Penric's Demon sample and 1st link

(Now with all three links, below.)

Yay! I wasn't expecting this for a couple more days.

Sample as promised:



"Penric’s Demon"



A fantasy novella in the World of the Five Gods

by

Lois McMaster Bujold


2015



"Penric’s Demon"



The morning light sloped across the meadows, breathing pale green into the interlaced branches of the woods beyond, picking out shy pink and white blossoms here and there among the new leaves. The spring air hung soft with promise. Penric’s mother, before she had gone off in the wagon with his sisters to oversee the final preparations, had turned her face to the cool blue sky and declared it a perfect day for a betrothal; surely the gods were smiling upon the House of Jurald at last! Penric had refrained from pointing out that the learned divines taught that the gods did not control the weather, and been rewarded for this filial forbearance with a sharp maternal injunction to hurry up, finish dressing, and follow! This was no time to be dragging his feet!

Penric stared glumly between his horse’s bobbing ears and reflected that it would have been an even better day to go fishing. Not the most exciting pastime, but it was the one thing he’d ever found to do that made people stop talking at him. He tried to imagine the muddy, winding road going somewhere less familiar than Greenwell Town. He supposed it actually did, if you followed it far enough. As his elder brother Drovo had done? Not a happy thought.

He frowned down at the brown sleeves of his jacket, laced with orange and gold-colored thread betraying a brassy tarnish. Even for this, he was still wearing hand-me-downs. The fine suit had been new when Drovo had first worn it at age thirteen for his oath to the militant Son’s Order as a page-dedicat; not just as customary for his sex and age and rank, but true to his boisterous heart, Penric fancied. Drovo had outgrown the garb too swiftly for it to become much frayed or patched. Pulled out of a storage chest reeking of camphor, it had been fitted to the nineteen-year-old Penric merely by stealing a little fabric from the shoulders to lengthen the legs of the trousers. He tried to encourage himself with the thought that at least he wasn’t wearing hand-me-downs from his sisters, except that he was fairly sure the linen shirt, shabby and soft, under the jacket had once been a blouson.

Well, Drovo wouldn’t be outgrowing any more clothes now.

His death last year in Adria, of a camp fever before he’d even had a chance to help lose his mercenary company’s first battle, had been the second mortal disaster to befall the family in four years. The first had been the death of their father, of a swift infection in the jaw following a neglected abscess of a tooth. They’d all missed the jovial Lord of Jurald, if not, perhaps, his drinking and gambling. Penric’s eldest brother Lord Rolsch had seemed a soberer hand on the helm, if only he hadn’t been such a gull for every pious beggar, whether in rags or Temple robes, to come down the pike. And if the Lords of Jurald hadn’t ruled over a local peasantry whose main pastimes seemed to be archery, poaching, and tax evasion. So Drovo had taken his oath-money from the company recruiter, spent it in equipping himself, and gone off to the wars beyond the mountains, cheerily promising to come back rich with spoils to repair the family fortunes.

At least his fate had cured the clan of urging Penric to do the same . . .

Not that he’d ever been tempted. One rowdy Drovo had been enough to make Pen’s youth a misery; camp life with a whole company of like-minded bruisers was a nightmare in prospect. And that was before one even got to the grim battles.

“Pick up the pace, Little Pen,” his groom, Gans, advised him in the familiar terms of his childhood. “I shouldn’t like to hear it if I deliver you late.”

“Nor I,” Pen sighed agreement, and they kicked their horses into a trot.

Pen tried to drag his thoughts into a sunnier mode, matching the morning. The bed of the daughter of a rich cheese merchant certainly made a more attractive arena in which to try to better his lot than the battlegrounds of the north. Preita was as nice and round as the purse she came with. He wondered if she understood what a hollowed-out lordly title her family was buying for her. The three times they’d been allowed to meet, strictly chaperoned, she had seemed a trifle dubious about it all, if tolerably pleased in turn with Pen’s appearance. Shyness, or shrewdness? Pen’s sister-in-law Lady Jurald had found and fostered the match, through some connection with Preita’s mother. Well, presumably the girl’s parents understood what they were purchasing. It would be up to Pen to make sure she did not regret the bargain.

