Elizabeth Spann Craig's Blog, page 206
April 23, 2011
Twitterific

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Here are writing links that I've posted to Twitter in the last week.
I'm delighted that now we have an efficient method of locating resources on writing topics when you need them—via the Writer's Knowledge Base search engine and software engineer and writer Mike Fleming's ingenuity. The links I tweet (which are writers' blogs, agents' and editors' blogs) all are added to the engine to make it easier for you to access the information you're looking for.
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How to Punctuate Dialogue in Novels and Short Stories: http://bit.ly/h0EnDm
An editor on show and tell: http://bit.ly/hBIFiJ
Use a character web to track your characters: http://bit.ly/hCLgoI
3 types of secondary characters: http://bit.ly/fCq6cp
17 Places to Get Headline Ideas: http://bit.ly/edroWD
Description 101: Is Your Description Helping Your Story or Holding it Back? http://bit.ly/dEcdw9
How one writer's nonfiction project came to life: http://bit.ly/gQFQps
What No Writer Should Ignore - Their Health: http://bit.ly/hWnm02
3 Guidelines for Creating a Title with Shelf Appeal: http://bit.ly/e30ua2
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: IRISH STEW http://bit.ly/gAiEfm @CleoCoyle
On Epistolary Novels: http://bit.ly/ewGLvd
On motivation: http://bit.ly/dH9RF7
Writer/editor @JaneFriedman 's thoughts on drinking + life + writing: http://bit.ly/dQCLXV
Types of writing warm-ups: http://bit.ly/dMBEJ5
The Armchair BEA: http://bit.ly/hKfWtH
Character traits instead of physical descriptions to identify characters & writing prompts for warm ups: http://bit.ly/eME5Yj @writeprompts
Turning Short Stories Into A Novel: http://bit.ly/fC4Jdr
50 Ways to Dodge The Blog Burnout Sucker Punch: http://bit.ly/eTbDPl
My Story Got Workshopped. Now What? http://bit.ly/hsKtbl
On conflict and the amount to have in your story: http://bit.ly/eRoy4G
Who's Misusing Whose? http://bit.ly/fdP2l5
Scenes that do double-duty. Or when your characters need to unionize: http://bit.ly/e9KXwl
Making Writing Your Business: Specifying Actions: http://bit.ly/gzYwSe
Tips for writing a travel memoir: http://bit.ly/gJuc9C
Get control of your characters: http://bit.ly/glAotz
Read, read, read – and why you should: http://bit.ly/h5duUN
5 things stand-up comedians can teach you about self-publishing: http://bit.ly/fG4xbk
The role of memory in crime fiction: http://bit.ly/fg7j8y @mkinberg
A Defense of Traditional Publishing: http://bit.ly/fFMZUr
For Earth Day: 7 Ways to be a Green Writer: http://bit.ly/hoT4px @LauraMarcella
Ways for Writers to Stay Fit: http://bit.ly/hbJR9Y
The Skill List Project: Viewpoint and Story Experience: http://bit.ly/g8iwOY
Slow Blogging: A Commitment: http://bit.ly/gHGzVH
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Lemon Cookies for Easter http://bit.ly/eGGivt @CleoCoyle
An editorial chat on prose: http://bit.ly/eIFZFH
Fantasy Is Not Safe: http://bit.ly/h9eR98
Are you prepared to answer the question, "What's your book about?"? http://bit.ly/fbdRlI @jamigold
Writing rituals: http://bit.ly/ekvaXp
Can't Write? Draw: http://bit.ly/gNhzlN
Working Through an Agent's Critique Letter: http://bit.ly/fZIYts @4kidlit
Guest Blogging Etiquette: Let's Make a Deal: http://bit.ly/gvJ4gM
Things to consider before branching out into other genres: http://bit.ly/hoxZQv
What to Do When Your Writing Takes a Back Seat: http://bit.ly/f7ENtj
How to choose the best story idea: http://bit.ly/h9Ii1X
5 Critical Areas to Focus On For Writing Skills Growth: http://bit.ly/igIdVY
Self-editing checklist--voice and viewpoint: http://bit.ly/eTMFJT
How Amazon Recommendation Algorithms Help Sell Your Book: http://bit.ly/fh8Mr3 @thecreativepenn
Making the Author-Editor Connection: The Importance of Being Edited: http://bit.ly/ga3IjE
7 Reasons Why Your Posts Aren't Getting Retweeted: http://bit.ly/ejBnvX
Got social media app challenges? A software trainer & writer wants to help: http://bit.ly/f9vHke @jhansenwrites
Why one writer quit querying: http://bit.ly/e4glqJ @keligwyn
Doubtlessly, there is doubt: http://bit.ly/exObqc
Writing Your Character's Thoughts: http://bit.ly/h9uACh @CherylRWrites
A Yes-and-No Answer About Hyphenating Phrases: http://bit.ly/ig8sHh
Exploring the difference between having readers and having *fans*: http://bit.ly/huGo6J
Mental Signposts That Tell, Not Show: http://bit.ly/g1Jhi3
Defining foundation concepts: http://bit.ly/fQFjKO
7 Secrets of Creating Effective Email Campaigns: http://bit.ly/eP8jCF
A revision success story: http://bit.ly/gdG9cX
Beware Milli Vanilli Syndrome: http://bit.ly/giNYwT
Broadcastr Launches Android App: http://bit.ly/gkvJmR @galleycat
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Easter Dessert http://bit.ly/gEySIx @CleoCoyle
Is Myth Dead? What is Myth and how did we kill it? http://bit.ly/fOl4tb @agent139
4 Ways to Keep Your Lifeless Blog from Boring Your Readers to Tears: http://bit.ly/eZSWNz
13 Ways to Screw Up Your Query: http://bit.ly/fQMKOU
10 Tips for Writing Excellence From Top Writing Bloggers: http://bit.ly/eb3aJR
Help For Those Late Night Fights With Your Blog: http://dld.bz/Xtsj @jhansenwrites
Beneath Our Feet and Above Our Heads: http://bit.ly/eZ4Et4
On Earning Out: http://bit.ly/hWNNmK
7 Considerations When Writing Descriptions: http://bit.ly/dXuUTg @authorterryo
Standing Out in the Slushpile: Some Basic Tips: http://bit.ly/eAQCrU
