Elizabeth Spann Craig's Blog, page 213
February 12, 2011
Twitterific
Here are writing links that I've posted to Twitter for the past week.
I'm delighted that now we have an efficient method of locating resources on writing topics when you need them—via the Writer's Knowledge Base search engine and software engineer and writer Mike Fleming's ingenuity. The links I tweet (which are writers' blogs, agents' and editors' blogs) all are added to the engine to make it easier for you to access the information you're looking for.
Hope you'll come back tomorrow when Mike talks a little about how he came up with the idea for the Writer's Knowledge Base and how it works.
Why Write a Novel—Your Reason is the Right One: http://dld.bz/M5wn
What Kind of Writer Are You? Career Themes: http://dld.bz/M5wh
Setting, POV, Backstory & Characterization: http://dld.bz/M5wf
Style Sheets: A Tool for You and Your Critique Partners: http://dld.bz/Mmme
If You Build it, They Will Read: Plotting With Layers: http://dld.bz/M5vU
Top 5 Things Writers Should NOT Do: http://dld.bz/M5vN
Reasons why today's crime novelists should read the classics of the genre: http://dld.bz/MxHY @mkinberg
Honing your dark hero: http://dld.bz/MmkR #amwriting
Youth *can* enjoy verbal storytelling: http://dld.bz/Mj7k and http://dld.bz/Mj7m @kevincordi
Do lit mags have the same chance for survival as popular titles? http://dld.bz/Mjz4
Expose Your Writing Sins: http://dld.bz/KVqM
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: The Food of Love: Spaghetti and Meat(less) Balls http://bit.ly/hBosGb @CleoCoyle
One author's life in writing (Guardian): http://dld.bz/MmhG
10 Tips to Ensure a Productive Writing Day: http://dld.bz/Mjy4 @elspethwrites
The Ancient Editor Goes to Lunch: http://dld.bz/Mjyz
A Feedback Format for Critiques: http://dld.bz/Mmkx
Tips for Avoiding Crime Fiction "Road Hazards": http://dld.bz/MxH4 @mkinberg
Nice wrap-up--Creativity Tweets of the Week: http://dld.bz/Mu7N
An author with a POV Q&A: http://dld.bz/MxCe @authorterryo
Dialogue Tags: How to Kill Off Some Of The Little Buggers: http://dld.bz/MxYz @SharlaWrites
The 10 Essential Grammar Rules—of Life: http://dld.bz/Mu7E
4 tips to prepare for your book launch: http://dld.bz/Mxq2 @hopeclark
An agent's post: How to Get Published (The Definitive Post): http://dld.bz/Mu77
Using Advertising Lessons to Make Your Story: http://dld.bz/MxpW @hopeclark
Need tips for plotting? http://hiveword.com/wkb/search?q=plot #amwriting
10 Ways to Promote Your Book in Your Own Backyard: http://dld.bz/Mmkp
Computers vs. longhand--and an interesting study on the pros and cons of both approaches to writing: http://dld.bz/Mu6n
Coincidences in writing: http://dld.bz/Mmjf #amwriting
Six Steps for Approaching Potential Critique Partners: http://dld.bz/MmgR
Critique Groups as an Unreliable Narrator: http://dld.bz/MjxJ #amwriting
The Most Important Thing A Writer Can Do (Other Than Read And Write): http://dld.bz/MwpS @ajackwriting
When Hiring a Publicist Make a Real Connection: http://dld.bz/MjtG
10 great places freelance writers can find story ideas: http://dld.bz/Mjtk
How to Be a More Effective Author Online: http://dld.bz/MbU9
SFF and the Classical Past, Part 4—Legions of Gladiators: http://dld.bz/MjsH
Handling Your Word Count: http://dld.bz/MjsF
Fantasy Writer's Use of History: http://dld.bz/MjrF
Talking about the novel you're working on: http://dld.bz/Mjqb #amwriting
The hero's journey: http://dld.bz/K8qS and http://dld.bz/K8rb
An editor's thoughts on pacing: http://dld.bz/K8q8
Improving Your Fiction: 246 Rules from 28 Modern Writers: http://dld.bz/KVqF #amwriting
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Chocolate Covered Strawberries! http://bit.ly/gvLirS @CleoCoyle
Platform–Why We Need One: http://dld.bz/MehS
Does your story involve language change? Some tips: http://dld.bz/Mehn
Examples of Sensory Details in Writing: http://dld.bz/Mek6
A trend toward present tense in YA? http://dld.bz/Mekk
3 Things the Novelist Can Learn From the Copywriter: http://dld.bz/MejU
Don't Sweat the Small Stuff Week: Word Counts: http://dld.bz/MehK
Is your book's setting ho-hum? http://dld.bz/KNYg #amwriting
10 Reasons Novel Manuscripts Get Rejected: http://dld.bz/MehD
Query Writing Troubles? It Might Be The Story, NOT The Query: http://dld.bz/MegF #amwriting
Storytelling--tips for crafting a verbal story: http://dld.bz/Mjnt @kevincordi
Character habits and other identifiers: http://dld.bz/Mjmk #amwriting
10 ways to make editors fall in love with your work: http://dld.bz/Megp
Top 10 love poems, in time for Valentine's Day (Guardian) : http://dld.bz/Mjxe #amwriting
On business cards for writers: http://dld.bz/Meg5
What your agent doesn't want to hear you say: http://dld.bz/Megz #amwriting
Writers react to AOL-HuffPost deal: now what? http://dld.bz/Mefj
6 Fiction Writing Techniques to Improve Your Blog: http://dld.bz/Med7
An agent says, "It's not my job to be your BFF.": http://dld.bz/Mjv6 #amwriting @gatekeeperspost
7 Tips for Using Hyphens with Adjectives: http://dld.bz/Med6 #amwriting
Why Adverbs Will Really Probably Always Mostly Suck: http://dld.bz/MjnR @charissaweaks #amwriting
An agent explains remainders: http://dld.bz/Medv
A Storyteller dives into Digital: http://dld.bz/MjmK @KevinCordi
The Subconscious In Writing: http://dld.bz/Medn @joanswan #amwriting
10 ½ Tips for Being a More Effective Author Online: http://dld.bz/MbU9
Behind the Scenes with a Literary Agent: http://dld.bz/MbPA #amwriting
Character-Driven/Plot-Driven: http://dld.bz/K8qq #amwriting
Writer's Tools: Worksheets & More: http://dld.bz/cXmN #amwriting
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Like Cheddar for Chocolate http://bit.ly/eDUj26 @CleoCoyle
Travel Writing Tips for Writers Who Can't Write Description: http://dld.bz/MbP2 #amwriting
