Elizabeth Spann Craig's Blog, page 208

On Dialect

On Saturday, my son had a paintball party for his 14th birthday. The paintball fields were run by a company in a rural area about 45 minutes from Charlotte.

While we were out there, there was another group playing simultaneously—a group of 12 year old girls from a private school in the Charlotte area.

One of the girls from the other group had a problem with her paintball gun and handed it to the referee, an employee for the paintball company.

He fiddled with it for a while, then called her over. What he said (and the cigarette dangling out of his mouth didn't help, either) sounded like this: "It ain't dooin' it no moah."

"Excuse me?" the 12 year old private school girl asked.

He repeated it.

"I'm sorry…could you say that again?" I could tell she was listening very, very hard now.

He repeated it. The same way without trying a different approach.

"I'm sorry?" She looked at me for help translating.

"It's fixed," I said.

I don't know if it was the double-negative, the ain't, the poor grammar, his very thick Southern accent, or the cigarette, but she couldn't understand a word the young man said.

The fact that she had to work that hard and still couldn't figure out what he was saying perfectly illustrates my reasoning for not writing (much) Southern dialect in my very Southern books.

I think it's best to go light on dialect and instead try using phrases, idioms, and word choices that locals of an area would use. For me, I'd rather stick with the rhythm of Southern speech (it has a definite lilt and pattern) than take a stab at phonetic spelling (which would be really tiresome for a reader.)

Yes, Southerners drop consonants like crazy. A Southern drawl can string out a short word into an 8 syllable one.

It would get old to read. And pulls the reader out of the story.

Why use dialect when there are so many other ways to convey the feel of a region?

Better to use vocabulary choices that Southerners would use: pocketbook instead of purse, tote instead of carry, buggy instead of cart, cut off instead of turn off.

Better to just say that a character speaks in a thick accent and show other characters struggling to understand them.

Better to include Southern foods and drinks to convey a sense of the South: grits, gravy, biscuits, barbeque, sweet tea, bourbon.

Better to show the slower pace of the South by writing about characters on screened porches in rocking chairs.

Better to detail unusual or interesting Southern customs surrounding funerals, family gatherings, and other special occasions.

Do you have trouble reading dialect? How do you convey a sense of your region in your writing?

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Will They or Won't They? Plotting With Yes or No Questions: http://bit.ly/igYkCB

Desk Fitness: A Series of 11 Simple Stretches for Writers: http://bit.ly/dGBDIy

An agent on: What the Fiction Editor Looks For: http://bit.ly/gQ0Wna

7 Books on Writing for Every Writer: http://huff.to/hEGNOh

Is Your Procrastination Misdiagnosed? http://bit.ly/fiqaTM

The Art of Handling Criticism Gracefully: http://zenhabits.net/criticism/

Honor Your Readers, Hire an Editor: http://huff.to/hzJjb5

3 Writing Lessons I Learned from an Elementary School Field Trip: http://bit.ly/gNMwDh

Good Cop, Bad Cop of the Digital Future: http://bit.ly/hscKZR

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An Erotica Writer's Manifesto: http://bit.ly/fAx3RX @WriteAngleBlog

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Finding the Inspiration to Write: 10 Tips for Immediate Results: http://bit.ly/gT7H9Z

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10 Steps for Editing Your Own Writing: http://bit.ly/h9evKy

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Choose Your Own Adventure—Plotting Solutions When You're Stuck : http://bit.ly/gvrr92

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10 New Twitter Tools That Will Make Your Life Easier: http://bit.ly/gizYvL

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How to speak publisher - B is for Black plate: http://bit.ly/hfjgmX

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Book Marketing: Your Online Press Kit: http://bit.ly/gSgEcn

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4 Useful Twitter Automation Tools and How to Use Them: http://bit.ly/hWOf1F

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Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Quick Bacon and Mushroom Pasta http://bit.ly/hteo3F @CleoCoyle

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Creating a Steampunk World is Not as Easy as It Might Seem: http://bit.ly/gfGeck

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Quick and Dirty World Building: http://bit.ly/htvm8b

Spring Forward! 5 Writing Exercises to Season The Poetic Muse: http://bit.ly/gX2PVd

Deep POV: http://bloodredpencil.blogspot.com/2011/03/deep-point-of-view-part-two.html

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Tips for chapter writing: http://bit.ly/eX52ds

4 ways to use the Myers-Briggs personality types in your novels: http://bit.ly/fyRZWL @p2p_editor

8 Keys to Self-Publishing Success: http://bit.ly/gjufWx

Self-Publishing vs. Traditional Publishing: Which Way Will You Make More Money? http://bit.ly/dKIGKD

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4 things not to do at an agent panel: http://bit.ly/gOi305

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In praise of crummy day jobs: http://bit.ly/dJNcJq

Introducing the villain: http://bit.ly/eSQmvV

What one writer has learned from judging writing contests: http://bit.ly/honTuF

Resource roundup for historical fiction: http://bit.ly/dLOQwO

How to form a quick revision list for your weaknesses: http://bit.ly/eGDxSl

Tips for restless writers: http://bit.ly/fojZJt

Building a Magic System for Your World: http://bit.ly/e8wsnl

10 steps for growing novel-sized story ideas: http://bit.ly/fIgFTP

The Death of the New York Times Book Review? http://huff.to/eBU56v

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Like With Like = Great Story Flow: http://bit.ly/h2UDs0

