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not loving the longass flashback. and I've never understood what the reader's supposed to take from the whole "let me tell you about" / cut to flashback things. clearly no one could believe the teller has conveyed to the listener all the detail, dialog, etc. that's conveyed in the flashback. hell, if someone tried to I'd get up and walk out. ugh.

hmmm, that was unexpected. maybe it's fake. on another note, the exposure danger in these historicals is far more nerve-wracking than anything i ever read that's actually trying to be scary.

I'm cringing every time he calls Alice honey, and I'm not really expecting any surprises plotwise, but I like this a lot so far.

I'm getting a bit of an everyone knows they're gay but each other vibe. The writing flows wonderfully though. I'm a bit skeptical about the length, but so far so good.