What were this month's most popular writing articles? Sign up for the monthly WKB newsletter for links & interviews: http://bit.ly/gx7hg1
Best of the Best - Speculative Fiction Resources: http://bit.ly/fu8KqU @bluemaven
Top 10 Reasons You Should Rewrite That Scene: http://bit.ly/fav9gu
5 brutal truths about feedback on writing: http://bit.ly/fq7GYz @jammer0501
If you've had near misses with agents and publishers – should you self-publish? http://bit.ly/hveW7E @dirtywhitecandy
Blogs and branding: http://bit.ly/gOFDNX
Writing and taxes: http://bit.ly/dR5H4H
Care and Feeding of the Discouraged Writer: http://bit.ly/iaItaE @CherylRWrites
Romantic comedy truisms: http://bit.ly/fI43lZ
Publishing, POD, eBooks, Self-Publishing—Indie Editor FAQ: http://bit.ly/eZuUIK
What Makes a Strong Female Character Strong? http://bit.ly/fL9usM
Do you know enough to self-publish? http://bit.ly/eUxi0U
Be a Transparent Tweeter: http://bit.ly/hKI4OZ
Mix your industry learning with writing time: http://bit.ly/f0yl9z @jamigold
A look at 'quiet' murder mysteries: http://bit.ly/e4H9c8 @mkinberg
Color theory and color symbolism: http://bit.ly/fx9gYI
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Quick Potato Casserole http://bit.ly/dWhmnR @CleoCoyle
10 Reasons Why You Should Be Blogging: http://bit.ly/g7hd82
Abstraction of interactions: http://bit.ly/hfSAma @RavenRequiem13
Mystery Writer's Guide To Forensic Science - Paternity Tests: http://bit.ly/h0bvfj @clarissadraper
On em dashes: http://bit.ly/eqdQoj
When did your love affair with books start? How one editor's love of books began: http://bit.ly/i3xdAV @p2p_editor
How Do Your Characters Sound? http://bit.ly/e4qMpc @Paize_Fiddler
Tips for designing your own cover from an author who's done it: http://bit.ly/gIjNDz , http://bit.ly/hT38oa, http://bit.ly/fwHD9i @smreine
Will E-Books Save Short Stories? http://bit.ly/gKsXlV @ajackwriting
10 lies you might tell yourself while editing: http://bit.ly/hj3bfV @elspethwrites
Reality vs Drama (modifying reality to fit our story needs): http://bit.ly/hNDgxu
Turn Writing Weaknesses into Strengths: http://bit.ly/es6K6P
The entire NY Times "Writers on Writing" series: http://bit.ly/eAUAeF via @Quotes4Writers
Fictional Time Travel That Won't Make a Physicist Cringe: http://bit.ly/gnVGx3
When Should Writers Worry About Copyright? http://bit.ly/g7SDJ7
12 Signs Your Novel isn't Ready to Publish: http://bit.ly/i3tSDY
5 Tips for Getting Back in the Groove: http://bit.ly/hfN8tb @CherylRWrites
3 myths about agents: http://bit.ly/epLWL9 @tawnafenske
What Will It Take To Make Science Fiction Romance "Truly Excellent"? http://bit.ly/hmgxWx
Using the sense of smell in your writing: http://bit.ly/eMbJve
The reader's experience: http://bit.ly/eK3h2G
Don't hide info that readers need: http://bit.ly/frISMF
Design themes for your WordPress site: http://bit.ly/idaGYF
Independent tracking of eBook sales: http://bit.ly/elNYKk
5 helpful questions for building a story: http://bit.ly/hLxQjY
Writing in the Golden Age of Ebooks: http://bit.ly/gDtn7Z
Scriptwriters: A Procrastinator's Guide to Surviving Act 2: http://bit.ly/g7ZpGh
Celebrating the 'empty nest' of a new book: http://bit.ly/geaQpf
The Ebook Will Evolve. So Should Authors: http://bit.ly/hfVWIN
The writer's thesaurus--now with entries for weather to join the entries for setting, emotions, symbolism: http://bit.ly/eIGRMO
How to develop raving blog fans: http://bit.ly/fZJODJ
The Writer's Life? Only You Know: http://bit.ly/hJkRE4
Think Like A Publisher #8… Price, Discounts, and Sales: http://bit.ly/edGdg3
10 Reasons to Practice Freewriting: http://bit.ly/g0vVEi @CherylRWrites
What were this month's most popular writing articles? Sign up for the monthly WKB newsletter for links & interviews: http://bit.ly/gx7hg1
Introducing The New Slush Readers: http://bit.ly/e9RB4f
Booksigning Etiquette: http://bit.ly/fbxSSD
The importance of pathos: http://bit.ly/gcGthd
Writing Your Character's Thoughts: 3rd Person Limited POV: http://bit.ly/dKAPQI @CherylRWrites
5 Qualities to Consider During Character Development: http://bit.ly/i8DP77
Brainstorming tips: http://bit.ly/eJFH9b
Style Sheets: An Editorial Tool: http://bit.ly/hSJTvn
Key Story Elements - Ordinary World and Special World: http://bit.ly/eHj75K
How to Avoid the Comparison Trap: http://bit.ly/e7elw9 @keligwyn
YA Deals By The Numbers: http://bit.ly/e4qFiC
They're Just Not That Into You: Dealing With Reviews: http://bit.ly/e9vL5N
An editorial chat on character development: http://bit.ly/fwqCT1 @dirtywhitecandy
Learn how to write a screenplay by studying great scripts: http://bit.ly/e1eC09 #scriptwriting
Freelancers--Avoiding Unscoped Work from Unreasonable Clients: http://bit.ly/gRV0dm
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Cadbury Creme Style Chocolate Easter Eggs From Scratch? http://bit.ly/hkCnEg @CleoCoyle
A Loose History of Vampires: http://bit.ly/fYBJcb
The Problem of Absolutes in Fantasy Literature: http://bit.ly/eMtibY
Do We Need Our Heroes to Slip? http://bit.ly/hq5UQP
Best Tweets for Writers (week ending 4/15/11): http://bit.ly/e1eN2v
A roundup of interesting links for historical writers: http://bit.ly/fgg9YP
The Dystopia/Utopia Dichotomy: http://bit.ly/ihAXWr
Book Fair Bewares for Writers: http://bit.ly/gOQplX
Overstuffed Dialogue: http://bit.ly/eRADSv
27 ways to promote your book—before writing it, before launching it, & after publishing it: http://bit.ly/f7E43A
Need help with scene transitions? http://bit.ly/fivggV