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Self-Publishing: Carnival of the Indies: http://bit.ly/f54b3U

Why Writers Should Take Their Own Advice: http://bit.ly/esRFrg

What's the Use In Writing? More Than You Think: http://bit.ly/gyN77B

Becoming a Freelance Writer? 10 Keys to a Busy Writing Career: http://bit.ly/hbE31d

Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Carrot Purée http://bit.ly/eDTcyL @CleoCoyle

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Key Story Elements: Opening Image: http://bit.ly/fNta7F

Self-Promotion as an Act of Generosity: http://bit.ly/emaW5d

Twitterific--the week in tweets: http://bit.ly/gUo3EJ

How to Become a Copy Editor: http://bit.ly/dX6MVx

The 5 best unfollow apps and why you should use them: http://bit.ly/g12KvQ

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Write Scenes Rather Than Reports: http://bit.ly/fhUizi

Subconscious Storytelling: http://bit.ly/hSkfY6 #amrwiting @storiestorm

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Writing a breakout novel: Part 1 – An Inspired Concept: http://bit.ly/hhUWxo

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3 Writing Lessons I Learned from an Elementary School Field Trip

I was a chaperone all day Thursday for the 4th grade field trip to Raleigh, North Carolina, our state capital.

It was a long day, but a lot of fun.  The kids in my group were great. And I did learn a little along the way (and not just about state government.)

Lesson 1: Remember that our culture isn't static.  Even small references to "modern" society can date our book. 

At one point in the trip, I was the traffic cop at the girls' restroom—letting several in when several came out.  Or, at least, that was the general idea.  But no one was coming out of the restroom at all and soon I heard sounds of great consternation coming from within: "Mrs. Craig!  Mrs. Craig!"

I ran in, thinking the worst.  The girls were standing there with soap dripping from their hands.  "The sinks are all broken!" they cried out.

Well, no, they weren't.  But the plumbing in this particular building was from the 1960s.  These were faucets you had to turn.  And there was a hot faucet and a cold faucet.  These girls—now y'all, this shocks me too—were expecting to hold their hands under the faucet and have the water automatically turn on.  If the faucet wasn't a Delta style or a lever style or didn't automatically turn on, then they didn't know how to work them. 

This is the generation we're writing for, too.  And their kids. Because our books will live forever in digital format.

Lesson 2: Be willing to change our game plan to make the reader's experience better.

We were touring our state's Museum of Natural Science.  I had 6 kids in my group and 4 floors of the museum to tour in about 1 hour.  Everyone else had started on the bottom floor to work their way up, so I started at the top to work our way down.

We'd seen the butterfly room, the arthropod zoo, the dinosaur exhibit, the mountains-to-the-sea exhibit, and were just heading to the escalator to see the 1st floor exhibit last.  Another adult came up, "Did your group see the reptiles on the 3rd floor?  There are staffers there who are letting the kids touch the snakes."

Well, of course we went back upstairs. The children just loved those snakes.  Between petting the snakes and washing our hands afterward, we never did tour the first floor.  But the snakes were the highlight of the trip for the children, as they told their parents, later. 

There might be a point in our book where an idea comes to us on improving our book for our readers. These ideas usually come to me in the third quarter of my first draft.  Sometimes this results in a drastic plot restructuring. It can be a lot of work to change the game plan, but ultimately, it's worth it for the readers.

Lesson 3:  Remember our audience.

It was the very end of a long day of touring.  We'd been to 2 museums, the capitol building, and were finally in the legislative building. 

The children were exhausted and the tour guide was being very detailed about the legislative building design and cost. (The building was a sort of 1960s style Art Deco Revival.) She was using big words that I likely wouldn't even write, since I have a folksy voice in my books.  The children, literally, were falling asleep—nodding off as she droned on.

She wasn't engaging the children.  She wasn't making the experience interesting or fun for them.  So…she lost them. 

When we're writing a book, it's fine to use academic language—if we're writing for academics or writing a textbook.  But a more conversational, engaging style works better for many books.  We want our readers to enjoy themselves enough to keep reading, after all.

I learned a whole lot of other stuff, too.  If you give a 9 year old girl a digital camera, she'll take a picture of just about everything in a museum. :)

Have you made any discoveries about writing lately? 

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Random Thoughts on Mystery Writing and Reading

I thought I'd do a post on mystery writing, since I haven't for a while. If you're a mystery writer, be sure to add your own random thoughts on mystery writing below. If you're not, maybe you'll consider reading a mystery (or writing one yourself?) :)

The structure of the books is really appealing to me, as both a reader and a writer. I think I like the comfort of having the victim and suspects introduced, motives uncovered, red herrings and clues sprinkled.

Petty motives for murder are sometimes more interesting than the big motives. And more believable. It's eye-opening to read the local paper and discover what small things resulted in murder.

I love sidekicks. They keep my sleuth from having boring internal monologues about whodunit.

I always seem to start my story with the victim. Who they were is what shapes the story.

I love, as a reader, being able to solve the mystery alongside the sleuth. I work hard to make sure that my readers are kept in the loop as the crime(s) are being investigated.

Suspects get confusing if there are too many of them or if there is more than one suspect with the same grievance against the victim. It's also confusing if suspect names are too similar.

