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March 27, 2011
Tips for Restless Writers
Are we getting wired differently because of modern distractions? I'm not sure, but I know that it's hard for me to sit still for very long. I just get very restless.
There are plenty of writers out there that have amazing discipline and can sit for hours at their computer each day, knocking out their word goals. I'm not one of them. I always make my goals, but I've had to meet them on my terms. In case you're a restless writer too, this post is for you. :)
Here are some tips for handling restless writer syndrome:
Make a list of all the other non-writing-related things that need to be done before starting a writing session. For me, the more exhaustive this list is, the more emptied-out my head is and the better I can focus on my writing. On this list, I'll include everything from household chores, to my children's activities, to emails I need to send, groceries I need to buy, phone calls I should make, etc. The list includes whatever I can think of that might pop up and distract me while I'm writing.
I came across a post last week on the WorkAwesome blog: The Path to Productivity: Short Hours, More Breaks. The post quoted a recent study that found:
Rather than diminishing productivity, short breaks allow people to maintain their focus on a task without the loss of quality that normally occurs over time.
So taking short breaks sounds like a good way of approaching tasks (at least for some of us). But the article warns against checking Facebook, etc., during your break. They recommend choosing an activity that's something you can easily break away from (and maybe setting yourself a timer as a reminder that your break is over.)
Do other writing-related tasks if you're in a time crunch or under deadline. I'll switch from the manuscript I'm writing to one that I'm editing. Or I'll switch to a brainstorming activity for a new project. That way I'm still being creative, still getting all the writing done that I need to do—but I'm shaking it up a little. It's good to also have a short to-do list of writing related tasks. Right now, mine has on it: edit chapter on next Myrtle Clover, brainstorm 5 minutes for outline, and add character descriptions to quilting WIP.
Open up to the possibilities of writing on the go during the day. If I told myself that my writing was only going to happen at a specific time of the day, on my laptop, then I wouldn't get nearly as much done. I remind myself at the beginning of the day that I'm collecting sights, sounds, words, and characters for my story. It helps me be more observant.
Move around. Some of my better ideas happen when I'm moving around. I write in my head as I clean the house, run errands, garden, and walk. If I'm feeling particularly restless, I'll try an activity that doesn't require a lot of thought (weeding, vacuuming, cooking familiar recipe) and I'll write my book in my head as I do it.
Reduce up front the amount of time you're writing before taking your breaks. Consider writing in 15 minute segments. Will you lose your train of thought this way? In my experience, no. If I worry I will, I just jot down in the margin in Track Changes where I want the next scene to go. Then I run off and put the laundry in the dryer, start the dishwasher, and come back to the manuscript.
Are you a restless writer too? How do you stay productive?
March 26, 2011
Twitterific
Here are writing links that I've posted to Twitter in the last week.
I'm delighted that now we have an efficient method of locating resources on writing topics when you need them—via the Writer's Knowledge Base search engine and software engineer and writer Mike Fleming's ingenuity. The links I tweet (which are writers' blogs, agents' and editors' blogs) all are added to the engine to make it easier for you to access the information you're looking for.
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Creating non-violent conflict in your story: http://bit.ly/h9kdoY
What to do when the words won't flow: http://bit.ly/f2j6hY
Proper Dialog Placement: http://bit.ly/f9L0dw
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Identifying Your Themes: http://bit.ly/eHDiwB
Place in the Novel: Setting or Character: http://bit.ly/fNGWfv
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Let Your Senses Do The Walking And Talking: http://bit.ly/i1ZQq5
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What Writing Teaches Us About Parenting: http://huff.to/fK6ZNO
Noted Self-Publisher (Amanda Hocking) May Be Close to a Book Deal (NY Times): http://nyti.ms/fpwF7P
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The Anatomy of a Successful Ebook Giveaway: http://bit.ly/dMH4Fu
Dealing with Agents and Publishers: http://bit.ly/edVnau
10 Reasons Why Authors Love Ebooks: http://bit.ly/gs8i1x @thecreativepenn
Tips for Tackling the Final Proof: http://bit.ly/gE8dm1
Written in stone? Editing your backlist books for reissue as ebooks: http://bit.ly/gN1mlS
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Creating and Writing Compelling Villains: http://bit.ly/eBzNu3
Different paths to the same goal: http://bit.ly/hZTLUG
Why (Most) Publishers Are Still In New York: http://bit.ly/fLhI6t
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Titles. Or Not. http://bit.ly/eq3MZf
The Simple 5-Step Formula for Effective Online Content: http://bit.ly/fxjj2S
Embracing inconsistency as a writer: http://bit.ly/gjTWDV
Battling the Romance Novel Stigma: http://bit.ly/eLtlLd
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Self-editing checklist--scene analysis: http://bit.ly/fCwBjx