Using (Or, Preferably, Not Using) the Subjunctive Mode: http://dld.bz/MbPx
Urban Fantasy and the Elusive Male Protagonist: http://dld.bz/MbNY #amwriting
What Your Query Says About Your Book: http://dld.bz/KVet
Tips for switching POV characters: http://dld.bz/Menb @authorterryo
There are no original fairy tales: http://dld.bz/MbNd
SF Editors & Authors Discuss Future of Publishing: http://dld.bz/Mema
How to Start On Twitter (Or Open a 2nd Twitter Account) Without Looking Like a Newbie: http://dld.bz/MaAU
Can Book Critics and Authors be Friends? http://dld.bz/MaA3
Want to create vibrant characters that pop off the page? http://dld.bz/KNXX #amwriting
Lighten Up! Cutting Down Your Word Count: http://dld.bz/MaAx
Bulking Up: Fleshing Out a Too-Short Novel : http://dld.bz/Ma9B #amwriting
Thoughts on when to follow your beta readers' advice and when to follow your gut: http://dld.bz/MaNq
The Scene Conflict Worksheet - Developing Tension in Your Novel: http://dld.bz/KVpB
How To Avoid Becoming Another Boring Writer's Blog: http://dld.bz/Ma8P #amwriting
7 Ways to Attract Attention to Your Book Sales Page: http://dld.bz/MbM2 @victoriamixon @thecreativepenn #amwriting
Three Places Where You Should Tell Instead of Show: http://dld.bz/Ma8r #amwriting
Cutting Overwhelm Down To Size: http://dld.bz/Ma7T #amwriting
The Future of Agents: http://dld.bz/Ma7A #amwriting
Learning to write from fruit: http://dld.bz/KVpa
How to copy and paste your Kindle highlights and notes into a Word file or email: http://dld.bz/KZE5 @galleycat
To Produce & Protect: 5 Things That Creators Can Learn From IT Geeks: http://dld.bz/KVf4
Want More Copywriting Clients? Here's a Surprising Way to Find Them: http://dld.bz/KVeM
Deciding When to Show and When to Tell: http://dld.bz/KUWM @4kidlit
One editor lists the marks of an amateur: http://dld.bz/K8qd
Shades of Gray: A Somewhat Liberating Spin on Story Structure: http://dld.bz/K8pk
The value of pausing for a critique: http://dld.bz/KNRj #amwriting
The Three Dimensions of Character Development: http://dld.bz/K8pa
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: A Valentine's Day Cocktail http://bit.ly/eBOdOh @CleoCoyle
Working Together to Renovate Publishing–The WANA Plan: http://dld.bz/KNQV
10 Radical Ideas for Getting Kids to Read: http://dld.bz/KNPM
Listen to Full Audio of AWP Social Media Panel (Writer's Digest): http://dld.bz/KNQD #amwriting
Neuroscience for writers: http://dld.bz/KVkG
The Misleading "Research" By McSweeney's: http://dld.bz/KNQ2
A weekly roundup of informative agent tweets: http://dld.bz/KVhR @HeatherMcCorkle
10 dialogue musts for scriptwriters: http://dld.bz/KPf8
Are You Totally Missing Out The Heater Syndrome In Your Writing? http://dld.bz/KNPm #amwriting
Is Your Low Social IQ Dooming Your Blog? http://dld.bz/KNPc
What's popular on the WKB search engine today? http://dld.bz/KNNc #amwriting
Self-publishing--a checklist to see if it's right for you: http://dld.bz/KNMz #amwriting
How social media sells books: http://dld.bz/KNSV
How Much Editing Does a Contracted Book Need? http://dld.bz/KNMf #amwriting
7 Steps to Writing Success: http://dld.bz/KNKD #amwriting
Story-specific Words—Fitting Word to Story: http://dld.bz/KNKp #amwriting
Writing monsters--Part I http://dld.bz/KNJw and II http://dld.bz/KNJx #amwriting @ajackwriting
Descriptive Passages: Character: http://dld.bz/KNHF #amwriting
Tools for writers--to help brainstorm, write and, promote: http://dld.bz/KPgS #amwriting
Building writer karma: http://dld.bz/KNHm #amwriting
Pre-Submission Checklist: http://dld.bz/KPcS @4kidlit #amwriting
Plotting Made Easy - The Complications Worksheet: http://dld.bz/KPbX #amwriting
It's Time To Finish Your Book: 9 Productivity Tips for Writers: http://dld.bz/KNGk #amwriting
For those just getting started with online promoting--social media 101: http://dld.bz/KNSJ #amwriting
7 Surprising Things About Blogging: http://dld.bz/KNDh
Top Ten Reasons the editor doesn't love what your critique group loves: http://dld.bz/K8pZ
Tips for creating distinctive characters: http://dld.bz/KMEV
The Second Plot Point: http://dld.bz/K8nF
Advice for playwrights starting out: http://dld.bz/K7gr
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: My Guilt-Free Chocolate Bliss for Valentine's Day from Cleo Coyle http://bit.ly/hlsXGo @CleoCoyle
Writing Screenplays vs Books: http://dld.bz/K6RM
Batman Noir: http://dld.bz/K24K
Writing sex--thoughts on the "how": http://dld.bz/K24R
6 Types of Twitter Tools That Come in Handy: http://dld.bz/K247
Too Fast, Too Furious, and Way Too Much: http://dld.bz/K246
Why Agents Get Snarky: http://dld.bz/K24s
How to Learn Story Structure in Two Minutes or Less: http://dld.bz/K8pm
Is It Your Manuscript or YOUR Manuscript? http://dld.bz/K24g
How to write a spec for TV: http://dld.bz/K6SP, http://dld.bz/K6SQ, http://dld.bz/K6SR
10 Laws for Author Self-Promotion: http://dld.bz/K23N
Author Janice Hardy on the importance of first lines: http://dld.bz/Kqf8
The Unreal, and Why We Love It, Part 4: Laughter: http://dld.bz/KqeW
Publishing Options Series: The "Traditional" Route: http://dld.bz/KqeH
YA Fiction-Style & Content-Part II: http://dld.bz/Kqe7
Harper's Magazine: The Exit Plan Cometh: http://dld.bz/Kqe5
10 Marketing Strategies You Can Implement Today: http://dld.bz/Kqee
Challenges and hurdles women writers face when submitting work: http://dld.bz/KCwZ
Conflict, Tension, and Stakes on Every Page: http://dld.bz/KqdZ
Running on Autopilot: Working With Unconscious Goals: http://dld.bz/Kqd2
A Left-Brained Approach to Revision: http://dld.bz/K6mW
Writing for the Emotions: http://dld.bz/KmNS
The Writer's Knowledge Base--now with 6000 links (and constantly adding more): http://hiveword.com/wkb/search @hiveword
The Critique Partner from Hell, or One Hell of a Critique Partner: http://dld.bz/KmN8
Lessons from the screenwriters: http://dld.bz/K6m5