How hard could husbanding be? Don’t drink, don’t gamble, don’t bring hunting dogs to the table. Don’t be terrified of tooth-drawers. Don’t be stupid about money. Don’t go for a soldier. No hitting girls. He wasn’t drawn to violate any of these prohibitions. Assuming older sisters weren’t classified as girls. Maybe make that, No hitting girls first.

Perhaps, once he had secured his bride and her dowry, he might persuade her to move somewhere farther down the road? Pen imagined a cottage by a lake, with no servants he had not hired himself. But Preita seemed quite devoted to her own family. And neither half of the couple was likely to enjoy more than a modest allowance before Pen reached his majority. Until then, the purse strings would remain in Rolsch’s hands. Who was unlikely to be persuaded, while there was still room at Jurald Court, to part with unnecessary expenses for housing not under his fraternal eye. And Pen was fairly sure Preita hadn’t thought she was signing up for life in a cottage. Which would probably be given to damp, anyway.

Do your best, Pen told himself firmly as they turned onto the main road to Greenwell, and then, his head coming up, What’s this?

An odd collection of horses and figures was halted on the verge.

A man with a badge pinning jaunty blue and white feathers on his hat, marking him as of the Daughter’s Order, held four restive horses. The weapons of a Temple guardsman hung at his belt. A second guardsman and a woman in a superior sort of servant’s garb knelt by a figure laid out supine on a spread cloak. Had a rider in the party been thrown? Pen pulled his horse to a halt.

“Is someone hurt here?” he called. The supine figure, he saw at closer range, was a slight, elderly woman, gray haired and gray faced, in a muddle of robes of no particular colors. “Do you need help?”

The second guardsman rose and turned eagerly to him. “Young sir! Do you know how far it is to the next town, and do they have physicians of the Mother there?”

“Yes, Greenwell; not five miles up the road you’re on,” said Pen, pointing. “The Mother’s Order keeps a hospice there.”

The guardsman took the reins of three of their mounts from his fellow, and clapped him on the shoulder. “Go; ride for help. Get a litter—better, a wagon.”

The man nodded and sprang to his saddle, wheeled, and clapped his heels to his horse’s flanks. It galloped off in a spray of dirt clods.

Pen dismounted and handed his own reins up to Gans, who stared at the scene in doubt. The middle-aged woman took in Pen’s neat, pious brown suit, and seemed to grow less wary. “Divine Ruchia has taken suddenly ill on the road,” she said, gesturing to the older woman, who lay breathing in short gasps. “She was struck by a great pain in her chest, and fell.”

“Oh, I was taken ill long before that,” the old woman commented between huffs. “I lingered too long in Darthaca . . . Told the fools to bring the ceremony to me.”

Torn between curiosity, concern, and a reflection that if he’d left for town earlier as he’d been charged, he could have avoided all this, Pen lowered himself to the old woman’s side. Cautiously, he felt her forehead, as his mother had used to do for him; her skin seemed clammy, not feverish. He had not the first notion of what to do for her, but it seemed wrong to just remount and ride away, for all that Gans was now glaring in tight-lipped worry.

“I am Lord Penric of kin Jurald, barons in this valley,” he told her, gesturing back to the road they’d come from. He wasn’t sure what to say next. She seemed most in authority here, but surely least able to command, in her current distressed state. Her cloak slipped off her shoulder, revealing Temple braids pinned there marking a divine—not in the green and gold of the Mother of Summer, as he would have expected, or perhaps the blue and white of the Daughter of Spring, but the white, cream, and silver of the Bastard, the fifth god, master of all disasters out of season. He gulped, swallowing his surprise.