How to Balance Blogging and Your Day Job (while still growing your blog): http://bit.ly/hd0CZo
Secret Recipe for a Novel: http://bit.ly/fJrvr5 @4kidlit
Making Dialogue Dynamic: http://bit.ly/fzA9Fp
Deep-Tissue Critique: 4 Ways to Make It Hurt So Good: http://bit.ly/dYmUVq @mesummerbooks
2 debut novelists talk about the necessity of thick skin: http://bit.ly/dOUCgA @4kidlit
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Writing Can Be Learned—But It Can't Be Taught: http://bit.ly/fy8wKT
The Real Story Behind Pacing: http://bit.ly/i2Upow @joanswan
Punctuation in dialogue: http://bit.ly/gByXKe
How to fight spring fever and get some writing done: http://bit.ly/fkZRQW
10 Reasons Why You Should Be Blogging: http://huff.to/dNVf46
Writers should focus on the positive: http://bit.ly/gC88mg @thecreativepenn
7 things one author has learned so far: http://bit.ly/gwuDbS
The Return of the Live Event for Book Promotion: http://bit.ly/gVKbpf
4 Organizational Tools for Writing: http://bit.ly/ec2MjZ
Why Blogging Might Be Killing You, And How to Fight Back: http://bit.ly/hE1roi
58 Habits That Will Help You Succeed: http://bit.ly/gRKHdU
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Chicken Crescent Rolls http://bit.ly/gzffKE @CleoCoyle
Brewing up Inspiration: http://bit.ly/g6yqt2
Repurpose: Get More Mileage from Your Blog Posts: http://bit.ly/elgocF
Twitter Quitter: http://bit.ly/hSTCKC
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Mystery Writer's Guide To Forensic Science - Collecting Evidence VI: http://bit.ly/fuQBra
How The World of Star Trek Taught One Author How to Write: http://bit.ly/hZAnEm
Living Your Myth: Mishima And Dying For Your Convictions: http://bit.ly/fn2AxZ @agent139
Polishing vs. Fixing: http://bit.ly/evau97
10 ways to reach "the end": http://bit.ly/i8zt3g @elspethwrites
5 Pickles to Write Yourself Into: http://bit.ly/hqhbFO
Top 10 reasons freelancers need to take a vacation: http://bit.ly/ePvRq5
9 tips for conferences: http://bit.ly/gDBnfj @authorterryo
Can Editing Be Fun? Maybe. http://bit.ly/gFbZYO
Avoiding passive prose: http://bit.ly/hsAdBo
Bestselling Author Turns Down $500K Deal to Self-Publish: http://bit.ly/ibo7D6
7 Uneasy Coercion Tactics That Will Force You to Write: http://bit.ly/ft57tX
The Care And Feeding Of Your Favorite Authors: http://bit.ly/eMzHgX
Combating Writer's Envy: http://bit.ly/eyDUmo
How to Make Your Free eBook a Magnet for New Readers: 5 Crucial Tips: http://bit.ly/fTZxrd
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Writing Tools: Scrivener: http://bit.ly/eHsP5H
Back to Basics, part III: Maintaining Self-Confidence: http://bit.ly/hqiXHL
The Solace of Dark Novels and Memoirs: http://huff.to/eUeYMw
One Art, Please. I Have 99 cents: http://bit.ly/fbtZZl
How to speak publisher - B is for bind-up : http://bit.ly/gkyaTN
Young Adult Books and Their Readers: http://bit.ly/fakJVx
A Side Order of Stupid: http://bit.ly/exAXug
Formatting Your Documents for the Kindle in 8 Steps: http://bit.ly/eEXwD1
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: A Writer's Snack: Crust-Free Pizza from Cleo Coyle http://bit.ly/f10StK @CleoCoyle
Writing exercise--write a letter: http://bit.ly/gdBN0Y
Should you argue with your publisher over your cover? http://bit.ly/feCp8v
5 ways to be a crap literary agent: http://bit.ly/gBHSw8 @jammer0501
Where to find your interestingness as a writer + blogger + ruler of your domain: http://bit.ly/dIzHX4
A Character-driven Approach to Kissing Scenes and Sex Scenes: http://bit.ly/ffd9Bt
The best way to get a literary agent's attention on Twitter: http://bit.ly/fQJHyw
To Conference or Not To Conference? http://bit.ly/ggDWzZ @authorterryo
Forget the Writing Rules: http://bit.ly/fyhqvj
Hardworking vs. talented: http://bit.ly/f4xWoO
Authors, be careful not to overpay for POD services: http://bit.ly/ibwT9u
Best Tweets for Writers (week ending 3/18/11): http://bit.ly/hBVbfM
When Your Agent Isn't Feeling the Love: http://bit.ly/gsETo3
Strategic tweeting for authors: http://bit.ly/h0IXXX
Bios: Stumbling on self-intros: http://bit.ly/ghVvC3
Best and Worst Agent & Editor Advice: Part 2: http://bit.ly/i4KYLc
Using Text to "Enhance" E-books and Other Insights from the 2011 Leipzig Book Fair: http://bit.ly/f4PzuG
When Your Can't Write What You Love to Read: http://bit.ly/f78cl3
Why Vague Writing Is Weak Writing: http://bit.ly/eJ1u5W
Fiction within fiction – made-up worlds and stories inside stories: http://bit.ly/fjJgB2
The Five Stages of Editing: http://bit.ly/eTgYbu
What to do when you get an agent call: http://bit.ly/dQVkoJ
Plotting Through Goals: http://bit.ly/gn4OlK
Style sheets: http://bit.ly/gfvu7T
A synopsis checklist: http://bit.ly/hroF7w
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Gone to the Dogs -- Crock Pot Barbecue http://bit.ly/fwpAkS @CleoCoyle
How to format a query letter: http://bit.ly/hkXDoK
Tell, Don't Show: http://bit.ly/fzpmNS
An agency with a publishing dictionary: http://bit.ly/dDXIZh
Dos and Don'ts of Combining Genres: http://bit.ly/flwgvE
Where the editors are in 2011: http://bit.ly/hrVjST
Revising by color: http://bit.ly/ekuFgE
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March 25, 2011
When Good Characters Do Thoughtless Things
I always enjoy hearing from my readers. In fact, my readers' comments can really influence my writing.
I've heard from a couple of readers since Pretty is as Pretty Dies was released in 2009 that they disagreed with a character's actions in one scene. I'll try to be a little vague here, since I don't want to write in any spoilers.
