Jon’s Reviews > Avempartha > Status Update

The contest location declared upon arrival; the target acquired and the challenge commenced at sunset.

Home in time for supper ... and not the main course.

Esrahaddon and Royce catch up on old times at the well in Dahlgren.

Arista seeks a glimpse of the patriarch.

Ambassador Arista meets with the Archbishop and learns closely held Church secrets.

Nearly every paragraph evidences passive voicings. And I think I've stumbled upon a sentence fragment (see comment).

First chapter got us reacquainted with Hadrian and Royce and tied up a loose end from the first novel.