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Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
is 99% done
The end was like the beginning kind of ridiculous and too easy. I loved the Korean culture mentioned and the world building what there was was decent. It’s a case of no 13 yo being able to do all this and there were moments she used words no 13 year old would know.
— Dec 21, 2018 10:23PM
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Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
is 46% done
Love the culture woven into spots of the story... the world building is decent... love the 2 friends on the ship and her impersonating Jane... the whole table thing in the beginning and getting into trouble was so contrived and stupid... and all the lying in the beginning was tough. And she sure burns bridges fast.
— Dec 20, 2018 10:14PM
