Graywaren’s Reviews > Uninvited > Status Update

I wanted to /headdesk on paragraph 4. In paragraph 1 we find out she's a practically miraculous musical prodigy (like all instruments and singing without trying!) & then from that we go into drooly, 'oh my god he's so hot', kissing against lockers 'romance'. *heaves a huge sigh* Can you tell I'm not a fan of ridiculous teenage romance? But the premise sounds so cool... Will it get less eye-roll inducing? We'll see...