I've heard people say that it's not as important that an amateur sleuth has a reason to investigate the crime. But, to me, their involvement needs to be plausible or else the reader is already feeling doubtful about the plot.

Having friends and family suspected of the murder, being a suspect themselves, and being a close friend of the victim are all great reasons for a sleuth to be involved in the investigation.

Being surprised by the ending is incredibly satisfying as a reader. I try to make that happen for readers.

If the sleuth doesn't already have a personal relationship with one or more of the suspects (if they're all just guests at a resort, for instance), I think it's nice if the sleuth develops a friendship or relationship with a suspect. It makes for great conflict.

I like the feeling of being unsure about whom to trust in a mystery—are some of the suspects lying? Are all of the suspects lying? Who is telling the truth and when?

Do you read mysteries? If you do, what do you enjoy about the genre? And—if you don't—what's your favorite thing about the genre that you read or write?

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Choosing Your Own Adventure—Plotting Solutions When You're Stuck

When I was a kid, I loved the "Choose Your Own Adventure" books.

Do you remember those books? Basically, each book would tell a riveting story—you're in a time machine, you're back in the days of dinosaurs, you're blasting off into space—and at the bottom of (most) pages, you got to choose how you were going to handle the situation you were in. "If you run from the T-Rex, turn to page 88. If you hide from the T-Rex, turn to page 40."

Maybe it's my experience with those books that makes me so open when I'm revising with my editor. For the last of the Memphis books, my editor asked me if I could tie a particular character back into the end of the book.

I emailed her back. "Sure," I said. "Here are three alternate endings. Which one do you like best?" Yes, it was "Choose Your Own Adventure" for adults. :)

Being open to different plot paths for your story can be great when editing. But it's also good for moving your story forward when you get stuck.

In my experience, it's good to think big when you're not really sure where your next scene is going. Instead of thinking up one alternate path for your storyline, try thinking up five storylines.

Or try thinking up 10 possible plot directions. Try thinking up 15. They can be random and ridiculous and don't have to be the ones that you're going to end up choosing. But it's a great way to get your imagination going, brainstorming solutions to move the story forward.

Kill a character.
Introduce a new character.
The character quits his job.
The character's mother moves in with him and murders his roommate.
There is a hurricane.
The character's spouse becomes seriously ill and can no longer work.
The character falls in and out of love.
The character has a DUI.

You get the idea. You're just trying to get your creative juices flowing. The funny thing is that in with the wacky ideas, there are usually at least one or two things that could work. There are usually more that could work with some plot tweaking.

Sometimes it's easy to get tunnel vision when it comes to our plots. Even if we know the direction we're heading in isn't working, it can be difficult to see other directions to take. Brainstorming a list is just one way to approach the problem.

The "Choose Your Own Adventure" book in the picture above has 42 possible endings. How many can you come up with for your book? What other exercises do you use when you get stuck?

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Standing Up for Libraries

This is a little bit of a departure from what I usually blog about, but I think it's a subject that's important to most writers.

I was out late Tuesday night (past my admittedly-early bedtime) at a town hall meeting in Matthews, North Carolina, arguing against my library branch being closed.

Libraries were listed in with our county's discretionary spending. Somehow, business incentives/development had inched ahead of libraries in the list of priorities.

I don't like meetings. I don't enjoy public speaking—or being filmed while doing it. But I was happy to speak out in the hopes of keeping my library branch open.

I'm going to again run, below, a post I wrote on the usefulness of libraries for writers. They're not only useful for writers—they're essential to the entire community.

14 Reasons Why Libraries are Writers' Best Friends

You don't have to spend a lot of money to become a better writer. That's a good thing because most writers don't have a ton of money to throw around.

The library has all the resources a writer needs. It's always been one of my favorite places on Earth. Here are the reasons why libraries are writers' best friends:

Research

*Researching your book: Libraries have computers with internet capabilities. They have books and periodicals on a multitude of different subjects. They also have research librarians/information specialists who can help you with research and find reference materials to help you in your search.

*Researching your genre: You can easily check out a dozen recently-published books in your genre. It's a quick way to see what publishers are looking for.

*Need help with grammar and writing style? The library will have reference books to help you. My favorite style book is Elements of Style by Strunk and White. It's been around for ages.

*Books on the writing craft? Different libraries have different books, but there are some that will be in nearly every branch: like On Writing by Stephen King, Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott, and On Writing Well by William Zinsser.

*Some libraries will have subscriptions to helpful periodicals like Writer's Digest.

A Place to Write

*Has your house gotten crazy? Kids/spouse driving you nuts? Is a coffeehouse too expensive? The public library is a great place to write.

Help With the Submission Process

*Looking for an agent? Look at the acknowledgements page in one of the recent releases in your genre. Agents are nearly always thanked.

*Another great way to find agent and editor names is by using Writer's Market and Literary Market Place. Using these books at the library means saving lots of money—these books are expensive.

*Need help quickly summing up your book in a query letter? Look at back cover copy of novels in your genre.

*Don't have email and you need to email some queries? You can set up a Gmail or Hotmail account that can be accessed from a computer at your local library.

Promotion

*Libraries are major book purchasers. Find out which libraries have your book. Go to WorldCat.org, which searches libraries for content worldwide. You just plug in your book's name, hit the search button, and find the results. For a listing of public libraries, go to Public Libraries.com. You'll get physical addresses, phone numbers, and websites (from which you can get the library's email address).Send the acquisitions librarian an email or postcard with your cover photo, ISBN number, title of the book, publisher's name, your name, release date, short summary, and any good review snippets.