My protagonist, octogenarian Myrtle Clover, was attacked and was rescued by a new neighbor who was, basically, a stranger to her because he'd recently moved in.
Myrtle and her police officer son, Red, have a little bit of a prickly relationship. They love each other, but they get on each others' nerves. Badly. Myrtle is irritated by her son's meddling. She insists on her independence and some respect. Red is irritated that Myrtle puts herself in bad situations and interferes in things he'd rather see her leave alone.
The new neighbor, after rescuing Myrtle, calls her son. It's very late at night and Red is awakened by the call. He comes over, hears her story, fusses over her. They nettle each other a little. Myrtle stubbornly decides to stay with her neighbor who has fixed them coffees. Red goes back home and goes back to bed.
He shouldn't have left her, say these readers.
It wasn't a case of character motivation—if it was, then I'd definitely be paying attention. These two have something of a contentious relationship. The main reason for the tension is Myrtle's desire to be taken seriously. She wants respect and independence. She wouldn't have appreciated being carted back to her home by Red unless she wanted to go there.
But the readers disagreed with Red's actions. They thought he was being thoughtless. That he wasn't being a good son by not protecting her…regardless of whether she wanted that protection or not.
Both times the readers asked me about this, it was in person. Which is unfortunate because both times my automatic response was, "Oh, I totally understand what you're saying. But that was the character's choice. That's what he chose to do. He was being thoughtless."
Acting like our characters are alive is probably one of those things that gives writers a reputation for being a little crazy.
But I knew that this was a thoughtless, inattentive thing that this particular character would do in that circumstance.
I've thought about this a little lately, mainly because I'm about to address a book club in South Carolina in a couple of weeks for this book, and want to be prepared with something a little better to say than, "But that's what the character did."
I still really believe this nice guy would be thoughtless in this circumstance. Here it is, the middle of the night and he's been pulled out of bed. He's irritated, scared for his mother's safety, and she's still harping at him about how she's completely fine and he needs to stop his fussing. I think I laid the groundwork in the early part of the book for him to behave that way. It doesn't seem to be to be out of character, but it seems like something he'd do when tired, grouchy, and generally out of sorts.
When he was having a bad day.
What I think I would do if I wrote the book over again, is that even though I set up the motivation and the groundwork, I needed to have some sort of repercussion for that behavior.
My readers were outraged for Myrtle. I'm glad they liked her enough to want to protect her. They were quite fierce, both times, when they brought it up. I appreciated it.
I listen carefully to my editors' ideas. I listen really carefully to my readers'.
I think there's sometimes an urge when we're reading books, or maybe in life too, to see someone pay for a mistake. Even just a mild one. Or at least to get told off for it.
If I had to write it again, I'd have Red's wife take him down a notch, when he got back home: "You did what? Left her over with some new neighbor she's never met? After she's been attacked? What?"
Because vengeance can be sweet.
So, summing up, I think the better approach for having a nice guy (not, in this case, the protagonist, but an important character) behave thoughtlessly is to not only lay the groundwork for this type of behavior, but to have some sort of repercussion for this behavior or some sort of dressing down for it later.
Have you ever had a good guy do something thoughtless or imprudent? How did you approach it?
March 24, 2011
Beta Readers
I think I've mentioned before that my writing is a fairly solo process up until my deadline.
I really do look at my books as collaborative efforts between me, my agent, and the editorial staffs at my publishers. I'm open to suggestions, I'm happy to make changes or substitutions. Want to send the plot off in another direction? I'm game. Want me to write in a character or kill one off? I'm your writer. If you have an idea, I can write it and we can see what happens. Try me!
But I don't really have the beta readers in on the drafting process. I should. It would definitely help me out.
The reason I don't, I think, is because I'm frequently working on more than one project at once and my drafts are disasters. Right now I'm editing two different manuscripts and writing a requested synopsis for the second book of the new series. I'm under several deadlines.
I know what's going on in my draft. I make cryptic notes to myself with Track Changes in the margins. I know that there are huge sections that are out of place. I know that there are unintentional cliffhangers that lead off into nothingness. It all makes sense…to me. And I know in my head exactly how I'm going to fix it.
It wouldn't make sense to anyone else though. My cryptic notes in the margins don't even make sense unless you can get inside my head. And that's why I'm really reluctant to share it out.
My next deadline is June 1. When I was in Anderson, SC, last weekend, I gave my mother the manuscript. She needs to edit on paper, so I carefully printed it out for her.
This time I actually thought ahead and tried to be considerate. Ordinarily, there are no page numbers on the document, and no chapter breaks. :) And this time, the manuscript was even sort of in order.
But… "Mama?" I said. "The only thing is that the ending won't make sense."
"Oh, it's one of those endings where you have to think about it and figure it out?" she asked.
"No, I mean it's really just an incomplete ending. Like—not finished. But no worries! It's all under control!"
You can only do something like this to your mother. Here's a book. Please read it very carefully from start to finish, the sooner the better. But you'll have to make up your own ending because it's not included.
If I gave that mess to my agent, I can only imagine what she'd say. She's a little more worried about endings that don't make sense or endings that are completely AWOL. Since our livelihoods are somewhat tied together, I can understand why she'd be concerned.
I've had some great offers from beta readers and I really do mean to take advantage of them…when my manuscripts are a little more orderly. The only problem is that by the time they're orderly, I'm right up on the deadline. And it's not very nice to ask someone to critique a book in three days time. :)
So…I'm dumping it all on my poor mother. Because mothers take on stuff like that! She's a special kind of first reader.