Links of associations, guilds, and professional organizations for screenwriters: http://dld.bz/K6MG
Setting up tension: http://dld.bz/K6kx
Advice on Selling Screenplays: http://dld.bz/K7aV
The Difference Between Lit Agents & Script Agents and between a script manager and script agent: http://dld.bz/K7ar and http://dld.bz/K7a4
Talking Script/Screenplay Managers: http://dld.bz/K6ZX
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: 10-10-10 Pork Tenderloin http://bit.ly/elCYU9 @CleoCoyle
Misused Words—Common Writing Mistakes: http://dld.bz/KmMZ
Tips for Fighting Writer's Block: http://dld.bz/KmMU
Defining story arcs: http://dld.bz/K6jY
What happens if an agent says yes? (After the celebration dies down, that is.): http://dld.bz/KmM6
The Writer's Knowledge Base--now with 6000 links (and constantly adding more): http://dld.bz/Hnnn @hiveword
TV scriptwriters--links for conferences and festivals: http://dld.bz/K6Mm
Feel the Rhythm of the Words: http://dld.bz/KmMs
Writing: The Art of Shameless Self-Promotion: http://dld.bz/KmMq @4kidlit
List of the most commonly used YA cliches: http://dld.bz/KmMM
Using foreshadowing: http://dld.bz/K6jC
Why realism does not equate to adult (or even good) fantasy: http://dld.bz/KmKZ
How writing software changed one writer's life for the better: http://dld.bz/KmJH @JustusRStone
Writing a TV series (5 parts): http://dld.bz/K6T3 , http://dld.bz/K6T4 , http://dld.bz/K6T5 , http://dld.bz/K6T6 , http://dld.bz/K6T7
Screenwriting Software & Filmmaking Tools: http://dld.bz/K6Ku
9 Techniques to Delivering a Speech with Confidence: http://dld.bz/KmJS
Twitterific...the week in tweets and the WKB: http://dld.bz/K6gy
Writing, Publishing And Book Marketing Tools For The Mac Lover: http://dld.bz/KmJ2 @thecreativepenn
Tips for writing description: http://dld.bz/K5Y4
Seven Tips To Beat Eyestrain: http://dld.bz/KmHb
Once upon a yawn...what makes a story boring: http://dld.bz/KmGW
5 Steps to Captivating Readers with Your Secret Message: http://dld.bz/KmF9
Clichés–Are They Really That Bad? http://dld.bz/KmFu
Taxes and the freelance writer: http://dld.bz/KmFe
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: It's Super Sunday! http://bit.ly/eJ9KuS @CleoCoyle
Running Our Races & Becoming Winners: http://dld.bz/KmEd
Finding Commas in All the Wrong Places: http://dld.bz/KmET
How To Create a Writer's Resume: http://dld.bz/KmEH
Format Your Novel for Submission: http://dld.bz/KmE8
How to Choose a Search Friendly Domain Name: http://dld.bz/KmEn
February 11, 2011
How Similar Are You To Your Protagonist?
A popular question on panels is "Are you anything at all like your protagonist?"
It's an interesting question, I think, because each writer feels differently about incorporating themselves into a story.
Reasons I've heard why writers write parts of themselves into books:
Some writers view writing as a therapeutic process, working through problems or tragic events through their characters.
It can be easier to get into a character's head or make the character pop on the page if the character is based on the writer.
The writer's own background, skill-set, or professional knowledge can be used in the book for a realistic touch. (The protagonist may share the writer's occupation or hobby.)
It can give the writer an opportunity to change the outcome of a situation they were in, through fiction.
Reasons I've heard why writers don't write themselves into books:
They're private people.
Their lives don't seem interesting enough to write about.
Also interesting to me is the way that many writers I've listened to will use an absolute on the subject. "No, I'm not like my protagonists," or "Yes, I'm similar to my protagonist."
I've done the same thing—I usually say, "No, I'm nothing like my protagonists." Because, honestly, if I wrote myself into a book—no one would read it. This is why I make things up. Besides, I'm not the kind of person who is protagonist material. I don't make things happen…I like to observe them happening.
But it's not true that I'm nothing like my protagonists. There are bits of me in them. One protagonist is an insomniac. Two protagonists are impatient. One protagonist is distracted and forgetful. Most of the things that get a small mention are actually my shortcomings.
I'd not thought about it, but when I write my shortcomings into books, I'm poking fun at myself. It's a good way to blow off tension because my shortcomings tend to stress me out.
So I think, that most writers will use a combination approach. If they are consciously writing themselves, then they leave some materia out (at least, I'd imagine they would. I sure wouldn't be able to let it all hang out there.) If someone thinks they never write themselves into a book…maybe, like me, they don't even realize they're doing it.
How much of yourself goes into a book? How much is complete fiction?
February 10, 2011
Thoughts on Writing Longhand vs. on Computer
I grew up writing reports for school in longhand. When I really wanted to make a report fancy, I used a typewriter.
Computers in high school and college were rare. The odd Apple IIE was in the county library or the school's lab. The computers bombed a lot and the printers were unreliable. I stuck with my Brother typewriter that had the capability of remembering a line of text. I could look at the line and correct it on the tiny screen before it printed out.
When I was an intern at a London magazine in college, I was given the assignment to report on spring fashion. The editor wanted it later that afternoon. There was no internet then (no internet that was accessible to regular people, at least), so I looked out the window at what people were wearing and wrote it into the story. I jotted it down in longhand on paper, then typed it up.
In fact, that's how I wrote everything—on paper before copying it over on the typewriter.