*The librarians at my local branch are my friends, too. They've been incredibly supportive—my book is nearly always checked out of the library or on request because of their generous recommendations of my book to patrons. They've also put my book on a display with other regional authors.

*If you're looking for a place to give a writing workshop or talk, your library usually has a meeting room that's perfect for your event. Many of them will allow you to sell your book as well (it's nice to give a donation to their Friends of the Library program if your signing is for-profit.)

*Libraries also provide locations for writing groups and book clubs to gather. For some writers, meeting with other writers and readers is a great way to network and find support and encouragement.

There are many expensive paths a writer can take toward professional development. But it doesn't have to be that way. Writing shouldn't have to cost more than the pen and paper you're writing on.

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Have you checked the pulse of your local library? Could it potentially be facing a budget cut or closure? Please consider a donation of time or money to your branch, if it's struggling, or speaking out in a public forum to state the importance of the library to you and your community.

Visuals of Our Characters

Yesterday it was time for me to go to the Department of Motor Vehicles to renew my driver's license (fun-fun!)

For anyone not living in the States, just imagine your most-un-favorite bland, government-related building. Someplace sort of like the one in the picture above.

With lines like this:
That would be what a Department of Motor Vehicle office in the US is like.

It was pouring a cold rain yesterday. The DMV office had moved in the last couple of months, and they'd accidentally (I think) provided me with the wrong directions. I took a left instead of a right and ended up in a very bizarre location. Since I figured the DMV would be at a bizarre location, I spent some time looking for it.

I finally figured out they'd given me wrong directions and found the office (you had to make a U-turn to even get in there.) Very tricky!

Sometimes you get warm, funny, helpful people at the DMV—I've seen them there in years past. Most unfortunately, however, those particular people were not staffing this particular DMV. My umbrella broke on the way in and I was sopping. Most of the people in the waiting room were sopping wet, too. The wait escalated. I pulled out my Kindle. No one in the room looked very amused.

Suddenly, there was a primal howling that broke up the nearly complete silence in the soulless, bureaucratic room. It was a blowsy woman who was pitching a hissy fit. "The computers is down (sic)!!!" she stormed up to inform our waiting room, face red, arms waving. She looked a little like she should have been on the cast of a Southern version of Les Misérables.

Apparently she was trying to summon an insurrection of some kind. It was cold and wet, we were in a dreary place, the wait was long, the staff was surly—and the computers were down, meaning that our unpleasant experience was all for nothing. It wasn't a terrible idea.

However, considering the fact that there were armed highway patrolmen right there in the building, no one seemed inclined to take her up on it.

But this was when things got interesting at the DMV for me. Because she was one of my characters. Just a secondary one, but she fit the character to a T. Especially when she was all riled up like that. If I'd dared, I'd have taken her picture with my cell phone. But—I didn't. Otherwise, there might have to be a new mystery written—Murder at the DMV. With me as the victim. :)

The nice thing was, though, is that now I had a picture of her in my head and I could describe her more easily. Seeing someone or something makes it a ton easier for me to describe. It made the whole trip to the DMV worth it. Oh…and the computers finally came back up. I decided to sit there and wait it out. So now I'm good until 2019 (except when I take my son there for his license in the next couple of years.)

Of course, I don't always come across my characters in such a serendipitous way. Sometimes I go actively looking for them.

Places, besides the DMV, where I've found characters:

Swanky characters—upscale coffee shops in nice areas
Suspicious types—the evening news (local, not national)
Unusual characters—amusement parks, circuses, and fairs (I take my kids and a notebook)

Another useful tool for finding images of your characters is Google Images (I like to put the safe search option on to keep from stumbling into areas of the internet where I'd rather not venture.)

With Google Images, you can search for a specific type of image (cowboys, ballerinas, football players) or just sort of wander around until specific images catch your eye.

Do you need images of your characters to better describe them? How do you find them?

Tips for Restless Writers

Are we getting wired differently because of modern distractions? I'm not sure, but I know that it's hard for me to sit still for very long. I just get very restless.

There are plenty of writers out there that have amazing discipline and can sit for hours at their computer each day, knocking out their word goals. I'm not one of them. I always make my goals, but I've had to meet them on my terms. In case you're a restless writer too, this post is for you. :)

Here are some tips for handling restless writer syndrome:

Make a list of all the other non-writing-related things that need to be done before starting a writing session. For me, the more exhaustive this list is, the more emptied-out my head is and the better I can focus on my writing. On this list, I'll include everything from household chores, to my children's activities, to emails I need to send, groceries I need to buy, phone calls I should make, etc. The list includes whatever I can think of that might pop up and distract me while I'm writing.

I came across a post last week on the WorkAwesome blog: The Path to Productivity: Short Hours, More Breaks. The post quoted a recent study that found:

Rather than diminishing productivity, short breaks allow people to maintain their focus on a task without the loss of quality that normally occurs over time.

So taking short breaks sounds like a good way of approaching tasks (at least for some of us). But the article warns against checking Facebook, etc., during your break. They recommend choosing an activity that's something you can easily break away from (and maybe setting yourself a timer as a reminder that your break is over.)

