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Daniel
is 60% done
"giggled", ffs. someone slipped some really shit fanfic into the middle of this book. and Orlando is like the worst stereotype uke.
— Feb 02, 2019 09:46PM
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Daniel
is finished
ugh, what a tone deaf, melodramatic in the worst way, rambly wrap up ending.
— Feb 03, 2019 10:48AM

Daniel
is 85% done
Now it just feels as if we're using sentences because we like them, who cares if the meaning or implication fits with what we've already written. And don't think I didn't notice the shitty little retcon there either. This is going down hill.
— Feb 03, 2019 10:10AM

Daniel
is 78% done
I can understand an overabundance of sex scenes when they're explicit, but I am baffled by the overabundance of these not quite fade-to-black PG13 ones... wtf.
— Feb 03, 2019 09:29AM

Daniel
is 57% done
"How did you ever survive?" asked no one ever in the history of the world. Parts of this are like a horrible parody.
— Feb 02, 2019 09:33PM

Daniel
is 33% done
dialog feels oddly like a bad porno? must be the murderer.
— Feb 02, 2019 07:50PM

Daniel
is 11% done
Ah, someone's been murdered. About damn time. I was ready to give up on this.
— Feb 02, 2019 05:31PM