4 Places to Get Your Creative Juices Flowing: http://bit.ly/eamUcz
When the Words Won't Flow: 4 Tools to Try: http://bit.ly/ey9GkX @CherylRWrites
How Not to Use Speaker Tags and Action Beats: http://bit.ly/evgmqs
Just make the pancakes. http://bit.ly/ewkm9J @Christi_Craig
12 Weak Words We Can Turn into Strong Ones: http://bit.ly/dZ7EaA @keligwyn
Writing prompts to jumpstart creativity: http://bit.ly/fxp2iY @WritePrompts
Job-hunting advice for journalists selling skills in the digital market: http://bit.ly/eGeQoB
Novelist proposes to girlfriend in print (Guardian): http://bit.ly/gzkToV
The Aches and Pains of Being a Writer: http://bit.ly/fblaIr
E-publishing With a Publisher Versus Self-publishing: http://bit.ly/g11uQB
Slipping in Character Description: http://bit.ly/hnQSKy
How do you know which critique advice to take and which to ignore? http://bit.ly/hvPKBB
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Welcome Guest Blogger Amanda Flower http://bit.ly/fVBCoR @CleoCoyle
How To Amp Up Sexual Tension In Your Story: http://bit.ly/dSLNvg @RoniLoren
20 Great Similes from Literature to Inspire You: http://bit.ly/fR5WXP
Should we jot down story ideas we get, so we won't forget them? Stephen King says not to: http://bit.ly/gE4NkH @hektorkarl
7 Strategies to Keep Momentum When You Don't Have Time to Write: http://bit.ly/hJ5d2a @CherylRWrites
Want to write a book but don't know where to start? http://bit.ly/fjlaTJ
Mistaken Newbie Writer Beliefs: http://bit.ly/e7j6X5
Jewels in crime fiction: http://bit.ly/e8c7fD @mkinberg
April 22, 2011
Making a Good Impression
My children were off all week for spring break. We had a lunch date with my sister yesterday.
My plan was to drive to uptown Charlotte, pick her up outside her building, and go off to a sub shop for a casual lunch.
The children and I were just about to hop in the car when I got a text. "How about," my sister said, "if you park and come up in the building? We'll visit for a little while and the kids can see my office. Then we can go for lunch."
That sounded great, but the children and I looked really scruffy. I was wearing denim capris that had shrunk from staying in the dryer too long (oops) and a sweatshirt that had seen better days. My daughter had on an outfit that didn't match and my teenage son looked like he'd just rolled out of bed. We looked all right for a sub shop with my sister (maybe), but not good for going into a skyscraper of a major bank and meeting my sister's coworkers.
"Sure," I texted. Then we all changed clothes before we headed out. :) We met some nice people on the 18th floor and looked like upstanding citizens.
I spend a good deal of time trying to make sure that I'm giving a good impression to readers, other writers, and people in the publishing industry when they encounter me online.
Making a bad impression in person isn't good either, but at least those usually fade. If you mess up online, it lives online forever. It's like the mistake that keeps on giving.
I know that, on Google, my website is the first thing that comes up. Which, actually, is bizarre because I'm sure my blog gets more traffic. My website (although it needs updating) tells people a little about me and my books and how to contact me or buy my books. That's really its sole purpose. I keep it pretty basic. I think it's important to have some sort of website to serve as a hub for our online identity.
Another important place to make a good impression is blogging. Again, I've got a way to contact me, something about me, and a little about my books. For me, blogging is my favorite way to interact online. Although I know some writers do tread into political discussions or other controversial areas….I'm just not going to go there. I've heard of a couple of writers who got negative feedback from different publishers for expressing some of their (strong) opinions. And again it's the 'making a good impression' thing—I don't want to turn off any readers, for sure. I wouldn't assume that everyone shares my views on different subjects.
Online bookselling sites are other places where writers need to make a good impression. Actually, it's good to create a non-impression there. We really don't need to ever pipe up in the review section for our books. If we get a bad review, we get a bad review. Arguing with the reviewer really just looks unprofessional. There are times I've noticed, though, when readers have given a book a bad review because Amazon shipped it late, etc. In those cases, I'd just report the review to Amazon because it doesn't have anything to do with the book. But I still wouldn't defend my book online—I just don't think the writer ever wins.
Social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter are tricky sometimes because it's easy for words to be taken the wrong way. And I do recommend having a public Facebook identity and a private one. When my old friends from junior high want to friend me on my public page, I just gently suggest that they'd be more interested in my private one…and vice versa. Otherwise I'd end up being tagged in pictures from when I was 12 on my professional account. That would stress me out. :)
Looking back over this post, I'm realizing how cautious it sounds. I do interact a lot online every day—but I always read over what I'm saying before I hit 'send.' And with static sites (like my website), I try to make sure it's just serving its purpose.
How do you work to make a good impression online?