Do other writing-related tasks if you're in a time crunch or under deadline. I'll switch from the manuscript I'm writing to one that I'm editing. Or I'll switch to a brainstorming activity for a new project. That way I'm still being creative, still getting all the writing done that I need to do—but I'm shaking it up a little. It's good to also have a short to-do list of writing related tasks. Right now, mine has on it: edit chapter on next Myrtle Clover, brainstorm 5 minutes for outline, and add character descriptions to quilting WIP.

Open up to the possibilities of writing on the go during the day. If I told myself that my writing was only going to happen at a specific time of the day, on my laptop, then I wouldn't get nearly as much done. I remind myself at the beginning of the day that I'm collecting sights, sounds, words, and characters for my story. It helps me be more observant.

Move around. Some of my better ideas happen when I'm moving around. I write in my head as I clean the house, run errands, garden, and walk. If I'm feeling particularly restless, I'll try an activity that doesn't require a lot of thought (weeding, vacuuming, cooking familiar recipe) and I'll write my book in my head as I do it.

Reduce up front the amount of time you're writing before taking your breaks. Consider writing in 15 minute segments. Will you lose your train of thought this way? In my experience, no. If I worry I will, I just jot down in the margin in Track Changes where I want the next scene to go. Then I run off and put the laundry in the dryer, start the dishwasher, and come back to the manuscript.

Are you a restless writer too? How do you stay productive?

Twitterific

Here are writing links that I've posted to Twitter in the last week.

I'm delighted that now we have an efficient method of locating resources on writing topics when you need them—via the Writer's Knowledge Base search engine and software engineer and writer Mike Fleming's ingenuity. The links I tweet (which are writers' blogs, agents' and editors' blogs) all are added to the engine to make it easier for you to access the information you're looking for.

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How one author was able to get objective about her work and get published: http://bit.ly/gjJdrF

10 tips for an effective blog sidebar: http://bit.ly/g12KvQ

Expanded Story Elements Checklist: http://bit.ly/hfH9hH

The Future of Self-Publishing Services: http://bit.ly/f4nOfs

The Path to Productivity: Short Hours, More Breaks: http://bit.ly/h4PjjM

The magic of the 1st draft: http://bit.ly/hhvvh2 @storiestorm

Why Pen Names Suck & Can Make Us Crazy: http://bit.ly/gxxG8M

When Good Characters Do Thoughtless Things: http://bit.ly/hDbAOQ

5 Tips for Being Found by Your Readers: http://bit.ly/eHQErf

10 Reasons Someone Else's Novel Shouldn't Have Been Published: http://bit.ly/h0YvB1

Writing past our weaknesses and why we should do it: http://bit.ly/gS1laf

Go-to writing books: http://bit.ly/dZAvRV

Changing the world one word at a time: http://bit.ly/fTRk4P

Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Frugal and Healthy II: Black Bean Chilaquiles http://bit.ly/fv4JKw @CleoCoyle

Self-Publishing Bang for the Buck: http://bit.ly/gMA06O

The End of the Affair--Your Novel Doesn't Love You Anymore: http://bit.ly/hgHh4f

An exercise for writing vivid characters: http://bit.ly/gCi3dX

5 Ways To Threaten Your Protagonist: http://bit.ly/i1JLIX @ajackwriting

Tips for slicing and dicing your manuscript: http://bit.ly/dLR80m @juliemusil

Creativity Tweets of the Week — 3/25/11: http://bit.ly/erxcEw

5 Principles for Generating Ideas: http://bit.ly/hoM0FD

Style Sheets: An Editorial Tool: http://bit.ly/hSJTvn

Writing Theory -- The Monomyth Part 6: http://bit.ly/eoIuA7

6 Core Analogies for the 6 Core Competencies: http://bit.ly/iaFUJr

Best Articles This Week for Writers 3/25/11: http://bit.ly/eNHK82

How to Write a Press Release—A Mini-Tutorial: http://bit.ly/fHy2Pe

Should authors revise for agents without an offer of representation? http://bit.ly/g5vPse

It's never too late--2011 Writing Progress Spreadsheet: http://bit.ly/g2yZDa @storiestorm

How Writers Can Use Amazon to Sell Books: http://bit.ly/gTyLnN

The discovery of the victim in crime fiction (cases where the body isn't reported): http://bit.ly/esgH2x @mkinberg

Creating non-violent conflict in your story: http://bit.ly/h9kdoY

What to do when the words won't flow: http://bit.ly/f2j6hY

Proper Dialog Placement: http://bit.ly/f9L0dw

Editorial | It's Not About HarperCollins (Library Journal): http://bit.ly/gW3vlg

Identifying Your Themes: http://bit.ly/eHDiwB

Place in the Novel: Setting or Character: http://bit.ly/fNGWfv

You're so nauseously nice: Getting Insulted by Authors (LA Times): http://lat.ms/h3nbU0

Let Your Senses Do The Walking And Talking: http://bit.ly/i1ZQq5

Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Eat Healthy and frugally! Chicken Tortilla Roll-Ups http://bit.ly/hl03a2 @CleoCoyle

Good and Bad in Google Book Search Settlement Decision: http://bit.ly/fAY02k

What Writing Teaches Us About Parenting: http://huff.to/fK6ZNO

Noted Self-Publisher (Amanda Hocking) May Be Close to a Book Deal (NY Times): http://nyti.ms/fpwF7P