She wheezed a short laugh and stirred, lifting a claw-like hand to his face. “Pretty boy. There’s a better last sight than scowling Marda. Gift of sorts. But those colors don’t suit you, you know.”

He raised his head to the servant woman who, as he’d knelt, had retreated. “Is she delirious?”

The servant shook her head. “Can’t tell, can I? She’s been spouting things no one else understands since I was assigned to ride with her.”

The old woman’s lips twitched back. “Really?” she said. She did not seem to be addressing Marda. Or Penric. “That will throw the fools into a tizzy.” She fought for another breath. “Illogical to wish to see it, I suppose.”

Increasingly frightened, and feeling quite stupid and helpless, Pen tried: “Let me serve you in your need, Learned.”

She stared intently up at him for two more disrupted breaths, then wheezed, “Accepted.”

She’s dying. Cold, slick, not like the fevered heat and stink of his father’s deathbed, but the advancing pallor was unmistakable. He wanted nothing so much as to run away, but her hand, falling back from his face, found his and gripped it weakly. He wasn’t enough something—cowardly, brave?—to shake it off. Both the servant and the guardsman, he saw out of the corner of his eye, were hastily backing away. What?

“Lord Bastard,” she breathed. “Y’r doorway hurts. ’D think y’ could arrange things better f’yr servants . . .”

If all he could do was hold her hand, Pen decided in desperation, well, that was what he would do. His grip tightened.

For a moment, her brown eyes seemed to flash with a deep violet light. Then, between one breath and . . . none, her eyes went dull and still.

No one was looking back at him now.

He heard a confusion of women’s voices babbling in half-a-dozen languages, most of which he didn’t recognize, crying out in terror and pain. His head, throbbing with tension, seemed to explode in a thick, tangled net of lightning, all white.

Then all black.

* * *


First link:

http://www.amazon.com/Penrics-Demon-L...

Or, a thoughtful person has provided us with a Tiny URL:

http://tinyurl.com/penricsdemon


(four days later) B&N:

http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/penri...


And now also iTunes:

https://itunes.apple.com/us/book/penr...


Which reminds me, this might be a good occasion to cross-mention the nonfiction e-book:

http://www.amazon.com/Sidelines-Essay...

Which is also up on Nook and iTunes.


Ta, L.
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message 1: by Anne (new)

Anne Already downloaded to my Kindle from Amazon. What a good start to an intriguing story. I can already tell I am going to wish it was longer just for the pleasure of prolonging my time in Penric's company. Thank you so much, Lois. Write on!

Anne in Virginia


message 2: by Beate (new)

Beate Oh. Just love it. Thank you. It reminds me of the start of a Norwegian fairytails - where the younger son is kind to strangers - and all kind of wonderful gifts befalls him because of that. Not sure life with the Bastard is always a wonderful gift thought!


message 3: by Carynb (new)

Carynb Babstock Oh, can't wait to read the whole thing! Any chance you'll be publishing in the Kobo store as well?


message 4: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Carynb wrote: "Oh, can't wait to read the whole thing! Any chance you'll be publishing in the Kobo store as well?"

No plans for Kobo at this time.

Ta, L.


message 5: by Beate (new)

Beate And done! All of it. A very nice read, leaving me happy and content. Thank you!


message 6: by malnpudl (new)

malnpudl *grabby gimme hands*

I've bought it for Kindle and I am giddily anticipating the audiobook version! (Both. Must have both.)


message 7: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 07, 2015 01:43PM) (new)

Hi Lois,
So excited to read this, as Chalion is one of my favourite series ever. Hopefully I'll be able to use the B&N site when that goes up. I normally use Kobo, and have been very sad that your sidelines book is only available to kindle users.
However, I'm sure I'll figure out how to buy this one somehow! Probably.
-J

ETA: Turns out I cannot buy nookbooks with a Canadian address. So basically there's no way I can get this book. How disappointing.


message 8: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold malnpudl wrote: "*grabby gimme hands*

I've bought it for Kindle and I am giddily anticipating the audiobook version! (Both. Must have both.)"