So this is my question for you—if you use a beta/first reader, what kind of condition is your manuscript in when you hand it over? Do you have different kinds of beta readers—some who you could dump a messy manuscript on, some who get a more finished product? If you don't have a beta reader, why not? Is it just a matter of not finding one, not having time to return critiques, or another reason altogether?
March 23, 2011
Different Paths to the Same Goal
My daughter missed a week of school last week because she had a mysterious fever virus that wouldn't go away.
Most unfortunately, her 4th grade class learned how to simplify, compare, and order fractions during that time. Sans her.
Even more unfortunately, there is a new way to do this math.
Not that I was even great at doing it the old way.
On Monday, when she came home with her fractions homework, I attempted to show her how to simplify fractions…the only way I knew how.
It wasn't the way the teacher wanted the class to simplify fractions. She was supposed to do something to do with fact families maybe? And finding multipliers? Something like that? Or factors? Something?
At any rate, it boiled down to the fact that I was approaching the task in a completely different way from her teacher. This made her feel both frustrated (with the assignment, her teacher, and me) and worried about solving the problems.
I could get the right answer (amazingly) when I simplified 24/108. But she needed to arrive at the answer differently.
When writing a book, you can choose to outline…or not. You can edit as you go…or not. You can research at the beginning of your project, at the end, or not at all. You can favor writing plot-focused books or character-focused ones.
The different approaches don't stop there. Let's say that you finally chose the methods that worked for you and now you've got a finished manuscript. Do you query it? Do you consider self-publishing it? Do you put it out as an e-book?
It's enough to make your head spin.
I read an article a couple of days ago on Jane Friedman's Writer's Digest blog , There Are No Rules, about NYT Bestselling author Barry Eisler's decision to turn down a $500k deal from St. Martin's to self-publish his book.
Now that's a different approach. But it's the kind of thing I'm hearing more and more about.
Sometimes I'm tempted to feel like my daughter with the different approaches for simplifying fractions—bewildered and frustrated and uncertain of the right way to continue.
But then I remind myself that our books all end up at the same place—in the hands of our readers. What's important, ultimately, isn't how we got there but the quality of the books that we're giving them.
What matters is the end-product: whether it's a correct math problem or a page-turning novel.
Do you find the different choices and approaches in writing and publishing confusing? How do you find the right path?
March 22, 2011
How to Fight Spring Fever and Get Some Writing Done
Today I'm over at "A Good Blog is Hard to Find," blogging on some ways to keep motivated when you'd rather be looking out the window.
Hope you'll join me (and that you're having some nice weather where you are.)
March 21, 2011
Improvisation in Life and Writing
Last weekend I was heading to Anderson, SC, to visit my parents and have a radio interview with a local radio personality there. He'd told me just to contact him whenever I planned a trip to see my folks and he'd tape an interview.
My daughter was sick all last week with a fever, so I emailed him at the last minute, "Sorry for the last-minute email, but I'm going to be in Anderson this weekend. Would you like to schedule an interview?"
He emailed me back, and asked me to call him at a particular number—different from the one I had on file for him.
"Could you come to the hospital for our interview?" he asked. "I've been here for a week now and I don't have next week's show booked—actually, your visit is working out perfectly."
"Can you even do an interview at the hospital?" I asked. I was feeling a little uncertain about the whole thing.
"Sure I can. I've already done one this week for the show that's running tomorrow. If you don't mind, it would work out great for me."
So we did. The interview went great—we just passed the microphone back and forth between each other. I've never actually done a face to face radio interview before and I was pleased at how well it went. Usually when I do a radio interview, I'm on the phone and not even in the same state as the interviewer.
In some ways, the in-person radio interview was easier than the phone interviews I've usually done. On the phone, I'm always listening hard for any clues that I need to shush up and move on to the next subject. When you're face to face with your radio interviewer, you get visual clues to wrap up a particular train of thought. (Hurry up motions).
At one point in the interview, I was asked about how I'd ended up writing for both Midnight Ink and Penguin Berkley. I started talking about slush piles and the interviewer held up his hands and mouthed, "Tell them what a slush pile is!" That's something that wouldn't have happened in a phone-in radio interview—it wouldn't have occurred to me that I was using jargon. So I quickly interjected an explanation.
The interview wrapped up well and afterward the interviewer told me to let him know when I was back in town for a signing and he'd get some local TV coverage for it. I might have gulped a little, but told him that sounded great.
I'm not really a great spur-of-the-moment, go-with-the-flow type of person. I like to organize and plan and apply my Type A self to the process. I like everything to be very orderly.
But I'm learning to go with the flow. One thing that's helping me is a book I downloaded on my Kindle last week. In fact, it was the book that helped me tell the interviewer we'd go ahead with the interview instead of rescheduling it for another time.
While I was reading blogs last week, I came across a post on Tribal Writer that mentioned the book Improv Wisdom by Stanford professor Patricia Ryan Madson.
The Tribal Writer post mentioned the book as a way to combat procrastination. I don't need help with that, but I do think I need help with being a little more flexible. Madson recommends that we say "yes" more often in life and see what happens.
From the Publishers Weekly review:
If you improvise, she says, you "will make more mistakes" but you'll also "laugh more often, and have some adventures." Here she offers 13 maxims to guide the fledgling improviser. "Say yes" … it will open up new worlds. "Don't prepare": in focusing on the future, you might miss the present. "Start anywhere": take any entry into a problem, and once you get inside you'll have a better perspective.
I think that I've got a very cautious voice inside me that wants to say "no" until I have a chance to absorb what I'm facing. I've noticed that I'm a lot more flexible when it comes to my writing—and it always works out really well. When I let characters propel my story in surprising ways, I'm usually pleased with the results.
