Daniel’s Reviews > Lessons in Love > Status Update

ugh, what a tone deaf, melodramatic in the worst way, rambly wrap up ending.

Now it just feels as if we're using sentences because we like them, who cares if the meaning or implication fits with what we've already written. And don't think I didn't notice the shitty little retcon there either. This is going down hill.

I can understand an overabundance of sex scenes when they're explicit, but I am baffled by the overabundance of these not quite fade-to-black PG13 ones... wtf.

needs more murder

"giggled", ffs. someone slipped some really shit fanfic into the middle of this book. and Orlando is like the worst stereotype uke.

"How did you ever survive?" asked no one ever in the history of the world. Parts of this are like a horrible parody.

dialog feels oddly like a bad porno? must be the murderer.

This is some bizarre, naive, stilted whackery.

Ah, someone's been murdered. About damn time. I was ready to give up on this.