April 21, 2011
Writing Warm-ups
I have such a hectic schedule that I usually end up writing on the go, scribbling out a couple of paragraphs when I've got a few quiet minutes.
I used to think that I was doing this writing without any kind of warm-up. I'm realizing now that that's totally wrong—I'm warming up by my daily habit of blogging (and the fact that I write a little every day).
Warming up options:
Blogging—To me, blogging is one of the easiest ways to warm up for writing each day. Besides the great writing exercise, it's a nice way to stay in the habit of writing, develop friendships, and build a platform.
Morning Pages—I've heard a lot about Morning Pages (a daily warm-up recommended by author Julia Cameron in her book, The Artist's Way but haven't actually tried it myself. She states that:
Morning Pages are three pages of longhand, stream of consciousness writing, done first thing in the morning. There is no wrong way to do Morning Pages-- they are not high art. They are about anything and everything that crosses your mind-- and they are for your eyes only.
Short projects (poems, short stories, articles): Completing short projects can help you feel like you're making some creative headway, especially if it looks like the end of your novel is light years away. They're also nice if you're getting restless or bored with what you're currently working on.
Prompts: Prompts aren't only good for getting your creative juices flowing, I've heard some writers say that they can also inspire new direction for stories they're currently working on.
Recently, Anjie from Prompts for Writers asked me to be a guest poster and write some prompts. I do really like Anjie's site because she always comes up with more than one prompt—she'll have a journaling prompt, one for poetry, one for fiction, etc.—and I think her site would be a great resource for teachers as well as writers. My post is up there today: http://promptsforwriters.blogspot.com/ . (As a side note, I know that she's also looking for writers to guest there and write prompts…might be a unique part of some folks blog tours.)
How do you warm up for writing? Or do you jump right in? Or, like me, do you warm up early and then jump right in at several later points during your day?
April 20, 2011
Writing Other Genres

From what I've heard from other writers, this isn't usually the point of view of their agents. I'm not speaking from personal experience because I'm only interested in writing traditional mysteries for the foreseeable future.
But I've heard that agents prefer it when writers specialize in a genre.
I think this is because you're easier to brand as a writer to editors that the agent might know. I'm pretty sure that my agent is branding me to editors as someone who writes traditional mysteries with Southern settings. It definitely makes it easier for me to get work. If someone wants a series that fits my profile, they know they can contact my agent about it.
When a writer writes several different genres (not genre-blending, but different genres for different books), I think it muddies the waters a little, in the agent's eyes. Now they need to brand you several different ways to their contacts. Maybe they need to develop new editorial contacts in areas where they haven't before.
I know that if I suddenly decided that I wanted to write children's picture books, I would need to find another agent for those books. My agent doesn't handle that—she says so on her site. I would be asking her to make totally new relationships with people in an area she doesn't plan on working in. Besides, I would want an agent that specializes in those types of books and has contacts in that genre, anyway.
If I were to switch genres, I'd almost definitely do it under a pseudonym. That's because I wouldn't want my mystery reading base accidentally buy books that are a totally different genre—possibly one they don't even read. That would be a good way to lose some readers.
Writing under a pen name basically means starting over with a fresh platform…getting that name known on Twitter, Facebook, blogs, etc. You'd have to work to tie in your pen name to your real name (that's already branded.) I've done this and it does take a lot of extra energy.
Agent Wendy Lawton wrote a great post some time ago on the Books and Such blog about switching genres. She points out that most of a writer's dedicated readers don't want to follow along into new writing ventures. She states:
They have expectations. They don't want you to write like Jodi Picoult. If they want Jodi Picoult, they'll buy Jodi Piccoult. They want you to write like you.
Another point that Wendy Lawton makes (that I hadn't really thought of) is this:
And wanting to write it all– even if we can– displays a strange kind of hubris. It's like you are saying you are all any reader needs. "You like mystery? I'll give you mystery. You want a tender memoir. I can do that. You want literary fiction. That's me. You want a book on how to save your marriage? Let me get right on that."
All that being said—I'm likely going to branch into other genres at some point. I'd like to have another 25 years in this business and at some point I'm going to be interested in trying other things. I've already decided that when that day comes, I'll probably have to query an agent for that particular genre and also write under a different name.
In the meantime, I'll write magazine articles, poetry, and the occasional short story to just shake things up a little bit.
Are you a writer who writes different genres? How are you approaching representation and promotion?
April 19, 2011
Keeping the Fun in Writing
My teenager has a love/hate relationship with music right now.
I can understand where he's coming from. He really enjoys music and loves making it. He's not so wild about the hours of practice.
He plays the baritone for school and recently told me that he was interested in starting guitar lessons.
My husband pointed out that he would probably enjoy guitar more and practice more if he enjoyed the lessons and if the teacher made it fun. I asked around and finally settled on a teacher that several of my son's friends were using.
Last week was the first lesson. I knew the teacher was going to work out when the first thing he asked my son was, "What type of music do you like to listen to?"
Sometimes I can feel the same way about writing that my son feels about music. There's a lot of work involved in practicing the writing craft. I love writing. But sometimes when the editing or promo is dragging me down, I have to remind myself that I do.
There are definitely some easy ways to make writing more fun. I think the most important one is to write what you enjoy reading.
Also:
Write what you're good at (dialogue, action, humor). Nothing beats feeling successful about what you're writing and know that you're doing a good job.
Write in different places—outside, inside, coffee shops, etc. . The nice thing about writing is its portability.
Read for inspiration and as a reminder of why we choose to write.
For some reason, office supply stores (which are dangerous places for me!) are always fun. I love coming back with sticky notes, pencils, pens, and new notebooks of different sizes.
Hang out with other writers—online and in person. It's inspirational.
How do you keep writing fun?
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April 18, 2011
Actions Speak Louder Than Words

One of the things that really pulls me out of a book or movie is when a character acts out of character.