When I started novel writing, I naturally gravitated to paper. I found it very disorganized, though—I wrote out of order sometimes and there were scenes that needed to be in other parts of the story. And frequently I knew I was writing stuff that was helping me know a character better, but it was material that was going to get axed before the last draft. I used lots of highlighters and actual scissors to help me organize my scenes.
It didn't take me long to realize that to write faster and reach the deadlines that were starting to mount up, I needed to switch over to a computer. Besides, I'd frequently lose the different pieces of paper that my story was on.
I learned how to be creative on the computer. But I kept revising on paper. I'd print out my manuscript (which is a lot of paper, if you think about 270 or so pages, single-sided) and then I'd take the manuscript with me everywhere. I'd pull it out of my huge pocketbook and edit it while waiting for school to let out, etc.
I do think that sometimes reading on paper can help find errors that reading on a screen can't. But still—it was a really slow process. I'd have to turn pages on the manuscript, find the change on the page, find the spot on the computer, make the change…and then make sure I'd marked that I'd made the change or else I'd forget where I left off. It was also expensive and a waste of resources to print out that much paper…and I'd keep printing new versions of the manuscript to reflect changes. I switched to revising on the computer.
My struggle and eventual switch to mainly-electronic writing made me especially interested in a post on A Brain Scientist's Take on Writing. It involved a study (VANWAES, L., & SCHELLENS, P. (2003). Writing profiles: the effect of the writing mode on pausing and revision patterns of experienced writers Journal of Pragmatics,) on typing vs. longhand. You can read the study yourself, but I'll quote a few of the findings (directly from Livia Blackburne's blog:
1. The computer writers took half as much time to write the first draft than pen and paper writers.
2. The computer writers wrote texts that were approximately 20% longer.
3. The computer writers had a more fragmented writing process than the pen and paper writers.
4. Computer writers made 80% of the revisions in their first draft, as compared to pen and paper writers, who made only 50% of revisions in the first draft.The authors observed that pen and paper writing seemed a more systematic and planned out process. This makes sense because it's harder to make a change on pencil and paper. With computer writing, you can just start writing and make changes as you go along.
This was similar to what I'd found with my own writing. It might have been nicer to write on paper (in many ways, I find it more enjoyable), but it sure is a whole lot quicker to write on the computer.
My writing friend, Hart Johnson, ran an informal survey on her blog a while back. She was curious about the ages and backgrounds of writers who wrote longhand, vs. those who wrote on the computer. She found that the writer's age was a factor (anyone who grew up on a computer was obviously going to find writing on a computer more natural) but also what else the writer did on a computer—if their day job was really uncreative, they might associate the computer with the non-creative day job and write longhand instead.
Do you write longhand? On computer? Or both?
February 9, 2011
Character Habits and Identifiers
I've noticed in the last few weeks that I'm getting a lot fewer
so far. And I don't think that everyone I know is mad at me. :)
But to them, part of who I am when I'm out driving around, is a Honda minivan. I'm not a Honda Pilot to them. Their gaze just skips right over the car.
As I was out driving the other day and being ignored by my friends, I started thinking about habits and identifiers that can help establish characters in our readers' minds.
I don't know about you, but sometimes when I'm reading a book, I have a hard time immediately placing a character. The author, obviously, thinks that this character is someone that they've already established and they haven't provided anything additional to jog my memory.
Because I find it frustrating as a reader, I try to make sure to somehow tag my supporting characters if they haven't been onstage for a while.
One way to do this is obviously to say something like: Jane's hairdresser, Sheri, opened the door.
Or: Sheri walked in. "Long day at the beauty parlor, y'all. Three customers didn't show up!"
The first way is a total 'tell,' but fairly unobtrusive for the reader. The second way is a little more 'show' but still gets the job done and establishes the character for the reader.
Another way is to give the character a trait of some sort to identify them. This would need to obviously be a detail memorable enough so that a casual reader could tie the trait and the character together to remember them. This could either be a physical trait (an engaging dimple; cold, hollowed-out eyes, messy hair) or a habit or action (shifting from foot to foot, avoiding eye contact, looking at their reflection in every mirror, etc.)
The purpose of this identifier is really just so the reader isn't wondering who the heck they are. But you could make it serve double-duty and have the identifier point to something that gives a little insight to the character: Jane thought again how odd it was that a manicurist would have nails bitten down to the quick. Actually, I think some of the actions I used in the example above can give some insight into characters, too.
Obviously, these identifiers can be overdone. If the secondary character is on stage fairly frequently, it would get annoying to have them reintroduced each time. The trait could get annoying, too, if done too frequently.
We also need to be mindful of clichés when making these identifiers for periphery characters. It's easy to tag a supporting character with quick and easy tags that are stereotypical (awkward nerd, lady of the manor, dumb jock, etc.) I think that sometimes that a stereotype is a quick way to have our reader "get" a character…if the character isn't very important to the story. If the secondary character is more important, then it's probably worth it to flesh him out more and give him more dimension.
How do you help your readers keep supporting characters straight?
February 8, 2011
On Following Advice
I think I drive my kids a little crazy sometimes.
Frequently I'll be driving somewhere in town and wonder how my GPS would tell me how to reach our destination. I know how to get there. But I wonder if my route is really the most efficient way.
So I punch in the destination and the GPS lady drones on, telling me which turn to take. "Take a right on Sar-deez Road North," she orders.
I very rarely follow the GPS lady's advice.
"Mom," my son will say through teeth that sound gritted, "why didn't you make the turn that she mentioned?"
"Oh, there's way too much traffic on that road. It'll be bumper to bumper. And there are stoplights practically every ten feet. The GPS lady doesn't know that. I'll just go straight and we'll get there faster."
"Why then," asks my son, very reasonably, "don't you just turn off the GPS? Her voice is annoying. And you never follow her directions anyway."
But I don't turn it off. Because sometimes she gives me an interesting alternate route that I hadn't thought of. Some days there's an accident or a delay of some kind on my preferred route…some sort of roadblock…and I need a different direction to follow.
You can see where this is going. But this is how I look at first reader advice—whether it's advice from a critique group or a friend or family member.
Your first readers may give advice that's very useful. Or they may give you advice that you just listen to, thank them for, and completely disregard as you continue on your own course.
Sometimes you may get conflicting suggestions from different critique readers. I've heard several writers talk about how confusing that can be and how they aren't sure whose advice they should listen to.
But then there are those helpful nuggets of advice that can put your story on a new and different course when you've hit a roadblock.