5 Ways to Shorten Your Twitter Bio: http://bit.ly/iigqDd

The Anatomy of a Successful Ebook Giveaway: http://bit.ly/dMH4Fu

Dealing with Agents and Publishers: http://bit.ly/edVnau

10 Reasons Why Authors Love Ebooks: http://bit.ly/gs8i1x @thecreativepenn

Tips for Tackling the Final Proof: http://bit.ly/gE8dm1

Written in stone? Editing your backlist books for reissue as ebooks: http://bit.ly/gN1mlS

The most popular links on synopsis writing that I've tweeted: http://bit.ly/eWeJtB

Creating and Writing Compelling Villains: http://bit.ly/eBzNu3

Different paths to the same goal: http://bit.ly/hZTLUG

Why (Most) Publishers Are Still In New York: http://bit.ly/fLhI6t

8 Fiddly Things You Can Do To Your Manuscript To Make Your Editor's Day: http://bit.ly/ezveXy

109 Ways to Make Your Business/Book Irresistible to the Media: http://bit.ly/fWc8Ec

TV Shows: A Writer's Teaching Tool: http://bit.ly/i8qPGk @storiestorm

Good Grief: The Painful yet Productive Process of Revising after a Critique: http://bit.ly/h0N4VN

Go Hard or Go Home–Blogging & Branding: http://bit.ly/ggHY7j

Barnes & Noble Struggles To Find a Buyer: http://bit.ly/fAb0fn

Authors Find Marketing and Publicity Strength in Numbers: http://bit.ly/dSM2mh

10 Steps to Making Your Author Blog a Rockin' Success: http://bit.ly/f7Ic7g @victoriamixon

Titles. Or Not. http://bit.ly/eq3MZf

The Simple 5-Step Formula for Effective Online Content: http://bit.ly/fxjj2S

Embracing inconsistency as a writer: http://bit.ly/gjTWDV

Battling the Romance Novel Stigma: http://bit.ly/eLtlLd

Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Fruit au gratin - delish! http://bit.ly/gNifIi @CleoCoyle

Characters and emotional baggage - your characters' motivations: http://bit.ly/eF61e2

Some writing humor from @inkyelbows: http://bit.ly/ezsXy8 and http://bit.ly/gPTTmP

A 21st c Writer's Helper: The Virtual Assistant: http://bit.ly/gcClPy

What's your story's agenda? http://bit.ly/hBSHfD

How to know if you're ready for critique--3 questions: http://bit.ly/hZ82FC

Strategies for juggling multiple Twitter accounts: http://bit.ly/gyMkLG

Self-editing checklist--scene analysis: http://bit.ly/fCwBjx

How to Balance Blogging and Your Day Job (while still growing your blog): http://bit.ly/hd0CZo

Secret Recipe for a Novel: http://bit.ly/fJrvr5 @4kidlit

Making Dialogue Dynamic: http://bit.ly/fzA9Fp

Deep-Tissue Critique: 4 Ways to Make It Hurt So Good: http://bit.ly/dYmUVq @mesummerbooks

2 debut novelists talk about the necessity of thick skin: http://bit.ly/dOUCgA @4kidlit

Backstory Problems & How to Overcome Them: http://bit.ly/iafAjI

Finally finished your book? Now it's time to get writing...again! http://bit.ly/h3Iim5 @hartjohnson

How to build an Amazon author page: http://bit.ly/dSx2FM

Don't be a Fail Whale--the Cutesy Moniker Tweeter: http://bit.ly/elgXIY

The importance of muscular verbs: http://bit.ly/e624WV & lists of strong action verbs: http://bit.ly/fVgobx & http://bit.ly/fjyNb7

Writing Can Be Learned—But It Can't Be Taught: http://bit.ly/fy8wKT

The Real Story Behind Pacing: http://bit.ly/i2Upow @joanswan

Punctuation in dialogue: http://bit.ly/gByXKe

How to fight spring fever and get some writing done: http://bit.ly/fkZRQW

10 Reasons Why You Should Be Blogging: http://huff.to/dNVf46

Writers should focus on the positive: http://bit.ly/gC88mg @thecreativepenn

7 things one author has learned so far: http://bit.ly/gwuDbS

The Return of the Live Event for Book Promotion: http://bit.ly/gVKbpf

4 Organizational Tools for Writing: http://bit.ly/ec2MjZ

Why Blogging Might Be Killing You, And How to Fight Back: http://bit.ly/hE1roi

58 Habits That Will Help You Succeed: http://bit.ly/gRKHdU

Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Chicken Crescent Rolls http://bit.ly/gzffKE @CleoCoyle

Brewing up Inspiration: http://bit.ly/g6yqt2

Repurpose: Get More Mileage from Your Blog Posts: http://bit.ly/elgocF

Twitter Quitter: http://bit.ly/hSTCKC

Creating the main character for a fantasy series: http://bit.ly/h9Nfx8

Mystery Writer's Guide To Forensic Science - Collecting Evidence VI: http://bit.ly/fuQBra

How The World of Star Trek Taught One Author How to Write: http://bit.ly/hZAnEm

Living Your Myth: Mishima And Dying For Your Convictions: http://bit.ly/fn2AxZ @agent139