And I'm discovering that I'm also making new discoveries whenever I step outside my comfort zone with life, too. That might be stretching myself with promo (book tour, interviews, etc.) but it might be just growing as a writer by saying yes to a variety of new experiences and people.
I liked this approach for a variety of stumbling blocks—whether it's procrastination or uncertainty about how to approach a difficult scene…or being more outgoing with marketing. Saying yes, focusing on the present, and jumping in to tackle our obstacles sounds like a good way to move forward. And we might end up with more opportunities along the way—opportunities to network and find inspiration with people and situations that we come across.
How often do you step outside your comfort zone? Are you more flexible in your life and writing, or a little more cautious?
March 20, 2011
Hardworking vs. Talented
Recently, I spoke to an acquaintance of mine. She asked about my upcoming books, and I told her about the releases that I have this year in June and November.
"I'm both pleased for you and jealous of you," she said to me. "You're doing exactly what I'd have liked to have done, but didn't do."
I've heard that kind of statement before, and I'm always taken aback by it. If we're alive and ticking, it's never too late. It's not. I always remember everyone reading And Ladies of the Club in the 1980s. It became a best-selling novel—50 years in the making. The book's author, Helen Hoover Santmyer, was 88 years old at the time of the release.
I did mention that it was never too late, but she told me that, for her, it was. I told the lady I was speaking with what I usually say in this situation: "Getting published is a combination of persistence, hard work, talent, and luck. The most important things are hard work and persistence."
It made me wonder what made her stop writing. Why had she given up on her dream of publishing a book?
There was an interesting study that I recently read about, involving children and their success with different tasks. The title for the study findings, released by two authors from Columbia University, is: "Praise for Intelligence Can Undermine Motivation and Performance."
The study found that a group of children that had excelled at an activity and then been told they'd done well because they were smart had frequently done poorly the next time they'd been tested. They had no control over being smart—and being told they were smart, the children were concerned that the next test would show they were less-competent than they'd been told. The study stated:
They are also afraid of effort because effort makes them feel dumb. They believe that if you have the ability, you shouldn't need effort (Blackwell, Trzesniewski, & Dweck, 2007), that ability should bring success all by itself.
It makes me wonder if some writers give up on writing, thinking it's necessary to have a tremendous writing gift. And, if they run into a wall with their writing, they're quick to assume they don't have the gift and shouldn't waste their time.
I think, clearly, there's got to be some talent there to write a publishable book. But I also feel that you can learning writing —and vastly improve your ability and potential for being published by reading novels in your area of interest and by learning writing skills via writing blogs or classes.
This is where I think the hard work and persistence comes in. Yes, there needs to be some talent there. Not everyone is going to be picked up by a traditional publisher. But I do feel like everyone can improve, and that many writers can improve enough to be publishable.
Adding an element of determination and hard work (and, in this business, patience) and I feel like it's a combination that can serve to get a writer published.
Being told it's talent only (the equivalent of the children being told they were successful because they were smart)? I don't think that's true.
Clearly there are many different reasons why some writers give up writing. Sometimes they might be overwhelmed with other things in their life, sometimes they just don't prioritize writing high enough on the list to finish a book. But I hate to think that there might be writers out there who think that they just haven't 'got it.' Because I really believe it's possible to vastly improve, whether you've 'got it' or not.
What do you think? For the majority of writers on the shelves today—was it pure talent? Was it mainly hard work and persistence? It was probably both—but was it 50-50 talent/hard work? Or did it weigh more on one side than the other?
March 19, 2011
Twitterific
Here are writing links that I've posted to Twitter in the last week.
I'm delighted that now we have an efficient method of locating resources on writing topics when you need them—via the Writer's Knowledge Base search engine and software engineer and writer Mike Fleming's ingenuity. The links I tweet (which are writers' blogs, agents' and editors' blogs) all are added to the engine to make it easier for you to access the information you're looking for.
Interested in a monthly newsletter with the top writing articles, blogger spotlights, and interviews with industry insiders? Sign up for the free WKB newsletter here: http://hiveword.com/wkb/newsletter . (You can unsubscribe at any time, and your email information is never shared.)