In one book I read recently, the author had gone to great pains to tell how intelligent one character was. The character had experienced great academic success, had a great job, read thought-provoking literature.
All of that gets chucked out the window for me when that same, "smart" character does something really foolish in the book.
It was obvious that the writer had needed the character to do something stupid, just to make the plot move in a particular direction.
To me, this just demonstrates how much more powerful showing is than telling. Sure, you can tell me that this character was summa cum laude, but if the character is blithely heading into a dark cellar when she has a sneaking suspicion that a killer is down there, then you've shown me she isn't so bright.
It's a good reminder for me, because I'm frequently thinking about ways to convey personality traits, etc., by showing, but I don't often think about the process the other way around.
What I think I'm going to start looking at when I'm doing edits is, "Have I left the reader an impression about this character that I didn't intend?" Especially if it contradicts an image that I'm trying to plant.
Because actions can speak louder than words.
Have you run across characters in films or in books that you felt were acting out of character? And, as a side note, is it harder for you, as a writer, to get totally wrapped up in a book or movie without being critical?
April 17, 2011
Quick Note on Blogs and Branding
I follow a bunch of writing blogs--nearly 2000 now. And each time I find another writing blog out there (I'll click a new follower's link on Twitter, I'll click a link in someone's blogroll, etc.), I immediately click over and subscribe.
It's funny, but 90% of the time, I can tell the writer's genre from their blog. YA blogs pop on the page, mystery blogs have a lot of dark backgrounds (obviously Mystery Writing is Murder doesn't conform! I have a hard time reading dark backgrounds, so I just made mine very minimalistic. But I did get the word "mystery" in the masthead…), romantic blogs have a softer look, etc.
To me, it's instant branding. I get it. In my head I'm thinking, "Okay, when I'm looking for some great material from a YA/SFF/mystery/romance blog, then I'll pop by here."
There must be many other people who do the same thing—click over to a blog and get a feel for the writer who posts there and the material they write. I'm sure some of these folks are agents and editors who follow links in queries to blogs.
So I think it can be useful to either mention your genre in the subtitle of your blog (conventional wisdom states that it's the best branding practice to have your name as the blog's name—oops. :) ) or have the genre be obvious to anyone spending a few seconds on your site.
Helpful elements to have on your blog:
RSS feed button for those of us who like to quickly subscribe
Contact me link (you'll want agents or editors or other people to be able to reach you)
A way to belong: While I'm subscribing, I usually want to click on a Networked Blogs follow button or some other type of followers button
Blogroll: These are great for link exchanges. (Are you on mine? If you're not, let me know and I'll add you to my blogroll.)
About me: Even if you're anonymous you can spare a few tidbits. Something like "Science Fiction reader and writer who also enjoys writing poetry." Just something.
Buy links: If you've got books out
Links to any social media you belong to. For my purposes, it's handy to see a Twitter link if you have one so that I can @ you if I tweet a post.
Have any other tips for useful things to have on blogs? How does your blog introduce you to readers, writers, and others in the industry?
April 16, 2011
Twitterific

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Here are writing links that I've posted to Twitter in the last week.
I'm delighted that now we have an efficient method of locating resources on writing topics when you need them—via the Writer's Knowledge Base search engine and software engineer and writer Mike Fleming's ingenuity. The links I tweet (which are writers' blogs, agents' and editors' blogs) all are added to the engine to make it easier for you to access the information you're looking for.
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Jewels in crime fiction: http://bit.ly/e8c7fD @mkinberg
Foursquare Tool for Crime Novelists: http://bit.ly/ii9rFb @galleycat
How to write a screenplay: http://bit.ly/gKgymp
You Need a Complete Manuscript: http://bit.ly/gr1iKQ
What Not to Worry About in a 1st Draft: http://bit.ly/idYvQw
Rejecting the genre, not the writing: http://bit.ly/eSsQnX
When agents fly the coop: http://bit.ly/gNXQb0
Is it YA or Not? 5 Ways to Tell: http://bit.ly/hPDQLW
Can Reading Great Books Really Help Writers Grow? http://bit.ly/fnNDb5
Tips for perfecting your prose: http://bit.ly/gn78cx
A manifesto for creatives: http://bit.ly/gXyjug
Writing Is Like Comfort Food: http://bit.ly/eJNQmp
5 Ways to Repair Misused Em Dashes: http://bit.ly/dQFEZZ
On opening lines: http://bit.ly/g13E5F
Smart, Non-intrusive Ways to Monetize a Blog: http://bit.ly/eV1Cel
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Hurry Scurry Berry Tart http://bit.ly/i2owGN
2 writers with thoughts on writing humor: http://bit.ly/g3GCdA
Offbeat Lessons From 3 Late-Blooming Writers: http://bit.ly/fwy4fl
Where does dystopia fit as a genre? http://bit.ly/h1UXd9
4 places to check your transitions: http://bit.ly/hmVwjq
Self-Publishers Speak: Weaving Your Safety Net Mid-leap: http://bit.ly/g9dwi5
Get Prepared for Maximum Writing Effectiveness: http://bit.ly/e66eZy @NewbieAuthor