An audiobook edition might be possible in the future, if Blackstone is interested -- they sometimes do odd stray shorter works, such as "Winterfair Gifts". But nothing is going on in that direction as yet. If "Penric" does really well in e-sales, who knows?

Ta, L.


message 9: by Lois (last edited Jul 07, 2015 12:41PM) (new)

Lois Bujold Just wrote: "Hi Lois,
So excited to read this, as Chalion is one of my favourite series ever. Hopefully I'll be able to use the B&N site when that goes up. I normally use Kobo, and have been very sad that your ..."



B&N should not be too laggard -- I'd give them a couple more days. iTunes is all over the map in lead-times, sometimes taking as long as three weeks to get things up. I have no idea why the assorted disparities in processing. But there will be alternate-to-Amazon choices along in a bit.

Ta, L.


message 10: by malnpudl (new)

malnpudl Lois wrote: "An audiobook edition might be possible in the future,..."

Thanks. I'll search for the title at Blackstone and at Audible every now and then. If they track search terms, it might help let them know there's interest.


message 11: by Tora (new)

Tora Yay, just bought it on amazon.co.uk! Only £2.99... now just need to figure out where my kindle is! Been re reading paper books recently, the horrors! ;-) Thanks, Lois! :-)


message 12: by Ed (new)

Ed Bear I have finished reading this story for the first, but certainly not the last time. Thank you, Good Lady, for mistressful storytelling filled with wonderful sights, gleeful humor, and true wisdom. I hope we shall see more of Penric and his ... guest.

Well done, ma'am. The five stars I gave it weren't *nearly* enough.


message 13: by Lois (last edited Jul 07, 2015 05:04PM) (new)

Lois Bujold Just wrote: "Hi Lois,
So excited to read this, as Chalion is one of my favourite series ever. Hopefully I'll be able to use the B&N site when that goes up. I normally use Kobo, and have been very sad that your ..."


Re: your PS: Well, you could download the free Kindle app from Amazon, and read the work on the same screen you are presumably looking at now.

You may not choose to go through that antler-dance, a choice I respect, but it is certainly not impossible

No idea when iTunes will get around to it.

bests, Lois.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Lois, that is indeed what I ended up doing. Antler dance indeed, but worth it, I expect.


message 15: by Amber (new)

Amber Finished, and almost sad. I'd have loved to hear about Penric in school. But it was lovely, and I'm so glad you gave us another story of the Five Gods. (And my favorite of them, too! I'm sure I shouldn't have favorites, but I confess I do.)


message 16: by Michaeline (new)

Michaeline Duskova Great novella! I need some time to digest it before I write reviews, but I am floating on a cloud of good fiction buzz. Thank you!

BTW, this is the first Bujold I read on my Kindle app. Some people complain that e-readers make it easier to forget the text, but I am learning to love the note function. I stop, I comment about the characters -- I had no arguments with the author this time (-:. The e-reading experience can be quite interactive.


message 17: by Brzk (new)

Brzk Lois! Bought and safely delivered to ALL possible kindle apps and devices, just to be sure I won't lose it somewhere...
Thank you!!!!! so much !


message 18: by David (new)

David Larsen I enjoyed this so much. BUT IT'S TOO SHORT. All your other short fiction (that I've read so far) has been about characters who get more time elsewhere. I was left badly wanting more of Pen & Desdemona. (And of that intriguing city-state.)


message 19: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Sheldon Bought from Kindle, and enjoyed very much. Admire your story-telling skills, as always. =)

I'm curious: did Ruchia - or the Bastard - engineer the meeting with Penric?


message 20: by Joshua (new)

Joshua Abell As the kids are wont to say these days:

SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEY!

