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Cuddles what they say

"The author's words beautifully, and help children to get into the reading habit. It's a good book that can be used for bedtime storytelling and it's also good for read aloud sessions in classrooms and school libraries. All the characters in the story have their own personality and they are made more effective and palpable to readers with the help of the illustrations."

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Book Questioner

Most of you are teen on my list pleas take the time to do this for me and post it blow thanks!
The MRD questioner- In teen books what do you think questioner-

1. Is it okay for teen to have or talk about sex?

2. How much blood and guts is too much- is killing okay?

3. Can we talk about a girl’s chest- or vagina? 

4. Would you read about the boys or girls sex-life if she is younger than 18? 

5. Do teens feel they need sex or drugs to feel popular?

6. What makes a girl or boy popular in school? 

7. Is it okay for a girl to date a girl, in a teen books?

8. What is a trash-ie novel to you?

9. Can you say F*ck in teen weighting, or bad words? and What the most you would say, or the words?

10. You as mom and dad- what would you say is okay, for your kids at 14 to read- like- list 5 books.

Is the Hunger Games teen reading? yes or no
Is Twilight/Host teen reading? yes or no

Is 50 Shads now teen reading?

Would Steven King books now be teen reading?

Would you say The Notebook- is Pre- teen reading?

What is now middle grad reading- and name a book?

Is Harry Potter a book for a 10 year old if so say if not say why?

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fun crap on cowrite unfinshed storys that may not ever see anything

 Me in red
Blood dripping Blood dripping, from here chest, she is scared to look down yet dose it anyways. She was thrown around the room by something dark. It wasn't a man, it was not a thing- it wasn't anything to speak of. It was unlike anything she’d ever seen before. What was it…? I ask dumbly- No face, No name, No body... what could it be, and what does it want with me?A lightning appeared in the sky, letting her see the gigantic outline of the grim reaper! Doing exercise help to boost the power energy But she could not boost it enough, not enough to escape from the... Thing. It was sucking the life out of her with its dark back lips. Slowly closing her eyes, she feels that something is not right... what is not right? The feeling's of lust, love, and huger of what’s right and wrong! Cowrite by Duriez

"It was a yearning to burn.” The computers and robots have taken over the world, nobody needs to read any of that shit, or think. Everything is at are fingertips with cell phones, I pads, and pc's, without looking though old dusty pages, plus Its agents the law to think for yourself, and read any books. We burn books like most have the burning itch to have unprotected sex. all in red is own by Marcel Ray Duriez
duriez is Marcel Ray Duriez see more at duriez19.wix.com/marcelrayduriez Pen Name of Marcel Ray Duriez- Jay J. Murray

Brokenhearted I just wish there was a girl in this world that loved me back. I just wish she knew. I just wish I could tell her. I just want her to know that I love her, and she not seeing that I do. I say I love her just because she hot, which she is; I say it because I mean it, or I want to feel it. I want to feel her love, and no not in a sensual way either, even though I would love too feel that too with her and only her.
Jay J, MurrayEverywhere I look I see her, I see her face, I see her driving by, and I hear her voice. Nevertheless I seem to find some way to blow it, like I have a hex of doing and saying dumb things around her. I can see her biting her lip, I can see her looking down shyly, I just want her to kiss me and never look but, I just want her to look into my eyes and see forever, and never let me go.

Believe me… if I knew you would have wanted it at the time, and if I wouldn’t have been so shy myself, I would have leaned over that cash register and kiss you, my fear is I am not sure if I suck at it or not. And I don’t want to embarrass you or me, in fount of your friends. Now I can't even step that way to even know, I just want to no why, and if. Why you blocked me out, and if you like me, or if you might ever love me. 
I remember... been fresh out of highschoolJay J, Murray
not a day over seventeen.Jay J, Murray
I had five cents to my name, I was still living at home, but not for long.Jay J, Murray
I was a virgin, to the world! I never saw anything other than farm land. I didn't know what I was in for. Yet I had to go...Jay J, Murray
Hitler was taking over, killing babies and baring them alive of all things.Jay J, Murray
I will never forget the sounds of the troop train steaming though, dropping off more maggots like me to kill the Nazi'. Knowing that ninety present of them would not make it back home.Jay J, Murray
I never thought I would live this long, and I never thought young-ins would doubt the war and the holocaust. I have seem men, woman, and kids being lined up on their knees and shot in the back of the head, for no reason at all. It’s incredible, tragic, and despicable, how one man’s loathing can start so much destruction. I do believe that history is going to repeat; it’s just a matter of time.Jay J, Murray
I just hope I can fish this story with you all, before I am fished myself.Jay J, Murray
New start: 
It was the summer of love, sex, drugs and rock and roll. Flower power was in the air, and I had hippie long hair. This is what I remember about the summer love in 1969.
Jay J, Murray


