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Laura
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"Would the wards that kept him alive and untouchable unravel within the sea god Lir's cold fathoms, bringing the solace he craved?" Uh oh...emo hero, dead ahead
— Jun 16, 2011 05:41PM
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Laura
is on page 60 of 377
"Oh my look at the time. I have to get back." bit modern there- I'm sure there's a decent story buried in here beneath the too-modern sounding bits, and the overly old-fashioned sounding bits.
— Jul 24, 2011 06:28PM
Laura
is on page 29 of 377
Dude! I rock! I totally recognized he was speaking Welsh!! Thank you dr. Rusche who taught History of the English Language at UNLV!
— Jul 17, 2011 11:56PM
Laura
is on page 27 of 377
"If he rose. Walked around. Perhaps that would help. He fought to stand." the whole book is written like this-full of sentence fragments and short sentences. Have we never heard of the comma? It's super handy and useful.
— Jul 17, 2011 01:21PM
Laura
is on page 27 of 377
this is a book where I want to call out the editor and yell "WTH? Did you fail basic grammar?"
— Jul 16, 2011 02:30PM
Laura
is on page 22 of 377
I have tried several times to get into this book, but between the sentence fragments (seriously, editor, where were you?) and the annoying words I don't know and don't have a glossary for (Domnuathi-anyone? what is this?) I think I'll table this for a bit.
— Jun 27, 2011 09:21PM
Laura
is on page 11 of 377
"She was saying what she thought she was saying." awkward sentence, that. I hope this one improves...
— Jun 17, 2011 03:13PM
Laura
is on page 11 of 377
random question: would a girl in 1815 know about bombs? like "it felt like she was holding a bomb in her hand and it would go off any minute." That doesn't seem like a normal thought for the early 1800s
— Jun 16, 2011 10:46PM