:)

Thanks for working.


message 21: by Lmmcintire (new)

Lmmcintire Thank you for more hours of reading pleasure. I often feel guilty that I take the product of many hours of creative genius and race through it in a night. But it your case, I don't, because I know I will go back and reread again and again. I'm already on my second time through! P.S. Love the name Desdemona!


message 22: by Marilyn (new)

Marilyn Thank you for Penric and Desdemona - all of her. I bought it on Tuesday and read the same night. I enjoyed seeing a demon's point of view.


message 23: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Rachel wrote: "Bought from Kindle, and enjoyed very much. Admire your story-telling skills, as always. =)

I'm curious: did Ruchia - or the Bastard - engineer the meeting with Penric?"


Ruchia did not.

The Bastard, well, the gods work in mysterious ways. They are omnisentient, but not omnipotent.

Ta, L.


message 24: by Virginia (new)

Virginia Hooray!


message 25: by Keith (new)

Keith Osmond Lois wrote: "Carynb wrote: "Oh, can't wait to read the whole thing! Any chance you'll be publishing in the Kobo store as well?"

No plans for Kobo at this time.

Ta, L."


Well that's disappointing. And I can't find it at Chapters site either. Are there options for Canadian fans that don't require Kindle (or sitting and staring at a computer)?


message 26: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Keith wrote: "Lois wrote: "Carynb wrote: "Oh, can't wait to read the whole thing! Any chance you'll be publishing in the Kobo store as well?"

No plans for Kobo at this time.

Ta, L."

Well that's disappointing..."


At this time, it's Amazon Canada, iTunes, or Nook. I know the first two distribute in CA, not sure about Nook.

(At present, I find reading off a computer screen more comfortable than either paper or my Kindle, but that's because of the epiretinal membrane thing in my left eye which makes lines of print look like captchas. I also have a laptop that actually fits in my lap. YMMV.)

The e-market is constantly changing and evolving, so anything one says about it needs the codicil, "at this time" added. Rather like that game where one reads out one's fortune cookie and adds "in bed" to each.

bests, Lois.


message 27: by Christina (new)

Christina I immediately bought my e-copy as soon as I saw that it was available. I bought it via Amazon Germany (I live in Austria) and had no trouble at all. It's cases like this I am glad I got a kindle last April or I would miss out on this novella.
I enjoyed reading it but I quite agree with most of the other comments: you left us wanting more, Mrs. Bujold! Nonetheless it was deeply gratifying to read something new by you, as much as I love to re-read your books (and I own them all bar one), one can't help but want additions to the well-loved fantasy and sci-fi worlds you have created. best regards, Christina


message 28: by Lois (last edited Jul 13, 2015 09:56AM) (new)

Lois Bujold Christina wrote: "I immediately bought my e-copy as soon as I saw that it was available. I bought it via Amazon Germany (I live in Austria) and had no trouble at all. It's cases like this I am glad I got a kindle la..."


Well, I suppose that's better than leaving readers wanting less...

:-), L.

(Again, note, one doesn't need a Kindle to read the story; one can download the free Kindle app and read it on the same computer you may be reading this on now. Not sure if iTunes and Nook have similar apps -- users of those modes can chime in.)


message 29: by Jen (new)

Jen Johnson Thank you Lois for the wonderful story. May I echo others who would welcome more, more, more of the adventures of Pen & Des, should the whimsy strike you.

Silly question - does the story take place in the Cantons or the Weald, or even start in the one and end in the other? My mind has this weird geographical obsession.


message 30: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Jen wrote: "Thank you Lois for the wonderful story. May I echo others who would welcome more, more, more of the adventures of Pen & Des, should the whimsy strike you.

Silly question - does the story take plac..."


The Cantons, but in the historical model this is loosely! loosely! based upon, the country as such did not yet exist, various nascent city-states and other regions being divided up among assorted regional overlordships. It was still a world of realms.

Which still linger today -- see

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baarle-...

for a contemporary example of just how complex such divisions could be. (You need to scroll down to the town map, among other things.)