Jim Morison was flashing his man-hood, and taxing way to Paris, Hendrix was rewriting The Star Spangled Banner in a high voltage screech. “Man- You could feel it in the air people whited to fight or f-ck, love or kill. Vietnam was right outside the door... love, drug, or hug… Man- sides were being selected. The world was yelling for change, girl run naked in the mud, baby’s sucking away no one cared, and there were orgy every ware you look, and girls that would blow your mind for free. Humorous it seems like you were tripping over something and on something- man. All the colors- man, do you see the colors when you look in to the eyes of the sun- man, look without far- man or it will kill you- man. 69-man! Far-Out!”
Jay J, Murray
 New start:
I Have a Secret and that is that I am...
I am not your typical spy, I am fifteen years young, and I go to Lake-view catholic high school. Most spies have guns or weapons…. Me- I have a plaid skirt and braided pigtails. I have a new mission!My code name is Samantha Love, I have been sent to go to this new high school "Springier high". I got that name in the force because all the boys, I spy on my fall for me. I mean I can see why just look at me, I there dream girl really. I am a teen age girl that is a spy.
I am a writer and co writerpoet & author... Writing fantasy series for young adults and historical fiction and more. Jay J.MurrayI am a writer and co writerpoet & author... Writing fantasy series for young adults and historical fiction and more.Pen Name
  I am a writer and  co writer

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Jared Smorto- Book Reviwe, By: Marcel Ray Duriez

Jared Smorto- is a younger writer in Northern Cambria Pa. With five short e-Books- containing five or so chapter with-in the stories. His passing is too slow, or so I feel, and the story line drags some; nevertheless, he has better gamer- then most, that I see in the industry today. I see- lots of run-on’s as well as fragments, backwards understandings, and wired wordings. Up till now the word choices are fine, yet noting that grabs you and hold you there. Yet not complete suck… for a freelance writer! That doing this shit for fun. Remember that… if you don’t have a talent- of anything.  Smorto- has one style, which I see, and that is gross the shit out of you. As of now the style stay as it was in his starting days, and that is dark horrifying strategies. I want to see more, about other things. Branch out and do that… that is if you feel the need too. Cover art on all needs books need work that well stop me from buying this lit., all the books or short stories lack luster, approaches, and into it depth. Covers not done to my likening, or that of the reads- or so that is speculation. Here is the definition for those that have not talent un-like Smorto and I- “The forming of a theory or conjecture without firm evidence.” Advice: “Don’t be an ass-hole about things you’re not smart enough to understand, it makes you look dumb.” Pricing is right at 99 cents- Mary Sue MC’s, is what we have here on all. The Master Isn't Dead: A Short Story, way too long run-ons, with nothing really saying anything, besides- no real story either- editing wise this one was not bad at all. A dark romance also- this book is one endless, feverish, terrifying nightmare, like them all, yet get on with it… The fact that there are no real chapters makes it seem even worse to readers- (speculation.) What we have is- violence’s dominating, lack of story line; with the over usage of bloody gut gore. This is not how to get a story to work for you- at only 30 pages; I have a book out with the same count, I do not call that a novel or a short story- or a novel, like- it is not even a novel until it has over 55,000 words. Novelette 7,500 to 17,500 words, so you do Novelette- adult hard to get read’s for this… when its YA. 5 grad reading is what I see- and yet- I read high then that also- just as he see too. His works are sometimes confusing, for from me- but to those that don’t understand. Okay- disturbing character- I like- yet some might not get… if they want to or not. Where are your demographics…?  I said what your weighting for- above- your age groping come a- crossed as teen, your weighting like a teen here, yet the story line is higher for the content. This is not YA but has that feel, thus far that is whom is buying this… Teens or YA. I give this man a- lot of credit for doing this, it’s nice to see someone rise from the shit pile- as I, and do something in this town that is that is noble; for all of you that give him shit- where are your books, or something of like stancher…?  Not bad for a NC back ground were the teachers don’t have what we do… However I look at my own shit and say the same. I did okay… for doing it all own my own! – as he did… Back to the reading they are a never-ending nightmare, because it gives you a weird kind of hope, which is sick and twisted. The story is good, but the style of writing he used is dull. Saggy middles- okay starts- and fast ending that just stop. I feel like it is something I have read time and time again. Moving on- 79-year-old Lee Jamison is trialed for causing sexual harassment to a young girl, you lost me with the age… I get it also- but this is teen reading right? B.S. Just say bull shit- dude! The synopsis doesn’t say or scream “read me!” “Foolish and stupid dream…” is a fuck you to the reader, which is just a thought that is speculation, that is all I can do said some of lesser intelligence… “Gross!” said some- I questioned, of his work, with- in this dump of a town. “Yes” and “No” - I say- I get it, but then maybe not, I don’t see the point… of this graphic bloody- photo that is like Carrie or the tower- that goes on… that… looks… like… something… that… is… not so- well… good…! I see 30 pages only, I want to see more… if you can. And ; a semicolon come before the parenthesis this is what you have in your editing ); wrong- No it is like this ;) okay… an indent is only five spaces… MLA okay thanks. You need an editor that all I will say- good work though… keep doing this. I see this too-  ”. wrong. Review- By Marcel Ray Duriez

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