Creativity Tweets of the Week – 03/18/11: http://bit.ly/dPx1Ce
A Million Ways Not to Write a Book: http://bit.ly/eKWDSR
Creating Active Characters in YA Novels: http://bit.ly/hQlF7i
Over 6000 links to help #writers find resources: http://bit.ly/dYRayA
9 Writer Woes and the Books to Cure Them: http://bit.ly/e17eHE
Self-Editing at the Story Level: http://bit.ly/er3SeS
Description--Fictional Characters and Setting: http://bit.ly/heEMMm
On embracing our strengths: http://bit.ly/gM2fil
Forget PowerPoint! How to Deliver Awesome Presentations: http://bit.ly/hb1DjC
Best articles this week for writers 3/18/11: http://bit.ly/eXlXH9 @4kidlit
Getting the Most Out of Your Main Character: http://bit.ly/fuawB3
Be a writing rebel--break some rules: http://bit.ly/i8oDXX @4kidlit
15 Exercises You Can Do Sitting In Front Of Your Computer: http://bit.ly/dXR964
Author Voice vs. Character Voice - Finding Both: http://bit.ly/ijwbD6
Writing prologues that work: http://bit.ly/dRB4At
How non-conformist characters have spiced up crime fiction: http://bit.ly/giOWyA @mkinberg
Avoiding self-evident statements: http://bit.ly/eo3v2s
How one set of co-authors got their agent: http://bit.ly/eBtLs0
Crits for Water Campaign: http://bit.ly/e5hUg2 @janicehardy
Writing through it: http://bit.ly/eBmuoD
Do writers have to be closers? http://bit.ly/funVeW
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Julie's EAT HEALTHY French fries http://bit.ly/hWCOKF @CleoCoyle
The Power of Peer Recommendations & Reviews: http://bit.ly/gjCV9J
How to Use Dialogue to Avoid Lengthy Info Dumps: http://bit.ly/hH6ziW
5 Writing Excuses You Should Eliminate Now: http://bit.ly/h2XsQL
Blogging-The New Fast Food of Writing: http://bit.ly/gueGxC
Use the delete key--9 places to start whacking at your words: http://bit.ly/i7RK6R
Newspaper Guild Calls for Unpaid Huffington Post Writers To Strike: http://bit.ly/gcoO0A
Screenwriting tips for novelists: http://bit.ly/fwDawC @writerWyoming
Writers' Tools: The Whiteboard: http://bit.ly/gkAxPM @LyndaRYoung
Search my tweets-- http://dld.bz/KPgS
Indie Bookstores, eBooks and Google Books: http://bit.ly/hGYk1E @danielaudet
'What I Really Want Is Someone Rolling Around in the Text' (NY Times Magazine): http://nyti.ms/eooprl
10 Reasons to Practice Freewriting: http://bit.ly/hhbf3r @CherylRWrites
The indie movement in media and how it may have changed us for the better: http://bit.ly/i98oyu @thinkstory
Where Should You List Your Manuscript's Word Count? http://bit.ly/eq0abt
For Your Non-Tweeting Friends: Reflections from a Confirmed Twitter Freak: http://bit.ly/foIHCp @jennyhansen
5 Ways To Forget About Writers Block (And Actually Start Writing): http://bit.ly/hcDRSY
Choosing one story idea over another: http://bit.ly/fFQUat
Tough lessons from a debut novelist: http://bit.ly/i8Ld6k
Determining Your Blog's Weak Spots And How To Correct Them: http://bit.ly/fFQD8u
20 tips for a bestselling interview: http://bit.ly/hGltop
Tips for breaking the rules in mystery writing: http://bit.ly/hqNlVj
How to Record a Video Interview in 8 Steps: http://bit.ly/fPHLOI
Plotting is easy: http://bit.ly/gqFdSo
An author's personal writing checklist: http://bit.ly/fdzYTc
10 decisions you can make about your writing right now: http://bit.ly/hPxDN6
A site to help get your creative juices flowing (microwriting with prompts): http://bit.ly/e9oH1T @CarlosNZ
Spring cleaning for writers--clearing out that email inbox: http://bit.ly/hNrLVF
14 ways to enjoy doing something you've procrastinated (writing?): http://bit.ly/dF7t1q
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Happy St. Patrick's Day Cupcakes! http://bit.ly/i7NoM7 @CleoCoyle
Journalists debate: Should ebook titles be in quotes or italics? http://bit.ly/h3zNFZ
World creation: http://bit.ly/f1GR9l
Subconscious Storytelling: http://bit.ly/eP3Odl @storiestorm
5 things that turned one person into a writer: http://bit.ly/goOX6r
Tips on finding an agent: http://bit.ly/i1Ypjn
Turn Your Book Into an App: 5 Questions to Ask an App Developer: http://bit.ly/eT6QzG
If manuscripts were lovers: http://bit.ly/gj3BMZ
5 free apps for writers: http://bit.ly/hmQSdi
The Art of Turning A Negative Comment Into A Positive: http://bit.ly/fBa9Yt
Blood and Guts 101 for Screenwriters: http://bit.ly/hRuqbs
Literary vs. Genre Fiction: http://bit.ly/eMnDzP
Avoiding Melodrama by Writing Deeper: http://bit.ly/fGocRC @4kidlit
How to Do a Structural Edit on Your Book, Part 2 of 4: http://bit.ly/h0ZSLT
An Agent on Myths About Agents: http://bit.ly/f6i7L9
Dealing with the permanence of online reviews: http://bit.ly/hUvFXT
Fixing a Problem Scene—4 Approaches: http://bit.ly/hyk04D
The Image of Canadian Authors: http://bit.ly/hYIVA8
Book Marketing: Understand Amazon Kindle "Before You Go": http://bit.ly/hHfylN @thecreativepenn
Putting the sting in the story: http://bit.ly/gxzaw8
9 Ways to Give a Better Author Reading: http://bit.ly/h5NQqm
Is the face of publishing changing? An agent's thoughts: http://bit.ly/e2Oz6U
SFF and the Classical Past, Part 7—Labyrinths: http://bit.ly/ghKMTR
100 Exquisite Adjectives: http://bit.ly/gp3ObQ
The job of an author assistant: http://bit.ly/e40LDG
St. Patrick's Day Mysteries: http://bit.ly/ekT1yb @janetrudolph
The Importance Of Not Being Earnest All The Time: http://bit.ly/dO2mTK
Writing Teaches Writing: http://bit.ly/eHqVnl
Improving Your Writing Through Research: http://bit.ly/f0VfsN