Ultimately, you should listen to your gut when you write your story. You usually know the best route to take with your book. Take the alternate course when it makes sense or when it's more efficient. (Editors, of course, are a different story. I make a point of always following their suggestions.)
After all—ultimately, you're the one behind the wheel.
February 7, 2011
How Does Social Media Sell Books?
A question I frequently get, and which I heard a lot this weekend at the Cape Fear Crime Festival, is "Does social media sell books?"
Many writers worry about spending time away from writing. Between the demands of job and family, it can be hard to even find time for writing. They want a good reason to invest time in social media.
What does social media give a writer? A platform.
Platform: When a writer has a healthy platform, it indicates to an agent or publisher the size of the potential audience that the writer can reach, promotion-wise, on their personal network. Or, as former literary agent Nathan Bransford put it:
Platform is the number of eyeballs you can summon as you promote your book.
The important thing, of course, is not to over-promote to this network you've established. That's the fastest way to lose followers. A subtle approach is always better.
Your platform leads to a certain amount of name recognition: Let's say there's a writer named Bob. Bob worked for years writing a book, edited for ages, crafted a query, honed a synopsis and his publishing dream finally became a reality. Now his book is on the shelf and online with thousands of other books. What makes Bob's book stand out from the others?
He did write a great book. Is it his reviews? Not too many readers follow reviews, though. Is it his back cover copy? His cover art? Those things do help…but what can help more than anything is name recognition for the book title or author or some recognition of the cover art. I've had readers email me that my book almost jumped off the shelf at them because the cover and my name were familiar—their eyes went right to it.
I've done the same thing myself. I took my daughter to the book store into the children's and YA area in early December. She asked me to help her find a book—and we were in a rush, needing to get to another event. "Could you pick one out, Mama? I can't decide," she said. I scanned the shelves and one of Janice Hardy's books seemed to leap at me. "Here you go," I said. "Let's give this one a go. Ms. Hardy is a great writer." And off we went to the register.
Have I ever met Janice in person? No. I know Janice from the blogging and Twitter world. She writes amazing posts on the writing craft. Would I have gone right to her book—bypassing hundreds of other attractively-packaged children's books that were nearby-- without knowing Janet online? I think eventually we 'd have discovered her wonderful books…but it would have taken us a lot longer.
I've heard writers worry over the fact that their social media is only reaching other writers—who are also promoting their own books. The only way I can answer that is to say that I've had very healthy sales and nearly sold-through my advance on pre-orders alone for last summer's release. Who knew about my book before it came out? Writers did. They might have bought the book to support me or because of curiosity or because they thought a family member or friend might like it. But I believe that my strong numbers were nearly completely due to writers.
With social media, unless you're tracking clicks over to a buy link, you may not have data to directly tie in your social media efforts to your sales. My data is limited to reports of sales that I've gotten from my network (messages from followers that they'd purchased a book), and sales in general.
But I believe that building a platform through social media results in sales. What's more, my agent and editors believe it, too. These days, in fact, agents and editors will likely consider a writer's platform as part of the overall package that includes their writing talent.
I know several of my regular readers have had great success with social media promoting. I know that even aside from promotion, that we all get a lot from our online network of writers. What is your impression of social media promo, either from what you've observed or what you've tried?
February 6, 2011
On the Social Media Shift for Promo
Like everything in publishing, book promotion is changing.
Because I spend so much time online, and am surrounded by blogging, Facebooking, and tweeting writing friends, I don't even think about social media being revolutionary in any way.
But there are still lots of writers who haven't made the leap to social media promoting. I met some of them this weekend.
When I blog about social media—its ability to reach a large number of people for (basically) free—I'm just preaching to the choir…because y'all are all online.
So I don't really know about these other writers unless I meet them face to face—they're not networking online.
They're still talking about creative ways to approach book signings. They're talking about tours and postcard mailings and posters.
Which, of course, is all still part of promotion…but doesn't have nearly the scope that social media has.
When was speaking on the Cape Fear Crime Festival promo panel on Saturday, I mentioned that I found book signings ineffective. I recommended spending that time developing a blog or opening a Facebook or Twitter account. There were a few writers in the audience who looked at me as if I'd grown horns on my head.
A couple of people told me later they didn't really even know where to begin with the social media world.
So I promised to blog on it. :)
Here's my take on getting started:
Blogging: I think this is probably the best way to get introduced to social media. The blogging habit comes fairly easily to writers and it's not too hard to learn a blogging application. Blogspot is Google's free blog program, and WordPress is another popular blog host. It doesn't really matter which you choose.
The important thing is to regularly update your blog (you can choose daily or weekly but I wouldn't space it any farther apart than that) and to interact with other bloggers. You can find great blogs in the blogrolls (sidebars) of active blogs. What do you blog on, if you're a writer? You can choose to blog on the writing life, writing in general, books you've read, movies you've enjoyed—basically it's your choice. It takes a while to really find a niche and get into the writing groove, but it will come.
Facebook: I think this is the second best way to make connections and start building a platform. The learning curve is fairly low and, once you're on, it makes pretty good sense. The way that conversations work on Facebook looks like a real conversation (unlike Twitter, which is a bit more scattered.) Facebook is where writers interact and network. Where can you find writers? Look up any writer who is active online (I'm Elizabeth Spann Craig Author) and go to their friend list. Click on their friends and just start asking people to friend you. I promise that 99% of these writers aren't expecting you to really know them for them to accept a Facebook friendship.
Twitter: Twitter is sort of the icing on the cake to me. If you're already blogging and Facebooking and picked up on it well and are looking for another social media outlet, I'd pick Twitter. The learning curve is just a little steeper for the application…its method for interaction is a little unnatural, I think. What I love about Twitter is the resource sharing and the fact that the messages are always short and punchy. When you read as much as we all do in a day, short can be sweet. Twitter is also a favorite application for agents and editors, and there is lots of industry information being tweeted.
I'm interested in what y'all have to say about this…do you think this order makes sense to someone just starting out, who is wanting to get their feet wet? I could be persuaded that Facebook could go first instead of blogging. What do you think?
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Tomorrow I'm going to address the next question I got from folks about social media—how do I know this sells books? :)
February 5, 2011
Twitterific
Here are writing links that I've posted to Twitter for the past week.
My addition this week is an efficient method of locating resources on writing topics when you need them—via the Writer's Knowledge Base search engine and software engineer and writer Mike Fleming's ingenuity. The links I tweet (which are writers' blogs, agents' and editors' blogs) all are added to the engine to make it easier for you to access the information you're looking for.