Polishing vs. Fixing: http://bit.ly/evau97

10 ways to reach "the end": http://bit.ly/i8zt3g @elspethwrites

5 Pickles to Write Yourself Into: http://bit.ly/hqhbFO

Top 10 reasons freelancers need to take a vacation: http://bit.ly/ePvRq5

9 tips for conferences: http://bit.ly/gDBnfj @authorterryo

Can Editing Be Fun? Maybe. http://bit.ly/gFbZYO

Avoiding passive prose: http://bit.ly/hsAdBo

Bestselling Author Turns Down $500K Deal to Self-Publish: http://bit.ly/ibo7D6

7 Uneasy Coercion Tactics That Will Force You to Write: http://bit.ly/ft57tX

The Care And Feeding Of Your Favorite Authors: http://bit.ly/eMzHgX

Combating Writer's Envy: http://bit.ly/eyDUmo

How to Make Your Free eBook a Magnet for New Readers: 5 Crucial Tips: http://bit.ly/fTZxrd

Description: scents and seasons: http://bit.ly/eMchpW

Writing Tools: Scrivener: http://bit.ly/eHsP5H

Back to Basics, part III: Maintaining Self-Confidence: http://bit.ly/hqiXHL

The Solace of Dark Novels and Memoirs: http://huff.to/eUeYMw

One Art, Please. I Have 99 cents: http://bit.ly/fbtZZl

How to speak publisher - B is for bind-up : http://bit.ly/gkyaTN

Young Adult Books and Their Readers: http://bit.ly/fakJVx

A Side Order of Stupid: http://bit.ly/exAXug

Formatting Your Documents for the Kindle in 8 Steps: http://bit.ly/eEXwD1

Myst. Lov. Kitchen: A Writer's Snack: Crust-Free Pizza from Cleo Coyle http://bit.ly/f10StK @CleoCoyle

Writing exercise--write a letter: http://bit.ly/gdBN0Y

Should you argue with your publisher over your cover? http://bit.ly/feCp8v

5 ways to be a crap literary agent: http://bit.ly/gBHSw8 @jammer0501

Where to find your interestingness as a writer + blogger + ruler of your domain: http://bit.ly/dIzHX4

A Character-driven Approach to Kissing Scenes and Sex Scenes: http://bit.ly/ffd9Bt

The best way to get a literary agent's attention on Twitter: http://bit.ly/fQJHyw

To Conference or Not To Conference? http://bit.ly/ggDWzZ @authorterryo

Forget the Writing Rules: http://bit.ly/fyhqvj

Hardworking vs. talented: http://bit.ly/f4xWoO

Authors, be careful not to overpay for POD services: http://bit.ly/ibwT9u

Best Tweets for Writers (week ending 3/18/11): http://bit.ly/hBVbfM

When Your Agent Isn't Feeling the Love: http://bit.ly/gsETo3

Strategic tweeting for authors: http://bit.ly/h0IXXX

Bios: Stumbling on self-intros: http://bit.ly/ghVvC3

Best and Worst Agent & Editor Advice: Part 2: http://bit.ly/i4KYLc

Using Text to "Enhance" E-books and Other Insights from the 2011 Leipzig Book Fair: http://bit.ly/f4PzuG

When Your Can't Write What You Love to Read: http://bit.ly/f78cl3

Why Vague Writing Is Weak Writing: http://bit.ly/eJ1u5W

Fiction within fiction – made-up worlds and stories inside stories: http://bit.ly/fjJgB2

The Five Stages of Editing: http://bit.ly/eTgYbu

What to do when you get an agent call: http://bit.ly/dQVkoJ

Plotting Through Goals: http://bit.ly/gn4OlK

Style sheets: http://bit.ly/gfvu7T

A synopsis checklist: http://bit.ly/hroF7w

Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Gone to the Dogs -- Crock Pot Barbecue http://bit.ly/fwpAkS @CleoCoyle

How to format a query letter: http://bit.ly/hkXDoK

Tell, Don't Show: http://bit.ly/fzpmNS

An agency with a publishing dictionary: http://bit.ly/dDXIZh

Dos and Don'ts of Combining Genres: http://bit.ly/flwgvE

Where the editors are in 2011: http://bit.ly/hrVjST

Revising by color: http://bit.ly/ekuFgE

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4 Ways To Make Yourself Complete a Book: http://bit.ly/e2uVb7

An author shares platform-building insights: http://bit.ly/hlx1HB

"I Did Everything Wrong...and Still Got a Contract": http://bit.ly/ikBbIA

Regaining Perspective on Your WIP: http://bit.ly/gPAKQ9

Equip Your Characters: http://bit.ly/fhZyfz

Cues from the Coach: Taming Your Characters: http://bit.ly/fBocan

The Looks of Writers, Or How To At Least Look Like A Writer: http://bit.ly/fgJ1J7

Multiple POVs--how many is too many? http://bit.ly/eO3U2K

On Languages, Linguistics, the Future, and the Fantasy: http://bit.ly/fP7Sfc

What makes a book great? http://bit.ly/fYLhgy

Are You a Wimpy Blogger? http://bit.ly/ib8895

Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Welcome, Guest Author Ellery Adams http://bit.ly/h5oy5m @CleoCoyle