How to Run Two Blogs in the Midst of a Busy Life: http://bit.ly/dT5Ezq
Mystery Writer's Guide To Forensic Science - Collecting Evidence: http://bit.ly/eEW1YL @clarissadraper
Get a Handle on Your Email: http://bit.ly/gVLOr8
Interview with an agent: http://bit.ly/f1c4cH
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Breakfast in a Glass—Fruit Smoothie http://bit.ly/g6T0CY @CleoCoyle
Industry news and tips for those looking for an agent: http://bit.ly/emasRK
The path to writing enlightenment: http://bit.ly/gutNcy
Can Great Characters Save a Bad Plot? http://bit.ly/fxsGx7
Finish what you start? The internal editor doesn't agree: http://bit.ly/hzjWmO
3 Ways Bloggers Can Attract Twitter Traffic: http://bit.ly/eSfaMk
6 fillers to avoid in dialogue: http://bit.ly/dMArbD
Literary devices in the non-literary novel: http://bit.ly/fS3lBq
How *not* to Self-Publish: http://bit.ly/hJGQN5
The Power of Repetition: http://bit.ly/dFAHfJ
10 questions to drive a writer wacky: http://bit.ly/ggLZAK @elspethwrites
Take a Second Look When Switching POV Styles: http://bit.ly/eLpF6N
5 Essential Blogs Every n00b Writer Must Devour: http://bit.ly/hcYRb7 @ScottMcCumber
How Changing The Structure Of Your Novel Can Help Get Your Book Published: http://bit.ly/etaBPW @bubblecow
6 Reasons Writing Is Coming Home: http://bit.ly/fC722C @victoriamixon
Back to Basics, part II: Organizing Your "Writing" Time: http://bit.ly/gP458F
3 strategies for writing endings: http://bit.ly/hU3AF6
Best and Worst Agent & Editor Advice: http://bit.ly/hsykjZ
Like With Like = Great Story Flow: http://bit.ly/h2UDs0
How to get out of your own way and quit procrastinating on your novel: http://bit.ly/eYHKKX
Leading into a scene vs. including backstory: http://bit.ly/dIBU3a @juliettewade
Story elements checklist: http://bit.ly/gkS9zf
Building Character Arc: Why a Motto Is Vital: http://bit.ly/i8dYcl
Creating Memoir That's Bigger Than Me, Me, Me: http://bit.ly/fMGN48
10 Hard Truths About Blogging: http://bit.ly/etCHsQ
Best SFF Novels of the Decade Readers Poll Results: http://bit.ly/fzmjUz
The New Facebook Page for Authors: http://bit.ly/ex5rdB
The complicated relationship of poetry, film and poetry-film: http://bit.ly/ezQJN0
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Irish Oatmeal Cookie Muffins for St. Patrick's Day from Cleo Coyle http://bit.ly/gOXEmF @CleoCoyle
The 10 best modern European crime writers - in pictures (Guardian): http://bit.ly/gsOgQv
Omniscience (in fiction writing): http://bit.ly/hmq2v8
Slow blogging works: http://bit.ly/eH3CTE
Head-hopping as seen by publishing pros: http://bit.ly/gsQJ8S
An agent posts "Hoping for a Movie Deal, Part 2": http://bit.ly/ifIaxH
4 Ways to Deal with Narrative Summaries: http://bit.ly/gyxf0c
How to Be Your Own Intern: http://bit.ly/eKv8p3
I post on my writing process--how I start a new project and my mindset throughout: http://bit.ly/e9z5lG
Where Should a Second Chapter Start? http://bit.ly/fdsNmP
100 things about a novel: http://bit.ly/dR015N
Using Conferences to Your Querying Advantage: http://bit.ly/gcEWoc
How long does it take to get published? An agent answers: http://bit.ly/ggw19N
Open letter to anyone producing a sitcom pilot: http://bit.ly/h3ikhV
My book is Kryptonite: do I need a secret identity? http://bit.ly/i19Vab @dirtywhitecandy
Gauging your writing ability and what you can do to reach the next level: http://bit.ly/ekORYF
Are You Asking These Important Questions About Your Fantasy Setting? http://bit.ly/fjmstF
A list of writing reference books directed toward learning specific skills: http://bit.ly/ezrgsA
Pen & Paper: Better Than All Things Digital: http://bit.ly/eryMBe
The 5 Elements of Authoritative Content: http://bit.ly/fl3gNN
Writing Exercises to Get Your Pen Moving: http://bit.ly/gsPz4V
Is All publicity Good Publicity? http://bit.ly/egUege
11 Savvy Social Media Strategies: http://bit.ly/gDMQD6
A writer on writer's block: http://bit.ly/hSnwbu @agent139
Writing Binges and Writing Blocks: http://bit.ly/fwqhHl
Twitter's effect on journalism: http://bit.ly/dGb1q2
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: http://bit.ly/ewJxQx @CleoCoyle
Exclusives and multiple submissions: http://bit.ly/g4NedL
Books and TV need to find a happy medium (Guardian): http://bit.ly/goG47C
'Nonfiction' Is Like Reality TV Shows, Right? And 'Creative Nonfiction' Is Like Fox News: http://bit.ly/grQcio
Engage with the public – or fade into the past (Guardian): http://bit.ly/gvhoyH
5 Critical Social Media Sharing Guidelines for Moms (& others who wonder about boundaries): http://bit.ly/hMwvZm
News for Authors with Facebook Fan Pages: http://bit.ly/i5FkqL
Key points in the digi vs traditional publishing debate: http://bit.ly/hadIlo
Making change work for you: http://bit.ly/e8MhZ6 @joanswan
Convincing Readers Your Fiction is Real: http://bit.ly/giTivK
We Expect Far Too Much of a First Sentence: http://bit.ly/g5rK3i @AdviceToWriters
Why Do We Tell Stories? http://bit.ly/dUjGwe
Write Lots Of Books Or Build An Author Platform. Which Is More Effective? http://bit.ly/eI5d5Y @thecreativepenn
Why Book Design & Editing Matter: http://bit.ly/fyPOe8
The not-so-glamorous life of a newly published author (Ntl. Post): http://bit.ly/ernoKD
The birth of steampunk in the 19th Century: http://on.io9.com/h2gVk1
An editor answers: Do I need an agent? http://bit.ly/esaKYo
Writer envy: http://bit.ly/ijKWeq