Running Our Races & Becoming Winners: http://dld.bz/KmEd
Finding Commas in All the Wrong Places: http://dld.bz/KmET
How To Create a Writer's Resume: http://dld.bz/KmEH
Format Your Novel for Submission: http://dld.bz/KmE8
How to Choose a Search Friendly Domain Name: http://dld.bz/KmEn
How to Write a Synopsis When You Have Lots of Characters in Your Story: http://dld.bz/Ga9J
On The Importance of Failure: http://dld.bz/KmC6
Self-Publishing–The "American Idol" of the Publishing World: http://dld.bz/KmCw
Backstory: Relevant Information or an Inconsequential Event? http://dld.bz/KmB7
Creating Emotion in the Reader: http://dld.bz/KmBq
What question does your book pose? http://dld.bz/KmAK ./
Neuroscientists try to unlock the origins of creativity: http://dld.bz/KmAh
Creating Futuristic Vocabulary: http://dld.bz/Km9B
Why one writer chooses to write: http://dld.bz/KmAa
Shakespeare, SpongeBob, and the law: http://dld.bz/Kmxk @helengunnar
The New World of Publishing: Cash Flow: http://dld.bz/KmvC
Writer's guilt: http://dld.bz/Kqc3 @JulieeJohnsonn
7 Signs Your Blog is Bound to Fail: http://dld.bz/JZ7p
The Elements of Fiction—The Basics & Beyond: http://dld.bz/KmeT
Give your supporting characters more dimension: http://dld.bz/KkZ6
Best Articles This Week for Writers 2/4/11: http://dld.bz/KkJp
Roundup of links on self-editing: http://dld.bz/K
Victims aren't sexy: http://dld.bz/KnJN @tawnafenske
Why Support Other Writers? http://dld.bz/KmKp @ajackwriting
Tips for crafting dialogue: http://dld.bz/KmaN
Why editors may ask you to combine 2 characters: http://dld.bz/Gkud
Changing priorities and character growth: http://dld.bz/KmNy
Revising: How To Avoid Staring Into The Great Black Abyss: http://dld.bz/KkVp
How to Mingle at Publishing Events: http://dld.bz/KkUC
Are Book Editors Paid Too Much? http://dld.bz/KkKq
How to Avoid Head-Hopping: http://dld.bz/Kmj4 @JamiGold
Duties of an Editor & How Editors Help Writers: http://dld.bz/KmgK
Thanks so much @JoanSwan for featuring the WKB search engine on your site: http://dld.bz/Kmw6 @hiveword
Thoughts on proofing ARCs: http://dld.bz/KkHx
Why Writers Can't Have Too Many Sacred Cows: http://dld.bz/KkWE
The 4 Most Common Mistakes Fiction Editors See: http://dld.bz/KkJa
A freelancer question answered: "What should I charge for writing blog posts?" http://dld.bz/JZ7e
Eschewing Formal Language: http://dld.bz/JZ6T
An agent on how explicit sex scenes should be: http://dld.bz/JZ6G
Do You Blog Just Enough To Hate It? http://dld.bz/JZ6C
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Quick Change Chicken http://bit.ly/hD0kjH @CleoCoyle
Fiction and non-fiction--not so different after all: http://dld.bz/JZ66
The Race for the Future: http://dld.bz/JGSN
The pet peeves that add dimension well-known crime fiction sleuths: http://dld.bz/JTnZ @mkinberg
The importance of fact-checking: http://www.andrewjackwriting.com/2011/02/check-your-facts/ @ajackwriting
Tips for effectively opening your story: http://dld.bz/KeT7 @bluemaven
When the Inner Critic rears its ugly head…: http://dld.bz/JTpx @messydesklife
Literary elements to get familiar with: http://dld.bz/JZ4Y
Depth of Character: http://dld.bz/JZ4V
Is speculative fiction poised to break into the literary canon? (Guardian): http://dld.bz/JZ4N
5 considerations when using adjectives: http://dld.bz/JZ4M
26 Ways to Enhance Your Blog Content: http://dld.bz/JZ4z
How to Achieve Balance Between Your (God I Hate This Word) Platform and Your Writing: http://dld.bz/JZ4j
Creating an Attention-Getting Proposal: http://dld.bz/JZ37
Building a Story: Grids, Mapping and Outlines: http://dld.bz/JZ2X
How to submit writing craft links you think should be in the writers' search engine: http://dld.bz/Kb9x @hiveword
Pitching Genres: What the Heck do I Write? http://dld.bz/JZ2R
SFF and the Classical Past, Part 3—Heroic Romans: http://dld.bz/JZ2P
Are you a post pirate? You'll want to read this: http://dld.bz/JZ2J
When the Book Is Finished…Tips for Surviving the Post-Novel Mourning Period: http://dld.bz/JZxN
5 Writing Rules You Should Break: http://dld.bz/JZw5
Writing And The Mixed Blessing Of A Day Job: http://dld.bz/JTmT @thecreativepenn
You're The Artist—It's Your Job To Write What You Love: http://dld.bz/JGSh
Writing Blogs, Search Terms, and Our Corporate Overlords: http://dld.bz/JGRA
Doing A Whedon: When To Kill Off Major Characters: http://dld.bz/JGS6
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Bacon Cheddar Guacamole Grilled Cheese http://bit.ly/gqyvfq @CleoCoyle
Google Updates Google Reader, But Did Anyone Care? http://dld.bz/JGRm
Books vs. Music: http://dld.bz/JGPM
The Good News? Writing Never Gets Any Easier: http://dld.bz/JGQ6
Superpowers of the grammatical subject: http://dld.bz/JGQ2
Being Fictional: http://dld.bz/JGQb
Writing the Ending--2 tips to help you get to 'The End' - http://dld.bz/JSHg @jhansenwrites
Digital Book World: E-Books and Libraries? No Problem, Panel Says (Publishers Weekly): http://dld.bz/JGMn
3 Layers of 'Layering' in Fiction: http://dld.bz/JGMf
People Process Information Best In Story Form: http://dld.bz/JGMc
Grammar Police! That vs Which: http://dld.bz/J8ha
15 Minutes To Sanity: How One Writer Balances Housework And Writing: http://dld.bz/J8gJ
How Writing Careers Are Like Snowflakes: http://dld.bz/J7Vm
What is it really like to be published? http://dld.bz/J7Vd
Blood, Sweat and Words: How Badly Do You Want This? http://dld.bz/J7U3
Tips for writing action: http://dld.bz/J7Uu
"Wowed" by the Yanks, UK Indie Booksellers Motivated to Start Selling E-books: http://dld.bz/J7Ua
Ten Things to Help Writers Save $: http://dld.bz/J7TQ
Description Passages, Part I: Setting: http://dld.bz/J7Ax
Ten Twitter Blunders Writers Make: http://dld.bz/J7Aj
15 Scalable SEO Strategies for Newly Launched Websites: http://dld.bz/J7zW
Your First Draft is Allowed to Suck: http://dld.bz/J7z6
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Shrimp Pasta http://bit.ly/ePcsFo @CleoCoyle