What a good old-fashioned lie can do for your story: http://bit.ly/gOseDo
Crafting an Opening That Draws You In: http://bit.ly/ianoIe
Finding Your Voice: 7 Tips: http://bit.ly/hTfR1S @CherylRWrites
The Top Seven Reasons Publishers Reject Nonfiction Book Proposals: http://bit.ly/enxWDd
Now with over 7000 links to help #writers find resources: http://bit.ly/dYRayA
Creativity Tweets of the Week — 4/15/11: http://bit.ly/ftkuKq @on_creativity
The Query Quandary: http://bit.ly/fl61Ze @WriteAngleBlog
Outline Techniques for Those Who Hate Outlines: http://bit.ly/fLvjcy
The Princess Bride—Storytelling Done Right: http://bit.ly/eCCBw7
Best Articles This Week for Writers 4/15/11: http://bit.ly/ezjYbU @4kidlit
Tweets, texts & posts: New sources for memoir writers: http://bit.ly/eJxUaX
A look at literary assistants (part 2): http://bit.ly/hzh68q
10 Sentences with Muddled Meanings Made Clear: http://bit.ly/h2P9Q2
5 Innovative Poets to Watch & Learn From: http://bit.ly/i8xcoj
Tips for writing transitions: http://bit.ly/eXsCLT
To Kindle, With Caution: http://bit.ly/eFAW0g
When Your WIP Is Too Short aka Massive Panic Attack Time! http://bit.ly/h7wXhB
Ebook Spam - "Bound" to Happen: http://bit.ly/dNG9ku @hopeclark
What to do if you love a book: http://bit.ly/ikwOpz @MaryJaneMaffini
Author income streams: http://bit.ly/f2zWOZ
Character Development in the 4 Act Structure (for erotic romance writers & others): http://bit.ly/eUtO9U @SaschaIllyvich
99 cents only works if you actually sell more copies: http://bit.ly/dZT9Ps
The Periodic Table of Storytelling and Cultural Gender Bias: http://bit.ly/hmTvWB
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Cookies from Leftovers! http://bit.ly/ewbkkI
Self-Publishing 911: http://bit.ly/idkNs5
Dystopian Fiction: An Introduction: http://bit.ly/hpFSFz
What does a writer need to succeed? Discipline: http://bit.ly/g5Bmua
What is your social media influence score? (And does it matter?): http://bit.ly/eyPOdX
Changing the Writer's POV: http://bit.ly/htG0E2
Widows and Orphans: http://bit.ly/emnyo0
Theories of literary greatness that enrage and perplex: http://bit.ly/g6c7Nw
7 writing sins and tips for avoiding them: http://bit.ly/i8Dgt9 @Riduna
Apple's Incredible iPad, One Year In: http://bit.ly/eR1jYZ
10 writing issues that stop agents in their tracks: http://bit.ly/fzp6ix
8 secrets writers won't tell you: http://bit.ly/fXvO58
Don't Ignore Logic When Writing Fiction for Children: http://bit.ly/i3ycp4
Think Like a Publisher #7… A Sales Plan: http://bit.ly/eC9N7D
Surviving the publishing apocalypse: http://bit.ly/hD2T2F @ajackwriting
Tools for writers who are learning addicts: http://bit.ly/hgKeYo @jamigold
Writers Conference or Workshop? http://bit.ly/h2fMu5
Updating a novel--yes or no to including current music and tech trends? http://bit.ly/grCTuC @authorterryo
The Short Synopsis: http://bit.ly/f5hfdP
Steinbeck's travel book gets fact-checked (NY Times): http://nyti.ms/gLYZey
Confessions of an A.D.D. Writer: http://bit.ly/f7C1lX @jhansenwrites
Want to write? 18 great writers and thinkers show you how: http://bit.ly/gRqk4O @inkyelbows
Top 5 Ways to Get Your Articles Found and Read Online:http://bit.ly/f6t0kj
Explaining steampunk: http://bit.ly/g0mnHh
How a Simple Timer Can Magically Improve Your Productivity: http://bit.ly/hcRYyU
Keeping book clutter off the bookshelf: http://bit.ly/hQYXOv
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: How to Make Fondue http://bit.ly/i5XaNY
Support Your Fellow Writer: http://bit.ly/h0P8g0
The Secret History of Ads in Books (NY Times): http://nyti.ms/fQ6H5I
A writer worries about giving his Social Security number to editors: http://bit.ly/ekD8OZ
Writers' torture: waiting for your script to be read: http://bit.ly/eZSaLp
Your Backlist Is a Veritable Gold Mine: http://bit.ly/grg8VA
Costly pitfalls to avoid when setting up your website: http://bit.ly/fqhRUv
7 Rules to Pitching a Glossy Magazine: http://bit.ly/eDQQo5
Is your book's setting ho-hum? http://bit.ly/gByyLa
A Dollhouse Metaphor for Writing: http://bit.ly/gBCoLZ
Accept your foibles and observe your writing patterns: http://bit.ly/fVLVpG
5 tips to quickly finish your 1st draft: http://bit.ly/hLSAci @alanorloff
Selling Poetry? 5 Ways to Market Your Book of Poems: http://bit.ly/iedK8a
Query letters for scriptwriters: http://bit.ly/huZPna
Launch a Brand New Blog … with Authority: http://bit.ly/f66x7q
Interactive Narratives and the Future of Storytelling: http://bit.ly/i2BlA4
How to use props in your writing: http://bit.ly/id0q89 @cristinterrill
Track Changes…Friend To Writers and Trees: http://bit.ly/i425fD @jhansenwrites
First Person Verses Third Person: http://bit.ly/eUvlyG
The Top 10 books Americans most want banned (Guardian): http://bit.ly/hfFACw
On Editor/Agent Requests - Some things to consider: http://bit.ly/fCimWP
Dialogue--make it matter: http://bit.ly/hpZDDR @juliemusil
Win vs. compete: http://bit.ly/fLmiaI
This Week's Fail Whale–The Twitter Tyrant: http://bit.ly/ghEmoA
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Fruit Salad in a Flash http://bit.ly/hbUkmA
The E-Publishing Outlook for Average Authors:My E-Book Sales: http://bit.ly/fY4jFe
And now there's a book out there with your name on it. Imagine that. (Guardian): http://bit.ly/h7duGW
Short Stories vs. Novels - "natural length" and the fractal structure of stories: http://bit.ly/e7URUH
Writerly confessions: http://bit.ly/hRg08m @SW_Messenger
The Kindle as a revision tool: http://bit.ly/fROdtR
Confessions of a Dangerous Twitterer: http://bit.ly/dGMDHN
The Fine Art of Conquering Impatience: http://bit.ly/h6GaMe
Tips for Kindle Authors: http://bit.ly/gl82CU @thecreativepenn
