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Boy, I'm having a hard time reading this. The sentence structure with the first person is choppy, to say the least. The sequence in the hospital when Day goes to steal the vaccine. I realize it's first person POV, but holy crap I, I, I, and all the derivatives of I (I've,I'm, I'd, etc) 181-times in 8-pages. Thinking back over the other books I'd read that were first person ... I can't recall this structure.
Dec 15, 2013 08:24PM
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This book has gotten such great reviews, I really want to like it. Its the type of story I really enjoy.
Dec 15, 2013 08:26PM
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Just not getting into this. kinda getting burned out of the dystopian teen stuff. aren't their any 20 somethings out there trying to change the world?
Dec 14, 2013 07:16PM
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