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March 3, 2016
March 1, 2016
Review for "Mandy"
Reviewed By Jessyca Garcia for Readers’ Favorite
There are things that I really liked about Marcel Ray Duriez’s book A Panda Bear Named Mandy and there were some things I did not like. The story was cute and I liked that it rhymed but it came out too quickly. One page Mandy is in school, the next she is at a playground with her father. If the author can focus on one thing like Mandy goes to School or Mandy Spends a Day with Dad, then the story will make a little more sense and there could even be a Mandy series.
The way the story is written out is in a paragraph. If it was written in the form of a poem the story would flow better and children can see the rhyming words easier. This will make it a lot easier and more interesting for children to read.
The illustrations are hand drawn, which I like, but they do appear blurry at times. Some of the pictures are hard to see what exactly is happening in them. If there is a way to make them bigger and have the story’s words on top of them it might appear better. The story is short but it needs to be badly edited because there are a lot of spelling and punctuation errors in it. On page 3 it reads “lines casted”. It should say lines cast. On page nine the word is “grown” but it is supposed to say groan. These are just a couple errors that I am pointing out.
I like the idea that Mandy is a panda bear. There are not too many stories about panda bears out there. Once the story is edited better I am sure it will do well, especially with children just learning how to read.
Reviewed By Jessyca Garcia for Readers’ FavoriteThere are things (need a comma)that I really liked about (need a colleen) Marcel Ray Duriez’s book A (You need quotes around a book Tittle)“Panda Bear Named Mandy,”and there were (where should be are) some things I did not like. (Run on) The story was cute (need a comma) and I liked that it rhymed, but it came out too quickly. One page-“Mandy” is in school, and the next she is at a playground (need a comma) with her father. If the author can focus on one thing (need a comma) like Mandy goes to School or Mandy Spends a Day with Dad, then the story will make a little more sense (need a comma) and there could even be a “Mandy” series. (You don’t need caps there…?) With all do- respect you don’t have room to talk about my grammar or spelling here. I would as you need to work on not saying the word and over and also don’t have run on lines that ramble. Thank you for your thoughts… here were mine in red. Writer Comment: That is the point… short story with in one story.The way the story is (was past tense now lady) written out is in a paragraph. (,) If it was written in the form of a poems the story would flow better (need a comma) and children can (could) see the rhyming words easier. (…) This will make it a- lot easier (explain this wording for me) and more interesting for children to read.Writer Comment- Understandable- yet not practical to reads. The illustrations are hand drawn, which I like, but they do appear blurry at times. (This is on Amazon) Some of the pictures (need a comma) are hard to see (need a comma) what exactly is happening in them. (,) If there is a way to make them bigger (need a comma) and have the story’s words on top of them, it might appear better. (Not on the writer that is done by Kindle) On page 3 it reads (Need a colleen) “lines casted”. It should say lines cast. (Fragment) On page nine the word is “grown” but it is supposed to say groan. (At this point, looking at your work, I feel that a type-o is okay…) These are just a couple errors that (witch) I am pointing out. (I love that you say this- here when your period needs to come before the quotations!) That nice- thanks…I like the idea (need a comma) that “Mandy” is a panda bear. There are not too many stories about panda bears out there…? Once the story is edited better (need a comma) I am sure it will do well, especially with children… just (in) learning how to read.Marcel Ray Duriez
February 26, 2016
Cuddles in Spanish
You can now get Cuddles in Spanish- as a how to learn English kiddie book!
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February 25, 2016
Kinzua
Kinzua
In the spring of 1882, with 14 guys- lots of people gathered in the remote Allegheny Mountains to watch as a crew of the 2nd time there were 125 workers began building a bridge spanning the wild Kinzua Valley. In September, after just 94 working days, construction was completed. Nearly a mile long and as 3,000 ft. high as the Statue of Liberty taller then the Burj Bubai at the top, the Kinzua Viaduct was the greatest Kinzua the world tallest rail line, and would be yet again... if ever re-built and immediately dubbed the “Eighth Wonder of the World.” we need a about 40 million... lets see this stand and run trains over like in the past we need this!
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First built of iron in 1882, rebuilt in steel in 1900, partially destroyed by a tornado, and then reinvented as the Kinzua Sky Walk a piss poor take on what it was...
this amazing engineering marvel is Located within the Kinzua Bridge State Park, in Mt. Jewett, Pennsylvania. The Kinzua Sky Walk provides stunning vistas of the Kinzua Gorge at a height of 3,000 feet as you walk into the Kinzua Gorge.
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February 24, 2016
Comming soon a new Novel- Andy!
"Andy is an wired yet bright teenager whom is nerdy- and looks and meek demeanor to the others in his class- he make himself a favorite target her is dream girl and also the one that don't get him. His life at school seems to improve when he befriends Kerri, a cute new girl whom becomes his fast love interest, she protects him from harassment. In final a effort to impress her they both fall deep- and fast in cute love, trusting in each-other- for what they both really need." Marcel Ray Duriez- writer Find on e-book only as of now- Amazon.com/marcelduriez Twitter- @duriezmarcel #duriez
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