Dialogue Problems and How To Fix Them 1: All your dialogue sounds the same. http://bit.ly/hY0MmK @ajackwriting
ABCs of story analysis: http://bit.ly/em1iYf
One writer has a publisher but still wants an agent. Here's why: http://bit.ly/eM5jNt
Proper Use of The Semicolon: http://bit.ly/gRQoOg
When friends and family don't get the point of our writing: http://bit.ly/eknr8D
The importance of setting: http://bit.ly/hG8UW5
More on Success and Rejection: http://bit.ly/dUw9p3
The difference between editing and proofreading--and tips for both: http://bit.ly/hhaPwW @jhansenwrites
3 steps to finding alternate endings that work: http://bit.ly/fwkfc0
Want to Sell Your Story? Peel Away the Layers to Create Memorable Characters: http://bit.ly/fpTIPP @authorterryo
The Best Agent Blogs of 2011: http://bit.ly/fimD0k
Need tips for plotting? http://bit.ly/fiTDIR
5 things stand-up comedians can teach you about self-publishing: http://bit.ly/dIpwU5
Protagonists shouldn't be bystanders in their own lives: http://bit.ly/gINJaN
The Protagonist: Using Character Clusters: http://bit.ly/gJT8Y0
The ingredients of a perfect writer's blog: http://bit.ly/gVAecj
Top 5 Mistakes Writers Make at Conferences: http://bit.ly/g13Kqf
Less is more when writing: http://bit.ly/g5YwZq @Paize_Fiddler
The Dreaded Query Letter: http://bit.ly/dWhzs3
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Maple Cookies 2 Ways from Cleo Coyle http://bit.ly/ikuoXR
All about line editing: http://bit.ly/ePcMun @victoriamixon
Telling Just Enough: http://bit.ly/ftjjNu
How to keep having great ideas: http://bit.ly/hePATC @jammer0501
Some examples illustrating authorial voice: http://bit.ly/gRE8kr
Give yourself permission to be as creative as you can be: http://bit.ly/dEVRzD
Research--how to do it and when to stop doing it: http://bit.ly/gRdygL
Trends in Middle-Grade: http://bit.ly/hffjcZ @jemifraser
One writer is a Kindle convert (National Post): http://bit.ly/euWORb
What if literary characters were agents? http://bit.ly/hZ93xm
Pre-pub book marketing tips: http://bit.ly/g5SlPR
Writing your Synopses: How to begin? http://bit.ly/eCWmYq
Write For A Living In 7 Easy Steps: http://bit.ly/fBsrkx @thecreativepenn
You Can't Hook a Reader with a Yawn: http://bit.ly/gY6FdV
The Positive Side of Rejection: http://bit.ly/evIzRg
The phrase every publisher craves: word-of-mouth success (Guardian): http://bit.ly/eaCupc
Dialogue Tags: How To Kill Off Some Of The Little Buggers: http://bit.ly/g71qor
The Pain and Pleasure of Back-to-Back Releases: http://bit.ly/fUhHqT @MasonCanyon
3 Traits Your Hero and Villain Should Share: http://bit.ly/i23dKx
Using Comments to Build Your Blog Readership: http://bit.ly/ggWqUS
Helpful Wordpress plug-ins: http://bit.ly/fgwgpz
Excel: A Writer's Best Friend: http://bit.ly/fN99jY
4 social media lessons from the world of book publishing: http://bit.ly/ef5uWi
Ebook Authors: The Kids Are Coming: http://bit.ly/hXC8YV
The Trouble With Triples: Writing Trilogies: http://bit.ly/dUtKyj
I Didn't See That Coming: How To Avoid The Kiss-Of-Death Of Being Predictable: http://bit.ly/h14bJc
A crossword puzzle for romance readers (Borders blog): http://tinyurl.com/4xeoma8 @joanswan
Creating characters with disabilities: http://bit.ly/e7pp5g
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Un-Blueberry Pie http://bit.ly/ew9FZF
The less you spread yourself thin, the better your work: http://bit.ly/i4vfVF @hopeclark
Query Letters: Part 2: http://bit.ly/fAONgb
Two Sides to a Story: Plotting For Everyone: http://bit.ly/hawQlE
3 Tips For Finding Something To Say When You're Out of Ideas: http://bit.ly/fOearm
Scoring a Well-Rounded Manuscript: Voice: http://bit.ly/gwti1y
You gotta have an agreement first, doggone it: http://bit.ly/fa0XGq
No, Really. Finish the Manuscript. http://bit.ly/hA5QO0
Conversion Journey: One Writer's Word-to-E-book Workflow: http://bit.ly/hK02m1
Pacing Potholes: Common Hazards that Slow Forward Motion: http://bit.ly/gw2XG2
Query Letters That DON'T Work, Not Even a Little Bit: http://bit.ly/hsSD5t
Top 5 Children's Lit Agencies: http://bit.ly/fVyMiw
Why being agented is weird: reason #1: http://bit.ly/iiSVEX
Defining a content edit: http://bit.ly/fF04UI
10 Creativity Lessons from George Carlin: http://bit.ly/fFyHWc
Manuscript makeovers: http://bit.ly/dYqrHF
Pitching *is* a job interview: http://bit.ly/gatx3w
A mobile scriptwriting app: http://bit.ly/edzKDI
Write A Synopsis, Disney-Style: http://bit.ly/es0OaD
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Killer Kugel - to die for! http://bit.ly/dKcMeA
Should Self-Pubbed Authors Refer to Themselves as "Indie?" http://bit.ly/dPStAp
Switching your character's goal: http://bit.ly/dUj1iM
How Much More Do You Have to Learn? http://bit.ly/fUlwp0
Beautifully Written: http://bit.ly/gzG1Ge
On dramatic POV: http://bit.ly/fU2U1z
Story architecture--lessons from "The Source Code": http://bit.ly/eiOy0k
Screenwriting glossary: http://bit.ly/f8YOBC
8 tips for making your editor love you: http://bit.ly/i2IaNX
5 Reasons Your YA Character Might Flop: http://bit.ly/gpAKt5
Lemony Snicket's (Very Random) Guide for Writers: http://bit.ly/hwvyYP
Evaluating Critique Feedback: http://bit.ly/en7Utm
Once upon a backstory: http://bit.ly/gI87dR
5 things one writer wishes she'd known about the writing business: http://bit.ly/eCEluA
Eliminating Distancing Verbs: http://bit.ly/hpZZjk
Organizing a Writers Workshop: Pre-Publicity: http://bit.ly/fuBMap
Amping up your writing by getting fresh: http://bit.ly/eZfwUC
Dangling modifiers: http://bit.ly/eYAFtz
April 15, 2011
Where to Get Started
Twice in the last month, I've had someone say to me, "I've always wanted to write a book. But I just don't know where to start."