The 10 best American poems (Guardian): http://bit.ly/g4G24T
Writing vs. critiquing: http://bit.ly/eanWNm
The 10 Most Awesomely Terrible Sci Fi/Fantasy Paperback Covers: http://aol.it/fhgc18
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Killer Tofu From Guest Blogger Alan Orloff http://bit.ly/i76xBI @CleoCoyle
The Perils of an Overactive Imagination: http://bit.ly/ewSOLz
Writers' cul-de-sacs: http://bit.ly/gVh86x
Five finalists for National Book Critics Circle award in poetry (Washington Post): http://wapo.st/fsRUQl
Implausible exchanges that pulls readers out of the story: http://bit.ly/dJgUMM
A somewhat controversial stance on ebook piracy: http://bit.ly/dVAUSr
Amazon Rankings: What they mean: http://bit.ly/hbtOGM
Why Overthinking Could Stifle Your Creativity: http://bit.ly/etAht8
Science fiction author begins war of the books worlds: http://bit.ly/dShdoE
A Novel is Not a Story: http://bit.ly/hgK67Z
When an Author Meets His Critics: http://huff.to/hDrAQq
WordPress Plugins To Rock Your World: http://bit.ly/dGoefJ
The Charlie Sheen Guide to Winning! at Online Marketing: http://bit.ly/geoSUM
A Writer Blogs About Process: http://bit.ly/fVDt07
Six Limitations of the First Person POV: http://bit.ly/fkW7wg
What's popular on the WKB search engine today? http://bit.ly/g9fTqf
9 Mindfulness Rituals to Make Your Day Better (a little zen for writers): http://bit.ly/hu1rxA
Self-Editing: Character Development: http://bit.ly/gGBjgG
Writing is about growing up: http://bit.ly/dPWRaB
Developing Voices for Different POVs: http://bit.ly/hcFb8J
8 iPhone Apps to Grow & Connect With Audience: http://bit.ly/fOJzaW
How To Tell If Your Writing Is Any Good - Part 1: http://bit.ly/gKc5D0
6 Ways to Promote Your Book for Free: http://bit.ly/gmQCzl
Social Media: There's No Such Thing as Too Early: http://bit.ly/htxEMp
A Writer's Antidotes for Envy: http://bit.ly/f0byLS
Top 12 iPhone A
pps That'll Increase Your Productivity: http://bit.ly/eVRtCg
The Preposition Gnome: http://bit.ly/i4HJ6p
The art of hitting send: http://bit.ly/esCVjS
Connections between some well-known crime writers' lives and their stories: http://bit.ly/e1qFJ7 @mkinberg
Resources for Christian Fiction Writers: http://bit.ly/dSMZd6
How Captain Kirk Led An Author to Write Historical Fiction: http://bit.ly/eAmrTN
Immersed in our stories: http://bit.ly/gzdUqw
Desperate writers: http://bit.ly/i4dhFJ
March 18, 2011
An Ebook Advantage
I was out running errands yesterday and was a little farther afield than usual. Our cats have a special cat food that we can only get at this one particular store (I know…it's crazy), and so I was about 35 minutes away from my own brier patch.
I'm planning on seeing some friends soon and remembered that I wanted to pick up wine and beer. I dashed into a wine store.
I picked up what I was looking for quickly, although I wasn't familiar with the store. A Chardonnay in one hand, some Sam Adams Porter in the other, I was tearing toward the cash register when I saw a man standing at a table, hoping to distribute samples and looking awkward. He smiled hopefully at me.
I was in a hurry…but gosh, I sure know how it feels to stand at tables at bookstores feeling awkward. I sighed, then stopped with a smile.
It was a local brewery. He could tell I was in a hurry and stumbled into a spiel, "We're right here in Charlotte, on the way to uptown. And—we don't have any preservatives in our beer."
I could tell that this was his big selling point. Maybe that info would have meant something different to someone with a different slant, but for me it was interesting from a marketing perspective. "So," I said, "you can't ship it then. If it's preservative-free."
He looked more cheerful now since I apparently was picking up on an interesting point. "That's right!"
"So your focus is probably local restaurants?"
"Yes ma'am. And local bars."
"But you're starting to sell it in retail outlets?" I asked.
"We're making inroads with a couple of local chains. Like this one. See, what you'd do," he gestured to a keg-looking container on the table, "is to drink this by the best-by date, then return the container to us at a retail center and we'd fill it up."
"The only problem is," I said, "is that I live in Matthews. So it's less convenient for me to drive over here to purchase more beer."
He beamed. "It's available at the Matthews location of this store!"
Ka-ching! It was a sale.
Only, actually, because it was convenient for me to buy the beer.
Convenience is, I think, one of the major selling points for an e-reader. And I think it should be a reason why publishers shouldn't worry too much about the e-book revolution.
I've found, lately, that I've bought even more books than I usually do. And I buy a lot of books.
That's because the Kindle has made it very, very easy for me to buy a book. Several times now, I've been out with a friend and they told me what they were reading and I've downloaded it.
I've also downloaded books that I hear about on book blogging sites—immediately, before I have an opportunity to forget the title or author.
I know publishers are worried about ebooks. I know they're treading into uncertain territory.
But I really think that they're going to get a higher volume of sales. It's just so easy for us to buy books.
Do you have an e-reader? Do you have one on your wish list? If you do have one, have you seen your book buying habits change?


