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Oct 27, 2017 07:31PM

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I do, however, look forward to it. Here are the results of my
"ancillary checks." Thank you for the story.
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Pen suspected Surakos had been a lot more blunt
[/that][than] that. “We actually hope to borrow his
knowledge, as neither Madame Khatai nor I have even been to
Limnos, and he has. Everything has to start with
understanding both the physical layout and the human
defenses. The Order’s house cannot be as impenetrable as a
prison or a fortress, if it hosts visitors and pilgrims. Not
to mention the need for transporting food and supplies in
and out for its inhabitants—how many?”
Penric set down his case and satchel, passed the fold of his
dress’s draperies over his coiled black hair, and leaned
against the garden wall. Nikys did the same. At length, she
rested her head back upon the day-warmed stone and sighed,
“That may be the most forlorn hope I have ever witnessed.[”]
“Yes,” Nikys admitted. “Although after Adelis was blinded, I
had quite different reasons to be grateful I was there.[”]


I do, however, look forward to it. Here are the results of my
"ancillary checks." Thank you for the story.
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...and had you checked your Goodreads e-mail, we might have nailed those last week.
Give it a week to see what else is found, and I'll see if my e-helpers have the endurance for corrections.
sigh, L.

Errata: In iBooks, the title is shown as "The Prisoner of Limnos" in quotes. The others in the Penric series have no quotes around the titles.




None from me, anyway, apart from the pencil sketches in my notes.
Extending European geography, which I am not obliged to do with any rigor whatsoever, and in broad outline: Switzerland, Germany, a truncated sort of Italy-ish, and a peninsula which is sort of Greece and Italy munged together, well west of the Ibran peninsula. Turned upside down, but not right to left, and placed in the southern hemisphere of its world.
Ta, L.



That is wonderful news! I will pre-order both right now. Thank you!