Lol))

Her eyes opened wide a little surprised, she could taste the alcohol he had consumed and wondered if it was genuine.


message 167: by [deleted user] (new)

Derricks eyes opened and he backs off, "Oh my god, I am so sorry"


message 168: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Its okay, your probably not feeling like yourself," she brushes through her hair.


message 169: by [deleted user] (new)

Derrick still in shock, "Well actually i feel about the same, even though that was incredibly awkward."


message 170: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Yeah, a little," she laughs.


message 171: by [deleted user] (new)

((Time for a random bar fight lol, if its alright with you?))


message 172: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) ((A little drama couldn't hurt, lol))

She drinks her water.


message 173: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sweetness lol)) Derrick hears the door open in the bar he looks back and a guy walks in. Derrick doesnt pay much attention to him at first. Until he walk up and sits down in a stool right behind Clover.


message 174: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) Clover politely smiles at the guy and takes another sip of her water.


message 175: by [deleted user] (new)

The guy now starts to rib her shoulders and says, "hey pretty lady, how are you today?"


message 176: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Good," she moves out of his hands, "and you?"


message 177: by [deleted user] (new)

The guy smiles, Hhhey, where are you goin?" He then tries to reach for her again.


message 178: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "No where," she brushes her hair back.


message 179: by [deleted user] (last edited May 05, 2013 12:18AM) (new)

Derrick now reacts, he slaps the guys hands out of the way, "Hey, dont you touch her again. Derrick says sternly. The guy gets up and laughs, "Oh yeah what are you.going to do about it? As he reaches for her again.


message 180: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) Clover flinches as the guy reaches for her again.


message 181: by [deleted user] (last edited May 05, 2013 12:32AM) (new)

Derrick stands up and pushes the guy back, "I said back off." Then the guy threw a punch before Derrick and then a burst of pain went through his jaw. Derrick knows the feeling all too well, but it doesnt stop him. He yells and sprints towards the guy tackling him to the ground. He now pins his body down, then repeatedly hti the guy, blow after blow, but this doesnt seem to effect the guy much, the guy shoves him off and stands up quickly before derrick, and he kicks him hard in the ribs. The breath gets knocked out of derrick as the kick lands. Then the guy turns towards the girl again. "Now, where were we?" ((Act afraid))


message 182: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) She looks down at Derrick concern written all over her face but as the guy approaches her she shakes nervously.


message 183: by [deleted user] (new)

Then the guy stops very abruptly, moaning as he drops to his knees pale as a ghost. Derrick slowly begins to set up while holding his and out towards the guy. He knows he shouldnt be doing it but, he felt like he had no other choice.


message 184: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) Clover covers her mouth with her hand in shock.


message 185: by [deleted user] (new)

Derrick then quickly made a fist, and then the guy dropped over... dead
Derrick now coughing up what seems like blood, he limps his way towards the now lifeless body.


message 186: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sorry is that too dramatic lol))


message 187: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Derrick," she got between him, "that's enough, he's dead." She looked at the guy feeling sad for him.


message 188: by [deleted user] (new)

"You just wait" derrick says moving her outta the way. He then dropped to one knee the placed his hand on the guys back. Derrick exhaled loudly. Then the guy starts to move, freaking out. Derrick then helps him up and says, "I'll let you live this time, but the next time you put your hands on her, ill make sure you cant be resisitated." Derrick then shoves him away. He then walks over to Clover and says, "are you okay."


message 189: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Im fine," she huffs sitting down on her stool.


message 190: by [deleted user] (new)

Derrick starts to rub his head, "Are you sure?"


message 191: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Yeah," she crosses her arms, "that was a little too much Derrick, you scared me."


message 192: by [deleted user] (last edited May 05, 2013 01:12AM) (new)

Derrick then looks down, "im sorry. It wasthe only way i could stop him. I didnt wanna see you get hurt. I brought him back though." Tears form in his eyes again, "I guess i am a freak" Derrick then stands up and walks out the door.

((Cliffhanger sorry i am about to hit the hay, we can do this tomorrow though if you want.))


message 193: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) ((To be continued yes, Goodnight!! :D ))

Clover sighed as she watched him leave.


message 194: by [deleted user] (new)

((Seeya then))


message 195: by [deleted user] (new)

((Im baccccccckk!!!!!!))


message 196: by [deleted user] (new)

((Hello!!!!!!))


message 197: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yummy#!!!!!! And im doing really good, i have been waiting for sara. You missed alot lol))


message 198: by [deleted user] (new)

((I stayed up until like 4 lol i have no life))


message 199: by [deleted user] (new)

((Same here lol besides school and homework lol))


message 200: by [deleted user] (last edited May 05, 2013 10:54AM) (new)

((Lol.. so want me to get you up to speed of what happened or do you just wanna read the past comments?))


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