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it's an uncomfortable read so far. but i was warned of this. i'm into the worldbuilding and the prose, and i'm digging the first person present tense narration.
— Jan 17, 2019 09:52AM
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Axel J. Sparrow
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i think i would have been happier if Lei had spent another chapter or so at home, establishing more of a relationship with her father and Tien for the reader. they sort of feel like nebulous concepts to me, rather than characters.
— Jan 17, 2019 11:33AM