From the Basement to The Attic: Remembering the Past and Creating the Future: http://dld.bz/J7zz
What's Your Excuse For Not Writing? http://dld.bz/J7sZ
The "Common Sense" Mistake That Makes Your Writing Lifeless: http://dld.bz/J7zq
7 inspiring writing quotes from 12 books: http://7quotes.webs.com/ @quotes4writers
5 Billboard Taglines That Advertise Errors (And A Quick Punctuation and Spelling Brush-Up): http://dld.bz/J7yZ
How to Choose a Writing Critique Partner (and Some Links for Finding Them): http://dld.bz/J7wC
8 New LinkedIn Features Worth Exploration: http://dld.bz/J7wp
10 Ways Authors and Publishers Fail on Twitter: http://dld.bz/JGFC @JanetBoyer
Launching a virtual book tour: http://dld.bz/J7vD
The Protocol For Following Up With Agents and Editors: http://dld.bz/J7tg
Have you tried it? The better-than-Google search engine for writers: http://dld.bz/Hnnn @hiveword
Anatomy of an Effective Blog Post: http://dld.bz/J7sK
Thoughts on different types of promo: http://dld.bz/JGGs
Learning to Say "No" to New Writing Commitments: http://dld.bz/J7sG
Dos and don'ts of public readings (National Post): http://dld.bz/J7sw
Why You Should Avoid Bright, Shiny Ideas: http://dld.bz/J7rY
Designing Books for a Digital Age (NY Times): http://dld.bz/J7rR
Is Doing a Blog Tour Really Worth It? http://dld.bz/J7r3
Querying The Cliché: http://dld.bz/JvQ6
What eBook Reading Apps Should I Use on the Laptop? http://dld.bz/JvQ4
Ten of the best walled gardens in literature (Guardian): http://dld.bz/JvQt
Freelancers--Why Your Article Ideas Aren't Working: http://dld.bz/JvNR
10 Places to Find Blog Inspiration: http://dld.bz/JvQp
How a Blogger Without a Blog Became a Blogger to Watch: http://dld.bz/JvQg
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Groundhog Day Giveaway: Six More Weeks or Not? Comment to Win from Cleo Coyle http://bit.ly/erdksP @CleoCoyle
Writers Obsessed with Writers; Fancy Magazines (Paris Review): http://dld.bz/JvPv
Rethinking Rights in a Transmedia World: http://dld.bz/JvNs
Building writing routines: http://dld.bz/JvMG
5 areas to help authors consider their personal State of the Union: http://dld.bz/JvMk
How to Turn Your Photos Into a Graphic Novel: http://dld.bz/J73Q @GalleyCat
For Agents, Timing is Everything: http://dld.bz/JuB7
Do You Need To Write Short Stories? http://wp.me/pyMqx-c3 @ajackwriting
The Perils of Literary Profiling (NY Times): http://dld.bz/JuBx
Ten tips for taming a beastly to-do list: http://dld.bz/J7AF @tawnafenske
Best Tweets for Writers (week ending 1/28/11): http://dld.bz/J79T
How to Download Word Files to Your Kindle: http://dld.bz/JuBj
Researching the historical novel: http://dld.bz/J7tG
3 Author Marketing Secrets From The Grateful Dead: http://dld.bz/JuBc
5 tips for establishing your characters: http://bit.ly/gehQX3 @p2p_editor
Borders Won't Make January Payments, Either, And They Aren't Paying Rent: http://dld.bz/J7xk and http://dld.bz/J7x7
Is the age of the critic over? (Guardian): http://dld.bz/JuAZ
A useful resource for describing settings, emotions, shapes, textures, and more: http://dld.bz/J6JG
5 Solid Ways to Get Traffic to Your Blog: http://dld.bz/JuAU
When you're introducing a character, make a good first impression for the reader: http://dld.bz/J6FA @elspethwrites
Freelancers: Jack of All Trades, Master of None? Seven Reasons to Specialize: http://dld.bz/JuAS
When and how often you should communicate with your publisher: http://dld.bz/JuAQ
Bookshops reply to the ebook threat: http://dld.bz/JuAJ
Poetry: a beautiful renaissance (Guardian): http://dld.bz/JuAA
"Am I a Writer Yet?" – Paid, Professional, Published, and Other Benchmarks Defined: http://dld.bz/JuAt
5 things one writer wishes she'd known before querying: http://dld.bz/JuAm
Some observations on erotica and gender: http://dld.bz/JuAg
Librarians--don't give up: http://dld.bz/J32R @LesaHolstine @Brad_Parks
The Purpose of Science Fiction: http://dld.bz/Ju9z
Being a Brand: http://dld.bz/Ju8u
10 ways to grow your Facebook following as an Author: http://dld.bz/Ju7U
Mythpunk: http://dld.bz/JvQJ
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Skillet Caramelized Pear Cake http://bit.ly/e7mOTf @CleoCoyle
What it means to be 'pre-published': http://dld.bz/Ju76
Eliminate Distractions to Increase Writing Income: http://dld.bz/Ju7a
How to Write a Query Letter: http://dld.bz/Ju6n
Tips from Alan Rinzler on how to untangle a plot: http://dld.bz/JxDv RT @inkyelbows
How to revise your novel if you can't get into it – take time to dress the set again: http://dld.bz/JrdY
Tips for having a blog tour: http://dld.bz/JrdR
How to work with the 4 levels of transition in a book: http://dld.bz/JrdK
Twitterific--the week in tweets: http://dld.bz/JvFR
What Literary Agents are Reading (Huff Post): http://dld.bz/JrdE
MASTER Recap of 2011 Writer's Digest Conference: http://dld.bz/Juvj
What happens after your query is sent: http://dld.bz/JnmR
Celebrity Death Match–Author Edition: http://dld.bz/JnmD
Is Science Fiction Getting More Conservative? http://dld.bz/Ju7m @PajamasMedia
How Creativity Wins Friends And Influences People: http://dld.bz/Jnmy
How to Avoid Being Fooled by Bad Writing Advice: http://dld.bz/Juva
A Good Metaphor is... : http://dld.bz/Jnmx
40+ Creative Manipulations to Feast your Eyes: http://dld.bz/Jnk8
Parents--nice list of books to hook a reluctant reader: http://dld.bz/JtGj @pragmaticmom
Myst. Lov. Kitchen: Happy Cake http://bit.ly/hMjTHW @CleoCoyle
Graphic Noir: A Random Sample: http://dld.bz/JnjY
19 Posts on Creativity: http://dld.bz/JnjG
Writing scared--how writing can create anxiety...and might cure it (New Yorker): http://dld.bz/Jrc5 @bookbench
Successful Writers Produce: http://dld.bz/Jnjx
The overlooking and discounting of clues by sleuths in crime fiction: http://dld.bz/JqZW @mkinberg
February 4, 2011
Organizing for a Conference
Today, I'm attending the Cape Fear Crime Festival in Wilmington, NC.
