Elithanathile’s Reviews > Regret > Status Update

// Wow, this author is laying it on THICK!!! Does she know anyone who acts like this?!!? Because holy fuck, she went all out on creating a shitty character like Brin!! I can't stand him!!!
I can't stand people who hold grudges at all; especially for ridiculous things and for so fucking long!! If you're that upset, fine, cut ties and cut your losses, NOTHING wrong with that! But don't be so fucking flip-floppy!

OH ... that POTENTIALLY puts an entirely different spin on things and gives Brin more dimension! It would have been easier to feel bad for him at least! I don't get why the author didn't share this important piece of info at the beginning, so we could sympathize with Brin before reaching unfavourable conclusions about him?!!? THIS is an important piece of info!!!

I'm thinking this author might not be for me AT ALL!!

// And to create a character who talks about being a grown-ass man when other people have difficulties dealing with their difficulties ... that's fucking rich coming from an asshole who's held on to a ridiculous 11 year grudge!! Brin is so fucking self absorbed it isn't funny ... caring only about what HE has been through, but has ZERO empathy for anyone else dealing with hardship!! UGH!!

// Does this author enjoy this kind of nonesense [with Brin] or does she think WE as readers will?!!? Why on earth would she write such an immature, petulant, irrational, vindictive, asshole of an MC, into existence?!!? Blech!!

// Author, are you TRYING to make me dislike Brin, or what?!!? This kid reads like a fucking immature high-schooler and not like a man in his 20s!! Holy shit, Brin is unlikeable as all hell!! I feel like this author hasn't given me ANY incentive to feeling ANY sympathy toward him! I just want to smack Brin HARD!!!

// This author is doing really badly at the whole enemies-to-lovers trope, which if done well is a wonderful M/M trope!! Instead of wanting these two to get over their differences, I want Nick to hook up with someone else in the end, because Brin is an unlikeable and irrational little shit!!
I don't like Brin at all so far and frankly, I don't think he deserves Nick!! We shall see ... !!

// I hope they get to keep Tallulah :-)!!

// Brin sounds like an immature & petulant fucker!! You're staying in his apartment, so buck the fuck up and mind your attitude!! Also, Nick owes you absolutely NOTHING, so what has your panties all up in a twist? You kind of hooked up ELEVEN YEARS AGO and you weren't even friends, much less friends-with-benefits, so what the fuck is your problem?!? You have issues with YOU, not Nick, so STOP taking it out on him!!!!

// So ya, this author doesn't really invest in great HEAs and while her writing IS really good - which is why I keep giving this author chances - the lacklustre endings (which have become signature to her), definitely seriously detract from the overall experience! I feel like she does her books a great disservice and they could be THAT MUCH better if she invested and tied her stories off with equally beautiful HEAs!!