Ta, L.


message 31: by Jean (new)

Jean I love this, it was a perfect novella with great world building. I gave it to my husband to read, since he's another fan. He was enthusing about it and said, "I can't wait until the rest comes out." I told him that that was all there was. His comment was, "Now that's just mean." :)


message 32: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Jean wrote: "I love this, it was a perfect novella with great world building. I gave it to my husband to read, since he's another fan. He was enthusing about it and said, "I can't wait until the rest comes ou..."


Heh. But you have no idea what a relief it was to write something short...

Could be more, but that relies on having the Right Idea, which has not yet reported for duty. I'm thinking that going back to being retired again till the end of the summer would be quite nice. It was, after all, not being on edge and trying too hard that gave this room to come up in the first place.

Or I could do something else completely different, who knows?

Ta, L.


message 33: by Kate (new)

Kate Halleron I enjoyed it, too, although it felt more like 'Act One' than a fully realized fiction. Hope Acts 2 and 3 'come up' for you eventually (but I agree about not rushing the muse).

Had to buy from Amazon and do vaguely illegal things to it to get it onto my Kobo for reading. Can't read lengthy things on the laptop, too hard on the eyes.


message 34: by Douglas (last edited Jul 21, 2015 10:30PM) (new)

Douglas Ulrich I'm really entranced by the premise for this novella (sharing your head with a demon). Can you recommend any books that go along a similar vein?


message 35: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Douglas wrote: "I'm really entranced by the premise for this novella (sharing your head with a demon). Can you recommend any books that go along a similar vein?"

There have been lots, starting with our-world theories of demonic/divine possession of all sorts -- shamans and seers as well as those we now recognize as mentally ill or socially nonconforming, not to mention "split personality" now upgraded to something subtler, I believe -- and going on to many literary antecedents including SF-nal ones like Hal Clement's Needle and assorted AI-on-board stories. I recall Needle fondly (tho' it's been 50 years since I read it, so the recall is dimmed); other posters may chime in with more examples. There is also a sequence in Zelazny's Lord of Light on this theme.

The Hallowed Hunt explores a similar premise using animal spirits/ghosts, and the constructed hyperghosts of the "great animals" that make a shaman.

Whether such possession is presented as toxic or benign will depend on the views of the writer and the needs of the story.

Ta, L.


message 36: by Douglas (new)

Douglas Ulrich Lois wrote: "Douglas wrote: "I'm really entranced by the premise for this novella (sharing your head with a demon). Can you recommend any books that go along a similar vein?"

There have been lots, starting wit..."


Thanks for the recommendation of Needle! I enjoyed it.

Did you know Clement has written a sequel since then? "Through the eye of a needle"

-Douglas


message 37: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Douglas wrote: "Lois wrote: "Douglas wrote: "I'm really entranced by the premise for this novella (sharing your head with a demon). Can you recommend any books that go along a similar vein?"

There have been lots,..."


Yep, I knew there was a sequel -- I can't remember if I ever read it, though. Decomposed in the compost of my memory, if so.

Ta, L.


message 38: by Johan-Kristian (new)

Johan-Kristian Wold Raymond E. Feist' Chaoswar saga has a similar, but backwards concept -Two demons gets posessed by the spirits of two dead magicians.

Just bought the novella an put it on the "to read, once I'm finished with the three-book omnibus I'm reading now" list...


message 39: by Keith (new)

Keith Osmond Lois wrote: "Keith wrote: "Lois wrote: "Carynb wrote: "Oh, can't wait to read the whole thing! Any chance you'll be publishing in the Kobo store as well?"

No plans for Kobo at this time.

Ta, L."

Well that's..."


Broke down, loaded the Kindle App to my phone, and bought the novella from Amazon. Vacation starts in a week; expect I'll read it then - once I finish the book I'm currently reading. Looking forward to it - even on such a small screen!


message 40: by Sarah (new)

Sarah Holland By any chance, are there plans to have this on Google Play Books? thank so much, btw - new World of the Five Gods is wonderful!


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