A Novel is Not a Story: http://bit.ly/hgK67Z

When an Author Meets His Critics: http://huff.to/hDrAQq

WordPress Plugins To Rock Your World: http://bit.ly/dGoefJ

The Charlie Sheen Guide to Winning! at Online Marketing: http://bit.ly/geoSUM

A Writer Blogs About Process: http://bit.ly/fVDt07

Six Limitations of the First Person POV: http://bit.ly/fkW7wg

What's popular on the WKB search engine today? http://bit.ly/g9fTqf

9 Mindfulness Rituals to Make Your Day Better (a little zen for writers): http://bit.ly/hu1rxA

Self-Editing: Character Development: http://bit.ly/gGBjgG

Writing is about growing up: http://bit.ly/dPWRaB

Developing Voices for Different POVs: http://bit.ly/hcFb8J

8 iPhone Apps to Grow & Connect With Audience: http://bit.ly/fOJzaW

How To Tell If Your Writing Is Any Good - Part 1: http://bit.ly/gKc5D0

6 Ways to Promote Your Book for Free: http://bit.ly/gmQCzl

Social Media: There's No Such Thing as Too Early: http://bit.ly/htxEMp

A Writer's Antidotes for Envy: http://bit.ly/f0byLS

Top 12 iPhone Apps That'll Increase Your Productivity: http://bit.ly/eVRtCg

The Preposition Gnome: http://bit.ly/i4HJ6p

The art of hitting send: http://bit.ly/esCVjS

Connections between some well-known crime writers' lives and their stories: http://bit.ly/e1qFJ7 @mkinberg

Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Is it time for a party? http://bit.ly/fssh8L @CleoCoyle

Resources for Christian Fiction Writers: http://bit.ly/dSMZd6

How Captain Kirk Led An Author to Write Historical Fiction: http://bit.ly/eAmrTN

Immersed in our stories: http://bit.ly/gzdUqw

Desperate writers: http://bit.ly/i4dhFJ

When Good Characters Do Thoughtless Things

I always enjoy hearing from my readers. In fact, my readers' comments can really influence my writing.

I've heard from a couple of readers since Pretty is as Pretty Dies was released in 2009 that they disagreed with a character's actions in one scene. I'll try to be a little vague here, since I don't want to write in any spoilers.

My protagonist, octogenarian Myrtle Clover, was attacked and was rescued by a new neighbor who was, basically, a stranger to her because he'd recently moved in.

Myrtle and her police officer son, Red, have a little bit of a prickly relationship. They love each other, but they get on each others' nerves. Badly. Myrtle is irritated by her son's meddling. She insists on her independence and some respect. Red is irritated that Myrtle puts herself in bad situations and interferes in things he'd rather see her leave alone.

The new neighbor, after rescuing Myrtle, calls her son. It's very late at night and Red is awakened by the call. He comes over, hears her story, fusses over her. They nettle each other a little. Myrtle stubbornly decides to stay with her neighbor who has fixed them coffees. Red goes back home and goes back to bed.

He shouldn't have left her, say these readers.

It wasn't a case of character motivation—if it was, then I'd definitely be paying attention. These two have something of a contentious relationship. The main reason for the tension is Myrtle's desire to be taken seriously. She wants respect and independence. She wouldn't have appreciated being carted back to her home by Red unless she wanted to go there.

But the readers disagreed with Red's actions. They thought he was being thoughtless. That he wasn't being a good son by not protecting her…regardless of whether she wanted that protection or not.

Both times the readers asked me about this, it was in person. Which is unfortunate because both times my automatic response was, "Oh, I totally understand what you're saying. But that was the character's choice. That's what he chose to do. He was being thoughtless."

Acting like our characters are alive is probably one of those things that gives writers a reputation for being a little crazy.

But I knew that this was a thoughtless, inattentive thing that this particular character would do in that circumstance.

I've thought about this a little lately, mainly because I'm about to address a book club in South Carolina in a couple of weeks for this book, and want to be prepared with something a little better to say than, "But that's what the character did."

I still really believe this nice guy would be thoughtless in this circumstance. Here it is, the middle of the night and he's been pulled out of bed. He's irritated, scared for his mother's safety, and she's still harping at him about how she's completely fine and he needs to stop his fussing. I think I laid the groundwork in the early part of the book for him to behave that way. It doesn't seem to be to be out of character, but it seems like something he'd do when tired, grouchy, and generally out of sorts.

When he was having a bad day.

What I think I would do if I wrote the book over again, is that even though I set up the motivation and the groundwork, I needed to have some sort of repercussion for that behavior.

My readers were outraged for Myrtle. I'm glad they liked her enough to want to protect her. They were quite fierce, both times, when they brought it up. I appreciated it.

I listen carefully to my editors' ideas. I listen really carefully to my readers'.

I think there's sometimes an urge when we're reading books, or maybe in life too, to see someone pay for a mistake. Even just a mild one. Or at least to get told off for it.

If I had to write it again, I'd have Red's wife take him down a notch, when he got back home: "You did what? Left her over with some new neighbor she's never met? After she's been attacked? What?"

Because vengeance can be sweet.

So, summing up, I think the better approach for having a nice guy (not, in this case, the protagonist, but an important character) behave thoughtlessly is to not only lay the groundwork for this type of behavior, but to have some sort of repercussion for this behavior or some sort of dressing down for it later.

Have you ever had a good guy do something thoughtless or imprudent? How did you approach it?