This will be my second visit to this conference. I really enjoyed it the last time I attended—there was a nice camaraderie between the authors, I enjoyed the library location, Wilmington is pretty and walkable…and I'm not too far away to drive.
As soon as I find out the time for my panel, I make the hotel reservations. If I have, for instance, an 8 a.m. panel and I've got a drive that takes hours, then I'll stay the night before the panel instead of the night following it. Or vice versa. Helps to save a little money.
If the hotel I'm staying at doesn't have a free continental breakfast, I'll usually take something that doesn't have to be refrigerated that I can eat for breakfast. I'm a big believer in breakfast. :)
I do always try to have either lunch or supper or both with other authors…it's really where I have the most fun and have more of an opportunity to visit.
I keep all my receipts in an envelope so I'll be prepared at tax time.
If I'm traveling on the same day I'm attending the conference (like I am today), I wear something that won't wrinkle too badly. I like jersey knits for that. I wore linen once…ha! :) I don't know what possessed me.
As I mentioned in a previous post, it's a good idea to come prepared with giveaways—bookmarks, business cards, small giveaways. I've seen authors bring personalized note pads, luggage tags, lip gloss, computer monitor cleaners….just all kinds of swag. I usually don't go really over the top with stuff because it's hard to tote around—and because it's expensive. But at Malice Domestic, I did bring potholders with a BBQ theme that had my business card tied on to them.
I make sure to bring water (just in case the organizers don't provide it.) I'll bring a nice pen to sign books with, and I find out what the set-up is for book sales. Sometimes an independent bookstore will be in charge of book sales---and sometimes I'll need to bring my own books and small denominations of cash to make change with.
I'll prepare in advance if I know my panel questions ahead of time. I try to stay on track with the question and have succinct answers. I have a tendency, actually, to be too succinct, so I try to plan for elaboration of my answer, if I need to (if the moderator is glaring at me, for instance, because of my brevity. :) )
If it's a conference where I'm staying for a couple of days, then I will need to plan some down time in my hotel room. Otherwise, I tend to get a teensy bit on edge if I spend a whole lot of room with other people—even very nice people. And, although I'm very introverted in nature…I try to be outgoing at these events. In fact, most people who have met me think I'm outgoing. :) I'm apparently a great actress. There are several folks that are going to Cape Fear that I'm really interested in meeting…so I really will be outgoing today.
Are you planning on hitting any conferences this year? Have any tips?
February 3, 2011
Changing Priorities and Character Growth
I was talking to another parent the other day and thinking about how even small goals and priorities change with time.
When my daughter was a brand-new baby, my number one goal was just to keep her in clean bibs (spitty baby.) I'd go buy bibs in bulk and find the right size—big enough to keep her from ruining her smoked dresses, but not so big that you couldn't see the smocking (this was also around the time that I started writing my first book. I think the bibs started boring me. :) )
Shortly afterwards, my number one goal was to keep my toddling daughter from losing her lovey, Dirty Baby. Losing Dirty Baby was a complete and utter nightmare. I would do anything to keep from losing that dolly. The child couldn't sleep, eat, or do anything but wail unless Dirty Baby was in her arms. I ended up buying another baby doll just like that one and dirtying it up myself just in case we had a catastrophe and needed a substitute. I tell you, I was obsessed with Dirty Baby's well-being.
Then there was my ongoing attempt to get rid of my daughter's pacifier. She and I ended up sending the pacifiers up to the Guh-guh fairy up in the sky. (Yes. I tied several pacifiers onto a huge bunch of balloons and sent them up into space so that the Guh-guh fairy could redistribute them to babies who still needed binkies.
As my daughter grew older and went to elementary school, obviously, my goals and priorities changed and became broader and less focused on the day-to-day. And I became a bit more focused on me and what I wanted to do since I had a little extra time. That's when I started pouring more focused energy into both my writing.
As I look at the last nine years, I can see tremendous change in as far as what my personal priorities are.
What about our characters? It's important to know what our characters want…we hear a lot about that. But what about character growth that causes changes in characters' goals? As we get older, we experience change (jobs, finances, marriage, divorce, children, empty nests, etc.), and our wants, needs, priorities, and goals change.
Sometimes our goals and priorities can change rapidly in response to an abrupt change of circumstances; a catastrophic financial burden like a family member's expensive medical problem, a grown child who moves back home, an aging parent, etc.
Obviously, this can also bring conflict or even changes in a character's outlook on life. Think about the main character in the classic movie It's a Wonderful Life. His priority was always to go off and see the world—until reality in the form of various family and community responsibilities forced him on a different track. So you could even have the character's dream and the character's reality be in conflict with each other.
Do you know what your character wants? Has what your character wants changed at all, or could it?
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Also—I have an announcement to make. :) I just signed a contract for a new, three-book mystery series with Penguin's NAL imprint under my own name. The series is set in the Blue Ridge mountains of North Carolina and the first book (which I'm currently writing) involves a murder that affects members of a quilting guild in the small town of Dappled Hills. Thanks to Penguin and to my agent, Ellen Pepus, for the opportunity!