I think writing a book can seem really overwhelming. There are tons of resources out there, but those resources can be helpful…and overwhelming at the same time.
Most of the people who say they want to write a book have a germ of an idea already. It's this idea that's been on their mind for however long they've wanted to write.
Maybe it's a family story. Maybe it's just a thought they've had that they're not sure how to develop. But there's something there.
What these folks need to do is not worry about all the info on queries, synopses, and craft. It's always nice to just focus on the story.
First of all is identifying that story. What was the seed of the idea that came to the writer? Who is the main character? What's the main conflict? What does this character most want and how is that thing denied her/him?
Then it's telling the story. What happens next? What obstacles does this character run into when trying to get what they want most? Are these obstacles other characters? Events? The character himself? How does this character overcome these obstacles?
Where should you start with a first draft? Start at the beginning. Or…start at the end. I've done both. I've started at the beginning, skipped ahead to the middle of the book, then written the end. I've written books straight through and I've written books that I've run into huge problems with—and skipped around to whatever scene I've got in my head instead of moving forward in a linear way.
You don't have to block hours off on your calendar for this project. Try blocking off 30 minutes. Or even 15. Don't try to play catch-up the next day if you miss your goal the day before—treat each day as a clean slate and just get your 15 minutes of writing in.
It doesn't matter if your first draft is bad.
You can either outline your story or make it up as you go along. I've done both.
Ask yourself, "And then what happens?" a lot.
Make friends with writers online—they will understand what you're going through and can give you support and encouragement.
If you encounter set-backs with your story, brainstorm ways of getting past the problem—make lists of ways to get your characters out of the mess they're in.
Got any other advice for where to start writing a book? What have you learned from writing yours?
April 14, 2011
Making a Transition
I'm sure that my 14 year old son would like to correct anyone who thinks it's cool to have a writer for a mom. :)
I was reading through his research paper before he turned in yesterday. I thought he did an overall great job on it, but there was one thing that grated on me. I tried to mention all the good things first.
"Great job putting the info in your own words!" I said. "You've got some really solid paragraphs, too—nice topic sentences and supporting details. And those footnotes! Wow!" I hesitated.
"Okay. So what's wrong with it?" he asked. He's a cutting-to the-chase kind of kid.
"It's choppy. There really aren't any transitions between your thoughts. You're presenting the info, but it's not connected. It's just sort of jarring."
Maybe it's not the biggest problem for a research paper, but poor transitioning sure does make for a bumpy read in a novel. It's not fun to be confused or to wonder what's going on when I'm reading a book. Or to be bored by a transition that's too long or not necessary.
Transitions (or lack of them) that pull me out of a story:
Rambling transitions that call attention to themselves (I'll admit that this is an issue that might be just something that bothers me): The summer's heat finally gave way to fall's gentler temperatures. Trees shed their leaves and children packed their bookbags and headed back to class…blah, blah, blahhhhh.
Transitions that are too detailed and follow a character too closely (even when they're being boring): Clara walked to the door. She opened it and strolled out to her car, thinking about what she'd just heard from her mother. She turned the key in the ignition and slowly backed out of her driveway, checking her mirror. She decided she would go to the grocery store and pick up a gallon of ice cream. At this point I'm really just thinking how boring Clara is and how much I want to escape her company. We could easily have Clara just show up at the store, if that's where we need to have her: Clara searched the store's freezer for her favorite flavor of ice cream. "Why haven't you returned my phone calls, Clara?" asked a grim voice behind her…
Transitions that are too spaced out with no explanation: Two years later, John decided to finally apply for law school. Whaaa? Two years later is fine, but can we get a little hint as to what John was doing? After two years of working construction during the day and delivering pizzas at night, John decided that he'd give law school a try.
No transitions at all…just a jump from one thought to another with total disconnect. And I'm actually having a hard time writing this without transitions because I think it's pretty difficult to leave them out! John and Clara engaged in desultory conversation at the punch bowl. Clara asked Tina about the Biology homework. Jim asked Clara whether she was going to the soccer game the next day. Bleh. It just feels like these characters are being tossed in there with no set up at all. A simple John and Clara joined Tina and Jim at the punch bowl would have easily set up any future conversation between these people with no choppiness.
Novels need tons of transitions. We need transitions between scenes and between chapters. Even paragraphs need transitions. To me, the more subtle they are, the better. And if we can transport our characters efficiently to their marks onstage, then we're making our story more exciting in the process.
Interested in more posts on smooth transitions? Here are some of the most popular articles in the Writer's Knowledge Base on the topic:
Are Your Characters Falling Through Gaps in Your Writing? (Plot to Punctuation)
Transitions: Linking Forward Through the Story (Talk to You Universe)More on Transitions (Terry's Place)
How to Work With the 4 Levels of Transition in a Book (How to Plan, Write, and Develop a Book)
Do transitions trip you up, too? (Yes, my son fixed his…I think he could see how much they were bothering me!)