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Nemo (The ☾Moonlight☾ Library)
is 80% done
The contemporary parts are very good but the supernatural parts seem rushed and disjointed.
— Feb 08, 2013 04:00AM
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Nemo (The ☾Moonlight☾ Library)
is 51% done
I don't normally say this, because I usually can't tell, but the dialogue feels forced. The way they are speaking seems really unnatural. I would give an example but I'm on my phone reading an ebook. Maybe in the review, if I write one.
— Feb 08, 2013 03:18AM
Nemo (The ☾Moonlight☾ Library)
is 38% done
Not sure this is my cup of tea. I don't like Kylah much at the moment because she reacts weirdly to dangerous situations and the biggest question no one is answering is WHY.
— Feb 07, 2013 06:00PM
Nemo (The ☾Moonlight☾ Library)
is 8% done
The MC believes the opening sequence was a dream. I'm in two minds about this: Either she is an unreliable narrator, or I have just been handed on a platter one of the things I despise most in fiction.
— Feb 07, 2013 05:13PM
